Author Topic: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 12/12
alain_bioras  492 posts
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Date Posted: 11/24/02 11:50am Subject: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 12/12 - Date Edited: 12/12/02 6:15pm (8 edits total) Edited By: alain_bioras
DISCLAIMER: All characters, the Star Wars universe, etc. are property of LUCAS FILMS ltd. I'm not making any money off this story.

CORUSCANT

The hum of the small, round practice droid had become a surprisingly calming sound over the years. Even the unexpected lasers it frequently sent out did little to frighten him as they had when he was a child. He felt them before he saw them and was easily able to deflect them. He felt his brother before he saw him as well, though he didn’t show it. Two blaster shots fired at him and he swung his light saber in a graceful arc to stop them. The sound of applause from the doorway made him disengage his weapon and turn. Jacen stood behind him, but Anakin wasn’t pleased with the praise. He was sure it was done mockingly.

"Sloppy, too slow, and undisciplined," he commented, pushing off the doorframe with his shoulder and stepping closer.

"Is there a reason you're here, or did you just feel like a good argument?" Anakin questioned, using the Force to float a towel telekinetically into his waiting hand. He began dabbing his neck with it, all but sticking his tongue out at his older sibling to prove his point that moving objects could also be considered a practical thing.

"Fun as a rousing debate with you would be, I'm here to tell you that Uncle Luke is waiting for you in his study." Anakin rolled his eyes and began strolling to the door, dropping his towel on the back of a chair. "You're in for it, Little Bro," Jacen called after him. Anakin wished he could disagree.

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"Uncle Luke?" Anakin rapped softly on the door, then stood, impatiently waiting for it to slide open. When it finally did, a familiar protocol droid stood on the other side, ready to greet him.

"Master Luke is waiting in his office," he informed him, stepping aside to let him pass.

"Thanks, Threepio." He walked through the common area of his aunt and uncle's apartments, to a door on the far left side. He knocked, then pressed the data pad to open it before receiving an answer. Luke Skywalker sat at his desk, but rose to his feet at the arrival of his nephew.

"Shut the door and sit down," he instructed. Anakin obeyed. Had his uncle been anyone else, he would have expected him to start pacing. But he was calm and stationary. Nervous wasn’t his style. "Do you know why I asked you in here?"

"Yes. Well...I think so, anyway." Anakin shifted uncomfortably in his chair.

"Look, I’m glad that you helped the children. Perhaps I should have deployed the rescue team sooner. But...racing off like that," Luke sighed, almost sorrowfully. "That's exactly the kind of reckless behavior that Kyp and the others have begun to employ. And I thought that I had trained you and Jacen well enough to know that that type of thinking would get you nowhere. I thought I had trained all the Jedi well enough to know that." He sat back down, pensively.

"You're afraid that the Order is falling apart?" Anakin asked, tentatively. After a few moments, Luke nodded.

"That's why I feel that I must convince the delegates to let me reestablish the Council," he explained. "The Jedi Knights are no longer united for the common good. Many don’t even understand what it is they’re being called to defend. Their abilities are beginning to make them arrogant. I once thought that they understood that we aren't meant to use our powers to rule over others." Anakin nodded, knowing that Luke was remembering his father in that statement.

"The thing is," his nephew began, hesitantly, leaning forward in his chair. "I'm not fully convinced that Kyp is wrong. At least not entirely. Maybe it is time we took the offensive with the Yuuzhan Vong. It is the galaxy we've sworn to protect that they're invading. What makes them any different from Palpatine?"

"I thought you understood them better now," Luke protested.

"I do. Some of them. But the leaders..." he trailed off, thinking of what they had done to Tahiri. "They're corrupt. And if their goal is to destroy us, then why shouldn’t our goal be to destroy them?"

"Our goal should never be to destroy anyone. Jedi respect all life in any form."

"Yes, and the only problem with that is it’s going to get us all killed!" Anakin yelled. He rose to his feet, frustrated. "What do you want? Another purge? Who's to say they're even living if we can't feel them in the Force?"

"Calm yourself, Anakin. You're letting your anger control you. And sit." He gestured toward the chair the young knight had abandoned. "I did not call you in her to argue with you about my methods. Methods that I might add, have worked for a thousand generations and do not need to be questioned by a head strong teenager." Anakin shrank back in his seat, sheepishly. "Now. My question for you was to ask why you went to Yavin without permission. You knew other ships were on their way."

