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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 11/1/03 7:58pm Subject: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS... - Date Edited: 11/1/03 8:09pm (1 edits total) Edited By: STARDOG-D-JEDI
	a long time ago in a galaxy far, far, away STAR WARS EPISODE 2 AND ONE HALF THE RISE OF THE SITH or THE KESSEL RUN IT IS THE TIME OF WAR. SEPARITIST FORCES ARE BEGINING TO TAKE OVER THE PLANET KESSEL AS THE TRADE FEDERATION PREPARES TO RAID THE SPICE MINES OF THEIR RESOURCES. GENERAL BAIL ORGANA HAS LEARNED FROM BOTHAN SPIES THAT THE FEDERATION TENDS TO USE THE VALUABLE SPICE OF KESSEL TO FUND THEIR DROID ARMIES TO OVER THROW THE REPUBIC. ORGANA HAS INFORMED THE JEDI COUNCIL OF THE IMPORTANCE OF THE PLANET KESSEL TO THE WAR EFFORT. THE COUNCIL APPOINTS TWO JEDI KNIGHTS TO ENAGE THE FEDERATION AND SECURE THE RESOUCRES OF THE PLANET IN HOPES TO END THE WAR. THROUGHOUT THE GALAXY… OPEN SPACE………… The Blockade-runner Ventrex-3 is suspended by a tractor beam leading to the hanger bay of the Main federation ship in orbit above the planet Kessel. Laser blast fires from the blockade runner in an attempt to break the tractor beam. Clone star fighters engage federation fighters, as the battle appears to be slowly lost to the separatists. “I’ve got a bad feeling about this master, I don’t know how where going to get out of this one.” Anakin says as he locks down final code for a distress signal to Coruscant. “Patience, The force will guide us my young padawan.” Obi-Wan says as he watches the hanger bay closing in around the Ventrex-3. “I hate it when you call me that. You might as well call me Annie and really get me going.” Anakin mumbles as another clone star fighter is evaporated from space. Obi-Wan replies coldly, “I apologize Anakin. It is not my intention to get you upset. It is only the title that was given to you by the Jedi council. A title you should be proud of.” Anakin shrugs, “Your right master and I am proud of it but the young part is a little too much.” Obi-Wan smiles, “Fair enough my padawan, fair enough.” The ship sits down on the docking bay with the sound of steel against steel. On the bridge of the federation star ship the nemodian Lott Dodd is watching the main viewing screen where a battalion of droids surrounds the republic blockade runner. “Commander take the jedi captive they may prove of some worth as hostages.” The nemodian says into his comlink. “Roger, Roger” replies the droid. “Captain take three officers and arrest the passengers. Take the Jedi alive.” Chimes the commander. “Roger, roger.” replies the droid. As the ramp to the Ventrex- 3 is forced open by two Super battle droids using a security spike. The Four droids are deployed into the ship to obtain the crew. They enter the main corridor and two droids stop at the top of the ramp to guard the exit. The corridor leads around a corner but at the other end a door is closed. “Patrol the corridor.” The captain chimes to his officer as he starts to the closed door.” “Roger, roger.” Replies the droid as he makes his way around the corridor. The droid captain reaches the door and it slides open with a soft hiss. Then closes behind him. His blaster is immediately ripped from his grasp and flies across the room into Obi-Wan's right hand. The Jedi in turn raises his left hand suspending the droid in mid air and crushes it’s main processor with the force. He quietly sets the droid aside and catches his breath. “Wheeew that was too close.” Obi-Wan sighs. The other droid patrolling the corridor blaster at the ready notices a hum. It looks down the dark corridor puzzled at a light as Anakins light saber flies through the air and takes the droids head from its body. The head smacking the wall Pow! The light saber stops in mid-air and then like a boomerang it returns to Anakin’s grasp. Anakin smiles contently as the body of the droid falls to the ground with a loud CRASH! His smile quickly fades. “Blast it. I told him to be quiet.” Obi-Wan says reaching for his light saber. “UH! OH!” both droids at the ramp chime in at the same time. “ We need reinforcements.” “Battalion attack!” the Commanding droid orders. 198 droids storm the ramp of the ship as Anakin peeks around the corner of the corridor to see Obi-Wan Kenobi starring back at him with that look. Like, well you’ve done it again. “Well you’ve done it again.” Obi-Wan says igniting his light saber. Anakin looks back and replies. “Well I guess there’s no need in keeping quiet now. Right Master.” Obi-Wan shakes his head as he and Anakin Force push both droids at the top of the ramp together with a loud clang! One of the droids blasters fires and Obi-Wan quickly deflects the bolt which in turn heads straight for Anakin. With the element of surprise upon him he deflects the ricochet at the last second. The blast smacks the wall in front of the ramp and deflects it down into the hanger. Lott Dodd watches the viewing screen as the battalion of droids advances to the ramp. The blaster bolt flies right through the marching droids missing everyone. It hits the commanding droid right in the chest plate. The droid falls to the ground. “This is bad.” Lott Dodd utters looking over to the hooded figure to his right. All the battle droids stop in confusion looking back at their commander who lays crackling and sparking on the hanger floor. Silence- Then the commander manages to sit up and blurps. “A-A-ZZZ-ZZZ-A-A-A-ttack.” Then he falls over with a thud. The battle droids turn to rush the ramp and are impaled with a hail fire of laser blast from the clone troopers descending the ramp. “This is real bad!” Lott Dodd speaks worriedly to the dark cloaked figure. “I wonder if your race could even survive without others to fight your battles.” The figure remarks and turns for the blaster doors leaving the bridge. The clone troopers keep pushing their way through the barrage of droids. The Jedi descend down the ramp and join the fight just in time. Two-federation star fighter droids walk