Author Topic: '~Final FanFiction ~ Second challenge going on
Ceillean 
Registered: Nov '01
23035_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 7/19/08 2:18pm Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
IC: Kyp

When Kyp slowly opened his eyes, he knew something was very wrong. He pushed himself up into a sitting position wondering where he was. It was a small room, the walls a dull grey and there was only one exit -- which made it blatantly clear that he was in a cell of sorts.
A shiver ran down his spine and he frowned as he realized his clothes were missing. A swift look around the cell told him he'd be sitting around almost naked for a long time. Wearing only his boxers he got to his feet and took a closer look at the exit -- a blue forcefield was in place and when he reached out to the Force, he was literally slammed back.
He stumbled and his eyes widened a fraction. Again he tried gathering the Force around himself to push at the door but the effect was the same; he stumbled backwards as if being hit in the gut.
Kyp took a deep breath and dragged a hand through his hair. He was halfnaked and unable to use the Force...
His mood sunk to below zero.

 

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MsLanna 
Title: CR GSFF Central
Registered: Jul '05
6538_Imperial Seal
Date Posted: 7/20/08 3:35am Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
OOC: Okay, I promise never to use expressions like 'iambic pentameter' again. plain Or maybe next time, I'll link to an explanation. tongue Same for calling upon Muses. doh!




IC: Lorna Kees

Her head hurt. Lorna reached up rubbing her skull, the short stubble of her hair teasing her palm. Now that had been a freak dream. She grabbed the blanket, but the touch of the rough material made her sit up suddenly. That was not her blanket. And, yshe looked around, this was certainly not her bunk. The walls looked bad enough, but not a single scratch that marked her time as Fett was there. Besides, her bedside locker was missing to. As was about everything she had worn.

Lorna looked around frantically, but apart from her bunk the room was empty. Not a single piece of the Mandalorian armour was to be seen. She hugged herself. If anybody saw her like that, she was so dead. Still, she couldn't stay in this cell forever. Her belly rumbled on cue. We die anyway, she thought as she got up and began to examine the cell.

Her search came up empty, though. No way out, no way to access the controls of the door, the air vent to small to be of any help, even if it hadn't had a grid over it. With bare hands, she wouldn't get anywhere. What if the others were still around? Maybe the Jedi could help for a change, they were supposedly able to manipulate things with their minds only. We act as our inspiration calls, Lorna thought as she began to hammer a morse code against the wall.

Tag: whoever can hear my morse

OOC: The poem so far

He sat up and looked around at grey walls
His mood sunk below zero
We act as our inspiration calls

 

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Alexis_Wingstar 
Registered: Sep '06
8216_Skywalker Females
Date Posted: 7/20/08 8:43am Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement! - Date Edited: 7/20/08 8:45am (1 edits total) Edited By: Alexis_Wingstar
IC: Kev

No sooner than he had called out, he heard a faint tapping on the wall to the right. There seemed to be a pattern to the tapping, and as he walked over to the wall, he strained to remember the little he knew of the code. He tapped on the wall a simple message. <<Kev here. Who there?>> He knew it wasn't exactly the most intelligent message, but his mind felt muddled with hunger, and a dull pain throbbed at the back of his skull. I wonder if I was drugged or something. Strangely, the thought did not scare him. Yes, that's probably why I feel so calm.

Tag: Everyone

 

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Ceillean 
Registered: Nov '01
23035_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 7/21/08 1:29am Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
IC: Kyp

He sighed as he sat back against the cold wall, a rough ugly green blanket pulled up over his legs. He'd given up trying to find a way out of the cell -- without a sort of instrument he was locked in tight.
The fact that he was stripped naked down to his underwear didn't bother him as much as the thought that someone had taken his lightsaber. He felt eerily naked without.
Kyp snorted at the thought and closed his eyes, his mind wandering to the why's and where's and who's of his current predicament. He could feel the Force surrounding him, being within him but once he pushed outward, it felt as if the Force was used against him.

