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SJade Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 2/28/02 2:53pm Subject: Luke Vader Series 1-2-3: complete now pg-13 - Date Edited: 5/28/02 4:57pm (8 edits total) Edited By: SJade
	Hello Yup, another one is starting right this moment As described in the title, this new tale (for it really is a tale this time since the sequels are also ready), starts with Luke aged of 6 years old and will cover up to his adulthood and more. Summary: When he is purchased by Lord Vader, a whole new life starts for the young future Luke Vader who will first have to learn to behave, then how to serve the Empire before he becomes a servant, a spy... and earns the right to be known as Lord Luke Vader. Can't tell more though; that will ruin your fun Cast: Luke, Vader, Mara, The Emperor, Leia, and others familiar faces peppered all over the place Category: drama (pg-13), flirt-romance, adventure. Ready to start? Okay Luke Vader Part 1: Slave SJ 26-04-00/10-00 (skyjade@globetrotter.net) ______________________ Disclaimers: None of this belong to me; everything in the Star Wars Universe belongs to George Lucas. See my home page for more details. Http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Quasar/3702 Special thanks to my shy, secret beta-reader and best friend, Adrianne, for her help with the final editing of my new stories. Thanks for giving me some of your precious time, my friend _____________________ Little Luke Skywalker had known that he shouldn't have gone too far from the farm, but his desire for adventure had been too strong to resist it. He had ventured into the intriguing Dune Sea. Uncle Owen had often rebuked him about his straying, saying that it was not safe for anybody, out there in the sand. Tonight, he thought in worry, he wouldn't need his uncle to tell him that; he now knew what his uncle had meant. He kicked again against the door of his holding cage. He had been exploring a dune which had seemed to be calling to him when the speeder and its burly passengers had come up on him from the other nearby dune. The speeder had flown low, fast--- and straight at him; one of the men had grabbed him as he had been trying to run to safety. They had first stunned him and thrown him on the backseat, but when he had been too rambunctious to their taste... Well, he admitted with some pride, he had been real bad by pulling their hair out and biting them, but they had deserved it; they hadn't wanted to let him go. Anyway, they had bound him and silenced him, then had put him in the cage that was on the back of their speeder. Despite the extreme warmth, he kept banging on the closed opening, hoping that his free feet and legs would be strong enough to force it open. He didn't know who those persons were, but he knew one thing for sure: they were not good people. Even though he was seven years old, well almost..., he could feel when people wanted his welfare or not. They didn't. A shadow on his left suddenly attracted his attention; he turned his head and his eyes widened in fear as he understood where he was being taken. Jabba’s Palace... He wished that he had been wrong about the men, he thought desperately... then resolved to give as much trouble as he could to the men and aliens who would dare keep him against his wish. And he did. TBC Liked it? Hope so Love and care SJ -----signature----- May the Force be With You http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=5880040&page=1 Luke Vader Series: What if Vader unknowingly purchased Luke as a slave child? http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7509292&page=1 L/M Unfathomable Love
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Cypher18 Registered: Apr '01	Date Posted: 2/28/02 3:10pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: kidnapped at 6, Luke becomes a slave... and is purchased by Lord Vader. pg1
	Interesting. Keep the posts coming this way. -----signature----- *Retired Council Master of the Lightside* Life is what happens when you're making other plans--John Lennon
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Tych_sel Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 2/28/02 3:44pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: kidnapped at 6, Luke becomes a slave... and is purchased by Lord Vader. pg1
	Interesting premise SJ! So Luke's being sold to Jabba, who I assume eventually sells him to Vader? Or is Jabba just acting as a middleman? -----signature----- "I had a dream I was a Jedi." - A. Skywalker "I am a Jedi, like my father before me." - L. Skywalker A Last Jump: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28296734&brd=10476 Destiny's Heir: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27819347/p
