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Author Topic: Some CG Feedback?
kylepro88 
Registered: Sep '04
24220_Anakin and Obi-Wan
Date Posted: 8/25/06 5:55pm Subject: Some CG Feedback?
I have some previous work of mine ide like some feedback for. Comments, Rants, Harsh Swear words, w/e lol. Just tell me what you think.







Im pretty happy with the bullettime, now if only I could render many frames of it with my measly machine lol. So what do you guys think of that stuff?

3dsmax btw

-Kyle

 

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swimmerman91 
Registered: Aug '05
6257_Stormtrooper
Date Posted: 8/26/06 4:06pm Subject: RE: Some CG Feedback?
tongue wow....You know what I think...I think you'd be a great help with a couple films I'm making!

 

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morpher-2005 
Registered: Apr '05
13719_StormTrooper Happy
Date Posted: 8/27/06 3:07am Subject: RE: Some CG Feedback?
It all looks pretty great! Especially the environments.

 

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DarthRicmu 
Registered: Jul '05
6298_Imperial Shuttle
Date Posted: 8/28/06 7:23am Subject: RE: Some CG Feedback?
Looks good....

The Highway has some feel of GTA San Andreas

and I love The pen!!!


grin

 

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cbutlerc 
Registered: Apr '01
6364_Yoda
Date Posted: 8/31/06 10:13am Subject: RE: Some CG Feedback?
The Environments are off to a good start.
The lighting could use some work.

The shadows on the warehouse could be a little softer, and the overall ambient lighting should be much darker
espeicially since the only lightsource's are from the hanging lamps on the ceiling.
The haning lights would have light only illuminating down onto the grounds and not up on the ceiling, the only light on the ceiling would be bounce light hittnig off of the ground.
If you were to make the overall ambient darker and add some volume light coming fromt the lamps it would look realy cool
Their is a bright spot next to the door but no light source on the wall, and the light is getting pretty bright too.

These are only thought's of what I think though, take them for what they are, I am only giving some suggestions not trying to criticize.

Its looking nice though.





 

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HowardFilms 
Registered: Apr '05
24115_Vader and Elmo
Date Posted: 9/3/06 6:30pm Subject: RE: Some CG Feedback?
That warehouse looks just like the hanger in "Enter the Matrix"

 

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