around the side of the blockade-runner like spiders. The droid fighter’s guns fire into the squads of troopers killing many. Anakin and Obi-Wan rush to help the clones from the new droid menace. “Anakin you take the one on the right. I’ll get the left.” Obi-Wan orders and charges for his target. “I’m way ahead of you master.” Anakin says in mid flight from a force jump above the blaster fire. He lands on the head of the droid twenty feet above the hanger floor. Anakin stabs at the control pod on top of the droids head with his light saber. The droid begins to transform and takes flight, taking Anakin with it. “Anakin!” Obi-Wan screams as Anakin goes flying by flailing at the droid in mid air. The droid soars through the air of the hanger bay taking Anakin straight to the hanger exit and deep space. He stabs and slices at the droids control pod sending sparks and smoke all around himself as the force field of the hanger grows closer. The droid begins to lose control and Anakin leaps from the fighter as it plows into the force field of the hangers exit and crashes to the ground. Anakin rolls right to the edge of the field and singes his hand against it as he stops. Anakins eyes are wide as he sees the vastness of space beyond the field and republic ships engaging the separatists throughout the stars. Obi-Wan cuts all four legs from underneath the other droid fighter. The hulk of metal falls to the ground as several Clone troopers blast the control pod to oblivion. He turns to see Anakin lying dangerously close to the hanger field and a trooper rushing to his aid. “Are you alright sir?” the trooper asks. “Yeah” Anakin replies as the clone helps him to his feet. “Lucky for me it wasn’t my good hand.” Anakin says looking down at the charred glove revealing the mechanics of his artificial hand. “TK-420 set up a perimeter around the bay and protect the ship at all costs. Take out all the turrents in the hanger. Anakin and I will take a squad and make our way for the bridge.” Obi-Wan orders turning to see Anakin making his way through the remains of droids scattered around the Ventrex-3. “Yes sir.” TK-420 replies back. “Red squad take out the hanger turrents. Blue squad secure the perimeter. Green squad accompany General Kenobi to the bridge.” “Yes sir.” The squad leaders reply and begin the task of securing the bay. Anakin walks up to Obi-Wan, “All too easy, huh master?” “You’re lucky you didn’t find the cold depth of space as your tomb my YOUNG apprentice. No more risks Anakin. That was effective but way too reckless.” Obi-Wan says sternly. “Yes, master.” Anakin replies and looks back at the curtain of space beyond and smiles whispering to him self. “All too easy.” by: Brent Lawson AKA:Stardogdjedi < I hope everybody digs it. Where we go from here only THE SECRET SITH SOCIETY knows...... -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 11/3/03 9:36pm Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	Bumping this back up to the top Anybody? -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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spooky-kid Title: Former Chapter Rep Winston- Salem NC USA Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 11/17/03 10:53am Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	that was really cool to busy today to add anything but, i'll get around to it i promise. -----signature----- Ward Suite #311 & Collector TapCafe patron http://pagan-jedi.tripod.com The Secret Sith Society King Bane of Metaltropolis 501st Carolina Garrison : TK-7404 Katie Johnson, You're in our hearts Trooper
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 11/18/03 10:41pm Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	THE SAGA CONTINUES DEEP SPACE- Many ships remain scattered throughout the mandalore system. A dead system of the long ago mandalorian wars. Like an asteroid field the remains of war float through space colliding with one another. There is a load boom as the sound wave is rippled through space and the Jedi recon freighter Freedom Wing escapes from hyperspace on a collision course with a Mon Calamari medic vessel that was marooned long ago. “Pull up!” Eeth Koth exclaims to Jedi master Even Piell. The Jedi pulls back hard on the controls of the freedom wing but is too late as the engines repluser lift clips the exposed structure of the medical frigate. Crash! The alarm sounds through out the ship. Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep! “We’ve got a fire near the hyper drive.” Piell says scanning the damage report. “So much for the routine recon.” Koth says and removes the fire diffuser from the supply closet. He rushes through the ship to the hyper drive and begins to diffuse the flames. “How bad is it?” Piells voice calls out over the comlink. “Not as bad as I expected the motivator is damaged but I can repair it. I just need some time. But, the transmitter is gone. It was damaged in the fire.” Koth says wiping the sweat from his forehead. “So there is no way to contact the fleet and let them know where we are.” Piell replies. “No. We must find a place to land so we can cut the power and begin repairs. We need to complete are scan of the system and meet back with the fleet before they make the jump to Kessel. “Alright. I’m going to try and get us closer to the planet and dock on one of those old disabled war ships within orbit. At least then we will be stable and not floating around like the rest of the garbage.” Even replies. “Sounds good.” Koth says into his comlink and accesses the rest of the damage to the freighter. The Freedom Wing accelerates through the graveyard of ships swinging and dodging the wreckage in its way. Avoiding the tombs of soldiers lost long ago. Piell spots a Mandalore warship in orbit above the planet. He brings the freighter closer to the ship. Half of the old great ships hull is exposed the steel twisted from war. The Freedom Wing flies into the super structure of the ship and attaches itself to the remains. Clunk! “Landing claw is secure and