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SJade Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 2/28/02 4:33pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: kidnapped at 6, Luke becomes a slave... and is purchased by Lord Vader. pg1
	Hello Tych and Cypher Thanks for the feedback; glad you liked the opening Cypher: nice to meet you Don't worry, the posts will keep coming (ask Tych if you don't believe me Tych, no, Jabba doesn't sell him directly to Vader, he will instead treat him like a regular slave through one of his underground division... However,... I'm faced with a dilemna at the moment. Considering how the boards here are meant for general audience, and that, well, child slavery isn't exactly an easy subject even if there isn't anything more than rough treatment and angry words... I am wondering if I can post the part that Tych is asking about... or if I jump straight to when Vader feels the presence of a Force-user nearby?.. Do you have an idea about this? Please help me; I tried to find the exact restrictions on the boards, but I don't seem to find the information anywhere. I know about the adult stuff... I'm just wondering how far with the dramatic and touchy elements we can go. The story won't be less good if I jump that part, it just... won't be as long with Luke A little help please? Thanks in advance! More as soon as I have figured what to do Love and care SJ -----signature----- May the Force be With You http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=5880040&page=1 Luke Vader Series: What if Vader unknowingly purchased Luke as a slave child? http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7509292&page=1 L/M Unfathomable Love
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SJade Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 2/28/02 5:50pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13 - Date Edited: 5/6/02 4:58pm (1 edits total) Edited By: SJade
	Okay, I figured it out Thanks Tych Ready for more? Disclaimers and thanks, see first board Warning, slave bidding for a child, but Vader is there, I promise, and he doesn't condone it Part 1 continued: Darth Vader hated Naureal. He hated it because it was far from any decent world, which made it ideal for its role as a major trade center for slaves. If only he could put an end to that slavery thing, he thought darkly, not for the first time since he had unfortunately set foot on the planet. He walked swiftly down the streets, cursing yet again the fact that he couldn't use a speeder in such crowded streets. He tried to block out the calls of the slave traders as they offered fresh flesh to whoever could afford their prices. Suddenly, he stopped in his tracks. Someone nearby was Force-sensitive and was trying hard to use his powers. A young, male mind. Vader scanned further around himself. Luke's group was slowly diminishing as one boy after another was sold to the highest bidder. Luke's senses were slowly overcoming the effect of the drug he had been given, but not fast enough to try and dash for it. It enraged him that he couldn't defend himself against this. He already knew too much about slavery, about its horrors; he didn't want to step onto those planks. Unfortunately, his turn came. He tripped in the steps as the woman sharply pulled him beside herself, then he bunched his small fists and wished for the ability to punch the evil woman, or, at least, break free from this nightmare. He remained still, his eyes glazed as if in a dream. Vader ordered his troops to wait for him before he made his way toward a stage that seemed to beckon to him. He came up just in time to see a young, fair- haired boy being pulled into view. As he studied the scene, he clinically noted that the child was obviously very unhappy about his situation. He scanned him with the Force. He was the one... A genuine Jedi child... "And the last but not the least: Luke, aged of seven," the woman's suave voice rang clearly throughout the whole plaza. "This boy is strong for his age, and brilliant. He is very enduring, has stamina and has lived on a farm since his young age. We start the bid at twenty thousand." "Twenty-five," a first alien yelled. "Thirty-five," a second bid. "Fifty," a third one added. Totally oblivious to the ongoing bidding, Vader continued to study the Jedi child he had just stumbled onto. The way the boy was tightening his fists yet remained passive, he thought seriously, sifting his mind for a clue as to why it seemed important for him--- then he understood. The child had been drugged, but he was slowly breaking free of it thanks to his Force sensitivity. Most powerful, he surmised warily. "A hundred thousand," someone said in the crowd. Nobody answered to that. "A hundred thousand once, twice---" "Five hundred thousands," the dark lord offered calmly, perfectly hiding his instantaneous disgust at his own behavior. He had just turned himself into a slaver, the worst kind of being that he could