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darthbangkok  66 posts
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Date Posted: 4/11 6:37pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
Inara posted:
I also posted this in the Outcast discussion thread, so apologies to those who read it twice.


1. I loved Luke and Ben's relationship. They make a great pair, and it was nice to see so much of Mara reflected in Ben. I didn't feel her absence as keenly as I thought I would.

2. While I also found the three separate story lines disconcerting at first, there are eight more books to go, so hopefully they'll be tied together sometime soon. I'm also kind of glad the book explored Kessel - it's such a weird planet that I've always wanted to know more about it.

3. I'm really really really tired of this Tahiri/Anakin thing. Let the girl move on for goodness sake. It's been YEARS since Anakin died. And yet her obsession with him is turning into a running gag. It'd be nice if the profic authors could stop beating this plot line because it should have died ages ago. I'd be happy to see her settle down with some ordinary guy on some ordinary planet somewhere. Really, just anything to end this needless Tahiri torture. Even this Dab/Tarc/Creeper is in the story just to revisit Tahiri's Anakin issues. If they end up together, I'll be pissed.

4. And since I'm griping about Tahiri...I'm also getting tired of the repeated mentions, either by her or the other characters, of her past actions and how people are still mad at her about it. What about Ben?!?! He's being treated as a normal teenager despite committing so many crimes of his own. I don't buy the "oh he was only 14 and therefore not really responsible" nonsense. Padme was a queen of an entire planet at 14 and Leia was a senator at 16. So the fact that no one has any hard feelings towards Ben but only towards Tahiri is troubling. Plus I was hoping to see Ben a bit more affected by Jacen. It's been three years, but you'd think that he'd still bear a little trauma as opposed to being a perfectly normal teenager whose biggest concern is not being seen in public with his dad's haircut.

5. For the first time since the Thrawn Trilogy, I find myself liking Jaina. I never thought it would happen, but I guess if anyone can resurrect a character, it's Allston. On the other hand, I'm now creeped out by Jag. I don't know if it's his political maneuverings or his incessant horniness, but something doesn't seem right about him.

6. I was totally disappointed by the Baran Do storyline. I was hoping for some interesting insights into their unique Force philosophy, which might have explained some of Jacen's later viewpoints. Instead, all Luke learned was how Jacen could block a brain scan and that the Baran Do Sages are insane. I can't believe it took Luke an entire book to figure that out. Jacen journeyed for five years - I don't know how Luke plans to piece together Jacen's travels because even ten years doesn't look to be enough.

7. I was thrilled to see Kenth Hamner do more than show up at Council meetings with a long face. He's got a biting personality, which is awesome. I think he'll play a bigger role as the series progress. It looks like Allston was setting him up to eventually be in a position of conflict with Luke's crew, so it'll be interesting to see how that plays out.

8. After I got over the ridiculousness of Daala being in charge of the GA, I realized that I missed the sadistic Daala of the JAT days. Not that she's particularly nice in Outcast, but I sense character whitewashing. Sure she had Valin imprisoned in carbonite, but the Daala in the past would have pushed him out an airlock.


The quality of the writing was superb, the characterizations were mostly great, and the pace was quick and kept things interesting. Most of the issues I'm irritated with have more to do with the direction Del Rey is taking the series than this one single book. No doubt Allston is writing what he's been told to write. So I give the book an 8/10.



I totally agree with your points 3,4 and 6. You said it much better than I ever could. What I especially don't get about Tahiri (and therefore enjoy it much less) is not only that she is still messed up about Anakin, but if she needs to be messed up, why isn't it about what happened with Jacen? That story is so much more recent and should have her reflecting so much more about her life, why she is a jedi, how she could let her guard down like that, why she cares about the solos, etc etc etc....

 

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QueenMother_LK  2957 posts
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Date Posted: 4/11 11:10pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
JediMatteus posted:
C'mon man this is a good book. no it's not Vector Prime or the first book of the Thrawn trilogy, but it is very good. It is a very refreshing departure from what we have gotten the last few years.

i give Betrayal a very slight advantage, but this is a good book.


This is strange, because I really loved this book too, but I really didn't like VP at all. (To be honest I wouldn't have stay intereseted if I didn't know there was better stuff to come later on in the series).

I also feel like this is a much better start than Betrayal. In Betrayal, the first half is really good, and then the second half just kind of leaves you feeling like "wt*?" This one flowed much better, and left you really wanting more at the end.

