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starkrusher Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 10/26/02 10:46pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	Just doing my job as a fellow GF. Up up up!
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Jez_3-14159265358979 Registered: Aug '01	Date Posted: 10/26/02 11:00pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	Hey just found this fic. it's great so far. can't wait for the next post! Jez -----signature----- "She Drew a Circle that left me out, Heritic, Rebel, a thing to flout, But my heart had wit to win, I drew a circle that took her in."
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Kyp_side_of_TheForce Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 12:01am Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	I'm gone for 2 days and there are 5 pages!! Yeah!!!!!! runs up to TJF crying tears of happiness That was (sob) so great!!!!!!!! MORE please!!!!!!!!!!! -----signature----- "So much for acting like a Jedi Master."-Kyp Durron “Oh joy, another redemption,”-Kyp, Dark Future "Never get so tolerant that you tolerate intolerance."-Bill Maher TJF's bodyguard: read, don't touch Love thy Country, Fear thy Government
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Jade_Max Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 12:03am Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	laughs Ksotf, Trickster will love you for that grin she feels so unappreciated I think... Ah well, hopefully she'll be able to post something tomorrow, if not, it -is- the weekend and some of us have DRL who interferes. Myself included... waits patiently for Trickster to come back and double check the changes Do be do be do... -----signature----- You'll Like me when I'm Dead - V/P Dark Drama - http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29236355 Don't think, write. And have faith that your subconscious mind is smarter than you.- lazy RIP my babies; Nibbler, Boo & Mister Magoo
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Lt_Jaina_Solo Registered: May '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 11:09am Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	awesome posties, TJF! can't wait for more! and you had better not kill Jacen! -----signature----- Handmaiden Irelynné, Handmaiden of the Crest All links to stories in bio!
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 12:53pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	The_Standmaiden: coming up...by the way, looooooooove your please-face! JediJainaQueen: JM's back so i got the edited version! so yes, you will get a post...today, since i wasn't around yesterday... Jade_Max: aw...JM, you're so sweet to me...i wasn't around for a loooong time yesterday cuz i was working and stuff...but i got it early this morning...then i had to go to something...so i'll post in a few minutes! Master_Jaina1011: pretty much... Rogue11lovesJag: no real changes...except the third one, about "the above is all the Ritz Crackers fault"...i don't think that's really necessary...it's amunition and i don't really think it should be in the constitution. if you have to put it in, put "the Goldfish are neutral in the above statement"...or something like that. keep the constitution friendly. otherwise, great! NYC: yeah...sure...blame it on your mom ... starkrusher: hello fellow GF! so are you going to be reading regularly? or are you just upping for the heck of it? Jez: I GOT A NEW READER? YAY! welcome to the thread where the poster (that's me) has a pathetic backbone and collapses whenever someone asks for a post... i'm glad you like this fic! Kyp_side_of_TheForce: good to have you back! i was starting to get worried...and thanx for your kind comments...i feel so loved... Jade_Max: darn right i feel unappreciated! people beg and beg and beg for a post...then when i post everyone leaves! ...but you're right...Ksoth's comments were wonderful...thanx for beta-ing for me! Lt_Jaina_Solo: (in direct order of your comments) thank-you...it's coming... look at the bottom of my last post for my apology! ~TJF -----signature----- The Reason Why (prequel to FaIC/IYC): http://boards.theforce.net/Boards/message.aspx?topic=30299388 If You Call (sequel to FaIC): http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29705372/p1 http://moonlightrick.livejournal.com
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 1:12pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26 - Date Edited: 10/27/02 1:28pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Trickster_Jaina_Fel
	ok...i don't really know what i expected. after all, everyond disappears when i post...why not when i promise to post? come on, if anyone replies here...i'll post. ~TJF -----signature----- The Reason Why (prequel to FaIC/IYC): http://boards.theforce.net/Boards/message.aspx?topic=30299388 If You Call (sequel to FaIC): http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29705372/p1 http://moonlightrick.livejournal.com
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starkrusher Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 1:37pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	Hey, I'm here! In response to your question, you are fellow GF now, of couse I'll be reading! So, now I replied and you must post.
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 1:50pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26
	I was on this morning, and pretty much noone else was. And of course i'll blame it on my Mom! Actually, it's partically my fault, because we stopped at Borders so i could get DW. And I'll get down on my knees and beg and offer posts if you'll post. Love NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse "Hat. We thought of authentic Native American headdress before we thought of hat."