meet in his whole life. Of course, he conceded, money wasn't the problem; the amount would barely make a nick in his fortune, but a Jedi child... The Emperor would not have been pleased if he hadn't just done what he had to do. Meanwhile, everybody present around him gasped, then cringed away as they recognized who had just purchased the last child. Vader walked forward, ignoring their stares of envy or fear. He was above them; unlike them, he wasn't a true slaver, he was only serving his master no matter what it required of him. "Once, twice, Sold to Lord Vader," the woman purred to him as he approached the stage. Vader didn't look at her as he gave her the credits, then as he took the boy's leash from her. "It's been a pleasure making a deal with you, my Lord. If you ever want more, here is my card," she tried nonetheless to take advantage of his showing up at her 'doorstep'. Vader dismissed her attempt to seduce him. "That one will be enough." he answered curtly as he pulled the boy off the stage; he then made his way out of the selling court. TBC Liked it (as a set up only...) Hope so To summarize the missing two months, Luke has showed to his captors what a mistake they made when they captured him by giving them the hardest time that they had ever had with a child (go Luke!) However, they... well, you read how he was on the stage. I'll make it up to him, I promise Love and care (and I mean this) SJ -----signature----- May the Force be With You http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=5880040&page=1 Luke Vader Series: What if Vader unknowingly purchased Luke as a slave child? http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7509292&page=1 L/M Unfathomable Love
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Tych_sel Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 2/28/02 5:56pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	Great way of showing Luke's resistance, it figures that they would have had to drug him in order to make him complacent enough to sell. And I loved how nobody even tried to outbid Vader. Waiting for more... -----signature----- "I had a dream I was a Jedi." - A. Skywalker "I am a Jedi, like my father before me." - L. Skywalker A Last Jump: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28296734&brd=10476 Destiny's Heir: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27819347/p
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SJade Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 2/28/02 5:59pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	Thanks Tych Glad you liked it; DRL is coming for tonight, and tomorrow I won't be home early, but... I'll catch up during the week-end, I promise Love and care SJ -----signature----- May the Force be With You http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=5880040&page=1 Luke Vader Series: What if Vader unknowingly purchased Luke as a slave child? http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7509292&page=1 L/M Unfathomable Love
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Tych_sel Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 2/28/02 6:02pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	And I'll be waiting for it! -----signature----- "I had a dream I was a Jedi." - A. Skywalker "I am a Jedi, like my father before me." - L. Skywalker A Last Jump: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28296734&brd=10476 Destiny's Heir: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27819347/p
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SJade Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 2/28/02 6:04pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	(:D) well then, don't be surprised if I post every time you turn around Nah, just joking, but I will post every time I'll be able to Love and care SJ -----signature----- May the Force be With You http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=5880040&page=1 Luke Vader Series: What if Vader unknowingly purchased Luke as a slave child? http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7509292&page=1 L/M Unfathomable Love
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Cypher18 Registered: Apr '01	Date Posted: 2/28/02 6:07pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	I loved the post. I think you got Vader down pact. Please continue posting good posts. -----signature----- *Retired Council Master of the Lightside* Life is what happens when you're making other plans--John Lennon
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Liz Registered: Nov '00	Date Posted: 2/28/02 6:26pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	HEY!!!! Gr8 fic...but you knew that already! ~Liz Skywalker too lazy to type out 'skywalker' when logging in -----signature----- The statement below is true. The statement above is false. You figure it out.