"They wouldn't have made it in time," he argued.

"You foresaw it?" he prodded, curiously. He had always been cautious of the young man’s talents and latent Force abilities, wondering if he would one day, inevitably live up to his name. Anakin nodded.

"If I hadn't gone, they'd all be dead now," he said, refusing to look his uncle in the eye. "Including Tahiri." Luke was silent for a moment.

"Your feelings for her," he began. "They're growing?" Again, Anakin nodded. "Have you told her this?"

"No," he whispered, uncomfortable sharing this with someone he had been fighting with only minutes before.

"Perhaps you should," he recommended. He patted Anakin's knee, then stood, opened the door, and called C-3PO in. "You can go. But no more impetuous moves for the time being. I suggest you meditate on your actions."

"Yes, Sir?" Threepio prompted, appearing in the doorway. Luke turned to him.

"Where's Mara?" he asked.

"I believe, Master Luke, that she said she needed to lie down and that she did not wish to be disturbed. I can fetch her for you, if you wish, Sir."

"No, no." He waved his hand dismissively. Anakin rose and headed for the door, shooing the droid aside.

"Anakin?" Luke called. He looked back at him. "I think I saw Tahiri in the archives."
Anakin nodded and left.

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Lonewolf89  7329 posts
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Date Posted: 11/24/02 12:19pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')
I have to agree with Anakin on the Vong, Luke's become way to complacent.

So, does Anakin tell Tahiri how he feels? More soon!

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
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Date Posted: 11/24/02 1:47pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')
Ooooo wow, Anakin's getting chewed out for going to rescue Tahiri?! Ouch! Relax Luke, follow Anakin's lead for once! *grins*

Don't mind me...

Good start, I can't wait to see how the whole A/T relationship builds in this story! happy

 

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alain_bioras  492 posts
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Date Posted: 11/24/02 5:43pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')
New Post!! grin


"Tahiri?" Anakin wove his way through the massive shelves of holodiscs, searching for his friend. This was hopeless. Even if she was here, he’d never find her.

"The archives at the Academy were twice this size." He jumped at the voice, then turned to it. She stood behind him, pulling out projections, then returning them to their slots. "How do you ever fit all the information on all the systems into such a small space?"

"I...I don't know," he stammered. "I don't come in here much."

"Yeah." She smiled, wistfully. "Mechanics were always more your thing. So," She faced him, giving him her full attention. "How'd it go with your uncle?"

"How'd you know about that?" His brow furrowed in confusion. She shrugged, playfully.

"Word gets around." She grinned at him. He gave her a skeptical look. "Okay, okay, so I talked to Jaina. Anyway, what’d he say?" It was Anakin's turn to shrug.

"He told me that I was reckless and that I should meditate."

"Your basic, 'I'm not angry, just disappointed' speech?"

"Yeah. And then somehow, we got into an argument about the Vong-"

"Yuuzhan Vong," she corrected, quietly. He stopped talking and stared at her.

"You okay?" he asked, gently. She began rubbing her hands up and down her arms for warmth.

"They're gonna find us, you know," she stated, bluntly. "And they're gonna make me go back there...and..." she trailed off, afraid she would choke on her words. He sighed, stepped forward and wrapped his arms around her. "I don’t want to be Riina again, Anakin," she cried, her voice muffled by his shoulder.

"You won't be," he vowed. "I’m not going to let them take you again."

"And just how are you planning to stop them, Hero Boy?" she raised her head to look at him. "You Solos are good, but you're not gonna be able to-"

"Look, I got you out of there once, I can do it again. Have a little faith in me, will ya? I know how to do my job."

"Oh, so I'm a job now?" She pulled away completely. "Just another innocent you're meant to protect. Well, no thank you. I can take care of myself, Anakin Solo!" She turned on her heel and began to walk in the opposite direction, away from him.

"That's not what I meant, and you know it." He jogged to catch up and grabbed her arm to stop her. "I do not think of you as a responsibility. I think of you as my friend."

"Since when?" she demanded, angrily. "You didn't seem to care much about me after you left the Academy, did you?"

"There were reasons I had to stay away."