 

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Havac  14313 posts
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Date Posted: 4/12 4:16pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
Average score: 367.05/46 = 7.98

 

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killfire  1823 posts
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Date Posted: 4/13 2:01am Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
5/10

Normally I love the SW books by Allston, but the last ones are going downhill. Just thinking of Enemy lines and Lord Nyax. Anyway, back to Outcast.

The good parts to me were the Luke-Ben storyline and their characterisation, and the Kessel storyline with the "old heroes". Also, I liked the generally lighter mood of the book.

What let me down:
- Logic. I read Star Wars, but I'm not stupid. A head of state (Jagged Fel) participating in wild action in the capital of another state. Sure. angry Tahiri Veila shooting an unarmed head of state at point blank rage five years ago, is not forgiven by the successor of that head of state, but joined in a conspiracy? Yes, of course. angry
Mirax and Corran Horn, with all of their backstory as agents, police investigators and ace fighter pilots allowing their only son to be carbonited? angry
- Luke basically exiling himself. This part of the book felt rushed and like a poor plot device. One could get the impression that Luke didn't care a lot about the Jedi order but wanted to go fishing with his son. Which is fine, but don't make such a fuzz about it.
- the Kel Dor basically being humans with breath masks and their sages being nuts
- Allana. I hope Han and Leia are arrested with whatever charges when they return to Coruscant and Allana ends up in an off-world orphanage. And when the charges against Han and Leia are dropped a day later they forget about Allana.
- Bounty hunters instead of Mandos angry
- What is going on between the Hapans and the Empire? I understand that this will be explained in Blood Oath, hopefully, but one or two sentences from Jag's point of view wouldn't have spoiled the book, would they?

All in all a mediocre start for the new series. I'll read Omen to give Golden a chance, but she better takes it.

 

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Sniper_Wolf  3017 posts
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Date Posted: 4/13 7:33am Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
Bought it, read it, enjoyed it.

Pro
Enjoyed the look at the EU legal system. Nice to see the ever quiet third GA branch do something.

This is a lot better than Vector Prime or Betrayal. Salvatore had an irritating writing style in the first series opener; Allston had to exposit a ton of information to start a contrived war. Outcast does not turn the universe upside down overnight, but we have eight novels left. This novel has a much better structure than the previous two. The reader cannot make the final conclusion till the novel is finished, but there was a lot less fat. Actions had tangible consequences in regards to the overall plot. Major improvement over Betrayal's every random idea from the garbage bin thrown in.

Looks like the pointless pointless pet character problem is fixed, or at least on Allston's part. Nawara has his largest role outside of the X-Wing series, but in a book which heavily deals with the legal system Nawara is a logical choice because he is the only "name" character which has legal experience. The other pilots only show up on Kessel when they serve the narrative. On overall story structure this book is a lot smoother than previous novels.

I'll throw this in right now. I am so glad Jacen is dead. The lack of his stupidity automatically gives the novel two extra points.

Most of the characterizations are solid. Only one really irked me- Chief Daala. No matter how hard the writers try in portraying her this way the concept is fundamentally stupid. Frankly, because Daala here is so different than the KJA idiot I wonder why the brain trust did not create a whole new character.

Enjoyed the Kel'Dor homeworld. Much like the legal aspects I appreciate how Allston took a little known part of the EU and ran with it.

Outside of Chief Daala there are only two main points I objected to.

First, Jedi_Vince is on the money about the writing. Yes, Allston has improved a lot from his dreaded Starfighters days. My main example is whenever we have Valin's POV. Allston constantly uses "Not-Mirax, Not-Luke, Not-Blue Milk Man." Allston needed a thesarus during those sections. Contrast Allston's word choice with Golden's in the Omen excerpt. "Not-Cilghal, the false Cilghal, the doppelganger." In five pages Golden used a greater vocabulary than Allston's whole novel. Again, Allston on the whole wrote a much better novel this time. I'll let the word choice pass a little.

Second, the watered down philosophical discussions about homo excelsior. The idea of posthumans is dime a dozen in genre fiction, but when examined closely the metaphor falls apart. I understand this is a universe where the military brass decides on building a planet sized space station. However, if the Del Rey brain trust feels the writers should expand upon the idea of if mortal gods can exist in society then a little moral ambiguity is required. I enjoy the fact that in-universe the people are recognizing the New Jedi Order are complete and total inept idiots. That's been obvious since NJO started ten years ago.

