Author Topic: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
Corellian_Outrider 
Registered: Mar '02
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Date Posted: 7/16/07 2:25am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
~OOC~ Many thanks to X-T-M for providing Enimsajs parts (as coloured) happy

~IC~
Location: Hapes Consortium - Heavenly Lookout

Walking out onto the Heavenly Lookout felt like returning home after a long voyage. But it wasn't the same this time around. No one was there. Not even Mr Zee's beaming smile to greet me. I couldn't even feel Mara's presence in the vicinity. It was as if the place turned into a ghost town since I've been gone. I raced past the beautiful architecture, the magnificent gardens and the exquisite fountains to get to the Palace hoping to find any signs of life or activity.
"What is the big rush?" Kal called out behind me. "Slow down mate."
I stopped by the large fountains, that were like giant sentinels guarding the Palace grounds, and looked around. The majestic carved statues sprayed water high into the air before it rained down back to the pool of water. Sparkling droplets in the sunlight refract the light creating a rainbow mist around me heightening the atmosphere to an already 'mystical' place.

"I don't understand this. Someone should be here by now." I commented to myself. "Something is out of place."
"Who should be here?" Kal asked as he and Ariek finally caught up to me.
"Mr Zee most definitely should have greeted us by now." I answered him. "He has done so for me in the past. Most unusual."
"Maybe he is on a holiday? Or they packed up shop and relocated elsewhere?" Kal suggested.
"Holiday from paradise?" Ariek nudged Kal. "I don't think so."
"Ariek is right, I don't think they would leave unwillingly. Or without leaving me a forwarding address."
Kal pointed to the action in the sky above. "Need I remind you that there is a battle going on up there? If something happened to the occupants of this place, I'm sure the Palace will have some answers."
"Right." I said, seeing the logic in his plan. "Off we go then."
"One last thing," Kal started. "Why would they leave you, of all people, a forwarding address."
I tried to answer but his question left me stumped. "They wouldn't." I admitted then struggled to explain myself.. "I guess... I thought I believed that ... I don't know... Forget it. Doesn't matter anymore."
"Geez," Kal said out loud. "We would of finished searching the place before you finish that sentence."
I felt a chill wash over me briefly as I sensed movement nearby. I spun around and saw nothing from the garden. I could of sworn I've heard something, or saw a shadow move across the ground but I couldn't see any trace of anything. Is my mind playing tricks on me? I asked myself. Something doesn't feel right.
"Are we going or not?" Ariek asked impatiently.
"Okay." I answered her. "Let's go."

"Something's wrong. Something's happened. Something's wrong. Something's happened..." I muttered those words as I lead the way up the steps to the Palace door.
"Funny to find you here of all places, Outy." I heard a voice call out to me. "I should quit doubting The Boss as he said you would be here."
I froze in my tracks as I recognised the voice and hoped it was just my imagination.
"Ahh you have company too, how splendid! The more the merrier I say! " The voice said cheerfully.
I looked up and saw a familiar large 'drakôn' perched on the Palace spire above me. By the feet of the creature stood a young woman. It is definitely not my imagination.
"Oh bugger!" I blurted out in alarm.
"What is it?" Kal asked, then looked up and whispered. "Who's the sexy lil nymph up there? You haven't told me about her before."
"Oh for crying out loud!" I hissed back. "Whether you realise it or not, we are all in very real danger. Long story short... you better off not knowing."

"Wow, look what age has done to you Outy, you look terrible in a very sexy kind of way hehe. Just kidding." Enimsaj said.
Huh? My jaw dropped. Did I just hear her correctly? No. Impossible, she was trying to unnerve me. She must be. Talking about age, she looks the same as she did when I met her twenty years ago on Vjun, almost like she hasn't aged at all. Strikingly beautiful though. She was kidding... wasn't she? About me? Wait, don't go there. Don't even think about it. On no! What am I doing? Snap out of it! Your jaw is open and your talking to yourself, get a grip on reality now otherwise you be looking like a stunned mullet!
"Well that's as far as you can go, Outy, sorry. You will not be permitted inside the Palace as it is from now off-limits until otherwise." Enimsaj casually said to the company.

