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The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
young_mara
Registered:
Sep '01
Date Posted:
6/2/05 12:12am
Subject:
RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
This demands a prequel. Or a sequel. Or a story to do with the AU. I just want more! Argh!
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Rosh_Penin
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Jan '05
Date Posted:
6/2/05 3:32am
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
Excellent storyline, writers! And nicely tied in with the OT continuum as well.
But - a dark Obi?
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BarissaOffee
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Jul '02
Date Posted:
6/2/05 9:46am
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
Did I make myself clear? SEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL!!!
As one of your earlier commentors said, I definately needed a happy ending after ROTS, and this fit sooo perfectly. An awe inspiring, completed, intracately preformed peice. One of your finest novel length writings Oba, that is for sure. And this has only been nominated for two awards??? That's a
milking
shame!
So very enjoyable, many thanks for starting, replying, and finishing!!!!!
May the Force be with You,
Barissa
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Happy_Hobbit_Padawan
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Feb '03
Date Posted:
6/5/05 3:56pm
Subject:
RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
To everyone:
I thank all the readers who stuck through this to the bitter end. Okay, so the end wasn't so bitter, but you know what I mean.
obaona
is a joy to work with and I'm grateful she put up me with as a new co-writer and with my frequent "I'm stuck, you write the next part" periods.
vader_incarnate:
I so heart Xanatos.
What's not to love?
And thank you for kind comments. I have to say it was difficult for me to try to match the level of writing both you and oba had on this.
Again with my fruckin' throwaway lines.
Hee hee.
Webogirl:
You're one of the lucky ones who don't have to wait, oh, about two and half years to read the whole thing.
Hope you enjoy!
Stargazer-19:
I can't say anything more than the fact that I loved it!
So glad you enjoyed it!
And thanks.
Shaindl:
Thanks for your comments.
And I'm glad you stuck through to the end.
Siri-Wan-Kenobi:
Thanks!
bobilll:
Thanks!
It's interesting how, by breaking all the rules, Anakin can stay light, when the rules are made to keep one light in the first place.
It's a good way to look at it. Anakin sorta shows how the rules needed to be reevaluated. But he's the Chosen One, he can do whatever he wants.
PadmeSolo:
Good to see ya again! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
PadawanKitara:
Thank you.
young_mara:
This demands a prequel. Or a sequel.
Noooooo!!!!
Thanks for reading!
Rosh_Penin:
But - a dark Obi?
Why not dark Obi?
Thanks!
BarissaOffee:
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
Obaona
has only agreed to write a sequel if readers each pay her $50. (I kid, I kid! It's actually $250).
Glad you enjoyed the story!
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agentj
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Dec '04
Date Posted:
6/5/05 6:09pm
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
*delurk*
I haven't officially read the last bit of the story, but I have been reading this story since it was re-posted here, and like a bad little lurker, haven't spoken up. Unlike most JA readers, I never really liked Xanatos...until I read this story. I definitely could have gone for Xan if he was the fellow we see here!
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obaona
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Jun '02
Date Posted:
6/6/05 5:33pm
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
agentj
: Well, then, I hope you like how it ends.
I'm glad you liked Xan - I think he was the character that grew the most (in terms of what we expected), and he ended up having a surprising amount of depth.
Thank you, and a nice big *HUG* for delurking!
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http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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kateydidnt
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Nov '04
Date Posted:
6/6/05 11:34pm
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
Yeah so, I did actually read the final part when you first posted it on FFN but I didn't reply.
Officially delurking!
But I loved this story! It was just so well done. I love how Obi-Wan was able to find healing and realize what he needed to about himself and Anakin of his world. I also love how he helped the Jedi of this universe see what they had not been able to see or understand in his own.
Fantastic!
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jade51999
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Nov '99
Date Posted:
6/7/05 10:46am
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
Though I joined the group a bit late in the game, let me tell you it has been a delight reading this story. The creativity and vivid imagery regarding Obi-Wan and Xanatos' emotions and howyou reworked everyone in so that it all ended
right
and gave Obi-wan the strength necessary to keep going in his universe was phenomenal.
I applaud everyone involved.
Look forward to reading more from both of you.
Jade
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TheNut
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Jun '05
Date Posted:
6/7/05 4:03pm
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
Um, i've been lurking all through this story, and i just want to say that i loved it and i really wish that you'd make a sequel out of it. Thanks for the good read!
~DaNut~
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solojones
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Sep '00
Date Posted:
6/30/05 11:10pm
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
Ah!
I had no idea this had been finished. You see what I get for going out of town? I just started thinking about the story again because it really got under my skin. Well it's 1am now so I'll try to catch up tomorrow if I can. I'm so happy you guys finished this story, though- can't wait to read
-sj loves kevin spacey
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The_Slilent_One
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Sep '04
Date Posted:
7/30/05 8:26am
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RE: The Water's Edge (cowritten with Happy_Hobbit_Padawan - Updated May 31 - *COMPLETE*)
Wow. Great fic. I lurked around thisfic when it was first postes but got distracted along the way. The ending was perfect (loved the wookie t-shirt
).
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