"What? Sernpidal? Centerpoint?" Her voice rose an octave with each word. His face clouded over. She had deliberately chosen touchy subjects, and they both knew it.

"That’s not fair," he said, barely audible. He kept his eyes on his feet. "You know I had a higher calling than just staying on Yavin. Besides, you don't need to blame me for Chewbacca and the others. I blame myself enough for both of us." For the first time since she started ranting, she felt remorse.

"I'm sorry," she apologized, stepping closer to him again. "I was out of line."

"No, you weren't. You were right."

"No, I wasn't."

"Yes, you were. I...I shouldn't have ignored you, I should have visited more-"

"Oh, well, yes. That I was right about." She smiled at him. "But I was wrong to bring up Chewie's death."

"No, it was my fault," he argued. "He died saving me." She brought her hand up to his cheek, forcing him to look at her.

"If you had turned around, you would all be dead. And Chewbacca would have sacrificed his life in vain." He gave her a small smile.

"When did you get so smart?" he inquired.

"Around the time you started talking so much." She leaned her forehead against his.

"There you two are!" Han boomed, turning the corner and stopping short when he spotted them. They pulled apart and gave him quizzical looks. "Luke needs you, he told me to go find you. Why he picks the one family member who can’t track your essence, I have no idea-"

"Dad!" Anakin cut off his babbling, exasperated. "What’s wrong? What happened?"

"I don’t know. Something about a coral skipper," he explained. "A little too close to the planet for comfort, if you know what I mean. Anyway, it looks suspicious, so we're havin' a little pow-wow." He jerked his head, indicating that they should follow him. "Come on."

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Lonewolf89  7329 posts
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Date Posted: 11/24/02 5:59pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')
Great post! I liked the way you wrote Tahiri, still trying to get over her captivity. More please! happy

 

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Jedi_Knight_Satine  3607 posts
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Date Posted: 11/24/02 6:09pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')
Awesome story! I can't wait for more! You're charaterizations (SP?) of everyone are excellent!

 

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Date Posted: 11/24/02 8:25pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')
I agree, you've got their characters down really well, especially Post Vong Tahiri... poor Tahiri...

Great job, can't wait for the next one!

 

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PadawanDi  121 posts
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Date Posted: 11/25/02 6:18pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')
I loved it! love More!More! I must have MORE! grin

 

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alain_bioras  492 posts
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Date Posted: 11/25/02 7:05pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest') - Date Edited: 11/27/02 9:42am (2 edits total) Edited By: alain_bioras
Here's the next post!! Keep in mind that I haven't read 'Rebirth' yet guys(can't find it anywhere!) so if anything in this story is inaccurate, please ignore it. This is an A/U after all. wink



"What's going on?" Anakin demanded as soon as they entered Luke and Mara's apartment. They were the last ones to arrive.

"We've got problems," Luke told him, gesturing for them all to sit. "There's a coral skipper near the atmosphere." He walked over to one of the computers in the room and typed in coordinates. An image of the vicinity that the ship was flying in appeared. Luke pulled up the schematics for the living vessel.

"You're sure it's not just passing on its way somewhere else?" Tahiri suggested, eyeing the screen.

"There's no planet close enough to the capital that it would actually save time to pull out of hyperspace," Leia contradicted.

"There's more," Luke continued, turning to face them all. "It's orbiting the planet. It's not landing."

"So..." Jaina prompted.

"So, it's biding its time. Waiting," he explained. Tahiri instinctively moved closer to Anakin.

"For what?" she inquired.

"That's what we don't know. If I had to guess, I'd say it's waiting for more ships. They could be launching another aerial strike."

"On Coruscant? They know it's the place we're strongest at," Jaina said, rising from the sleek couch she had been sitting on. "We have more weapons here, proton torpedoes, the best X-wings in the Republic. Why would they even attempt it?"

"Because they know that Tahiri's here," Anakin spoke up in realization. "They must have followed us."

"Or tracked us," Jaina finished.

"They know that where ever we are, she is."

"I suggest leaving," Jacen said, standing also, as if planning to go right then. "Force knows they would probably love to capture a Solo in the process."

"I second it," Tahiri agreed.

"Now wait a minute," Jaina stepped in. "We can't keep running from them forever. We should just face them now."

"And risk Tahiri?" Anakin practically yelled.