Being locked up was unsettling but it didn't bother him too much -- he'd been through this sort of thing before albeit with clothing.

Not being able to use the Force, even more so.

He couldn't fathom why anyone would want to kidnap him and take his clothes in the process. Slowly he lifted his gaze to the ceiling, wondering if he was being watched. He couldn't see any holocams but that didn't necesarrily mean anything.

Kyp gave up on the thought and closed his eyes again. He hated waiting -- kriff patience being a virtue.

"Hello?" He called out, not expecting a response but to pass the time he kept yelling, "Anyone out there?" He dragged a hand through his hair, "Which one of you kriffing idiots locked me just to be a hero?" He laughed then, feeling very silly for yelling at himself, "Yeah, feel great for kidnapping a Jedi. Feel like a grand hero."

A sigh escaped his throat as he leaned his head against the cold wall and waited.

Tag: anyone

 

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MsLanna 
Title: CR GSFF Central
Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 7/22/08 4:41am Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
IC: Lorna Kees

From the left came some tapping in return. Lorna was not sure it was the same code, and without her HUD to sort through several morse systems, she could just hope it was the same she knew.

After missing the first part, she made the latter out to mean 'Who's there.' So it came probably from one of the other cells. At least she was not alone. An inch over the wall, he knuckles suddenly stopped. What could he answer? If she got out - like this - would the name Fett mean anything. I cannot tell him lies on a whim, she decided. But I cannot tell the whole truth either. Not yet.

"A prisoner", she tapped against the wall.

Suddenly strange sounds came out of the air system. It might have been somebody talking, but the noise was twisted and distorted by it's way though the ventilation shafts. Listening to the wall with one ear, she put her mouth against the grid. "Hello?"


Tag: Kev, all

OOC:
The 'poem' so far

He sat up and looked around at grey walls
His mood sunk below zero
We act as our inspiration calls
Strangely the thought did not scare him
Not being able to use the Force even more so
I cannot tell him lies on a whim

 

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Alexis_Wingstar 
Registered: Sep '06
8216_Skywalker Females
Date Posted: 7/22/08 3:51pm Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
IC: Kev

Kev's lips moved as he deciphered the anwering tap. A pri... so... ner. He wasn't surprised. He wouldn't expect a jailor or whatever the person(s) viewed themselves as... zoo goers perhaps? He shuddered at the thought. Then he heard a man's voice, but couldn't quite make out the words... and a woman calling "hello". He tilted his head as he peered up at the air vent. There weren't any women among the group of strangers who wandered on the space station... so, is this place new? More test victims? Or is Boba a feminine name? He thought as he pictured the armored man(?) he had accompanied before winding up in this cell. Standing up, he approached the vent.

"Hello," he called into it, "this is Kev! Who else is here?" He wasn't sure why, but the thought that the others... even the person from the "empire"... were here comforted him. At least he was not alone and did not have to play hero.

OOC: Poem
He sat up and looked around at grey walls
His mood sunk below zero
We act as our inspiration calls
Strangely the thought did not scare him
Not being able to use the Force even more so
I cannot tell him lies on a whim
At least he was not alone and did not have to play hero

 

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"Change. It can be good. It can be bad. It can be expected or come as a thief in the night. Invited or not, it always comes."
~Koria
"Tender Shadows", co-written w/ The Musical Jedi
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Ceillean 
Registered: Nov '01
23035_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 7/25/08 3:03pm Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement! - Date Edited: 7/25/08 3:04pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Ceillean
IC: Kyp

Kyp got up from his sitting position and more or less crawled towards a small air vent on his hands and knees. He was certain he'd just heard a female voice. Or maybe your mind is playing tricks on you...
Because he couldn't remember a woman being amongst the strangers on the station.
"Who's there?" he called but instead of the woman answering -- if indeed it was a woman -- he heard a small voice, as if coming from far away, "Hello. This is Kev! Who else is here?"

"You're the scientist, right?" Kyp called, leaning forward to peer through the air vent, remembering the young man to be the one who seemed to be more than just a little afraid. "Is there someone with you? Do you know where we are?"