I felt dread wash over me as I took in the situation: Exposed in the open with Kal and Ariek by my side and no cover in sight. I wished one of them stayed on the ship incase we needed backup up. Too late for that. Can't go forward or she will attack. The Palace doors are closed and most likely locked. Can't retreat either as it is quite a way to the ship and we wouldn't make it with that 'Beastie' of hers. I am not in the mood or condition for fighting at the moment.
"Clever girl. Congratulations, you have won." I called out to her admitting defeat. "You'll never get a better shot at me that this."
I outstretched my arms and closed my eyes, preparing myself for the shot that will come from her rifle.

Enimsaj placed the rifle by her side showing no sign of hostility towards 'Outy' and smiled at seeing him.
The was no sound, there was no shot. After a moment, I opened my eyes to see Enimsaj still standing above me. Smiling.

"When are you going to get it, Outy, if I wanted you dead I would've left you on Vjun. My instructions are not to let anyone through and kill anyone on sight but for you I'll make an exception as Nelthy here has taken a liking to you too," Looking up at Neltharion's face and smiled.

Why? Why wouldn't she attacked when she had the chance? Unless I got it all wrong. She doesn't want to kill me... yet. There is one way to find out.
"Well, I have to admit one thing. You got me alright." I said out to her.

"Always do, handsome." Enimsaj grinned.
Enimsaj gave Outy a curious look.


Enismaj just looked at me if she knew what I was thinking and that I wasn't making any sense at all.

Enimsaj leapt from the roof of the palace and landed on her two feet in a kneeling position before rising up and hooked the rifle on her back.

"May I talk to you please? Privately?" I asked her, unsure of what could happen.
A smile crept onto her face like a Cheshire cat.

Enimsaj nodded, "This way if you would like," Indicating the fountain to her left surrounded by a garden.

I told Kal and Ariek to stay in the palace grounds and to keep their eyes open for anything out of the ordinary. I also asked them to contact me if they come across anyone. Neltharion kept watch on the two as I followed Enimsaj to the fountain.

"So how have you been holding up scruffy lookin' " Enimsaj said casually, "I sense much grief emanating from you Outy, you look heavy." Enimsaj concluded as she layed down on her side and her hand resting on her face as she looked at Outy.

I smiled when Enimsaj called me 'scruffy lookin' as I sat down next to her and crossed my legs. I then took a deep breath and let it all out, feeling some of the pain going away. I regarded Enimsaj for a moment before I answered her.
"I have seen better days." I said and let out a nervous laugh. "Sorry, old habit. I don't know what to say. It feels like I have surpassed my breaking point yet just barely holding on. Too much to take in and all happening too fast to even breath." I told her then redirected the question back to her. "How are things with you? You look remarkable though. It's like you haven't changed since I first met you. I'd be lying if I didn't say that you were the last person I expected to see on the Heavenly Lookout."

Tag: Enimsaj, Kal

 

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MASTER-OF-EVIL 
Registered: Nov '04
42496_Boba Fett
Date Posted: 7/16/07 4:08am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC: Lord Crispo
Corellia - Doaba Guerfel - The Drastically altered Sith Academy - Castle Dur


Crispo couldn't comprehend what just happened. Just a few minutes ago it was an academy and now...a castle? Crispo looked at Vandormir and then looked back up at the disk ship above. And Crispo looked around the surrounding environment.

"Incredible! With that technology and power! The possibilities are limitless. Master Scimitar is truly the best strategist of our time. He saved the best for last. I wish he was here to see this! Vandormir stand back, my senses that Scimitar's Master is arriving any second now and your directly underneath the 'Eye'!" Crispo yelled or tried to yell above the noise of the ships engines above them.


Tag: Vandormir and Agrive Dur

 

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godofwar1233 
Registered: Jun '07
39833_Anakin
Date Posted: 7/16/07 2:12pm Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC:Vandormir
Corellia - Altered Sith Academy

"Yes my lord."Vandormir said as he moved toward Lord Crispo
He moved just in time to find that a a gravity lift dropped to allow its passenger to drop down.
The man reeked of the dark side.
'Maybe I can drain him of his force powers with that kind of power I could rule the universe,bah he could easily defeat me in combat.'