stable. I’m shutting down all power except the emergency back up.” Piell says into his comlink. The ship is suspended upside down in the interior hull of the warship. “Ok lets try to make this quick. We haven’t much time, I sense a disturbance in the Force.” Koth Says. “I feel it as well master Koth. Fearful, dark.” Piell tells him as he walks up to his side. FADES TO THE OUTSIDE OF THE SHIP AND THEN TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE PLANET- On the bridge of the Victory class star destroyer chimera a cloaked figure stands at the port viewing screen. Gazing into space. Feeling the presence of the Jedi. Feeling they are close. Several droids are working around the dark figure hastily completing their tasks of the ships construction. A transmission comes to the forward bridge. The visage of Darth Sidious comes into focus as a life size hologram. “What is it? lady Ventress.” The dark lord asks. The cold whisper of the figures voice penetrates the air like ice. “The Jedi are here my lord. I since there are only two of them. They must be spies sent by the republic.” “They must not learn of our plans.” Sidious replies quickly. “No my lord, they must not.” She whispers. “Destroy the Jedi. Do not leave a trace of their existence.” Sidious hisses. “Yes my master, with pleasure.” Asajj replies as the vision of Sidious dissolves from her sight. “Commander.” Ventress speaks “Roger, roger.” The droid answers echoing through the bridge intercom. “Prepare my infiltrator for launch.” She orders turning to leave the bridge her cloak flowing out behind her. FADES TO THE JEDI FREIGHTER- The Freedom Wing seems dark as the two Jedi hurry to complete their repairs. The planet slowly moves in orbit below them. “Hand me those hydro spanders.Thanks, I think I …..Got it." ZAP!! A long blue arc flies from the hyper drive casing and sends Eeth Koth against the engine room wall. Wap! “Are you alright master Koth?” Piell asks looking down at Koth slouching against the wall. “Not now. That arc came from the hyper shield. It must have been damaged in the fire as well. So, now we’re going to have to repair the shield. Without the shield if we try to make the jump to light speed the hyper drive will electrify the entire ship. Including us.” Eeth says getting to his feet. “And the worst part is the hyper shield access is on the hull of the ship.” “Well then I guess we most definitely need to repair it then.” Piell sighs. “I’ll get the pressure suits.” Piell opens an overhead compartment near the airlock. “We may have a problem.” He exclaims holding up only one suit. “Well then I guess this will be a solo job. Help me get suited up.” Koth says taking off his boots. He unfastens his light saber and lays it on the hyper drive control panel. He slips both magnetic boots on as Piell zips up his suit and fasten the helmet in place. “Test your helmet comlink.” Piell says. “Can you read me?” ZHH>> “Yes and you.” Piell responds. “Loud and clear.” Eeth replies. “Master Koth do be careful out there. May the force be with you.” Piell says handing Eeth a tool belt. Eeth throws the belt over his shoulder and clips it to his suit. He steps into the airlock. He turns to close the lock. “May the force be with you. Master Piell.” He says closing the lock releasing the pressure of the chamber sending the air into the vacuum of space. COLD SILENCE- The image of Eeth Koth is like an insect moving across the hull of the Freedom Wing. He looks down at space at the planet under him. He spots the smoking blackened panel of the hyper shield directly ahead of him. Piell sits in the cockpit of the ship looking at the planet below. As the orbit of the vessel slowly unfolds a massive shipyard under construction as far as the eye can see and in the center of the yard an exoskeleton of a sphere the size of a moon. He blinks his eyes in amazement. “Koth come in. Do you read me!” he speaks into the comlink the vision before him, breath taking. “Yes, I read you. I’m almost finished. What’s wrong?” Eeth answers welding two control joints of the hyper shield together. “Do you see this Eeth? Look to the planet! It’s a fleet of war ships. The separatists are building a fleet of vast proportions and that sphere it’s the size of a small moon. Do you see it?” Piell asks urgently. Koth is dazed at the sight of this discovery. He can’t believe what he is witnessing. “Hurry finish the repairs we must bring word of this to the senate before we are discovered.” Piell says quickly. “Don’t worry. I’ve almost got it.” Koth replies as he hears the SNAP! HISS! And hum of a weapon that is immediately recognizable. He turns to see Asajj Ventress in a pressure suit standing on the hull of the freighter with her light saber at the ready. “What is it that you see Jedi?” she whispers. “Have you found what you were searching for? Have you traveled many light years too find this dead system? To find your doom.” She hisses. Piell hears the conversation over his comlink and rushes back to the engine room. He grabs Koths light saber and throws it in the air lock, hitting the release button. He watches through the airlock window as the saber slowly rises into space. “I sense your fear Jedi.” She says. Eeth Koth stands before Ventress and spots a reflection of light behind her floating into space. He bends down bracing himself against the hull and pushes off releasing his magnetic field from his boots at the last second. He flies over Ventress and uses the force to bring the saber to his grasp CRACK! HISS! The saber comes to life countering Asajjs parry in mid air above her. Koth enables his magnetic field implanting him to the ships hull. CLUNK! “Impressive Jedi, but useless.” Asajj whispers, advancing her attack. Piell watches the fight from a view screen near the air lock. Light sabers clash as the two foes sluggishly move through the darkness of space. The dark sith advancing with every blow from her light saber. Piell watches helpless. He can do nothing to help his comrade he is forced to observe the combat in