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Star Wars: Destinies ( 1x New Post 11/29)
Grand Admiral Wettengel
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Date Posted:
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Star Wars: Destinies ( 1x New Post 11/29)
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Star Wars: Destinies
TRAILER
MUSIC: A more whimsical rendition of the Emperor’s Theme which incorporates elements from “Arrival in Cloud City.”
TEXT: Destinies are to be rediscovered . . .
~fade~
Kyp Durron walks through a familiar temple, or, rather what’s left of it, and falls to his knees when he reaches its center. Upon his senses tingling he smiles and the grin broadens gradually. “Master,” he states solemnly.
~fade~
MUSIC: The Force Theme blares
TEXT: Destines are to be realized . . .
~fade~
Luke Skywalker lies within a bacta tank, his family and friends gathered around the tank with pained expressions on their faces—expressions of hopelessness. “He’s in the Force’s hands now,” Cighal comments quietly. Everyone is startled by the sudden sound of glass shattering—
And startled even more to see Kyp Durron pulling his now cut and bleeding fists out of what had previously been a somewhat ornate mirror. He looks up to see everyone staring at him. “I’m—I’m going to return—return to my quarters now,” he declares between deep breaths to make sure he doesn’t lose his composure in front of them and bolts from the infirmary.
~fade~
MUSIC: Qui-Gon’s Noble End
TEXT: Destinies are to be fulfilled . . .
Kyp Durron emerges from an auditorium, his senses totally numbed, tears streaming down his face, walking with purpose, yet apparently having nowhere to go. He looks about for his apprentices and shudders when he sees where they are. He moves as quickly as he can without disrupting the other mourners and comes up behind them, gently placing his left hand on Jaina Solo’s left shoulder and his right on her youngest brother’s right shoulder. “Never forget him, you two. Never forget him.”
~fade~
Music: Anakin vs. Obi-Wan
Text: Families will be tested . . .
Jaina stands above an enemy her lightsaber pointed downwards at the neck of her brother, Jacen. “Any last words, traitor?”
“Go to hell,
Lady Durron
.”
She turns to look at Kyp, who’s locked in an intense duel with Corran Horn. “Did you hear what he just said to me!”
“You’re a big girl, sister, you don’t need me to stand up for you,” Kyp replies between grunts and sneers. “Die Horn!” He thrusts his lightsaber, aiming for Corran’s face. “This is a dream come true, you doomed, deluded fool. You will die here,” Kyp states as Corran leaps back with a shriek.
Jaina smirked. “Consider yourself lucky, Jacen. My husband wants you alive.”
Jacen sighed. “I never thought any member of your family would be more of a psycho than you, Kyp. I’m sad to have been proven wrong.”
Jaina chuckled. “He so loves his toys.”
Jacen gulped. ”Lucky me.”
“Yes, lucky you.”
~fades~
MUSIC: Imperial March
TEXT: Scores will be settled . . . .
The
Chimaera
returns to Wayland.
Grand Admiral Pellaeon smiles. “Base-Delta-Zero.”
~fades~
MUSIC: Grievous Speaks to Lord Sidious
“Jacen Solo has escaped,” the Emperor declared angrily. “You’re to drop whatever you’re doing and prepare to receive Lord Solo.”
Pellaeon purses his lips. “Why do you insist on continuing to wear that ridiculous mask, Your Majesty?”
“To inspire terror, of course, Gilad.”
“You don’t need to terrify me.” Pellaeon sneers.
“I just got done having a face-to-face chat with Moff Flennic, Admiral. Hence, I’m in a grouchy mood. I just forgot to take it off.” The Emperor removes his mask.
Pellaeon chuckles softly. “I feel your mental pain.”
“Just when you think he’s reached the limits of his stupidity, he surprises you. Anyway, wait for Anakin’s arrival and then you get to hunt for a fool’s philosopher.”
~fades~
MUSIC: End Credits
TEXT: There will be trials . . .
Senator Borsk Fe’lya smiles; there is no mistaking the glee in his voice as he speaks. “This committee finds you guilty—“
~fades~
“And banishes you from whence you came.”
~fades~
MUSIC: Force theme
TEXT: Rebukes . . .
Luke Skywalker is dumbfounded. “How have I failed you, Father? How?”
~fades~
“Stopped, you will be,” declared Master Yoda in a firm tone.
“Whatever you say, stupid little troll.” Laughter punctuated the air. “Lord Vader told me all about your stupidity and arrogance.”
“Vader, you say?” Brown eye-brows furrowed. “Redeemed Anakin Skywalker has been.”
“First of all,” the Dark Lord’s voice boomed via Force-enhancement, “its subject followed by predicate; not the other way around. I’m surprised my predecessor could tolerate your presence when he had business to discuss with you. Your manner of speaking betrays the fact you’re a moron,
Master
Yoda, who is only a master of his own short-sightedness and arrogance and inability to form proper sentences.”
“So superior you think you are? Fail you will.”
The Dark Lord laughed again. “Guess it takes an exposed failure to be able to properly sense potential failure.” He took a breath and steepled his fingers. “Remember, if you reveal my identity to any Jedi I’ll unleash so much havoc simultaneously it’ll feel like ten thousand Alderaans!”