TAG:Lord Crispo

 

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LordDarthUmbrus 
Registered: Sep '04
42120_General Kael
Date Posted: 7/17/07 7:08am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
Location: Corellia . Castle Dur

There was a disturbance in the air a few meters away from Vandormir and Lord Crispo.

The air lit suddenly with a fiery red light that spread out for several meters. The light took the shape of twelve gigantic humanoid figures.

As soon as the light distortion resolved, twelve eight-foot tall man shaped things could be seen.

They were covered with some kind of stony armor. The heads were helmeted by something that looked like a hardened cowl. If the beings had faces they were covered by an armored mask that looked frighteningly like skulls. The deep set eye hollows glittered with a red bead of light.

Each one held a great spear that must have been twelve feet in length. Each spear was barbed and was tipped by a long black blade.

The creatures began to march in unison. Their tremendous weight made the room shake as they stomped up to the two Sith. The split into two columns and then came to a stop in front of Crispo and Vandormir.

They turned as one, facing each other.

One shouted in an impossibly deep booming bass baritone: "All Hail His Almighty Dark Majesty. The Indomitable. The Merciless. The Neverending. ALL HAIL A'GRIVE DUR, KING OF ALL!!"

"ALL DEATH AND POWER!!" all the beings thundered as one, causing the roof to quake again. They then snapped their spears up to form an archway between them.

The fearsome brute closest to Cripso and Vandormir snapped his frightful face over to glare down at them.

"YOU WILL KNEEL, FILTH!" The creature boomed and then stabbed its spear at the floor near their feet.

Tag: Vandormir and Crispo

 

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Xaverri-The-Magician 
Registered: Apr '05
44060_Force Unleashed - Shaak Ti
Date Posted: 7/19/07 6:00am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
OOC: Thanks Master_Of_The_Sith for your input as The Boss thanks!


IC: Enimsaj
Hapes Consortium - Heavenly Lookout


"How are things with you? You look remarkable though. It's like you haven't changed since I first met you. I'd be lying if I didn't say that you were the last person I expected to see on the Heavenly Lookout."

Enimsaj inspected her body and then smiled, "Your right I haven't aged at all since Vjun, so perceptive of you, Outy. Well I was expecting you, Outy, just you gave my employer a headache until he saw you on Ruusan for what's her face's daughter's funeral." She waved her hand about in the air trying to remember that Jedi.


"Mara, thats it! Even heard that Fett was on your hide too, I don't know what you did to get the heavyweights from both the Bounty hunters and the underworld on you but I have to admit you even surprised me when The Boss told me about you, Rowan, hehe" Enimsaj winked at him,

"Oh stop it like I didn't know,"

Enimsaj sat upright and stood and as she passed Outy, "I've known since Vjun of your identity, just I like Outrider better than Rowan." Enimsaj said softly as she walked over to the ledge of the Lookout and watched the battle that was raging on before them as the wind was blowing her hair around her face as she stared off into the distance.

Enimsaj's demeanor changed to a more serious tone.

"Outy, something is happening to me and you and everyone, we are connected in this eternal and epic struggle in this galaxy. You know there is something I must confess something to you, Outy. I've never felt a whole person ever since I could remember, I always feel like there's something missing, just off-center with the world, you know?"


She turned to face him directly. "Outy, you can talk to me, you know that don't you? I mean I practically know almost everything about you but you have some really tough barriers not even I can squeeze through." She stepped closer to Outy. And placed a hand on his forehead.


"I can feel the anguish but I won't intrude like last time, lets just say The Boss is a very persuasive kind of guy," She smiled at him, "Tell me what on your mind, Outy?" Enimsaj said.

And then her comlink buzzed to life, "Is everything ready, Enimsaj?" A deep calm voice came from the communicator.

Enimsaj was surprised, "Uhh, yes Boss. We just have some 'expected' company with me." She answered back.

"Goood. I will be there in a few minutes. Await my arrival."

"Yes, Boss." As she switched off the transmission and looked up at Outy's expression.

"So where were we mister, so tell me whats bothering you, Outy?" She said with some concern.





