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Saga - ST TAKE ME BACK TO YESTERDAY

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hopefulwriter, Sep 23, 2016.

  1. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Master star 3

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    Jan 6, 2016
    Writer: Hopefulwriter
    Rating: For everyone
    Characters: Han Solo, Leia Organa Solo
    Time frame: Star Wars: THE FORCE AWAKENS
    Summary: Leia wishes for one more thing.

    TAKE ME BACK TO YESTERDAY.

    Han, so much has happened to us in our lives together. You
    took me so many places…you took me out of the holding cell,
    took me to safety..to the place where I could continue to help
    The Rebellion…Took me away from Hoth, took me to Endor
    where our love bloomed and took us both on a new adventure
    of mind, body and spirit.
    You took me for your bride and took pride in the conception,
    birth and raising of our son.
    You took a chance in my world…and gave it all you had, but,
    it took something from you..the essence of you were …So…
    that life took you back, but I understood.
    Those places you took me were a time of joy, sorrow, strife, trial,
    ecstasy and hope. But, I wish you could take me to one more place,
    Han…back to yesterday…when you were still alive.
     
  2. Penguin_Sith

    Penguin_Sith Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 13, 2016
    That was really good. Reminds me of your other post "Love is Stronger".
    I could actually hear Leia's voice as she would have written/typed this. Well done!
     
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  3. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 6

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    Jul 31, 2014
    That twist at the end was painful. Even after all their misunderstandings, of course, she prefers him alive.
     
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  4. Findswoman

    Findswoman Fanfic and Pancakes and Waffles Mod (in Pink) star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Feb 27, 2014
    "You took a chance in my world…and gave it all you had, but, it took something from you..the essence of you were…So… that life took you back, but I understood." That right there is one of the best summaries I've seen of why Han and Leia did end up splitting. Indeed, both of their lives took them back—I guess they never quiiiiite fully mastered the art of "meeting in the middle," even though they did give it their best shot. And they most certainly never wanted each other dead. :( Brava once again, ma'am! =D=
     
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  5. Snokers

    Snokers Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jul 8, 2015
    I got a chill when I read that last line.

    Love this!
     
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  6. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Aug 31, 2004
    Bravo! This is parrticularly poignant after losing the indomitable Carrie Fisher. @};- =D= H/L was the OTP that roped me into SW ages and ages ago, and I have a looooong playlist of songs that fit them to a T! [face_laugh] Exquisitely written and characterization! [:D]
     
  7. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Master star 3

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    Jan 6, 2016
    Thank you for taking your time to read TAKE ME BACK TO YESTERDAY and your gracious comments.

    Talking about songs... CARELESS WHISPER is a song title I wrote a piece to.

    As I commented to another reader, our 'Princess' will continue to live in the hearts of those who
    loved her and write about her. Lynda V.
     
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  8. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Jun 14, 2005