MUSIC: The Emperor
TEXT: Revelations
Mara Jade Skywalker is thrown into a cell, her drugged body falling limp to the floor.
“You have been
extremely
disloyal, my dear former Hand. I told you to kill
him
, not marry him! But it doesn’t matter now.” Darth Sidious cackled. “My children will succeed where you failed, each a Sith Lord in his own right, initally trained by the very person they are to
destroy
. They know him
very
well, Jade.”
“Then he knows
them
,” Mara shouted.
“That isn’t going to make a difference, fool.” Sidious looked at her oddly for a moment. “This is interesting,” he declared in a tone that made Mara shiver. He turned to his sons. “You just haven’t brought me Mara Jade Skywalker; you’ve brought me a
pregnant
Mara Jade Skywalker.”
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Briman
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Date Posted:
7/21/05 7:39pm
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies (Trailer posted 7/21)
You've got me hooked. Whens first post?
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Grand Admiral Wettengel
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Date Posted:
7/22/05 1:20pm
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies (Trailer posted 7/21)
Jedi Master Kyp Durron awoke from a rare nightmare-free slumber, rubbed the sleep from his eyes and took a deep breath. Today should just be like the previous two weeks of his temporary amount as Headmaster of the Academy: uneventful, routine and
boring
.
He was living in the post peaceful period of galactic history since his birth; adjusting to it hadn’t been easy, and he’d really only just begun to do so even though the Bastion Accords were signed five years ago. He’s come to realize just how boring
he
is without something or other to get his adrenaline flowing.
Being single didn’t help matters, either. Han and Leia were off on some romantic getaway, and Kyp admired how they had started that yearly tradition; how every year they reaffirmed their love for each other, and he was shocked of how Master Organa Solo had actually started to warm up to
him
, Kyp Durron, one a select group of infamous people to have destroyed a planet.
At least one thing is still the same
, he mused to himself while walking to the communications center. He still didn’t get along with Corran Horn. Kyp doubted the chasm between them could ever be bridged.
You can remove a man from CorSec, but you can’t remove CorSec from the man
. Their bickering had lost quite a bit of its bitterness and simmered-down to a luke-warm tension, that had been running red-hot a couple months ago.
I hope everyone’s having a good time
. That was the whole reason he was actually given responsibility to supervise the Academy. All the other Masters were away with their spouses, or, in the case of Master Skywalker, combining work with a dash of pleasure. But it was the Solusar’s who needed the R-and-R the most, and Kyp was pleased that they could have two weeks to themselves instead of having to worry about dozens of apprentices and all the record-keeping that such supervision entails.
Even having to do just some of the filing and reading of reports, Kyp realized he did not have it in him to be a bureaucrat. Fortunately, Luke had effectively made Kyp his deputy and given him the task of being a secret ambassador to the Imperial Remnant on behalf of the Jedi.
The melancholy and guilt that had been his constant companions for years had receded from the forefront of his mind, only surfacing on occasion to torment him, but now he wasn’t under so much stress and was able to cope with these potentially devastating feelings a lot better.
He sat down at the comm-console and keyed-in his private HoloNet address. His eyes scanned the list of new receipts. All of them brought smiles to his face and warmed his heart.
Happy Life-Day to me. The big three-oooh.
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Yes, it is abbreviated, still working on the rest; figured I'd put this up for now. Rest of it will be up by midnight EST.
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ChildOfWinds
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Date Posted:
7/22/05 2:20pm
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies (New Post 7/22)
Great beginning, GAW! Looking forward to the next part!
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Grand Admiral Wettengel
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Date Posted:
7/22/05 5:31pm
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies ( 2x New Post 7/22)
He had received holographic well-wishes from all the usual suspects, some surprises and one that puzzled him very much. He opened up the odd one just with the subject: “son” and figured he’d get the odd one out of the way first. He opened it and just watched the animation of a rotating black sphere and the words “Happy Life-Day, Kyp” revolving around the sphere, the colors of the lettering changing with each revolution. He just shrugged and dismissed the card as some wise-crack.
Need to ask General Antilles if he let Janson use the HoloNet again. I still shudder at the memories of those high-resolution holos of those obese Twi’leks that Janson sent me with those obscene voice-overs.
He opened the one from “Skywalker Family” and slouched in his seat, waiting to be entertained by Ben’s antics. A close-up of the four-year-old is the first thing Kyp saw and then he heard Luke’s voice: “Put down the Holocam, Ben.” Then Kyp watched as the camera moved closer and closer to Ben’s mouth, Kyp shook his head and laughed softly,
He’s going to do what I think he’s going to do.
Then Kyp saw some teeth and was watching Ben’s tonsils come into view. Kyp lost it and burst out into a fit of laughter as he heard motion and heard Luke saying, “No, Ben, give it to me. Spit it out.”
The darkness receded and Kyp was left staring at the hull. “Don’t do that again, Ben. This is not edible.” Master Kyp Durron actually
giggled
at that, all sense of composure having left his senses. He was alone, who was going to find out about it anyway? His reputation was safe.
