I just read the whole thing from beginning to end, and I must say that was simply astounding. Breathtaking, actually. It's one of those stories that speaks from the writer's core to the reader's core, and it certainly spoke to my core and touched me in a way I didn't think was possible for a fanfic. Extremely well-done.
Oh, btw - it would be interesting to know if either Merida or Joram met Luke or Ben later while on Tatooine... I would pay to see the look on Joram and Merida's faces. 
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"He was the best star pilot in the galaxy, and a cunning warrior... And he was a good friend." - Obi-Wan Kenobi about Anakin Skywalker
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