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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/29/05 7:50pm Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Will better back off or he's likely to hurt someone - like his mother or himself. I liked that Ben and Marta were dancing. Must have hurt Ben in a way to be so close to Siri and not be able to say or do anything. Good job. Keep going. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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SiriKenobi12 Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 3/29/05 8:15pm Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	I LOVED this chapter! I really love the characters you are creating here with Will and Luke for that matter. I could totally see two young boys sitting around reading and drawing, it almost made me think of my brother when he was younger. I loved it! Ben and Marta dancing...awwww, so adorable. Plus you added "I have a bad feeling about this!" yes!!! fantastic! -----signature----- I'm fighting a terrible war with writer's block!! Obi-Wan carries Siri's lightsaber in Episode III
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Siri-Wan-Kenobi Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 3/30/05 11:24am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Great chapter master! You got it out fast too! I thought it was sad how Will had drawn a picture of how he thought his father looked like. If only he knew that he was dancing with his mother downstairs. Luke too! A navigator on a space freighter! Psh! More like evil sith lord! lol Ben and Marta dancing... hehe ! Will just had to interrupt them didn't he! -----signature----- For over a thousand generations, the Jedi Knights were the guardians of peace and justice in the Old Republic. Before the dark times, Before the Empire. ~Proud Padawan of Jedikma~ ~Padawan Sis of DarthMousche~
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padawan-grasshopper Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 3/30/05 12:38pm Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	More! Here's a bag of the BEST chocolate ever to persuada you! See? Chocies, chocies, chocies, chocies! Now you can take a smiley with a big mouth and eat them all! Loving it so far! -Locust(on the library computer- faster, but no smileys) -----signature----- pie=good, homework=not pie RIP, Dan Fogelburg. Your music will live on forever. sob askaninja.com Marriage is punishment for shoplifting in some countries. smosh.com
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Kazzy Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 3/31/05 3:12am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Will certainly is not at all happy about his mother and Obi-Wan. Understandable I guess considering how much his step-father must have mistreated his mother. He has an interesting way of picking up on and interpreting the Force. I mean obviously he is picking up on the fact that Obi-Wan is Force-sensitive, or at least I assume so, because Obi-Wan certainly doesn't seem to have any ulterior motives towards Marta (other than the obvious). Greta update! -----signature----- If you could touch the alien sand, and hear the cry of strange birds, and watch them wheel in another sky, would that satisfy you? - First Doctor Looking for me? For my fic? Try my LJ. http://bytheseaside.livejournal.com/profile
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Neo-Paladin Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 3/31/05 5:57am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	You've got me hooked on this fic Jedikma. I'm enjoying it very much. -----signature----- Just because your voice reaches halfway around the world doesn't mean you are wiser than when it reached only to the end of the bar. Edward R. Murrow
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 3/31/05 6:38am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	This was one of my favorite chapters. You really got to the heart of the boys' friendship, that common bond of being "different," and you revealed a lot about Will's character. Will wonders and dreams about his father just like Luke, and I love the way he expresses himself through the drawings. You have me a little concerned that his contraband books will be a source of complications later in the story, though. So, Will's dislike of Ben goes deeper than just not wanting his mother to have a male friend. I'm curious if the photo on the wall that he destroyed was of anyone particular, trying to send his mother a message? Not sure if that made sense. LOL “Do you think you could draw a picture of what you think my father would look like for me?” My heart just broke for Luke here. It's obvious how much he yearns to know about his father. -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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anekasolo Registered: Feb '01	Date Posted: 3/31/05 10:02am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Oh no, what did Mr. Tredwell do! he didn't beat Siri, did he! Poor Ben, just wants to have companion ship. -----signature----- "Ah, Josh, she can kick someone behind her around a pole; can we build a pole?" from Serenity DVD special features Pay attention to what I mean, not what I say. "I'd try to avoid a violent death at the hands of illiterate peasants, if I were you." - Catal
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Marmida Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 4/1/05 12:17am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29 - Date Edited: 4/1/05 12:18am (1 edits total) Edited By: Marmida
	I just LOVE this fic! Siri´s amnesia is an interesting solution. And I like Will´s character. He´s a fine lad, reminds me a bit about his Dad Awesome job again Jedikma! Edit:typo -----signature----- Member of the official Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club. And proud of it! Obi-Wanskubansku on miun lemppari warssissa! Fic under work: Covered: Not gonna finish it... Fan art: Removed...
