Author Topic: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Z/J) ~ COMPLETED! Sequel Link up 01/20!
The_Hooded_One  1457 posts
Registered: May '02
42115_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 10/25/02 1:01pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! #2 update 10/24
A J/Z!! YES!!!! grin more pleese.

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/25/02 2:00pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! #2 update 10/24
*grins* bump^

 

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Master_Jaina1011  3288 posts
Registered: May '02
23793_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 10/25/02 2:15pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! #2 update 10/24
Trickster: Hey this is good!!!!! grin really it is! keep it going. i'm enjoying it so far!

 

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LadyMairead  2717 posts
Registered: May '02
14535_Yuuzhan Vong High Priestess
Date Posted: 10/25/02 2:19pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! #2 update 10/24
I just read all of your posts, and I've very impressed so far. This is a really original idea, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. I particularly like the fact that all of the "old" Jedi are gone and the younger generation has stepped up to lead. And the Jacen/Jaina dialouge is trés amusante. The dynamic between all of the characters is great as well.

Congrats on your first fic! Looks like a success to me. But we'll only be able to tell with another post. wink

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
41735_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 10/25/02 2:53pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! #2 update 10/24 - Date Edited: 10/25/02 2:57pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Trickster_Jaina_Fel
i got fifty!!!!!!!!!!

ok, ok...i suppose i could put up another post...but you guys are really, really, really gonna hate me...here it is:

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The third Nightsister gave an enraged cry as she felt the death of her fellow warrior and ran out from behind a pillar, right arm and fingers outstretched. Jaina, knowing exactly what that meant, ducked and rolled, coming up to one knee and holding her lightsaber up as protection, should the Nightsister aim the Sith lightning at her.

Jacen who had been standing beside his twin, was not so lucky. The young man’s body soaked up the Dark electricity like a sponge taking in water, causing him to fly against the wall.

Jaina’s eyes widened and she froze in shock, but only for a moment. Flying to her feet she raced over to the third Nightsister only to be tackled by the second. She went down with an “oomph.”

Jacen writhed in agony as the blue-white lightning flow intensified. The pain was so extreme that he couldn’t even scream.

“You fool!” he heard the second Nightsister shout. “You’re not supposed to kill him!”

“Let him die,” the third Nightsister snarled. “Let his sister feel our pain. The Lord Emperor only needs the girl!”

“He wants them both alive!”

There was a sudden, powerful burst of pain and then only a tingling feeling. To his horror, the electricity was at the point where it was killing his nerves. /Jaina!/ he shouted through the twin bond.

Jaina slammed the second Nightsister into the wall and raced to her twin’s aid. Her kick landed across the third Nightsister’s face. The Dark one howled in pain as Jaina continued to take her vengeance out on the woman who tried to kill Jacen.

Jacen looked up and cried a warning, but Jaina turned too late. The stun bolt hit her square in the chest and Jaina fell with a thump. When Jacen attempted to drag his tingling, shaking body toward his other half, a blue stun bolt arced toward him and then everything faded to black.


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devil devil devil devil devil that's what you guys get for taking so long to respond...

~TJF

 

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LadyMairead  2717 posts
Registered: May '02
14535_Yuuzhan Vong High Priestess
Date Posted: 10/25/02 2:56pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25 - Date Edited: 10/25/02 2:57pm (1 edits total) Edited By: LadyMairead
Good post. But please don't hurt Jacen! You know how much he means to me. Besides I need him....intact. wink



EDIT: Congrats on 50!

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:00pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
Evil evil cliffie *evil laughter* you fit right into the Writing world, Trickster grin

 

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NYCitygurl  28433 posts
Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons
Registered: Jul '02
51036_WH9: Narnia
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:06pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
If I beg really hard will u give us another post tonight?

Love NYC

 

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Master_Jaina1011  3288 posts
Registered: May '02
23793_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:09pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
I beg of you write more! please!!!

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
41735_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:34pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
LM: thanks! devil

JM: thanks!...as if it were a cliffie for you!
...they're going to kill me, aren't they? wink mischief

NYCgirl: greedy, greedy, greedy! you were just begging for one this morning...and now? i just posted!

Master_Jaina1011: i got a new reader! <throws confetti> yay!
we'll see the new post...

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now we just need LtJS, Rogue (both of them), The_Hooded_One, Deneveon and _Tenel_Ka to check in!

wow...i have a lot of readers! grin grin grin grin happy happy happy

~TJF

 

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NYCitygurl  28433 posts
Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons
Registered: Jul '02
51036_WH9: Narnia
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:36pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
I posted on TT.

Is there any chance whatsoever that you'll post again tonight? I'm very greedy.

Love NYC

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
41735_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:39pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
you posted on TT? shock grin shock grin shock grin shock grin shock
<dust flies as TJF flies over to NYCgirl's thread>

 

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NYCitygurl  28433 posts
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51036_WH9: Narnia
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:46pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
So does this mean you'll post tonight?

Love NYC

 

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starkrusher  2018 posts
Registered: Sep '02
6182_Yoda
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:48pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
I am posting this on many different threads because of the numerous PMs I have received concerning the GF/RC debate. Part of this is in response to some very disturbing accusations by LM. I will include them for your reading pleasure.

LM ~ ”You shall regret yourself if you continue with your insidious plans. I'll get you my pretty, and your little Yoda too!!
Plague and Death to You,
LadyMairead

You know, I was worried about this "Goldfish" business at first but then I realized:
1.We're exclusive, so we have all the best and brightest
2.We're cooler
3.People like us better”


*sticks tongue out at LM*

Ultimatum: You let us be RCs or we form the GFs. We didn’t want it to come to this but you have left us no choice.

DP was very very insistent that we allow RC/GF crossovers. She is nice. Evidently the RCs are not. Since you guys have no intention of allowing crossovers, we don't either. You cannot simply not be an RC and a GF. Furthermore, this problem would not arise if you would just let your biggest fans be RCs. This whole debate would vanish like Alderan (bad analogy, I know) if you would let us in. Alas, I do not foresee this. So....we must take drastic measures. As I say, if you can't join them, beat them. We WILL be Goldfishies. Goldfishies are cool. We are JUST AS GOOD IF NOT BETTER THAN THE RCs. We have a cool jingle (refer to my sig), we are orange (compared to the ugly brown of an RC), and we do not discriminate against other avid fanfic readers/writers. We love and support all the RCs but must form our own organization to uphold our own beliefs. Kinda like the Catholic Church and Henry VIII. So beware all you Thomas Moores! Sorry there, I'm in the midst of Western Civ.

LM - You call me or my kind a Herring again and I will attack you with my bright orange lightsaber. AND I WILL WIN! Not only am I stronger in the force than Anakin Skywalker himself, I have been trained by an RC. So take that!

Luv to and Fishiness to All (even the RCs)
~ Mandie

P.S. Direct any questions concerning said debate to my thread.

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/25/02 3:57pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
*blink* I don't get it, I don't want to get it... *shakes her head*

Trickster, are you going to be a good little writer and post them the next part? As for killing you? *evil laugh* they won't do that, they really want to know what happens next lol!

 

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