silence. They cross sabers and the light from the arc illuminates their pressure suit helmets. Seeing the fear in Koths eyes and the rage and determination of the sith. They break free of the arc and Koth parry’s another attack and is caught off guard as his saber is sliced in two at the hilt ending its beam of life. Asajj stands before him with her saber pointed to his face. She peers into his soul. “Piell get out of here! Take what you have learned here back to the senate.” Koth exclaims frozen in his tracks. Piell rushes to the cockpit and fires up the engines. The hull of the Freedom Wing rumbles under Ventress and Koths feet. Ventress Speaks calmly. “Do you know the story of the mandalorians? They were warriors. The greatest warriors in the galaxy. Warriors that fought for their people. For their lives. Noble warriors. To pollute this graveyard of ships. This shrine today with such a coward who fights for a senate. Who wants nothing but power is unfitting of their honor. But the choice is not mine to make. You and your kind have forced my hand. I leave you to die without honor, Jedi…” Ventress says and swings her saber towards the ground the arc causing a red mist. “AGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Koth screams as he floats away to space his feet still attached to the hull of the freighter. “NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!” Cries Piell as he grabs the controls of the Freedom Wing and blasts out of the hull of the mandalorian war ships super structure. Ventress crouches down to the hull of the freighter like a spider. She slowly pulls the dark side of the force from her inner self and pulls her right glove off her hand exposing it to the bitter cold of space, ice begins to crystalize around her fingers. The ship begin to pick up speed as she unleashes her furry. Blue lighting flies from her hand throughout the entire ship penetrating every circuit, every wire, and the Jedi Piell. “AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!” he screams as the ship slams to a dead stop in space. Asajj unleashes her full wrath upon the vessel an aura of the dark side shielding her from the destruction of the freighter. She glows bright blue in a sphere of energy. As the lighting overtakes everything in it’s path. The Freedom Wing explodes into a cloud of dust among the stars. Darkness… Ventress slowly begins her decent from the ruin like an angel embracing the stars. She free falls and lands on the hull of her Sith Infiltrator. She opens her eyes to the darkness and lets out a scream sending the lighting of the dark side to the heavens… FADE OUT… by: Jonathan Lawson AKA: stardogdjedi -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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spooky-kid Title: Former Chapter Rep Winston- Salem NC USA Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 11/19/03 8:34am Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	F$@kin' awesome dude. Man you are good at this. I'm sure what ever I can come up with is not gonna be this good. Ventress is my favorite new character. I really wish Anakin wasn't going to be killing her so soon. I wish she could have made it into the next movie. -----signature----- Ward Suite #311 & Collector TapCafe patron http://pagan-jedi.tripod.com The Secret Sith Society King Bane of Metaltropolis 501st Carolina Garrison : TK-7404 Katie Johnson, You're in our hearts Trooper
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 11/19/03 10:20am Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	Thanks man! I think Ventress is too cool. That's why I decided to use her in the story. I thought she deserved more time in the galaxy than just on cartoon network. I really liked the idea that she talks trash while she fights. Like Vader. I always loved it when Vader just kept pushing Lukes buttons. Any way I'm very glad you dig it. Your comments were F%*$ing out of sight!!! Once again THANKS! -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 12/5/03 10:48pm Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	Would anyone like me to post anymore? Once again your feedback makes all the difference in my writing. Catching the block!!!! The story is there but the mind will not let it ride. Just post if you would like to read more. -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 12/9/03 10:11pm Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS... - Date Edited: 12/9/03 10:27pm (2 edits total) Edited By: STARDOG-D-JEDI
	Ok I have changed and added a few things to what you guys have read previously. 1. Obi-Wan and Anakin are not heading for the bridge of the federation ship. They are heading for the tractor beam to disable it. 2. As Anakin walks back to Obi-Wan in the hanger Obi-wan will obtain a data pad off of the commanding droid that was killed from the blaster deflection in the hallway of the Ventrex-3. That's it! Now enjoy! The saga continues... COURACANT- Fire and smoke brim to the surface of the old warehouse district were Darth Sidious sits in his meditation chamber. The dark lord is jolted from a pull in the dark side of the force from across the galaxy. “HE, HE, HE, HE” he cackles, his eyes glowing bright green. “I take it you have good news my lord?” Count Dooku asks walking into the musty room where his master meditates. “This puppet you have found for us Lord Tyranus, has proved most useful. She is indeed powerful.” Sidious speaks. “Yes, my master. Very Powerful.” Dooku answers “Pity… Pity she will not live long enough to know her true potential. Her anger is pure and fuels the dark side with her vengeance. But she is insignificant next to our greatest ally.” Sidious says gazing at Dooku. “My lord, are you so sure that he can be turned?” Dooku asks. “It is unavoidable. I have foreseen these events. Everything, including what you must do Lord Tyranus.” Darth Sidious leans forward to Dooku. “You do understand the sacrifice that must be made?” “Yes my lord.” He answers never taking his eyes from his master. “Good