The EU on a whole has a terrible track record about moral ambiguity. Many would argue the conept is the antithesis of SW. If the writers plan on kicking down the doors then do not barely tap the door. Demolish the entire building instead. LOTF had blatantly obvious faux ambiguity. Political science lectures from tie-in fiction leave a terrible aftertaste in my mouth.

Overall, Outcast is a good novel from a writer I generally dislike. I rate the novel 7/10. I hope the series can keep up the pace.

 

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Jedi_Master_Forte  80 posts
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Date Posted: 4/13 12:39pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
7.5/10

I really liked the first 100 pages or so. The first chase with Valin all over the city was great! His illness has me interested. I found myself looking forward to the Ben and Luke scenes the most; even though nothing major happened, it was a fun plot and their interaction was great. I started to get kinda bored with the whole Darkmeld thing after a while. Same goes for Han/Leia scenes. I actually wish they would have spent a few more scenes on Kessel w/Allana instead of Han/Leia. I think I liked that one scene w/her little adventure more than most of Han and Leia's. I hope this plot with the underground Kessel thing gets a payoff in future books but I feel like it won't. After all the boring scenes, expecting something really cool to come out of it, nothing did. Oh well. I liked the use of more Jedi Masters. Jaina and Jag were well-written and actually cool.

 

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Date Posted: 4/13 2:12pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
Average score: 386.55/49 = 7.89

 

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Date Posted: 4/13 5:17pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)

Well said, Killfire and Sniper Wolf.

 

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Kidan  5509 posts
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Date Posted: 4/15 2:00pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
I finally got around to posting my Outcast review in which I give it a 3.8/4, which translates into 9.5/10

 

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Darth_Nihl  65 posts
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Date Posted: 4/15 4:29pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
I liked this book more than I thought I would, and it was a fun, fast read.

Darkmeld was great. I liked the use of Tekli and Winter here, seeing as we haven't seen much of them recently. Jaina is far more likable than she has been lately.
However, I echo the sentiments about Tahiri. She needs to get over Anakin. This plot line has been dragged on long enough! And I hate Dab. He seems to be there simply to remind Tahiri of Anakin. I will not be pleased if Dab continues to pursue Tahiri.

I actually liked the most of the Kessel storyline. It started slowly, but after discovering the bogeys, the pace picked up, and it was refreshing to see a plan that didn't go horribly wrong. Han and Leia were well written, and I love those old droids.

The Luke/Ben plotline was the interesting, mysterious part of the book, and I liked Luke's characterization a lot. Ben, not so much. I'm on the fence about him. One minute he's profound, the next he's annoying. And I really, really hope that Golden doesn't continue Ben's lame attempts at humour. The "insight into the Kel Dor culture" didn't really happen besides learning about the Hidden One and his followers. Even the sages we barely got to see.

The one part that I really disliked (besides Dab's existence) were the sections from Allana's perspective. While the mysterious voice holds potential, the rest of her was unnessecary and annoying. I think she should be kept to a background character only.

All in all, a good, if light, read. It got me excited for Omen and the Sith. 8.2/10

 

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Darth_Hydra  2372 posts
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Date Posted: 4/15 8:33pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers) - Date Edited: 4/15 9:00pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Darth_Hydra
My Review

I'm going to try and keep this short: overall I thought Outcast was mediocre but still an improvement over most of LOTF. I found it starting off fast and then slowed down some outside of the Valin Horn thread. Thankfully it doesn't bringing back characters from EU Limbo such as Lumiya and Thrackan Sal Solo. Ben and Luke's relationship was very enjoyable and I look forward to seeing other Force Users cultures/groups in the forthcoming books. While the Kessel and Hidden One plots were interesting I didn't get the feeling that there was any type of danger for any of the characters. My biggest respect for this book comes from the fact that Luke is put into a more minor yet still important role while other characters such as Octa Ramis, Seha Dorvald and Kenth Hamner get more spotlight(especially Seha grin ). The farewell to Luke is, IMO at least, one of the best EU scenes. Although I'm fairly certain Luke will come back to the Jedi Order before the series is through I can't help but think "What if he doesn't?". The bounty hunters are interesting, except that I was getting a General Grievous type of vibe coming from Vrann Vaxx. Overall I think Outcast was worth the $27 but I'm worried about if FOTJ can pick up some steam as the series continues. Another worry is that FOTJ #5 will almost certainly require yet another "sacrificial lamb" since it's become expected from the middle book of a major series. My last and final worry is that FOTJ will retcon Jacen's fall and attribute it to something other than himself. I hope the authors continue with the Tahiri's idea that it's not important why he fell but when.