Tag: Outy and The Boss

 

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MASTER-OF-EVIL 
Registered: Nov '04
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Date Posted: 7/19/07 6:31am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC: Lord Crispo
Corellia - Doaba Guerfel - Castle Dur

One shouted in an impossibly deep booming bass baritone: "All Hail His Almighty Dark Majesty. The Indomitable. The Merciless. The Neverending. ALL HAIL A'GRIVE DUR, KING OF ALL!!"

"ALL DEATH AND POWER!!" all the beings thundered as one, causing the roof to quake again. They then snapped their spears up to form an archway between them.

The fearsome brute closest to Cripso and Vandormir snapped his frightful face over to glare down at them.

"YOU WILL KNEEL, FILTH!" The creature boomed and then stabbed its spear at the floor near their feet.



Crispo felt the vibrations of the force of the impact, it cause him to jump on the spot and he was full of rage he wanted to bring his saber to the guards throat but knowing he would die before calling his weapon. He obliged and kneeled before the guard and the imminent arrival of A'grive Dur.

"This gets better by the moment. Is this how he treats his hosts, I hate to be his wife. Hehe." Crispo laughed to himself.

I hope Master Scimitar gets here soon, as he is the one who brought him here and didn't tell me whats his Master's protocol of way of things. It looks like it will be the hard way. Such things were the way of the Sith and this Dur, is an ancient being and Crispo was surprised not of collapsed just from the sheer power from just his guards! If thats just the guards, what will become of Dur, he surmised.

He looked up to see whats going to happen next and looked over to Vandormir to see how he was holding up in this strange situation.


Tag: Vandormir and Dur

 

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master_sedgi 
Registered: Mar '07
40060_General Grievous<br>Unleashed Art
Date Posted: 7/19/07 11:47am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC: Lord Talos
Corellia - Doaba Guerfel - Castle Dur

The Buildings changed shape when a person arrived which seemed to be the lead sith of all of this cosmos. Still sat upon a spire next to 2 other statues, Talos stayed as still as one. In his head, he thaught:

A'grive Dur? I've never heard of him, but it seems he is powerful with the darkside of the force...Very aggressive too...

Still staying as still as a statue within the darkness, Talos watched and listened as A'grive Dur continued.

TAG: Lord Crispo, A'grive Dur, Vandormir, other sith

 

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694377 
Registered: Jun '06
23541_Anakin
Date Posted: 7/19/07 11:58am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
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IC: Nightshroud
Hapes - Space (Shuttle)


WANTED DEAD OR ALIVE: Kal
ALIVE: ???
DEAD: ???

Species: Human
Gender: Male
Known Affiliates: Jedi Order
Last known location: Hapes Consortment
Brief: He is very dangerous so use the upmost caution.
Originator: Vandormir

Nightshroud looked at the picture of a young male known as Kal upon the screen of the Shuttle, whilst coming out of Hyperspace. He knew that Talos would be there for him whenever he was needed, and so Nightshroud did not worry, infact he did not worry even once, except for those days before HIS dark times.

After transfering the data onto Nightshroud's Newly made Datapad, the Auto-Pilot slowly took him towards Hapes. Folding his arms and crossing his legs, Nightshroud waited until the ship took him to the last location as pointed out on Vandormir's datapad.


TAG: Kal, others on Hapes, Talos





OOC: Since there was a slight mix up in the last conflict with Nightshroud and Vandormir, i'll be changing a bit of my location. happy




IC: Nightshroud
Coruscant - Space (Shuttle)


WANTED DEAD OR ALIVE: Kal
ALIVE: ???
DEAD: ???

Species: Human
Gender: Male
Known Affiliates: Jedi Order
Last known location: Unknown
Brief: He is very dangerous so use the upmost caution.
Originator: Vandormir

"Alright, the nearest planet to Corellia and the opposite would have to be Kashyyyk..."

Nightshroud wrote down a few notes:

Planetary Order of Visit
1. Coruscant
2. Naboo
3. Kashyyyk
4. Tatooine
5. Hapes
6. Raxus Prime
7. Malastare
8. Kamino


"It's time, to go back home..."

Within Talos' shuttle, he raced off, down towards Coruscant...

