Images aren't showing up, and looking at the links, I can see why. They'll need to be uploaded to another server, such as Photobucket, PostImage, or Imgur.
She looks intriguing from what I can see, and I like the bionic leg. Since you're photographing the images rather than scanning, that can be tricky. If possible, have several sources of light; one overhead, another on one side, and another on the other side. A three-point lighting rig will help provide even lighting for photography. I often have to photograph images that won't fit on my scanner. For the best contrast, I'll photograph an image in my kitchen, where I can have two overhead lights at least. From what I can see, the linework looks nice and tight and her proportions are pretty decent.
Name: Deathseed, Her real name she won’t tell or doesn’t remember Species: Twi’lek Skin tone: Mustard Yellow Eye color: Green, the other is cybernetic Height: 5ft 4in Age: 26 Cybernetics: Deathseed has many cybernetics. She has a high-class robotic right leg, and high-class cybernetic left arm, low-grade cybernetic left eye, a third robotic eye on the back of her head, a cybernetic “pocket” on her chest, and a four hollowed out fake teeth. Unique features: No noise, two tattoos on the face, some other tattoos Personality: Stubborn Likes: Her ship, Her pet bird, Cybernetics Dislikes: “Helpless people”, Devaronians Deathseed is a pirate. She owns her own ship, The Bloody Schinga, witch is run with a crew of six. Out of that crew she’s only friends with and trust two, her first mate Cet, a one armed male Kaleesh, and a male Thisspiasian mechanic nicknamed Mic, the other three crew mates often leave, or die in raids or trying to mutiny. So Mic, Cet, Deathseed, and her pet valcher thing, named Angel, are the only constant crewmembers.