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Author	Topic: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 11/2/09
Vampi_Digitalwytch Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 6/2/05 7:07am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	It's not a delay going to see ROTS a few times, it's a very important research trip. There can never be enough researching while working on a fic. attempts to look serious as that's the excuse she's been giving to folks -----signature----- I'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints. Bloopers RR- http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=15762005&start=15774240 Supporting the fight for the survival of fanfic.
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sheleigh Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 6/2/05 7:44pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Oh... wow. I've just read the entirety of this over the last 24 hours... Nothing much more to say than... wow. Excellent story you have here... I too agree with what was said earlier in this thread... I would pay to read this! I love your portrayal of Obi-Wan... the everpresent fatigue and strain of a failing order on his shoulders adds a unique twist. Not to mention the padawan who (if possible) is even more rule concious then he was! Atel is a great OC. I was wary of her at first, but I'm really liking the subtle changes in her pysche. The interaction between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon is phenomenal. And so delicately writtten. Brilliant! Snaps for the author. sheleigh -----signature----- And In Conclusion... http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20582878/ Vader: The Force is strong with you.... Luke: Oh yeah? How strong... Vader: Uh... as strong as a small pony... - Eddie Izzard's Dressed to Kill
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 6/2/05 8:41pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Vampi Had to do another road trip to see ROTS - research you know....LOL. Character research. sheleigh Thanks so much for that. I have been a very bad author though. I'm quite slow at writing and with real life being so.... real, I haven't updated this in quite some time. I am working on it now though so it hasn't been forgotten. Glad you enjoyed it. I especially like writing Atel. She's a piece of work but I wanted her to be a real character, not just someone to be Obi-Wan's background. So she's not perfect but she's trying to do her very best. Ah, the interaction with Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. I try really hard to get that just right. Sometimes Obi gets away from me but I'm pretty comfortable with Qui-Gon (even when he's fighting me on the plot). Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it! -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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Jedi_Tigris Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 6/2/05 11:10pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Hope your move went smoothly! Take your time, I can be patient a while longer. And of course, seeing RotS is important for research. -----signature----- "Who is more foolish? The fool, or the fool who follows him?" - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH padawan/adoptee of Myri_Antilles Battling DRL...otherwise known as college and work... Please add me to your pm list when I review. Thanks!
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kateydidnt Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 6/6/05 11:08pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05 - Date Edited: 6/6/05 11:29pm (1 edits total) Edited By: kateydidnt
	I was just reading VaderLVR64's "Far from Home" and it made me wonder about something in this story--did any of the Jedi who were released from the Order ever go searching for their families? Or perhaps meet them on accident? -----signature----- R2D2: The Swiss-Army Knife of Droids The Outer Rim: Minor Character Index http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21597215
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Princess_Arulmozhi Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 6/15/05 8:39am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Good fics shouldn't fall this far back. Giving a bump... -----signature----- Perceptions (Xanatos/Obi/Qui/Anakin) AU:http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25276178/p1/?7 - vignette Stones (Li'l Obi/Qui) - http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/23371821/p1/ Best Author, WFFA (BtS) 05/06 Lore-Master to 7
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Kynstar Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 6/15/05 8:59am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Hehehe looks for the new chapter Guess it hasn't made it over to here yet. -----signature----- Paddy sis to t_s & SarkaVrae/Master to hyperspace_police Member of Rebel Legion and Jedi Assembly (Kynstar Lans) Only thru fear, hatred, and pain will the true power of the Force be revealed. See stories/viggies in bio
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ithesock Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 6/15/05 9:01am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Why do you think I 'up'ped it? -----signature----- Fields of Elysia (JA): http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20100957/?140 - 10/8 Epistles to a Master (JA, AU): http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20479680/?25 Lore-Master to Seven
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 6/15/05 9:05am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Jedi_Tigris Thanks for your understanding and patience. katiedidnt I answered your question by PM but I think that others might be interested as well. Besides, plot holes need to be plugged. Jedi in general don't think of their biological families as such. Rather the Jedi are their family. However, when they are ejected without cause and left homeless and family-poor, it would seem a good idea to seek out their own kind. Trouble is that the Jedi Archives holds that information and it is quite difficult to get it without prior approval. I can't see the current Jedi Council doing anything but denying access to the Archives to dismissed Jedi - they want nothing to do with the discards and it is proprietary knowledge after all (also good to use for manipulation if they do need something later from the ex-Jedi). They may be able to find the information by other means but it would be much harder to do. Plus the former Jedi are being watched for the first 6 months and I don't think they would want to have innocents subjected to that kind of scrutiny. After 6 months, I could see them trying to go back to the family but at that time, they are at their most vulnerable and Maul and other hunters are picking them off.. But some did make it back. Does that make sense? Princess_A Yes, they should fall back if they haven't been updated in so long! Bad Diane, bad bad bad... Luckily I do have a post for tomorrow! It seems my writer's block/RL deathgrip has lessened slightly and I was able to write enough for a post. Plus the muse seems to be with me and I've written a bit more for the next post. I only hope that it stays with me. Thanks for asking.... Knystar You should have read it already. I sent it this morning by email! Silly woman. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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LuvEwan Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 6/15/05 9:11am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Tomorrow? I guess I'll survive until then. -----signature----- What Light Breaks-AU Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon Anakin angst (collaboration with Spiritweaver) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29979222/p1/?0 You want an Obi-Wan epic? We've got it right here.
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Kynstar Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 6/15/05 9:11am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	You should have read it already. I sent it this morning by email! Silly woman. Yes I did read it twice to be exact! Lovely work too You do such an outstanding job diane!! Well worth the wait! -----signature----- Paddy sis to t_s & SarkaVrae/Master to hyperspace_police Member of Rebel Legion and Jedi Assembly (Kynstar Lans) Only thru fear, hatred, and pain will the true power of the Force be revealed. See stories/viggies in bio
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ithesock Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 6/15/05 9:21am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	I echo Kyn. Read it already - can't wait to read it all over again. -----signature----- Fields of Elysia (JA): http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20100957/?140 - 10/8 Epistles to a Master (JA, AU): http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/20479680/?25 Lore-Master to Seven
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 6/15/05 9:44am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	ithesock, you're on the Qui-Gon list? I didn't know that! -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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Layren Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 6/15/05 6:05pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	I read it already too Diane Twice ... You always do such awesome work!!! How do you do it?! Let me borrow some of your talent -----signature----- Proud Master to Ara-gon The Triad Chronicles http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/25934993/p1/?177 (OC's) Into Another Day http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27926050/p1/?0 2008 Dear Diary Challenge I am Jinngerbread.
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 6/15/05 8:08pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon angst - very AU) - Author's note 3/22/05
	Layren You are so sweet to say so. How do I do it? Beats me! But I usually have to fight to get the words on the page. I don't know if that's talent or sheer stubborness! LOL. But thanks. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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