TAG: Anyone

 

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godofwar1233 
Registered: Jun '07
39833_Anakin
Date Posted: 7/19/07 1:39pm Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC:Vandormir
Corellia - Castle Dur

Vandormir felt his rage build up in him as the man ordered him to kneel.
Vandormir just kept staring at him with a unblinking stare that would chill the bones of any human.
When he saw Lord Crispo kneel he fell to his knees.
'You have got to be kiding me.' Vandormir thought as he fell to his knees.
'Lord Scimiter will pay for making me do this.'

TAG:Lord Crispo,Dur

 

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Registered: Oct '06
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Date Posted: 7/19/07 6:45pm Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
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Name: Darterius Montis
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Homeplanet: Taris
Race: Miraluka
Affiliation: Sith
Personality:
Appearance:
---Skin Color: Deathly White
---Hair Color: Black
---Eye Color: White
---Clothing: Sith Battle Armor (made from traces of Cortosis,Phrik, and Sith Alchemy)
LightSaber Handle- 2 Curved Black and Red stripped one is a light whip
Lightsaber Blades- Dark Red Great Saber and Dark Green Light Whip
Crystals-Mephite, and Stygium for Saber/ Krayt Dragon Pearl and Upari in Light Whip

Biography: Darterius was born into a wealthy familly that followed the ancient ways of the sith. At the age of 17 he was sent away to Korriban to became a sith lord. Now he serves the sith with honor and pride.

 

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LordDarthUmbrus 
Registered: Sep '04
42120_General Kael
Date Posted: 7/20/07 9:01am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala - Date Edited: 7/20/07 9:05am (2 edits total) Edited By: LordDarthUmbrus
Location: Topmost Spire . Castle Dur . Corellia

The 'look' Vandormir gave from beneath the pitch black confines of his hood would have indeed frozen any human heart solid, such was its hate.

But, what stared back at Vandormir, was decidedly...inhuman.

Once satisfied that protocol had been established by the subservients' kneeling, the Guard snapped back to attention, lifting its vast spear to cross with his counterparts across the 'Honor Corridor'.

The same red distortion that had heralded the coming of the Guards returned. From the distortion figures began to make their way out.

First came a small army of horribly emaciated people dressed in not much more than rags. They were all mutilated in some fashion...or, perhaps 'adapted' might be a better word.

They seemed to be porters of some kind. Some even sported more arms than they should have had to carry more.

Some had distended backs and chests with arms and legs the same size. They skittered about on all fours bearing various loads.

Some had pieces of equipment embedded in them around which the flesh was left bloody and continually swollen and inflamed.

All the porters moaned pitifully as if in continual agony.

One collapsed dropping his load. The Guard closest disengaged his spear and positioned it over the struggling porter. A bolt of blinding Sith Lightning emitted from the spear. The hapless porter fried to death on the spot amid anguished screams. The murder was done with such casual malice.

This made all the other porters scramble in a panic...while not dropping their loads. A companion porter came and scooped up what the dead porter had dropped and then scrabbled away from the deadly Guard in complete terror.

After these misshapen porters carefully pooled themselves in an area off to the side...another wave of beings exited the glowing red distortion.

These beings were quite tall and seemingly whole. They were all female and quite beautiful, though all were ghastly pale and almost skeletally thin.

They numbered more than 80, each one wearing very little besides bony excrescences in strategic areas. All of their faces were heavily made up...but in ways that made them look dead rather than adorned.

Eye shadows were applied to make their eyes look hollow. Their lips were touched with blackish-red lipstick, or none at all. Their skin was white as sheets. They looked, for all the world, like walking corpses.

As they passed, they looked down on Crispo and Vandormir with disdain mixed with dread. The atmosphere about these women was a mix of contempt and terrible fear.

They went off to another side, silent as ghosts...as if they were unable to speak.

Then a grouping of men came forth. They too were barely dressed at all, only sporting enough to cover the essentials. They too were ghastly pale and fairly thin. They all looked cowed and glanced over at the women with worried looks.

Their skin was striped with red welts and half healed cuts. They too sported dark eye shadows that made their chiseled features look a lot like skulls. Despite this, they were as handsome as the women were beautiful.

They assembled themselves in an opposite grouping from the women, keeping as far from them as possible...as if they were poison.