Lord Tyranus. Now you must turn your sights to the planet of Naboo. You know all too well what must be done.” Sidious grins “I will take care of this matter Lord Sidious.” Dooku says turning to leave the room. “Lord Tyranus, what are the results with your new apprentice?” Sidious asks. “It is going well the growth acceleration has had no side effects.” Dooku answers. “Good, Lord Tyranus. Good.” Sidious says leaning back into his chair. Dooku leaves the dilapidated warehouse and boards his solar sailor for the far reaches of the galaxy. Sidious closes his eyes for a moment taking in the events that will transpire then taps a button on his chair. A hologram about twelve inches in height appears on his arm rest. “The Jedi have been eradicated my master.” Asajj Ventress reports. “You have done well Lady Ventress. I have felt your anger across the galaxy. Now you must journey to the planet Kessel and aid the federation in their invasion.” “Yes my master.” Ventress answers as her hologram disappears from sight. FADE OUT- INSIDE THE MAIN FEDERATION SHIP OVER KESSEL- Obi-Wan, Anakin and the clone squadron make their way to the tractor beam control room through heavy resistance. They find themselves within the labyrinth of the Federation ship surrounded at all sides. “Anakin watch out!” Obi-Wan says blocking another blaster shot into the chest of a battle droid behind Anakin. “Thanks Master.” Anakin replies. “Are you sure the tractor beam control is this way?” Anakin asks. Obi-Wan pulls the commanding droids data pad from his belt and keys in the pad for a location. “Here. It appears to be just around this hallway.” Obi-Wan answers. They reach the end of the hall to a dead end. Obi-Wan looks back at the data pad confused. “It’s supposed to be right here.” He exclaims. “May I, Master?” Anakin asks taking the pad from Obi-Wan. He keys in several commands and then looks at the pad puzzled and laughs. “What in the blazes could you find so amusing at a time like this my YOUNG! Padawan?” Obi-Wan says a look of disgust upon his face. “This.” Anakin says turning the data pad upside down. “You’ve been following this thing upside down. The control room is beneath us Master.” Obi-Wan takes the pad back from Anakin and looks at it puzzled first upside down and then right side up. “Blast! You’re right. We’re right over top of it. We need to make our way back around to catch turbo lift 4 then proceed.” Obi-Wan is interrupted by Anakin. “No time Master.” He says taking his light saber and stabbing the floor! He begins to make a giant circle of molten metal. He completes the circle and stands in the center. “Shall we?” he asks and stomps his foot on the floor sending it and him self falling to the level below. CRASH!! Obi-Wan looks over the edge of the hole in the floor with an amazed expression to see Anakin smiling back up at him. “Well, what are you waiting for were running out of time.” Anakin says as several clone troopers begin jumping through the hole and landing on the next level. Obi-Wan jumps down to the level and finds him self standing in a corridor exactly like the one he just left. He looks back up and shakes his head. “Master, this way.” Anakin says heading for the blast door at the end of the hall. Anakin pushes the door release. The door slides open revealing the tractor beam control room. The Jedi and the clones maneuver into the room expecting resistance but the room is empty. Anakin spots the terminal for the tractor beam at the far end of the room. “Here we go.” Anakin says. “Wait.” Obi-Wan says grabbing Anakin’s shoulder. “This is too easy.” “Easy! Master we just had to fight through at least two battalions of battle droids, six super battle droids and let’s not forget the droid fighters.” Anakin says looking at Obi-Wan. “Anakin just let me handle this.” Obi-Wan tells him walking over to the terminal. Anakin stops and begins tapping his foot impatiently as Obi-Wan approaches the terminal very slowly. He gets to the terminal and glances down at it. Checking all the instruments carefully. He reaches out to a large red round button in the center of the terminal. “This can’t be it?” he says to himself. The clones begin looking over Anakin’s shoulder and sweat begins to form on Obi-Wan’s brow. He wipes his forehead and then rubs his hand against his tunic reaching out for the button again. Slowly……Carefully…….and presses it. Silence- Obi-Wan release’s the button and then stands straight back up looking over the terminal he sees the tractor beam dropping past 50% and then it reaches 0. He lets out a sigh and turns to see all the clone troopers looking at him in silence with Anakin standing in front of them with an impatient look. “This was a valuable lesson to learn my apprentice. A lesson in patience that has shown us the right path.” Obi-Wan says to Anakin and then reaches for the door release. “Patience my padawan. Is a Jedi’s greatest ally.” He says releasing the door and setting off an alarm throughout the entire ship. WOOP! WOOP!!! WOOP!!! WOOP!!! Obi-Wan looks quickly to Anakin surprised. “And let this be a lesson class.” Anakin says to the clone troopers. “That an alarm is the Jedi’s greatest enemy.” The clone troopers look at each other dumbfounded. “We don’t have time for your humorous wits my YOUNG apprentice.” Obi-Wan says to Anakin. “This place will be crawling with more battle droids any minute. Let’s get back to the ship!” He yells to the clone squad. A trooper shoots a grappling hook through the hole in the ceiling of the corridor and the troops begin climbing there way to the upper level. Two destroyer droids roll around the corridor and activate their shield generators. They begin firing at the troops. The Jedi deflect every shot back at the droids buying time for the clones to escape. The last clone climbs to the top of the level and the Jedi both force jump through the hole into the ceiling landing on the upper level to see two destroyer droids roll into position and begin firing. “This seems strangely familiar.” Anakin says