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Author	Topic: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 11/2/09
Cole_Kenobi Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 10/4/08 8:27pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	NO! He can't win! Wow, I've remember how much I love this story, such a fabulous update! Sorry it's taken me so long to reply...Thank you for the PM! Loved the descriptions of Qui-gon not sweating over his trial and Obi-wan so wore and on edge, and Sidioius and getting inside of his head. Just awesome, so well done.
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Darth_Leia_6669 Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 10/5/08 7:31pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	As always, it was worth the wait. I can see where this could have been difficult to write, but you did a magnificent job showing Sideous and the tension building leading to the arrest. As usual I'm struck with jealousy! I hope the next bit comes to you easier and that all is going better in RL. --later-- 6669 -----signature----- SOTH: When Worlds Collide http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=28532068&brd=10476 Chapter 17 up 10-8!! Master to Lisbev! Vader for Prez in '08! Check my profile for more stories and art!
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Ara-gon Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 10/6/08 12:21pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Oh, Diane, that's just like you. Lots of lovely tension and conflict (internal and external) but no resolution yet. Such a tease. Really, it was a perfect chapter. I loved that Amidala showed up, all determination and grit. I was trying to guess how you would have Palpatine react to the Jedi. His innocence game was spot on. Slimy, evil, manipulative, and totally in character. -----signature----- Jinngerbread's Padawan The Trouble with Qui-Gon (humor) http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/26735859/p1/?7
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Jaira Title: FanForce Arkansas PR Officer Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 10/8/08 7:14am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	What a completely awesome chapter! Holy cow! -----signature----- Where has all the Siriwan gone? Need a fun break? http://z9.invisionfree.com/Jello_Anarchy/
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Independence1776 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 10/10/08 5:17pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Oh, that didn't go as I had hoped. But Palpatine is still far too overconfident. -----signature----- "Independence forever." John Adams Padawan to Luna_Nightshade Fics in bio Mostly lurking at the moment
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wolf_kenobi Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 10/14/08 7:58pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Amazing work, Diane! Your writing from Palpatine's perspective is always eerily in character. Well done! And now you leave us with this evil cliffie- Ack! Looking forward to more! -waves hand- You will resolve this cliffie soon. -----signature----- Is God willing to prevent evil but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God. -Epicurus Proud Vegan
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Tahi Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 10/31/08 6:12pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Hi Diane - I'll be catching up real soon. -----signature----- "To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven." Ecclesiastes 3:1 Master to THE_PIED_PIPER
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Tahi Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/1/08 2:30am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Sidious could feel that there was something amiss. Oh - my heart bleeds for him. [face_neutral] It would appear that the Jedi scum were trying to corrupt the Force with their good intentions. Geez, don't you just hate it when that happens. Sadly he IS right about the Senate and their self-serving ethics. I have to say that that exchange between Amidala and Palpy was a brilliant piece of characterisation. Your Palpy is both despicable and charming. More importantly, with the Force choked with a dark mixture of revenge and blood-lust from the Senators, even the Jedi would not be able to see through the deception. That's a good point. Those negative vibes do muddy the Force. Classic Sidious there with his playacting as the betrayed one. It's interesting the way you kept Obi kind of in the background there. I wonder what he'll do about the carnage. Will this be the act that turns him? Whew! That was an awesome chapter. I feel quite drained. And now I want to kill Palpy even more. -----signature----- "To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven." Ecclesiastes 3:1 Master to THE_PIED_PIPER
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mujapple-juicey Registered: Jul '08	Date Posted: 11/14/08 3:47pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	OMG!!!!! How'd that happen?!?!? Who died? tapping fish inhale, exhale, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! -----signature----- Do you like yogurt? Do you? Do you? Padawan to Alley_Skywalker (yay Master!) é è á à í ì ú ù ó ò ç ê â î û ô ñ ã õ ö ü ï ë ä — (copy & paste to your delight ) ... if I reply to a fic, please put me on the PM list So... do you like yogurt?
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darshaassant Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 12/13/08 1:59pm Subject: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	groans you're the cruelest author ever! But I love your writing and can't wait to see what happens next! -----signature----- An infrequent poster
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DRS Registered: Dec '06	Date Posted: 1/23 1:30am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	bumps Diane? Any chance of an update in the near future? -----signature----- .:}\DragonRidingSorceress/{:. Adoptee of evil-incarnate \\//, Live long and prosper MTFBWY! Star Gate doesn't have a catch-phrase, does it?
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 1/23 4:39am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	DRS- honestly, no. RL has bitten me bad - I got laid off and I'm trying to deal with unemployment, etc. I have the next post started (about 2 pages) but it's going to need a lot more work. I had no idea that it had been so long since the last update. I'm really sorry about this. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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Kynstar Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 1/23 6:22am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Oh Diane how horrible! I wish you the best of luck with that. Finding employment can be such a pain! I hope your unemployment will last long enough in order for you to find some work. Man...things are getting so bad economy wise Missed your work for so long while I've been net dead! I'm slowly but surely catching up with everybody's writings. Hope things start looking up for you soon! -----signature----- Paddy sis to t_s & SarkaVrae/Master to hyperspace_police Member of Rebel Legion and Jedi Assembly (Kynstar Lans) Only thru fear, hatred, and pain will the true power of the Force be revealed. See stories/viggies in bio
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Ocelotl_Nesto Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 1/27 8:29am Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Very sorry to hear about your employment situation. Yesterday was a scary day as over 50 thousand layoffs were announced. Hang in there, your story seems even more poignant now.
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Ara-gon Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/12 2:29pm Subject: RE: Betrayal (Obi/Qui angst - very AU) Updated 9/22/08
	Diane, I'm so sorry to hear that you're dealing with unemployment. Rotten economy. I hope that you find a newer, shinier, happier job soon. Very soon! Ara-Gon -----signature----- Jinngerbread's Padawan The Trouble with Qui-Gon (humor) http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/26735859/p1/?7
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