Then Luke Skywalker came into view, holding some sort of stringed musical instrument. Kyp cringed.
I hope you’re taking in more pleasure than business, Master, you seem to need it more than Kam and Tionne.
Then the singing commenced. “Happy Life-Day to You, Happy Life-Day to You . . .” Kyp laughed and leaned too far back in his seat to let out a big chuckle that the chair tipped backwards and down he and the chair went with a loud
thud
.
Thenm Kyp heard some
girlish
giggling. He reached out with his senses and had no problem sensing her and her dastardly plan. “How long have you been recording me, Tahiri?”
“Did you know you talk in your sleep,” she asked.
“How do you—how long have you been observing me for?”
“You’ll find out on your next Life-Day.” Kyp slowly got up, rubbed his lower-back, which was a bit tender from the short fall, and looked around for her, but Tahiri had apparently slipped out of the room—no doubt with her holocam.
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And that concludes that amusing Kyp-centric scene. But if he thinks getting to Tahiri is going to make this go away he's sadly mistaken. Tahiri isn't the brains behind this.
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Grand Admiral Wettengel
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Date Posted:
7/22/05 6:50pm
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies ( 3x New Post 7/22)
“That’s it, Master Durron,” a feminine voice declared, “rest secure thinking that you can retrieve the holocam at a later date and keep this whole amusing, planned episode a secret.” A hand started to twirl a long strand of red hair around the index finger attached to it. “He probably thinks that this whole thing was orchestrated by some common prankster.”
“I have to say that I have a new appreciation for the Grand Admiral’s sense of humor,” Rear Admiral Dreyf, the Assistant Director of Fleet Intelligence, commented from one of the observation blisters aboard the cloaked Nebulon-B Frigate
Osprey
.
“To say nothing of the Solos and Skywalkers,” Fleet Admiral Daala replied. “And let us not forget my contribution to this.”
“And why were we ordered not to install an audio transmitter?”
Daala shrugged. “The Grand Admiral has something special planned, and he was very cryptic about it. But he did say something about Ewoks.”
“Ewoks? This gets stranger and stranger.”
“No, Dreyf. We’re firmly in the category of the bizarre. We past stranger and stranger a couple light-years back. Now let’s get back to watching the show.”
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And now I shall pause here and await some reader input. What do you all think so far? I hope I'm communicating the fact that things are
really
peaceful right now.
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Jedi_Liz
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Date Posted:
7/22/05 8:21pm
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies ( 3x New Post 7/22) *Some feedback requested*
Little Ben was cute on the holocam. So, Leia's a Jedi Master? That's pretty cool.
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Briman
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Date Posted:
7/22/05 8:23pm
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies ( 3x New Post 7/22) *Some feedback requested*
Looking good so far.
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Grand Admiral Wettengel
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Date Posted:
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies ( 3x New Post 7/22) *Some feedback requested*
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Leia was a Jedi Knight in HoT, it is a natural progression for her to become a Master after a couple years, and I think I have accurately painted a picture of nothing galaxy-shattering taking place if you have everybody who's anybody off on vacation or military professionals engaging in what appears to be juvenile horse-play. When Pellaeon actually gave Daala a very important mission: an important practical joke.
All in the name of preserving galactic stability.
And the greatest indicator of galactic stability: Kyp's in a good mood.
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AlisonC
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Date Posted:
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies ( 3x New Post 7/22) *Some feedback requested*
Is this temporarily on hold or permanently? I would love to see where this is heading... the trailer really got me hooked and it's looking great thus far.
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Yeah, we need more, alot more!
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Eew Life-Day
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Grand Admiral Wettengel
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Date Posted:
11/29/05 5:43pm
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Grand Admiral Gilad Pellaeon sighed. "Move it to the right, just a little." He smiled. "Perfect." The five tired Fleet troops moved away for their Supreme Commander to view his latet acquisition.
"
Yutreq Bisalirus
," Pellaeon stated with a hint of excitement in his voice.
"It just looks like a big bush to me, sir," Colonel Tschel quipped. He failed to understand what his superior saw in collecting all these plants--bushes, shrubs, small trees, flowers. "At least you'll never run out of oxygen in your office." The bush unnerved the colonel who found its large, flat leaves to be far too large for its flimsy stem, and the grayish-white roots were lucking a blue pussy-like liquid that he thought might be poisonous. "I think it needs a trim. It could collapse."
"What do you know about gardening, Colonel?"
"Next to nothing." Tschel chuckled. "An art collection would be far better."
"I looked over quite a few pieces in Thrawn's collection and was totally incapable of pulling any great societal secrets out of them. I don't garden to gain insight into an enemy, I garden to relax and, since I cxan't have a regimented, orderly galaxy, I shall have a regimented, orderly garden. How are the biologists I had dispatched coming along with finding exotic fish?"
TBC
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Date Posted:
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RE: Star Wars: Destinies ( 1x New Post 11/29)
I actually giggled reading this!
I so adore good humor - probably because I'm incapable of writing it to save my life. (sigh) But judging by the trailer there will be angst ahead. Pity, in a sense...
A.
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