"For the sake of the fate of the galaxy? Yes!"

"Now, hold it!" Leia stood abruptly, acting as a barrier between her quarreling children. "No one's going to solve anything by fighting." She turned to her daughter. "Jaina, I appreciate your initiative, but the Yuuzhan Vong have a large advantage if they are gathering an army, even if we're on Coruscant. We may have an army here, but the nearest fleet is parsecs away. Possibly as far as Dubrillion. If they're planning an air attack, then the Republic is going to be severely unprepared. It's best we run for now."
"Wait." Mara turned around in her seat at the computer, speaking for the first time since their meeting began. "We don't know that they're planning anything. What if this skipper is just lost? Or it's here to negotiate?"

"No, Leia's right," Luke said, nodding at his sister. "Better safe than sorry."

"But-" Jaina began to protest.

"No buts," Luke interrupted. "You may be a Jedi Knight, but we are still your superiors." He gave her a stern look. "And I am still your Master." She lowered her gaze. He turned to his brother-in-law. "Han, prepare the Falcon for takeoff."

* * *

"Anakin, I could use a copilot here!" Han called back into the ship. His youngest son appeared behind him and took the seat to his right. "Is everyone on board?" he asked. Anakin nodded, already leaning over the controls. "Good. Set the coordinates in the navicomputer, will you?"

"Where to?"

"Where's the nearest system?"

"Uh," Anakin glanced at the holoprojection of the galaxy. "Dantooine's not far, but it's pretty remote. If we were to have problems, it'd be hard getting out of there in a hurry. And face it Dad, this hunk of junk may be fast, but she breaks down a lot."

"Remote may be good," he commented. "They won't expect us to go there."

"They won't expect us to go there because they know we're not stupid," he said sardonically. "Maybe we should aim farther. You know, get some distance between us and them."

"Kid, it would take us days to get to the Outer Rim, and the shield generator is still malfunctioning. The less time we spend in the air, the better." He sighed. "I knew we should have taken the Jade Saber."

"Bakura?" Anakin suggested. Han gave him a look.

"You're pushin' it."

"Well, we need to go further than Dantooine. Work with me here. How about Endor?"

"Works for me," he agreed, turning back to the front. "Get moving." Anakin nodded and began punching coordinates.

* * *

"Oh, you're cheating!" Jacen yelled at the small droid, bopping it on the top of its domed ‘head’. Artoo began whistling profusely and Jaina and Tahiri giggled at them. C-3PO leaned over and inspected the low sabacc table. R2-D2 turned to him and beeped for help.

"If you don"t mind my saying so, Master Jacen, astromech droids are not programmed to cheat," he explained.

"Artoo beating you again?” Anakin grinned, striding into the chamber.

"Yeah, well," Jacen stood, obviously giving up on the game. "You try and beat him, Hot Shot."

"Actually, I didn't come in here to play." He glanced over at Tahiri, then gestured with his eyes toward the door. She nodded and followed him out. As soon as they were out of earshot, he began talking.

"How are you doing?" he asked.

"With what?"

"Well, I haven't had a chance to talk to you since we took off," he said, surprised at her calm demeanor. "Are you okay?"

"Not really." She let a sad smile creep to her lips. "It's never over, is it?" He gave her a confused look. "The fighting." She answered his unspoken question.

"I don’t think that the good fight ever stops, no," he replied. "We're never going to win. But it’s our job to make sure that they never do either." He shrugged and grinned. "Such is the life of a Jedi."

"That's so poetic, Master," she said with mock sarcasm, punching him in the arm. She rolled her eyes. "Did I ask for a lesson?"

"No, you asked for an answer," he explained. "So I gave you one. True, it's cryptic, but it’s better than nothing."

"You are spending way too much time around Jacen and Master Skywalker. You went and got philosophical on me."

"Hardly," he laughed. "You go back in there and compare me to Jacen, please. Really, I would love to see his reaction." She giggled at him. His laughter subsided after a few moments. "Listen, Tahiri-"

"Anakin!" Han's urgent voice came on over the intercom above their heads. "I need you in the gunner pod now!"

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Date Posted: 11/25/02 8:15pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 11/25
ACK! No! You can't leave it there, what's happening?! And is Anakin trying to tell Tahiri his feelings? I hope so, let him do it! Please? happy

Good characterization, I love the banter about the falcon lol!