Tag: All

OOC: Poem


He sat up and looked around at grey walls
His mood sunk below zero
We act as our inspiration calls
Strangely the thought did not scare him
Not being able to use the Force even more so
I cannot tell him lies on a whim
At least he was not alone and did not have to play hero
Or maybe your mind is playing tricks on you

 

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I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character.
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Alexis_Wingstar 
Registered: Sep '06
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Date Posted: 7/25/08 7:57pm Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
IC: Kev

Kev heard a voice that seemed further away than the first one. "Yes, I'm the scientist, and I'm alone. It looks like a prison here. Who are you?" In spite of the concern, hope sprang forth.

Tag: Kyp, Lorna, anyone

OOC: Poem

He sat up and looked around at grey walls
His mood sunk below zero
We act as our inspiration calls
Strangely the thought did not scare him
Not being able to use the Force even more so
I cannot tell him lies on a whim
At least he was not alone and did not have to play hero
Or maybe your mind is playing tricks on you
In spite of the concern, hope sprang forth

 

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"Change. It can be good. It can be bad. It can be expected or come as a thief in the night. Invited or not, it always comes."
~Koria
"Tender Shadows", co-written w/ The Musical Jedi
"Two Peas Out of the Pod" http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/205643
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moosemousse 
Title: CR - FF:UK South
Registered: Oct '04
47097_2008 Winter Holidays
Date Posted: 7/26/08 9:39am Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
OOC: Darth IRL is a pain in bottom. sad

IC:
D'Shan came too with a thumping headache. His brain pounded and his vision swam. He was also somewhat cold. Gathering Force energy he managed to clear his, but his still felt tired. Mashing his palms into his eyes he looked down and noticed why he was cold. He was sitting on a hard bench in just a pair of boxershorts. He was slightly disturbed by this, seeing as he didn't remember putting any on when he last got dressed. He shrugged and looked at his surroundings.

He was obviously in a prison cell somewhere. The architecture and design of the cell suggested he was still on the space station. He stumbled to his feet and searched the whole cell several times for a way to get out. When he came up with nothing, he punched a wall. There had to be a way, there had to be.

TAG: ALL

OOC: Poem so far:

He sat up and looked around at grey walls
His mood sunk below zero
We act as our inspiration calls
Strangely the thought did not scare him
Not being able to use the Force even more so
I cannot tell him lies on a whim
At least he was not alone and did not have to play hero
Or maybe your mind is playing tricks on you
In spite of the concern, hope sprang forth,
There had to be a way, there had to be.

 

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MsLanna 
Title: CR GSFF Central
Registered: Jul '05
6538_Imperial Seal
Date Posted: 7/26/08 12:34pm Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement!
Attention: God-Mode Post!

IC: Lorna Kees


Loran followed the talk on the vents' system, not sure whether to chime in. She felt exposed, and that was not due the lack of clothing.

It seemed one of the Jedi was talking to Kev, suddenly somebody punched against the other wall of her cell. Quickly she rapped back a short message. 'Am okay, any way out?'

Then she went back to the vent. It was of no use, even if she got out, her cover would be blown for good.

"Is there any -" She stopped in midsentence, as the cell shook again. It wan not as bad as the last time, and just when she braced for another upheaval, the dim lights went out. At the same moment, the door hissed open.

For a moment, Lorna didn't move. Then she carefully inched towards the door and looked out. There was nothing but darkness on the other side either, and rustling noises that might have been the occupants of the other cells. Wishing she had a weapon, Lorna proceeded into the corridor.

Tag: All



New conditions: Doors are open, all power is down. Meaning ALL power.

New Task: Get the life support back on (and the lights maybe?) before you all suffocated, or froze or such. Going to the Command Centre sounds like a good idea. Otherwise you have free hand, just make it credible.

Current challenge: Posts have to be a drabble. That is counting the words of the IC post, without tag, or anything OOC.

