Excellence posted:Okay then, what right did Elrond have to decide the worthiness of Gondor's ascendancy? You've given me the impression Aragorn needed to prove himself. Sauron's employment dismissal was 3000yrs ago. Was the Gondorish throne vacant that long too?
Excellence posted:Secondly, I brought the point of Gandalf rambling for over a page just to describe his Saruman escape to Baggins, which you said furthered the story. Yet that passage did what books like Icarus Hunt and Shatterpoint did: make a point on an event, then overelaborate even more when you've already said enough. Gandalf was taking a long time to say what he said, meandering his way to the essence instead of a straight road; I've looked at that section carefully, and it didn't look to me like "furthering the story," rather a tedious pace bereft of precision. And that's a key issue with his prose: it's damn long and heavy on conversation.
Excellence posted:And conversation is pretty much all you get, there's hardly an action scene. For example, the Moria bridge was barely a page, and textually, a lot of one-line sentences at that. The conversations are very heavy on exposition, overdosing the reader on as much geographical and demographic data as you can fit it. Often, you're naming the forest road you're walking down, and then he chucks a "James Luceno" and feels compelled to inform you what other topographical locales are all around. None or little of which has relevance to that road you're walking.
Excellence posted:And that's just one example of scores I can cite with the LOTR trilogy. Anyway, thirdly, in regards to the lack of human population, the endless singing and serenading made it hard to spot historical tidbits prevalent as it was. Were these post-Sauron conflicts mentioned in the trilogy? That's what I don't remember.
Excellence posted:The earliest drafts of Silmarillion are dated in 1917, as Google informs me, this 1st Age; Hobbit in 1937. That would mean the main books were published long before the Silmarillion, yes? Even today, if you were unaware of the Silmarillion, you'd be reading the books uninformed in several key areas, I suppose as I was. This is not good.
Excellence posted:Lastly, interconnected with my prior point, I really did have a problem with the characterization: there was none. Everyone was black and white, there was no grey. The heroes are brave and strong (and babble ceaselessly), the villains nasty, ugly and bad. I was reading this Aragorn lad without the slightest scrap of background, and what I knew left me with all those questions. Why was he scorned from the throne; who the hell this Leggy and Gimli duo are; where were all the female dwarfs, for males was all I was seeing. The elf's from Mirkwood like spidery Shelob, some princeling, but I wasn't reading much of anything else, no character, deeper substance.
Excellence posted:We've got this pilot light atop a tower I know nothing about. I want to know Sauron's background; who he is, where he came from, what made him stereotypically naughty. More importantly, I need to know how he got so strong. I'm a not a trusting soul; I need to see things, not just be told "he is." How does a burning eye make his orclings obey him into developing an empire? In the movies, in the books, he's "just there." Did the trilogy answer any of these?
ShrunkenJedi posted:Nice, Dontlook- and, yes, nice icon (self described hobbit jedi!). I think the thing is, Tolkien had such a large mythology outlined that it wouldn't even fit in something as hefty as LOTR, and that's why so many things are unsaid-- they're unnecessary to the actual plot, and would bog it down. LOTR, wordy as it is, is meant to be read for pleasure. The Silmarillion is not, I would argue.
Kyptastic posted:The thing is though, the timeline in ROTK (at least in my version, doesn't have anything concerning the events of the first age. That's something that should be added to future versions IMO
Raja_Io posted:Kyptastic posted:The thing is though, the timeline in ROTK (at least in my version, doesn't have anything concerning the events of the first age. That's something that should be added to future versions IMO Well, I don't think so. This would mean adding kinda synopsis of Silmarillion to it, which wouldn't make much sense to me, since the whole book is vastly available. And anyone who would like to investigate the story further, could easily get it.