 

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Date Posted: 11/25/02 8:29pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 11/25
Another cliffie, and a big one at that. I take it they've got Vong on their tails. I can't wait for more. Great post, alain!

 

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Date Posted: 11/26/02 5:05am Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 11/25
cry I wanna know whats happening! grin That was such a good post!

 

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Date Posted: 11/26/02 8:12pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 11/25 - Date Edited: 2/22/03 4:27pm (1 edits total) Edited By: alain_bioras
Here's more!!! wink


Anakin pulled Tahiri aside so that he could pass her and jogged down the wide hallway to the pod entrance, aware the whole time that his best friend was right behind him, as always. He swung up into the small chamber and sat in the chair, taking the controls. Tahiri still stood in the room beneath him.

"You in, Kid?" Han's voice called again.

"Yeah!" Anakin yelled back, finally seeing what the problem was. Four or five coralskippers had decided to follow them before they could reach lightspeed. They were already beginning to fire. And with the sheild generator breaking down... he didn't finish his thought. He let instinct and the Force take over and began shooting back at them.

"Never an X-Wing around when you need one, huh?" Tahiri shouted up at him. "Makes you appreciate the everyday things!"

"You know, you could help!" he suggested, trying to focus on her and the task at hand. "Get Jacen or Jaina in the lower pod!" He barely saw her nod and run off in the direction they had come from. He continued shooting. Not long after he had dispatched the first ship, he saw another explode on the other end of the line they had formed. Hello Jaina, he projected, smiling. With her working with him, it didn't take long for them to get rid of all of the skippers in their way. He breathed a sigh of relief and flopped back in his seat.

"Guys?" Han began through the speaker next to the entrance. "I'm pulling into hyperspace before any more of them can follow us." Anakin nodded absently, the fact that his father couldn't see him not registering in his mind.

"Hey!"

He looked down through the small hole he had come up through to find Tahiri back in position.

"You coming down?" she asked. "I believe you were beginning to address a new topic in our conversation when we were rudely attacked." He grinned as he climbed down to her level. She waited until he reached the floor before continuing. "So?" she prompted. He sighed.

"We need to talk."

* * *

"Okay," Anakin started, leading her over to sit on the bunk in the tiny room on the ship that had been designated his. He began to pace.

"What is it, Anakin?" she asked, understanding now that he was serious. He kneeled in front of her so that his eyes were level with hers. He didn't want her to think of him as intimidating in any way.

"Do you have any idea how scared I was when you were captured back on Yavin?" he inquired. She didn't answer, sensing that it was a rhetorical question. "I...I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to save you." He lowered his head. She wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him closer.

"But you did," she reminded him, burying her face in his shoulder. He pulled away enough to be able to see her face.

"I don't want to lose you," he told her.

"Is that what you wanted to tell me?" It almost came out as a demand. "You wanted to assure me that you still care? You know, I didn't miss you that much after you left!"

"Tahiri-"

"If you still want me to hold the title of 'best friend', then that's fine with me!"

"Tahiri, I didn't-"

"Of course, being a best friend usually means seeing the person at least once a year, but-"

"Tahiri, I didn't want to talk about that!" he yelled, finally getting the chance to cut her off. "I wanted to tell you that I think I'm falling in love with you!" he blurted out. Neither of them moved and he realized that he had surprised himself as much as her. He hadn't meant it to come out like that.

"Excuse me?" she said. He let out his breath.

"I said...I'm in love with you," he repeated.

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Date Posted: 11/26/02 8:22pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 11/26
*cue big wide grin*

AAAAWWW love !!! Now, post so we can find out what she says!!!

 

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Date Posted: 11/26/02 10:58pm Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 11/26
*laughs* Oh that was perfect! I love how she took it the wrong way *grins* great job! So realistic too grin

 

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Date Posted: 11/27/02 1:47am Subject: RE: Together You Are Stronger (A/T AU-Post 'Conquest')UPDATED 11/26
oooo.....i like pleaseeee update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!there aren't enough A/T stories out there (iv'e said this before) and this is a really good one!!!!upupupupupupupupupupupupupupupupup!!!!

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Why yes, i am a "heathen". And damned proud of it.
Will someone please overthrow the Republicans?
Anakin and Tahiri forever!
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