Finally a grouping of twelve men and women came from the red distortion. They walked with an ease of grace befitting beings of great power. All were dressed in exquisite gowns, robes, and armors. All attire was black except for red striated rune designs. They were pale, but looked well fed and well cared for. The women were shapely, the men strong.

They bore with them a dread that sent a distinct evil chill through the air. Each one had eyes that blazed in a different hue of yellow, green, or blue. Also, each sported some item of jewelry that glowed with a distinct red sparkling glowing jewel: amulets, brazers, bracelets, anklets, arm bands, though interestingly not one sported a ring with such a jewel.

Each had nothing but disdain for all around them. Although some of the members were quite comely, those features were ruined by the look of pure selfish hate that had been engraved into their faces.

The Guards all kneeled upon their entry, as did the thin women and men, and even the porters (as best as the poor creatures were able).

At the last, even these regal beings knelt without hesitation as they turned toward the distortion.

There was a pause and all went silent, even the thrumming ship overhead. The red light that had been coming from the ship suddenly dimmed to nothing as if someone had pulled a plug.

The red distortion flashed a few times and then a red mist began to boil around it as if it had become superheated.

The shadow of some vehicle looking very much like a chariot from ages long past began to emerge from the excited distortion.

As the red light and mist resolved, the image of the chariot became clearer...it was unlike anything seen in the Galaxy.

The chariot was a heinous monstrosity of pure tortured malice. Two...creatures...padded out on hands and knees. They looked like they may have been men at one time...but had be twisted, stretched, and distorted into horse sized things.

Their faces and skulls had been lengthened like pulled taffy and their heads bobbed and tossed on impossibly long necks. Their chests and backs had been stretched out and broadened to accommodate a platform that supported a great throne that perched between them.

Each of the twisted men made near animal sounding moans as they moved forward between the kneeling guards. It was obvious that they were tortured beyond sentience.

In the high throne sat a rather slight man. Not very big, not very strong looking. He had a pale countenance that tinted toward a light greenish blue. He had high arched eyebrows that stood furrowed over his closed eyes.

He rested his chin on a hand that sported extremely long, ornately carved fingernails.

The rather bored and slightly exasperated face had a rather long bony nose. Under this exceptional nose, the mouth was surrounded by a black mustache and beard that ended in a goatee.

The small man was dressed in flowing red robes of various silks and satins that were decorated in black runes. Around his head, he had a black crown, of sorts, that looked like two human spines braided together. The front of the crown was adorned with two human skulls with glittering red gems in their eyes. The skulls were set to look like they were perpetually screaming.

Upon his hand a flame of a gem burned on a broad bright ring. The light from the gem seemed to shine like a miniature red dwarf star.

As A'grive Dur came before Crispo and Vandormir he opened his eyes to reveal two black pits sparked with a reddish yellow light.

This frightful stare fell on the two and A'grive Dur's bored countenance twisted into a slight sneer of dissatisfaction.

"Who are you?! Where is Blade?" Dur demanded without preamble. His voice was deep but rather nasil. He also had a very odd accent.

"Speak or scream...the choice is yourrzzz." Dur slurred with tired boredom and waved a long nailed hand dismissively.

Tag: Crispo and Vandormir

 

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Registered: Jun '07
39833_Anakin
Date Posted: 7/21/07 10:47pm Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC:Vandormir
Corellia - Altered Sith Academy

Vandormir was tired of being treated like a servant.
He stood up sending a wave of force that sent all of the guards around A'grive Dur to the ground.He even sent a few porters off of the roof.
He was reaching for his blade before a guard used his staff to catch him on fire.
Vandormir dropped his lightsaber as he screamed in agony from the fire that burned away his robe and revealed a man that was undescribable.
Vandormir ran off the roof of the Castle falling to his almost certain doom.


Vandormir lay on the ground in unimaginable pain, he had no feeling in any limbs on his body.
A shadow fell over Vandormir's body not knowing who or what it was as he was pale like the men that came off of the ship.
"Come quick this ones alive."The voice said
They quickly picked him up setting him onto a strecher, he screamed in agony as his body felt like it was being ripped apart.He looked over to find he was litteraly being cut to peices.
"Your limbs are beyond repair so we must replace them."The unknown man said
"You...mean....with...robatic...parts."Vandormir breathed out.
"Yes."
They quickly put a needle into his chest he blacked out.

