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Repercussions of Time 04/20/05 Finished. Thanks for the Noms.
ZaraValinor
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Date Posted:
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
Kynstar
Bad bad lil Quelee! Oh no... epidemic on our hands?? I truly hope not!!
Love the lil bit between Obi and Ben! That was so hard for Ben to say that! gotta luv the young'un for that!
Great job!! Loved this chapter!
Ben I think has a bit too much of his mother in him. He's not much for following orders. And even less for admitting fault.
Kazzy
Uh-oh. Nothing good can come of this. If Ben's blood is really that lethal then I hope that the healers don't get infected, but I expect by now that if it isn't too late, it soon will be.
A nice touch ben explaining where his name came from. Maybe it will help Obi-Wan understand a little more what he means to the Skywalkers. Anakin's fall had to have hurt, to have stung his confidence a lot. But you don't name a child after someone who failed. So maybe it will be some comfort to Obi-Wan.
Great chap.
Thanks. These last couple of chapters is really just getting everyone to the point where they can work together. Ben holds a silent resentment towards this time and their inability, Obi-Wan hates the fact that he came up short regardless of what he tried to do for Anakin and resent Ben and Anakin for that, and Anakin as we know has his own problems. This is all about getting them out in the air if not resolved and allowing at least Ben and Obi-Wan a chance to put these issues aside and work towards their shared goal.
angel_gidget
I can just imagine how strange it would look to a Jedi to see a senator such as Padme sneeking around with the blood samples of mysterious padawans. Kinda funny, really. Great interaction between Ben & Ben by the way.
I thought that was a very strange mental image. Padme sneaking blood away to Ben.
obaona
As always, engrossing and nerve-wracking. I really feel for Ben, he's in such a difficult situation, with a lot depending on what he does. And it's a situation with which he has no experience - even dealing with other Jedi is strange and new, I think. It reminds me of a line in some NJO novel, where Luke wonders if Obi-Wan had ever felt this way on Tatooine, trying to guide Luke - wondering what to influence, feeling everything change with every action, uncertain of what things would bring, and if it would all go horribly wrong because of some small mistake.
How I love your comparison. It is very much the same, but with such a young and inexperienced Jedi. And I'm glad you noticed his awkwardness with the other Jedi. He was with a few of them in his youth but they were practically overrun by the Yuuzhan Vong in his history/future, so it's basically just been him and his father. I love your insight.
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
looks interesting gotta up this so I can find it latter
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
It seems that Ben may have popped in to resolve one problem, but he may have created another, more deadly one!
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1/18/05 10:42am
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
gahhhhh noooooooo Queelee!!! arrrghhhh
maybe she will find something to fight against it . . . maybe ben can be saved and live as an uncle to his father... and be his own name sake perhaps. ..
and what about the cut on his forhead? head wounds bleed profusely, and if it's that contageous that he would have burned the vials, what about the airborne spoors from this wound?
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ZaraValinor
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
PadawanKitara
It seems that Ben may have popped in to resolve one problem, but he may have created another, more deadly one!
Oh, yes, Ben's got problems.
maramijade
gahhhhh noooooooo Queelee!!! arrrghhhh
maybe she will find something to fight against it . . . maybe ben can be saved and live as an uncle to his father... and be his own name sake perhaps. ..
and what about the cut on his forhead? head wounds bleed profusely, and if it's that contageous that he would have burned the vials, what about the airborne spoors from this wound?
There will be a further explanation to Ben's sickness, the way the contangion is most effect later on.
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
“Are all Skywalkers capable of ignoring me as I rant or is this an ability shared between you and
Anakin alone,” Obi-Wan questioned heatedly.
lol not alone, Luke also disobeyed Obi Wans orders, I think its a trade mark
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ZaraValinor
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
JediFalcon
“Are all Skywalkers capable of ignoring me as I rant or is this an ability shared between you and
Anakin alone,” Obi-Wan questioned heatedly.
lol not alone, Luke also disobeyed Obi Wans orders, I think its a trade mark
more soon
I thought it so true to parenting. The adult out of the control, while the child is going 'lalala'.
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Miramarjedi
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
Zara great story. I have been exploring this site for a month but as soon as I read the first entry of the story I had to join.
Great story please continue
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
awesome story!!
can't wait for the next update
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ZaraValinor
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/16/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
Darth_Djinn
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Thanks.
Miramarjedi
Zara great story. I have been exploring this site for a month but as soon as I read the first entry of the story I had to join.
Great story please continue
Here's more. And I'm glad you joined.
clone_storm_trooper
awesome story!!
can't wait for the next update
Thanks. Here you go.
It was about a week after the fight between Anakin and Ben that Obi-Wan contrived to get the
governing body of the Jedi into conference about the first strike against Palpatine. Ben and Obi-Wan
had discussed long and in great detail the advance of such a plot. To Ben’s surprise, the Wayland
system was well known, it was just as relieving to know that the planet that his mother had helped
his father infiltrate was still literally undiscovered. It was small enough to have been missed by the
initial Wayland expedition and like so many government run facilities of these days, official could
be bought to avoid what the Emperor wants secret.