deflecting the blasts back at the droids with lighting speed. “We don’t have time for this.” Obi-Wan says and charges for the destroyers cutting them down with his light saber. “So much for patience.” Anakin says smiling. “Let’s go!” Obi -Wan orders and the troops fall in behind the Jedi. THE JEDI TEMPLE- High above the skyline of Coruscant the Jedi master Yoda looks out a window of the Jedi Council room to the great city below. The council deliberates the recent chain of events. “We must send more agents to the outer realm to see if these rumors about the separatist are true.” Luminara Unduli says. “But we have not heard reports from the Jedi who have been on these spy recons throughout the galaxy. We should wait until we have more information.” Ki-Adi-Mundi answers. “What’s more important is that we secure the planet Kessel. This race for the spice will play the most pivotal roll in this war.” Mace Windu adds looking to the council. “Our Army is growing thin. The raid on Corellia was a great victory for the republic but with a terrible cost. We lost two battalions of clones and several Jedi. Jedi that can not be replaced.” Ayala Secure replies. The voice of wisdom breaks the conversation as all eyes turn to the small Jedi master leaning on his cane. “The Dark Side is ever growing; clouding our judgment it is. Too many Jedi have been sacrificed. Too few of us left there are.” Yoda says walking back to join the council, his walking stick clicking at the floor. “Many more will be lost before over this war is.” A padawan walks into the council chamber with an urgent message. “Master Windu we have received a distress signal from the Ventrex-3 and a transmission from General Organa.” The padawan says. “Begin the transmission.” Mace orders. A life size hologram of Bail Organa appears in the middle of the circle of Jedi. “Masters, This is General Organa transmitting from the Kessel system. The Ventrex-3 has been captured by the main federation droid control starship and I have not been able to make contact with General Kenobi. Request reinforcements to help secure the planet. We will begin our landing soon because I fear we are running out of time to help the people of Kessel. I believe this mission is suicide but we have no choice. We are their only hope for survival.” The transmission ends. “We must replenishes are armies masters, before we can fully aid General Organa and Master Kenobi on Kessel.” Ayala says looking to Mace. “I agree. Master Secular and Master Mundi will go to Kamino and secure four more legions of clones for the battle on Kessel. I feel that this will be our toughest fight yet.” Mace says. “Master Koon, Tiin, Unduli and your apprentices join you will with Master Kenobi and young Skywalker on Kessel. I since your aid they will need. Master Windu and I will remain here near the senate to keep the presence of the Jedi near of their actions. That is all.” “May the force be with you all.” Mace says rising from his seat. “May the force be with you.” The Jedi reply and turn to leave for their destinations. FADE OUT- by: Jonathan Lawson AKA: STARDOG-D-JEDI -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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spooky-kid Title: Former Chapter Rep Winston- Salem NC USA Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 12/10/03 11:24am Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	MORE VENTRESS,MORE VENTRESS, MORE VENTRESS !!! Man that is awesome. -----signature----- Ward Suite #311 & Collector TapCafe patron http://pagan-jedi.tripod.com The Secret Sith Society King Bane of Metaltropolis 501st Carolina Garrison : TK-7404 Katie Johnson, You're in our hearts Trooper
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 12/10/03 10:09pm Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	Thanks man! I realy appreciate the feedback. Ventress will not be back for a while but have patience. As Obi-Wan would say. Anybody want to read anymore? I'm going to make one final post on the story for you guys if you would like. Then I'm going to hold off and try to get this Clone War really going. Consider this a hugh trailer. Just for THE SECRET SITH SOCIETY! Once Again please reply if you would like to read more. -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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	MORE, MORE, MORE........... STARDOG, STARDOG, STARDOG....... stomps feet and yells his lungs out. another dose of your story please. -----signature----- Ward Suite #311 & Collector TapCafe patron http://pagan-jedi.tripod.com The Secret Sith Society King Bane of Metaltropolis 501st Carolina Garrison : TK-7404 Katie Johnson, You're in our hearts Trooper
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 12/11/03 10:34am Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	WELL ALL RIGHT!!!!!! I"LL POST IT TONIGHT!!!!!! CAN YOU FEEL THE ANGER!!!!!!! THE SITH SHALL RISE AGAIN!!!!!!!! MWA HA HA HA HA HA!!!! -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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	"Yessss...I feel it swelling in me." I'm anxious for my journey to the Dark Side to be complete. -----signature----- Ward Suite #311 & Collector TapCafe patron http://pagan-jedi.tripod.com The Secret Sith Society King Bane of Metaltropolis 501st Carolina Garrison : TK-7404 Katie Johnson, You're in our hearts Trooper
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 12/11/03 10:23pm Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS... - Date Edited: 12/11/03 10:27pm (1 edits total) Edited By: STARDOG-D-JEDI