A few minuets later which felt like a mellenia to him.
"Look at your new self, my new friend oh and my name is Cha'sill of the Cha'ala."Cha'sill said as he handed him a device that let him see himself.
"What have you done to me, i'm a...machine."Vandormir said as he crushed the device in his hand.
"You my good sir are good as new and we had to add some modifications to...well your body."Cha'sill said
Vandormir looked around the room "Were is my lightsaber?"Vandormir asked
"It was destroyed in the fall."Cha'sill said
Vandormir was enraged at what over came him, and at the compatince this man was showing.He focused on the man and killing him, a pair of invisable hands wrapped around the mans neck and choked the man's life away.The porters near him saw what was happening and immediatly ran for cover least the new threat kill them also.
"You no longer serve A'grive Dur you serve me now."Vandormir said causing fear in some of the guards.
All of a sudden they broke out in laughter.
"We do not serve A'grive Dur, we are a seperate part of the Cha'ala we only serve the Overlord."
"Well then I am your new Overlord."Vandormir said
"Fair enough as you just killed our old one."A guard said
The guards kneeled just as Vandormir kneeled to A'grive Dur.
"I might just like this new breed to conquer."

TAG:Lord Crispo, A'grive Dur



OOC:This is what my new Cyborge self looks like.


 

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master_sedgi 
Registered: Mar '07
40060_General Grievous<br>Unleashed Art
Date Posted: 7/22/07 3:10am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC: Lord Talos
Corellia - Sith Academy Spire

Talos could feel the anger building up within Vandormir, and watched him as he arose. Suddenly, as Vandormir looked to have been going to kill him, one of the guards set him on fire.

That's a little harsh...

Suddenly, he watched Vandormir jump off of the roof, and fell, seemingly to death. Talos felt the exact same guilt he felt on that day with Nightshroud, all those years ago. Jumping off of the roof, and going around the back, Talos moved freely within the Shadows, and manipulated the minds of everybody who may have seen him. Walking up towards a Sith, he raised his hand slightly.

"It's like i'm there, but your mind does'nt want me to be there...Better put, It's like when you fancy someone and they don't even know you exist!"

Talos had a smile on his face, and watched as the Sith had a blank expression on his face. Jumping down from building-to-building, he could finally see the body of Vandormir. Suddenly, a ship came down, and "abducted" Vandormir.

Oh no you don't...

Just as they boarded the ship, the door begun to close. Lord Talos quickly jumped down, and just about made it in before it closed. It was a seemingly large ship, with many rooms.

Alright, so where is that Vandormir...

The ship was filled with lights, and so Talos made his way into another room filled with darkness, which seemed to be the cargo hold, and rested within there. A few minutes later, he could here the sound of a machanical-yet human voice. Raising up his hand, he tried to influence the force to call Vandormir into the cargo hold...

TAG: Vandormir

 

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godofwar1233 
Registered: Jun '07
39833_Anakin
Date Posted: 7/22/07 8:56am Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC:Vandormir
Cha'ala Ship - Science Room

Vandormir was not yet stable on his feet using the force to keep him from falling to the ground.
He felt someone using the force to try to trick his mind into going into the cargo room.
He felt like humaring this being he walked out of the science room and down several corridors.
Vandormir finnally entered the Cargo Room.

"Lord Talos good to see you again, please excuse my.....new features."Vandormir said in a mettalic whisper.

"So my friend what draws you to my new vessel?"

TAG:Lord Talos

 

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An awsome Fan Fic check it out
http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27060479/p1/?3
Humans crave power and that shall be their downfall. - Me
Join the gods in my rpg ------> Wrath of the Gods:The Age of Gods
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master_sedgi 
Registered: Mar '07
40060_General Grievous<br>Unleashed Art
Date Posted: 7/22/07 12:27pm Subject: RE: War of the Sith Part IV: The Invasion of the Cha'ala
IC: Lord Talos
Cha'ala Ship - Cargohold

He begun to meditate soon after he called Vamdorir into the Cargohold. Talos opened his eyes when Vandormir entered.

"So, a believer?"

TAG: Vandormir

 

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