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Fanclub The Sith Empire - Lords of the New Sith Order - Continuing to put the Laughter into Manslaughter!

Discussion in 'EU Community' started by Sinrebirth , Jun 8, 2016.

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  1. Isley_27

    Isley_27 Jedi Master star 4

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  2. DarthIshyZ

    DarthIshyZ Chosen One star 8

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    Isley, I think you have extra space at the end of your signature. A lot of blank area there.
     
  3. Isley_27

    Isley_27 Jedi Master star 4

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    Think I fixed it now..was recentering some stuff earlier and I forgot to close the space below DarthIshyZ
     
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  4. Darth Cocytus

    Darth Cocytus Jedi Master star 4

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    Okay, I'll begin working on an intro post after I get lunch ready...
     
  5. Isley_27

    Isley_27 Jedi Master star 4

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  6. dragonsith13

    dragonsith13 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Excellent, is it a backstory - sidestory? Additional? OR just regular post?
     
  7. A Blind Prophet

    A Blind Prophet Jedi Master star 4

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    that's... well, one way to look at it. how'd your client take that?

    drat... i actually wanted to take you up on that offer of a duel cocytus. oh well. if anyone else is interested i wouldn't mind having one.

    i'm with draconis, i'm curious what that's about WookieeRage. sure it'll be interesting.
     
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  8. Darth Cocytus

    Darth Cocytus Jedi Master star 4

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    Like my opening post?
     
  9. DarthIshyZ

    DarthIshyZ Chosen One star 8

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    He laughed, because he knew it was unintelligible gibberish. I solved his problem, but explained that I was very, very tired and he understood. Did you get some sleep?
     
  10. A Blind Prophet

    A Blind Prophet Jedi Master star 4

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    got a couple hours, but had to be up because, you know, things to do. just waiting on someone to get here abouts.

    Darth Cocytus since you asked here's my thoughts: it's a pretty good opening post for a duel. if i were going to make any suggestions i'd say that perhaps describe the where a bit more, it makes it a bit easier in general to do things when both people know what's around them which i think is part of what an opening post to a duel is supposed to do. but your characterization was good, and what you had was well written and clear. so good on you for that. i've seen definite improvement in your posts. keep at it.
     
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  11. WookieeRage

    WookieeRage Force Ghost star 5

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    It's just a post but I've been having trouble writing solo posts as of late..
     
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  12. A Blind Prophet

    A Blind Prophet Jedi Master star 4

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    that's annoying. is it writer's block, or something a bit less specific?
     
  13. DarthIshyZ

    DarthIshyZ Chosen One star 8

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    Just eat someone. That always works for the Wookiee.

    Sorry you're having difficulty.
     
  14. WookieeRage

    WookieeRage Force Ghost star 5

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    Ravenous probably shouldn't eat anyone, his team is the only option at the moment.
     
  15. QueenSabe7

    QueenSabe7 Chosen One star 6

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    Leda is glad to hear that.
     
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  16. Nehru_Amidala

    Nehru_Amidala Force Ghost star 7

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    Hey everyone! Back from work and cleaning up.
     
  17. WookieeRage

    WookieeRage Force Ghost star 5

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    I have an idea where I want to go with it but I rage deleted it yesterday so maybe starting fresh might work.
     
  18. Nehru_Amidala

    Nehru_Amidala Force Ghost star 7

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    That might be a good idea.
     
  19. DarthIshyZ

    DarthIshyZ Chosen One star 8

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    How about a brain dump first? Just spew into a document the bones of what you want to do. Then fill in the gaps.

    Sent via Tapatalk this was.
     
  20. Nehru_Amidala

    Nehru_Amidala Force Ghost star 7

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    That's also a good idea.
     
  21. WookieeRage

    WookieeRage Force Ghost star 5

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    Worth a shot. I'm in a situation where I can't think of words for things. Feels very caveman-ish...

    *sigh*
     
  22. HanSolo29

    HanSolo29 RPF/SWC/Fan Art Manager & Bill Pullman Connoisseur star 7 Staff Member Manager

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    Sometimes that's what you have to do. I've done that myself on more than one occasion recently, and while it can be frustrating at the time, it usually turns out for the best. Don't feel like you have to lock yourself into the first thing that you type on the page. :)
     
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  23. A Blind Prophet

    A Blind Prophet Jedi Master star 4

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    i do that pretty regularly now, so i wouldn't worry about it. letting go of something you aren't happy with and starting over is a sign of maturing as a writer in general.

    try rhymezone.com, there's a lot of ways that you can search for things on that. use the synonym one, and even if you just have a very basic word, it'll help you find all kinds of alternate ways of saying it.
     
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  24. Nehru_Amidala

    Nehru_Amidala Force Ghost star 7

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    So, he's going for poetry now?
     
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  25. Darth Basin

    Darth Basin Jedi Master star 5

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    Ok guys. The time has come. What must i do to become a member?
     
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