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Saga Skulls of the Innocent

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Master Vo, Sep 20, 2017.

  1. Master Vo

    Master Vo Jedi Master star 4

    Registered:
    Mar 19, 2017
    AUTHOR- Master Vo'Un'Var
    Setting- 2 BBY
    GENRE- Thriller, Drama
    WARNING- Will contain scenes of Torture and Unsettling Moments
    Okay! First book (I hate the term Fanfic) Hope Y'all enjoy, this is for anyone to read.
    Skulls of the Innocent​
    Chapter 1
    Screech​
    "Let's ask you one more time..."​
    The interrogator, a hulking imperial master of torture, snapped another of the poor soul's finger nails off, his screams were delicious to the monster that was already delicately placing his finger nail nect to the other four he had lined up on a tray.​
    "Were... is... He?"​
    Screech, The nickname of the Imperial Interrogator slowly pushed a red-hot nail into the area were the Rebel's finger nail had once been.​
    "I DON'T KNOW"​
    The Rebel burst into tears, screaming out the useless words.​
    "Please... Just kill me!"​
    Screech looked into the eyes of the crying man, and grinned, showing all his teeth. Each tooth had drops of blood stained on it.​
    "Oh No... we can't do that-"​
    He pushed the nail deeper into the man's finger, giggling.​
    "Not until you tell me where your ***t head of a friend is."​
    "I told you... I don't know!"​
    Screech stood up, shaking his head and tutting softly.​
    "Oh dear, Charlie, I thought you knew better than that."​
    He picked a thin, long knife from the table of his torture devices.​
    "Do you have a cold, charlie? Let me help unblock your nose..."​
    The Rebel tied into the chair, Charlie, squirmed as Screech edged closer with the knife, smiling.​
    "Don't be scared, Charlie, It'll only hurt for some time, then the pain will go away."​
    Charlie felt the cold steel on his skin as it slid up his left nostril.​
    "Woops, I slipped."​
    Charlie screamed.​

    "Well?"​
    Charlie eyes flickered open. he had just lost half his nose to the bastard torturing him.​
    "Are you going to tell me? Or will I have to castrate you to get you to tell me?"​
    "No more! Please! I'll tell you, He- He's on Hoth"​
    Screech gazed at Charlie for some time, and began to laugh.​
    "You already told me that lie, along with the other 50 planets you said."​
    Screech took out a pair of the most lethal-looking scissors Charlie had ever seen. Charlie gasped.​
    [Mod edit: Text of story removed]
    Screech threw his head back and roared with laughter.​
    Another update coming soon.
    Too gory? C&C Appreciated, The story won't be as torture-y soon, But this torture scene will come of importance later in the story.
     
  2. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Feb 25, 2010
    Hello there Master Vo'Un'Var - Please be aware that I had to edit your story for breach of our "family friendly" rating here. Please review the fanfic FAQ as well as the board-wide disallowed words list. If you have any questions, please start a private conversation with me. - Bri