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 2:04pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! tiny second update 10/26 - Date Edited: 10/27/02 2:29pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Trickster_Jaina_Fel
	then welcome starkrusher! i love new readers...even if they're only reading my fic cuz they're fellow GFs... oh...and btw...Jade_Max wrote the tk bit...isn't she brilliant? here's the post! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jaina jolted out of her bantering mood as Jacen’s body began to shake from pain and he screamed into her mind. She jumped to her feet and went up to the glass wall that separated them, able only to feel his agony and her own while their bond began to fray as death grew closer and closer. She watched helplessly, banging her hands on the glass, uncaring about the shocks running through her arms. “JACEN!” his name was torn from her throat as tears streamed down her cheeks. “No, JACEN!” she punched the barrier as his body writhed from the exploding nerve endings, the sensation echoing in her own. They weren’t just active; they were stimulated to the point of death. Her breathing came in short gasps as she slammed her hands, open palmed, against the barrier. “NO!” /I love you Jaya/ Jacen managed to say through the bond as his body went into severe shock. Tears blurred her vision as blackness began to encroach on the edges. /Jasa…love you too!/ Jaina screamed as she felt the “Jacen-ness” of her brother—his very mind—disappear into the pain, his heart still pumping. There was a loud crack of bones snapping and Jaina curled into a ball, shocked into pained silence as Jacen—and half of her heart, soul and very being—became one with the Force, disappearing completely. She could never be sure if he heard the last message she’d sent to his mind. ~~~ Halfway across the galaxy, Leia Organa Solo gasped as a phantom pain flew over her from the Force. Before she could comprehend who it came from there were two explosions in the Force: the death of a Jedi—no, her very heart and soul screamed, not just any Jedi, her only remaining son, Jacen—and the other of anguish unlike anything she had ever felt, from Jaina. The baby within her, terrified and in pain, screamed, and Leia’s heart with it. In a desperate act, she severed whatever bond she had with Jaina and strengthened her mental shields. Her husband, Han Solo, turned to her, reading the awful truth in her eyes and opened his arms. And, in the comfort of her also-grieving husband’s embrace, and in the comfort of the knowledge that her baby was safe, Leia cried. ~~~ The Rock Dragon sped through hyperspace with its precious cargo, Lowie at the helm. Tenel Ka had just unbuckled her crash webbing to go check on the students when a blast of white hot pain lanced through her soul. Jacen! she went crashing into the wall, stumbling from the sudden, blinding pain. His force presence blazed brilliantly inside her for a brief, shining moment, before disappearing completely. Like a last caress. Tenel Ka slid down the wall, shaking with silent sobs she couldn’t release. Lowbacca’s inquiring whine penetrated her anguish. Jacen is gone. She bowed her head and wiped her eyes, noticing for the first time that her cheeks were streaked with tears. Forcing herself to her feet, she shielded her emotions and buried them. She could feel the confusion of the Jedi children. Jacen’s passing had disturbed the Force. Setting her jaw resolutely, she rose to her feet. She could grieve later, for now, she had a responsibility to uphold and a promise to keep. She would get the children safely to Hapes. Offering a silent assurance to Lowie, she resumed walking towards the cargo bay, feeling empty and suddenly so very, very alone. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ there you go! the product of my spinelessness... hope you liked it! ~TJF -----signature----- The Reason Why (prequel to FaIC/IYC): http://boards.theforce.net/Boards/message.aspx?topic=30299388 If You Call (sequel to FaIC): http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29705372/p1 http://moonlightrick.livejournal.com
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NYCitygurl Title: Manager of SFFBC, C&G, NSWFF, and Icons Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 2:11pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! i'm spineless so here's your 10/27 post!
	THAT WAS SAD! Now I need something mushy to read. Or you could post Zekk and Jaina meeting. Love NYC -----signature----- I agree with RJ Officially Idri's Muse "Hat. We thought of authentic Native American headdress before we thought of hat."
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 2:28pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! i'm spineless so here's your 10/27 post!
	thanks! jaina and zekk meet again in one or two posts...it's not exactly going to be mushy though...zekk's sith, remember? in the course of being sith he killed a lot of jedi and other people that jaina cared about... ~TJF -----signature----- The Reason Why (prequel to FaIC/IYC): http://boards.theforce.net/Boards/message.aspx?topic=30299388 If You Call (sequel to FaIC): http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29705372/p1 http://moonlightrick.livejournal.com
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JainaJediQueen Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 2:31pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! i'm spineless so here's your 10/27 post!
	So sad! Poor everybody! -The Queen -----signature----- Jaina something Queen-that's ME!
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Kyp_side_of_TheForce Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 2:40pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! i'm spineless so here's your 10/27 post!
	!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!! bows bown on her hands and knee's in front of TJF, beging for another post I love it when my favorite sort of good guys become sith!!!! GO ZEKK!!!!!!!!!!! you rule TJF!!!!!!!!! -----signature----- "So much for acting like a Jedi Master."-Kyp Durron “Oh joy, another redemption,”-Kyp, Dark Future "Never get so tolerant that you tolerate intolerance."-Bill Maher TJF's bodyguard: read, don't touch Love thy Country, Fear thy Government
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Jedida Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 10/27/02 2:50pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! i'm spineless so here's your 10/27 post!
	NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! You killed Jacen!!!!!! There better be a reason for this. Or else great couple of posts, btw. i'm sorry i haven't reviewed for forever, but i finally caught up and they're awesome! except for the fact that Jacen is dead... -----signature----- I've been kidnapped by DRL. Save me!
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