	THE SAGA CONTINUES THE PLANET SULLUST- In the bar Smugglers End a woman of exquisite beauty walks through the crowded dance floor making her way to the bar. Aliens of every species are dancing and drinking their cares away. The music is pounding and deafening. “Excuse me.” The lady says to the bartender. “Well, I’ve not seen you in these parts for some time now Aurra.” The bartender says, fixing up an exotic drink that is deep green neon, with the consistence of slime. “Here you go on the house!” the bartender smiles and passes the drink across the bar but stops. “Oh’ I almost forgot.” He reaches under the bar and opens a case of all kinds of disgusting creatures and pulls a long red centipede placing it into the drink and then hands it to Aurra. “Bottoms up!” the bartender says with a wink. Aurra knocks the drink back catching the centipede in her teeth smiling back at the bartender and slurps it down fast. SHEEEWWWWWP!. “I don’t know how you do that.” The bartender says with a disgusted look on his face and busts out laughing. “Cut the chit chat Hatcher. I’m here to meet someone. You seen him around.” Aurra says picking her teeth with a tooth pick pulling one of the centipedes legs from her grin. “Yeah, He arrived about an hour ago been sitting in that back corner ever since. This doesn’t appear to be his type of place.” Hatcher chuckles. “Thanks Hatch.” Aurra says with a blink and a kiss to the air. Hatcher watches Aurra as she walks to the back corner of the bar her pale white skin contrasting her skin tight red jump suit. “What a woman.” “You’re Tyranus, right.” Aurra says playfully. “Your late, Miss Sing.” Dooku replies coldly. “Well you must be Tyranus then.” She says taking at seat at the table. “So why did you call me all the way to Sullust for this meeting.” She says looking at Dooku. “What I need from you miss Sing is your complete discretion and attention. I’m going to make you an offer that I’m sure no bounty hunter could refuse.” Dooku smiles. “Go on.” Aurra says concentrating on Dooku. “There is a senator from the republic that needs your special attention.” Dooku says. “Wait. Republic? I don’t fight nobodies wars Tyranus.” Aurra says starting to get up. “Not even for 100,000 credits miss Sing?” Dooku asks. Aurra stops and sits back down. “Alright, you’ve got my attention. “Bring me the head of senator Amidala of Naboo. If you do this within ten hours I will double your bounty.” Dooku says calmly. Aurra eyes light up. “How do I know you’ll pay me for the job?” she asks as Dooku lays 100,000 credits on the table. “Payment in full now miss Sing and another 100,000 when I receive her head.” Dooku smiles. Aurra slides the credits off the table and stuffs them into her shirt. “I like your style Tyranus. It’s been a pleasure doing business with you.” Aurra replies getting up from the table as Dooku grabs her arm and brings her face to face with him self using the force his hands resting on the table. Aurra looks at him with hatred in her eyes. “Just remember Miss Sing if you do not do this for me within ten hours. It is your head, not the senators that I shall collect.” He smiles “Fair enough, fair enough. You want to let go of me now tough guy.” She asks and Dooku releases her. “How will I be able to contact you after the job is done?” She asks rubbing her arm and then drawing both her pistols from her side holsters pointing them point blank at Dooku's face. “And if you ever touch me again old man. I’ll collect your head. You forget I was once a student of the Jedi. I have no fear of the force.” She says quietly between her gritted teeth. Dooku smiles. “Yes I believe we both have a mutual understanding of one another. I will contact you miss Sing. I will know when the job has been completed. Now, I leave you to your task. Good day.” Dooku says getting up and walking out of the bar. Aurra smiles holstering her blasters “Good day… My lucky day.” Aurra steps out of the crowded club to the outer streets of the great cavern of Sullust. She looks down at her wrist gauntlet and keys in the time 9:55 Aurra begins the countdown and hails a shuttle taxi. “Docking bay level three.” She says to the Rodian driver. “Step on it and I’ll double the fare.” The Rodian jams his hands forward on the controls throwing Aurra to the back of her set; launching the shuttle taxi through the great cavern. SPACE ABOVE THE PLANET SULLUST – Aurra Sing blast through the atmosphere of the planet. She sets the coordinates For the Naboo system into her nav computer and hears the ships computer chime back that the coordinates are set. She punches it and The stars become lines of light before her eyes and then they are gone as the craft make the jump to hyper space SPACE ABOVE THE PLANET KESSEL- Six Jedi star fighters break hyperspace and detach from their hyper drive rings one after the other. Each flying off towards the battle over Kessel. “Gold Squadron, this is Crimson leader we are starting our approach 6 wings reporting in.” Unduli speaks into her headset communicator. “Crimson Leader, this is Gold Leader 627. We await your orders.” The clone pilot responds. “Continue your orders per General Organa. We are here to provide support.” Luminara smiles as the Jedi fly by the main Republic cruiser. “Crimson Leader, this is General Organa I thank the stars for your arrival.’ the general says as the Jedi engage the droid fighters over Kessel. OUTSIDE THE HANGER ABOARD THE MAIN FEDERATION SHIP- The clone squadrons left behind to protect the Ventrex-3 are experiencing heavy resistance while the Jedi make their way back to the hanger. Laser blast flies throughout the hanger as the force of droids seems unstoppable. “Master, we’ve got to make a break for the ship. It’s now or never. The troops can’t last much longer.” Anakin says as several Clone Troopers are cut down from the onslaught. “Right, Green Squad cover us.” Obi-Wan orders as he an Anakin charge through the droid battalions deflecting laser bolts back at their attackers in a barrage of speed. Cutting ever droid down that stands between them and the ship they finally reach the ramp of the Ventrex-3. Obi-Wan yells the order. “Fall back to the ship.” He and Anakin begin shielding the curtain of laser blast for the Clone Troopers to escape to the sanctuary of the Ventrex-3. “Green Squadron! Move it!” Anakin orders as the troops begin to make their run. Four droidekas roll into position and lay down an endless stream of blaster fire. The troopers run through