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Tych_sel Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 2/28/02 11:58pm Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	This is too good to have it sink into the depths of the board. UP! -----signature----- "I had a dream I was a Jedi." - A. Skywalker "I am a Jedi, like my father before me." - L. Skywalker A Last Jump: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28296734&brd=10476 Destiny's Heir: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27819347/p
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TheDarth Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 3/1/02 3:34am Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	OMG JUST HAD TO POST, now ill read it -----signature----- http://www25.brinskter.com/thedarth StarWars Comedy Studios Fuzzit d0t com!!! http://www.fuzzit.com
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TheDarth Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 3/1/02 3:44am Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	Oh yeah im in now yep i read it -----signature----- http://www25.brinskter.com/thedarth StarWars Comedy Studios Fuzzit d0t com!!! http://www.fuzzit.com
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SJade Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 3/1/02 4:47am Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13 - Date Edited: 5/6/02 5:02pm (3 edits total) Edited By: SJade
	Thanks Tych, Darth Guess what? DRL gave me a short break this morning Just for you! Hope you'll like it too Disclaimers and thanks, see first board Part 1 continued: Luke was aware of the black-clad giant who had just purchased him, 'was' afraid of him, but he couldn't resist him either. While he docilely followed him through the city, he wished that his anger would once again allow him to resist the drug. Ever since he had boarded ‘the’ transport at Jabba’s palace, he had come to realize that his anger could allow him to not sleep when his captors tried to make him sleep, and it also allowed him to understand what the aliens were saying even though he didn’t know their language. But for now, he sighed, his anger wasn’t strong enough to break him free from this new kind of control; he hated not being able to try and escape. When he and his new master reached the spaceport, the drug had finally begun to recede from his system and he was able to think 'and' act for himself. The first thing he did was to pull against his leash, trying to pull it free from the other's hold and run away from him. The second thing he did was gasp in pain as the chain turned to be scalding hot; he instantly let go of it. You might be a child, but that will not stop me from punishing you even more if you try this again, he heard in his head. Luke froze in utter shock; nobody but himself had ever talked to him in his head. Better, the voice praised him darkly even as he walked onward, as if nothing had happened. They boarded the shuttle; Vader sat in a seat, then pulled his Jedi child down and at his feet. The boy sat there, quiet yet studying his surroundings, as if looking for an escape. He watched him with interest when he rubbed his left ankle. He hadn’t cried, he noted coolly... The little one was not an average-tempered child, he reflected seriously. In a way, he conceded, it was a good thing since he wouldn’t have much patience for a sniveling baby, but on the other hand, it was foreboding trouble if the child was even slightly defiant. He would have no choice but to teach him the proper behavior in his presence... and he himself didn’t particularly care about hurting innocent children. Especially one who looked eerily like he himself had looked when he had also been a slave. From afar, he hadn’t noticed the physical traits of the boy, but now that he could study him at his leisure, the striking blue eyes and sandy-blond hair kept bringing back memories of his own childhood in his mind. Of course, he thought with annoyance, this was totally ridiculous. It was only what the psychologists called compassion thanks to his own experience. Nothing else. His shuttle finally lifted off; he continued his silent study. The child, no more than seven years old, he surmised, was untrained yet seemed already able to use the Force. Quite natural, he conceded as he probed his senses and felt the turmoil of his dark emotions. Anger, hatred, frustration... They were all fueling his latent abilities. As if sensing his probe, the boy raised his head. Even as he felt his intention to address him, Vader sent him another warning. Silence. The boy's eyes grew large again as he heard him again in his mind; he lowered his sight back to the deck and remained silent. Now, he thought, gazing forward at his approaching flagship, what was he going to do with a slave Jedi child?.. Luke wrapped his arms around his bare knees and tried to warm himself in the cold environment of the shuttle. It looked like the cruel guard had had his wish, he reflected sadly ; Luke knew who Darth Vader was. He was the dark henchman of the Emperor, and he was responsible for some of the worst atrocities in the history of the galaxy. He had learnt to fear even the mention of his name. Now he was in his very presence. Up to now, he knew that his father would've been proud of him, but now... with this new master... could he resist him?, he wondered doubtfully. Considering the amount of money that he had paid, Vader wouldn't kill him either, he knew ; he too would punish him. He clenched his fists and kept his tears inside his eyes. ****** TBC Liked it? Hope so Love and care Buenos Dias y tardes! SJ -----signature----- May the Force be With You http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=5880040&page=1 Luke Vader Series: What if Vader unknowingly purchased Luke as a slave child? http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7509292&page=1 L/M Unfathomable Love
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Cypher18 Registered: Apr '01	Date Posted: 3/1/02 5:01am Subject: RE: Luke Vader Series: From slave to Dark Lord of the Sith... pg-13
	that was great SJ. Keep it up. -----signature----- *Retired Council Master of the Lightside* Life is what happens when you're making other plans--John Lennon
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