 

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Alexis_Wingstar 
Registered: Sep '06
8216_Skywalker Females
Date Posted: 7/26/08 3:06pm Subject: RE: ~ Final Fanfiction ~ The Game thread, come in and play! Important Announcement! - Date Edited: 7/26/08 3:07pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Alexis_Wingstar
IC: Kev

Kev felt the cell shudder, but since it wasn’t quite as bad as before, he didn’t fall. Then the lights went out. He looked back towards the doorframe, and the eerie glow was gone. Swallowing, he walked in the dark towards the exit, only to bumped into the wall.

“Ouch,” he muttered as he rubbed his nose. He ran his hand along the wall until he felt the exit. He strained to see in the dark. “Hello? Mr. Fett, Mr. Durron… um… others? Are you there? We should find a way up to the control center.” Nervously, he swallowed hard.


OOC: There, exactly 100 words. grin

Tag: Anyone

 

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"Change. It can be good. It can be bad. It can be expected or come as a thief in the night. Invited or not, it always comes."
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MsLanna 
Title: CR GSFF Central
Registered: Jul '05
6538_Imperial Seal
Date Posted: 7/27/08 4:46am Subject: RE: '~Final FanFiction ~ Second challenge going on
OOC: Good to see that the concept of 'drabble' is better known than that of iambic pentameters. tongue



IC: Lorna Kees

"Hello? Mr. Fett, Mr. Durron… um… others? Are you there? We should find a way up to the control center.” That was Kev, Lorna decided, feeling her way towards the voice.

"I'm here," she replied. "Maybe we could get some light first?" The idea to grope around on a pitch-black strange space station did not appeal to her the least. "A proper detention should have an emergency generator somewhere."

She looked around though there was nothing to see. "Can Jedi see in the dark?" She wondered. "That would be really convenient for once." But there was no sound of them.

Tag: Kev, all

 

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moosemousse 
Title: CR - FF:UK South
Registered: Oct '04
47097_2008 Winter Holidays
Date Posted: 7/27/08 7:38am Subject: RE: '~Final FanFiction ~ Second challenge going on
IC:
Failing to find a way out, D'Shan hit the door repeatedly, suddenly falling through as it opened unexpectedly. He stumbled out into the pitch black corridor.

He swore, loudly.

He closed his eyes and focused. He could sense only the corridor, not the cells. He could 'see' two people standing there. He recognised the anxious aura of one but not the other.

Keeping his eyes closed, he walked towards them. He heard what was said and replied, "not quite see in the dark, but close enough."

D'Shan caught up with them. "It'd be nice to know who I'm talking to."

TAG: Kev, Lorna, all

OOC: that was harder than I expected. doh!

 

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Alexis_Wingstar 
Registered: Sep '06
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Date Posted: 7/27/08 9:38am Subject: RE: '~Final FanFiction ~ Second challenge going on
IC: Kev

Kev thought he recognized the voice of the Jedi who liked to punch walls. “I’m Kev…” he turned his head to where he heard the female breathe. He didn’t want to assume he was right about her identity. Her speech patterns confirmed his suspicions that she was ‘Mr.’ Fett. There must be a reason she wore that armor. She may not wish to reveal she’s not a he. “You,” he directed towards the Jedi, “are Knight D’shan?” Kev allowed the other to introduce herself as she saw fit, blushing as he thought she may be similarly undressed as he was.

 

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MsLanna 
Title: CR GSFF Central
Registered: Jul '05
6538_Imperial Seal
Date Posted: 7/28/08 3:48am Subject: RE: '~Final FanFiction ~ Second challenge going on
IC: Lornba Kees

"Close enough," a voice said at her other side. So there were still Jedi, and for once, they might be useful. "It'd be nice to know who I'm talking to."

Kev answered, but trailed off, probably unsure whether to say anything about her. Lorna scowled. How much worse could it become?

"Fett here," she bit out, bracing herself for some questioning. She might be out of armour and in no shape to fight a Jedi, but it would not stop her from trying. And once she found out who had taken the armour -

Just calm down, she told herself.

Tag: D'Shan, Kev, all

 

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