My Score: 5/10

 

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Havac  14313 posts
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Date Posted: 4/15 10:12pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
Average score: 409.25/52 = 7.87

 

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Date Posted: 4/16 8:38am Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
Oops, never posted my review in this thread:

Overall, I really enjoyed it. I felt the first few chapters were a little weak, as if it was the outline describing events (with a couple exceptions like the very cool Valin-goes-buts POV and chase sequence) but it eventually bloomed very well into compelling reading.

I thought it was great to explore the Kel Dor homeworld (whose proximity to blackholes is somewhat scary as a visual), but I found the Kessel plotline to be my favorite- Han and Leia exploring these deep, forboding caves and tunnels with ominous glows in the distance just strikes me as very classic sci-fi visuals; and the mystery with Allana's tomb contact is likely to be the seed for something much bigger later in the series.

Also, just the fact that they were exploring Kessel at this point is randomly awesome- of all the places to revisit, Kessel is waaaaay down there, yet held such interesting possibilities that just the unlikeliness of getting it explored like this is great.

I also really like the idea of other Force user groups learning from Order 66 and making contingency plans (albeit misguided executions in doing so).

The Tahiri/Dac scene is great too- one of the things I really loved about LOTF was the drug addict angle with tahiri and the flowwalking; her turn was too sudden at the end of the one book, but the general concept of it I liked quite a bit, and this scene continues that idea, now tackling something that could shatter rehab efforts. Though Dac's a bit of a jerk for pushing ahead with her despite that.

The "my mother didn't use a double" "well she was clearly crazy" exchange with Winter laughing I felt to be clever and amusing as well.

One small thing that irked me during the tunnel battle with Seff was Jag using a gun that fires a stun bolt at Seff- who naturally deflects it with his lightsaber. Whatever happened to the good ol' stun rings that are effective against lightsaber users?

Three small amusing bits I have to point out:



  • They resolved the Sullustan/Nien Nunb height issue that we were just discussing about a month or two ago in, I think, one of the CN-related threads. So Uncanny Timing points there. grin

  • DARTH STARKILLER!!! laugh I've long said that, if one were to expand on the events of Dark Empire in light of the prequels, that there shoulda been a scene with Palpatine dubbing Luke as Darth Starkiller (besides the obvious early draft reference, Luke was the killer of the Death Star, so it sorta works on a few levels), but after they went and gave the SA the name Starkiller for TFU, I assumed that notion was gone forever, so to have it applied to Luke in this book, even if jokingly, was quite an unexpected and happy surprise. hugs

  • "Han and Leia, in the cockpit of the Falcon, watched the last starfighter,". mischief

    Sure, that sentence continues with "Nrin Vakil's A-Wing, begin it's descent." but I really have to dwell on the convenience of that setence break, given the multiple references to The Last Starfighter we've had in TCW recently. grin


And no conversational mention of TLS is complete without linking to the main theme. cool


My rating: 8.9/10



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10/10



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Havac  14313 posts
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Date Posted: 4/16 3:00pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
Average score: 418.15/53 = 7.89

 

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King_of_Red_Lions  733 posts
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Date Posted: 4/18 12:16pm Subject: The JC Lit Reviews Special: FATE OF THE JEDI: OUTCAST (Spoilers)
This book could have been longer. 302 pages is a little too short for the money.

Allston's writing was funny. The characterizations were great. The plot moved a little too quickly - many events were jumped over.

Tahiri confuses me. She has such a unique backstory that I hate to see her fall into the same rut as Zekk.

The Kessel plot line was a waste of pages in this novel. The only saving grace will be if the presence that Allana felt is picked up again (probably not until Allston's next turn) and we see more planets besides Kessel suffer similar bad effects from Centerpoint's destruction (again, probably not until Allston's next go).

Good to see Nawara again.

I enjoyed the Baran Do sages and the weather-based Force powers. I'd like to see how much damage that 3.2-jigawatts white lightning would do on contact versus other Force lightning.

Maybe the rest of the series will save this as an opening act. I wasn't very thrilled while reading it.

5/10.

 

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