Author Topic: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
CodyMonKenobi 
Registered: Jan '01
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Date Posted: 7/5/03 9:05pm Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
good job of getting in 1138, and I loved the AotC quote.

#1 for me please.

 

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Obi-Wan_Skywalker_29 
Registered: Mar '03
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Date Posted: 7/5/03 9:11pm Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
What did everyone think? When I started to write it I had Boba in the ship with Jango, but then I realized, Boba wasn't created yet. tongue
I thought the segment might have been a little too dark, what did you guys think?

 

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DarthNeil 
Registered: Mar '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 1:49am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
I pick NO.1.

I liked that section it was good, i do not think that it was to dark it is what he dose after all nice work.

 

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Tegarend 
Registered: May '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 3:12am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure - Date Edited: 7/6/03 3:29am (1 edits total) Edited By: Tegarend
#1 ... it is pretty dark, I agree. I take it Bogden is not very advanced and doesn't have much of a centralized defense?

EDIT : I said it was dark, but that doesn't mean I didn't like it, you know. I LOVE darkness.

 

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CodyMonKenobi 
Registered: Jan '01
39904_Clone Commander Cody
Date Posted: 7/6/03 3:17am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
It was Dark, But he is a bad guy he does what he is paid to do so I think you did fine.

 

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KnightKatarn05 
Registered: Apr '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 5:19am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
#1.

Yeah, it was kinda dark. At least you inferred the death's of those kids. But nice use of 1138.

 

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Darth_Minx 
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Registered: Mar '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 6:38am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
#1, I like the darkness wink

 

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Obi-Wan_Skywalker_29 
Registered: Mar '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 7:56am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
I take it Bogden is not very advanced and doesn't have much of a centralized defense?

Yeah Tegarend, I wanted to make that clear in the stroy.
Glad everyone has liked this so far. happy
I'll cut to Anakin and Obi-Wan later today probably.

 

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GAThrawnIGF 
Registered: May '03
6612_Tarkin
Date Posted: 7/6/03 9:07am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
#2, even though it's probably not gonna win.

 

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Rush_Limbaugh 
Registered: Apr '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 10:38am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
I'll say 1. I don't quite agree though that the defense would just put it's tail between it's legs or somthing, just letting him land. I also don't agree that a Star Wars movie would have someone firing missiles on kids. Good otherwise though.

 

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DarthNeil 
Registered: Mar '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 1:34pm Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
I can not wait for the next section.

 

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Tegarend 
Registered: May '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 1:37pm Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
New segment in EP IV.V! Exploding Janitor Droids!

 

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Laughing_Gas 
Registered: Jun '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 6:31pm Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
#1, I liked it how Jango didn't care what the hell he blew up, as long as he could land. He, he, he...

 

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Obi-Wan_Skywalker_29 
Registered: Mar '03
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Date Posted: 7/6/03 8:53pm Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure - Date Edited: 7/7/03 6:40pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Obi-Wan_Skywalker_29
Camera cuts back to Anakin in Palpatine's office. The footage of Padme's resignation speech is just ending. Anakin gets up

Anakin: Thank you for letting me watch that, your excellency.

Palpatine: Anakin, it was my pleasure.

Anakin: I'm sorry but I must go now. Master Obi-Wan is expecting me back at the temple. We are leaving for the planet Kyber soon so I can begin my lightsaber construction.

Palpatine: Well go ahead Anakin, and may the force be with you.

Anakin: May the force be with you and this great center of democracy, your exellency.


Anakin bows and walks out. Camera goes to the Jedi temple, landing platform (the same place mace and Sifo-Dyas landed). Obi-Wan is seen waiting for Anakin. Anakin arrives and apologizes.

Anakin: I'm deeply sorry for being late master.

Obi-Wan: Tardiness is not a positive trait in a jedi Anakin.

Anakin: I'm deeply sorry master.

Obi-Wan: Where were you?

Anakin: I was having an audience with the chancellor.

Obi-Wan:(you can tell he disapproves) Umhm. Anakin, you need to learn to be cautious when with politicans.

Anakin: You mean you don't trust the supreme chancellor?

Obi-Wan: It's not that I don't trust Palpatine, although I do find the whole situation which led his election a tad suspicious, it's just that you're going to learn that some politicans will tell you whatever you want to hear. Just for their own desires.

Anakin: But no politican could ever fool a jedi.

Obi-Wan: I hope not.


Anakin and Obi-Wan had been having this conversation while walking to their jedi starfighters. They now arrive at their ships and Obi-Wan helps Anakin in and familarizes him with the controls.

Obi-Wan: Well Anakin, this is a big day indeed for you. You will begin construction on your lightsaber as well as flying a jedi ship for the first time. Remeber, if you need any help don't hesitate to ask. I'll be flying right beside you the whole time.

Anakin: Master, I think I'll manage.


Obi-Wan smiles and walks over to his own starfighter. Anakin's cockpit closes as Obi-Wan hops into his fighter.

Anakin:(over radio intercomm) Ready master?

Obi-Wan: Ready as I'll ever be.

Anakin:(laughing) Are you nervous master?

Obi-Wan: No, of course not.


Anakin's ship lifts off, with Obi-Wan a second behind him.

Anakin: (teasing Obi-Wan) Or do you just not like flying?

Obi-Wan:(putting an end to it) That'll be enough Anakin.


Their ships are now off Courasant and arrive at the hyperspace rings, parked in orbit obve the planet.

Obi-Wan: Ok, easy now Anakin. You have to dock gently with the ring and let it capture you.

Anakin docks with the ring easily

Obi-Wan: Alright, now enter the cooridinates for Kyber into the guidance computer.

They both do this and are off.

Who do we cut to now?

1. Dooku and Sifo-Dyas speaking.

2. Padme speaking with the queen.

3. Cleigg and Owen at the homestead.



I vote #1, I think we need to get back to Dooku.



 

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CodyMonKenobi 
Registered: Jan '01
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Date Posted: 7/7/03 12:02am Subject: RE: Star Wars Episode 1.5 Choose your own adventure
#2
I like it where Ani teases Obi Wan about flying good forshadowing.

 

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