the cloud of destruction and green leader is hit in the leg and falls to the hanger floor about fifty yards from the Ventrex-3. He reaches for his leg in pain and screams. “AGGHHHHHHH!!!” “Stay down!” Anakin yells and throws himself into a burst of speed sprinting through the force he’s at the trooper’s side in seconds. “NO! Anakin!” Obi-Wan screams but his cries fall on deaf ears. “I’m sorry sir. AGHHH! I did not mean to jeopardize our escape. Leave me.” The trooper says through excruciating pain. “No time for small talk THX-1138.” Anakin says as he grabs the trooper and begins to help him to his feet. They start to slowly make their way to the ship as a battle droid tosses a thermal detonator into their path. “ANAKIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Obi-Wan screams and the detonator explodes blasting THX-1138 to oblivion and throwing Anakin across the hanger two hundred yards from the ship. The Jedi smacks his head to the hanger wall and lies lifeless. “TK-420! Follow me! Red squad cover us!” Obi-Wan orders running to help his apprentice. The droid force begins to encircle the hanger the resistance grows within ever second lost. Obi-Wan reaches Anakin side deflecting more and more blaster fire. “Anakin speak to me!” Obi-Wan pleads to his padawan as Anakin lies silently. He extinguishes the life of his light saber and reaches down picking Anakin up from the hanger floor. He throws his apprentice over his shoulder and freezes. The Jedi Master is stunned from a disturbance in the force. He stands rigidly with eyes wide as he feels a dark presence growing near, through the force. “General Kenobi! What’s wrong? We must move. We’ve got to get to the ship.” TK-420 says to the Jedi pulling Obi-Wan from his trance. Obi-Wan shakes his head blinking his eyes and responds. “Let’s go! TK-420 relays orders to Gold Leader 149. “Prepare for departure.” “Yes sir.” Replies Gold leader 149 as the Ventrex-3’s engines come to life. Obi-Wan and TK-420 run up the ramp with the limp body of Anakin. Red squad fires one last melee of blaster fire and then runs up the ramp as it begins to close. The battle droid force fires desperately at the ship as it rises and begins to turn. The Ventrex-3 reaches its path to the hanger exit and blasts out of the Main federation ship. The engine thrust from the ship vaporizing the droid legions. The ship enters the freedom of open space and a new threat of federation droid fighters descends upon them. The blasts from the fighters rock the ship through space as they make their way for General Organa’s Flagship. Six Jedi Fighters rain down covering fire destroying the droid fighters in pursuit of the Ventrex-3 while the blockade-runner makes it’s way to safety. INSIDE THE VENRTREX-3 Obi-Wan lies Anakin on a medical stretcher in the forward hold as TK-420 walks up to the Jedi’s side. “Is he alright General Kenobi?” TK-420 asks. “Yes, He’s just unconscious from the blast shock. He has a concussion but I believe he’ll be alright.” Obi-Wan tells the clone, laying a blanket over Anakin. “General Kenobi. What happened to you back there?” TK-420 asks. “I felt a disturbance in the force a presence that I have felt before, elusive. I must make contact with the Jedi Council and inform them of this.” Obi-Wan says rising from Anakin's side. “We will be docking on General Organa’s ship soon sir. You’ll be able to make your transmission then.” TK-420 replies as they both look down at Anakin lying silently. ORGANAS FLAGSHIP- The Ventrex-3 docks in the hanger of Organa’s flagship along with the crimson squadron of Jedi Fighters. The Ventrex-3 lets out a loud hiss of steam and smoke as its ramp extends to the hanger floor. Obi-Wan Kenobi walks down the landing ramp of the Ventrex-3 followed by two clone troopers carring Anakin Skywalker on a stretcher. The Jedi of Crimson squadron begin to climb from their fighters. “General Kenobi it so good to see you when we intercepted your distress signal we feared the worst.” Bail Organa says entering the hanger bay and extending his hand to Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan grabs Organa’s hand with a firm grip smiling. “It’s good to see you again Bail.” “Is your apprentice alright?” Organa asks? “Yes, He was caught in a blast during our escape. I thought for sure that it had done him in but the force is strong with him.” Obi-Wan says looking to Anakin. “Well take the best care of him that’s possible General Kenobi.” Bail assures. “Take Skywalker to medical.” “Yes sir.” The clone troopers carrying the young padawan answer. “General Kenobi accompany me to the bridge we must begin our strategy for our liberation of the people of Kessel.” Bail tells his friend putting his hand on the Jedi’s shoulder. Obi-Wan Kenobi and Bail Organa leave for the bridge the Crimson Squadron following close behind. FADE OUT- To be continued- BY: Jonathan Lawson AKA: STARDOG-D-JEDI -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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	man-you are really talented with this writing thing. Awesome....I love it. It's was wierd seeing Anakin show compassion for that clone.....well I guess not....he became kind of attached to an arc trooper in the comics. Anyways-good story Stardog -----signature----- Ward Suite #311 & Collector TapCafe patron http://pagan-jedi.tripod.com The Secret Sith Society King Bane of Metaltropolis 501st Carolina Garrison : TK-7404 Katie Johnson, You're in our hearts Trooper
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STARDOG-D-JEDI Title: Winston-Salem FF VIP & Sith Apprentice Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 12/12/03 10:34am Subject: RE: OK HERE WE GO! THE STORY BEGINS...
	Thanks once again Spooky Kid. May the darkside be with you...always. -----signature----- Apprentice to the GRAND MOFF Spooky Kid!! Slave to the pocket of SarkaVrae!! Master of the Star Ale Empire!!! www.myspace.com/decaturstreet AT LAST STARDOG SHALL HAVE REVENGE!!!
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