Cerrabore posted:We don't find out that Umbridge sent the dementors, that Snape alerted the Order, that Kreacher tricked Harry... well, I guess that's because he didn't. I know Rowling kept Kreacher in, but he should have been given something to do. There absolutely should have been some Quidditch! Not a match, but a mention of it at least when student organizations are disbanded.
Cerrabore posted:As for Grawp, the awful thing wasn't really necessary - Umbridge could simply have been taken away by the centaurs. No setup? Just replace the first Grawp scene with the trio talking with Hagrid in the Forbidden Forest, some centaurs shuffling past, and Hagrid commenting that they're getting restless (wasn't that included, anyway?).