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Jedikma Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 4/2/05 8:10am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Kynstar Thanks!!! I figured there had to be a way to still get some idea about who the Jedi were even if they were old 'dimestore' novels. In ANH Luke replies to Obi-Wan "No, my father wasn't a Jedi Knight, he was a navigator on a spice freighter." Luke sounded like he had some idea of what a Jedi Knight was and I wanted a way for him to have come up with that info. And, of course, the boys have to keep the books hidden. jeditachi Thank you! I had hoped to have another chapter this weekend, too, but my week didn't go as planned. I still want to get another chapter up before the end of the weekend, but I am so itching to go get the RotS novel and I know if I do I will read and not write. Kat Thanks! Yes, there will be more, I'm just not sure when. Noi Thanks! Will isn't trying to be mean, it's just that he senses something he can't quite interpret and it worries him. Will does know something about his mother, which will come out in an upcoming chapter. diane Thanks! Yes, I'm sure Ben is having a hard time being near Siri and not being able to say anything, but he is going to realize soon that an opportunity for a few revelations is coming up. SiriKenobi12 Thanks!! I have an older brother who is an artist and when we were growing up he was always drawing. He would draw comics and I remember, especially in the dead of winter when we were all pretty much house bound, I would read his comics and I watched while he was drawing the 'new' installment. Now I wonder where all those drawings he did went? To this day my brother doesn't leave home without a sketch pad. (Last time I saw him at my parent's house he sketched a picture of my daughter. ) Siri-Wan-Kenobi Thanks, Padawan! Now I need to get the next chapter done. Glad you're enjoying the story. padawan-grasshopper Thanks! And welcome to the story. Kazzy Thanks! Will senses something about Ben, but he doesn't know that it's Force sensitivity because Ben is shielding. He also senses a familial connection but Will just doesn't have the knowledge he needs to make these interpretations and so the unknown worries/scares him. Neo_Paladin Thank you!!! [face-blush] Hope you contine to enjoy. Gina Thank you!!! I think both boys have in common the desire to want to know about their fathers and though Will has his mother, he doesn't have her past so he is like Luke in that way, too. Then there is the Force sensitivity they have in common. Knowing that they are different from others, I think they would crave guidence for these abilities, too. At least the books give them some sense of identity. :) anekasolo :) All questions will be answered in time. So stay tuned. Marmida Thank you! Glad you are enjoying the story. :) Thank you to all my readers, reviewers and lurkers, too! As always you make writing a joy. :) I hope to have another chapter out soon. :) (With any luck before the end of the weekend. ) -----signature----- Twice in a Lifetime 7/31 http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/16813029 A Quiet Afternoon http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23305946 follow up vig to: A New Order http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17525231
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Stargazer-19 Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 4/2/05 10:19pm Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Wow! A very interesting idea! I'm suddenly finding all of your fic's hidden across the boards. I get the feeling that things aren't going to remain so calm. Hmm... The story just keeps building up more and more questions. I wonder if she will ever remember calling him Oafy-Wan... Anyway, great post! -----signature----- Magneto: “You wanted us to protect the library. What kind of villain attacks a library? Xavier: You always did stupid things when you were a villain. M: Did I ever attack a library? X: Well, no. M: Exactly. No self respecting villain attacks a library.
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SiriKenobi12 Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 4/3/05 11:51am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	That would be funny if she remembers calling him Ofey-Wan! LOL....I bet that would raise an eyebrow from old Ben! -----signature----- I'm fighting a terrible war with writer's block!! Obi-Wan carries Siri's lightsaber in Episode III
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Jedikma Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 4/8/05 6:05pm Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Stargazer-19 Thanks! I hope that finding my fics across the boards is a good thing. I don't remember Siri ever calling Obi-Wan, 'Oafy-Wan'. That was Bruck and she really wasn't a friend of his. SK12 Ummmm, had not considered that. To all my readers: Sorry about the delay in posting. DRL is taking its toll and keeping me busy. I will just have to keep plugging away on this story when I can. Hopefully, the next post will be soon, but I can't be sure. Thanks for sticking with me and keep watching. -----signature----- Twice in a Lifetime 7/31 http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/16813029 A Quiet Afternoon http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23305946 follow up vig to: A New Order http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/17525231
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ca_tron Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 4/8/05 6:36pm Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29
	Post when you can. sits down in lawn chair with a Mt Dew in one hand and animal crackers in the other -----signature----- The four strokes of an airplane engine: suck, squeeze, bang, and blow. http://www.geocities.com/ca_tron Pilot since 6/14
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Stargazer-19 Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 4/9/05 1:12am Subject: RE: Twice in a Lifetime (Obi-Wan/Siri Intertrilogy) UpdatedChapter 4 posted 3/29 - Date Edited: 4/9/05 1:15am (1 edits total) Edited By: Stargazer-19
	I don't remember Siri ever calling Obi-Wan, 'Oafy-Wan'. That was Bruck and she really wasn't a friend of his. ohh...I haven't read all of the books so I just assumed she said it in one of them... ...sorry about that. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter...and of course finding your fics is a good thing. I love them! -----signature----- Magneto: “You wanted us to protect the library. What kind of villain attacks a library? Xavier: You always did stupid things when you were a villain. M: Did I ever attack a library? X: Well, no. M: Exactly. No self respecting villain attacks a library.
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