The number one question was who would comprise the strike team. Obi-Wan had fought strongly
for Anakin to come along, arguing that if Anakin was ever to come back, he would have to
remember the type of work he’d once done for the light. Ben had been less apt to involve him in
such a vulnerable operation. The Emperor should not suspect such a strike, but that did not mean
he could not have heavy security, and Ben wanted to protect Anakin from the Emperor not parade
him in front of the Sith Lord.
Eventually, he had given away to the fact that Obi-Wan knew his grandfather better then he did, and
that perhaps there was hope in giving Anakin a chance to find the light he once encompassed. That
made three of them, Obi-Wan, Ben, and Anakin. Both Ben and Obi-Wan agreed that if they were
to survive this operation intact, they would need at least four others with specified skills to infiltrate
the base.
This time they wouldn’t be moving in on the base to destroy it. They wanted to empty out the base.
Slave circuitry was at the bare minimal during this time, but Obi-Wan was sure that Anakin and
another technician could pull it off. It was readily agreed to that the cloning facilities would be
destroyed, but all other materials would be used towards the war.
Yoda had called a council of all Jedi who would be willing to make a run and who weren’t currently
needed to watch the incredible amount of Jedi children. If any wondered why Ben Jade, a relatively
unknown Jedi apprentice, sat in on this council, no one verbalized it. The group consisted of twenty
Jedi of varying age and species. For some strange reason, it all made Ben very homesick.
“Master Kenobi, with all due respect, I do not understand why you would trust Skywalker’s
information about this secret storehouse?” a female Jedi asked sharply, her deep blue eyes seizing
up Ben who was beside him.
“There is still a chance we can save him, Siri, I will not give that up,” Obi-Wan answered, and Ben
instantly saw the kinship between the two.
The Jedi rolled her eyes. “You aren’t Qui-Gon Jinn and this isn’t some former slave boy who needs
guidance. He had his chance.”
“I would have to side with Master Tachi on this,” a Calamarian Jedi said, her soft voice almost
reluctant in stating her worries. “The Sith have played with us for far too long and I feel that you are
to emotionally connected Obi-Wan.”
“Of course, I am emotionally connected. But when has that ever stopped me from doing my duty?”
Obi-Wan countered a little too heatedly. “Anakin may be our only hope of defeating Palpatine.”
“Then what? We welcome him back with open arms,” a tall, dark haired, Vespian snapped into the
conversation. “He has killed our people, his own people, Master Kenobi. You ask much of us to
push this aside and trust him to a mission that you have stated is of great import.”
“I wonder if this isn’t a personal vendetta rather then your concerns for the fate of the galaxy,” Ben
broke into the conversation. “Have you missed the fact that Skywalker tried to kill Master Kenobi,
that the betrayal to him is as great as it is to you, if not more so.”
Under the table, Ben felt something smack into his leg. “Silent you should be my young Padawan.”
“Who are you anyway?” the blond Jedi, Siri , Obi-Wan had called her, demanded.
“Ben Jade,” the young apprentice replied in a deliberate tone. “You wanna keep up sweetheart.”
This time Obi-Wan and Yoda sighed in tandem. “Or do you want me to write it down for you?”
Siri looked as though she might attack Ben right there. “Master Yoda do you allow such insolence?”
“Does he allow?” Ben questioned. “What am I his slave?”
“Ben you are not helping,” Obi-Wan muttered from his left.
A dark skinned Corellian woman turned to Siri. “He reminds me quite a lot of you, when you were
that age.”
Ben smiled cheekily at her. “See we have something in common.”
“I don’t believe this,” Siri breathed.
“Is she always this incredulous?” Ben asked to no one in particular.
Yoda’s stick came up to slam against the wooden table, interrupting any further commentary from
the assembled Jedi. “Enough that is. Get back to the matter at hand, should we? Four more we need
in company with Master Obi-Wan.”
Siri glared at Ben, to which he responded with a large grin. “I’m in.”
“We’ll need another starship technician. We plan to slave the ships together as quick as possible,”
Obi-Wan introduced into conversation.
“I guess that means I’m in too,” a long limbed Respir answered, his limber digits looking fully
competent to negotiate tight engine parts.
Ben’s gaze swept to the rest of the crowd and found a red head with green eyes. She was perhaps
three or four years older then himself, and by the braid running down her right shoulder, still an
apprentice. Her signature in the Force was not strong, he would have thought she’d be on level with
Tionne, one of his father’s first apprentices, and one of the Jedi who had cared for him as a child.
She had not been incredibly strong in the Force, nor had she had an average level, but Tionne had
seen things no one else had. She’d kept an infant Ben safe from the Yuuzhan Vong and Ben felt
strongly that this red-head woman needed to be apart of this mission.
During his musing another Jedi, a tall Cerulean had joined the mission. He had to speak up or miss
his chance. “How about you?” he spoke into the resigned silence, pointing at the woman he’d
noticed.
Her eyes widened and she looked as though she wished to hide. Obviously, no one else saw what
he saw. “You want me?”
Obi-Wan was watching him but didn’t object. “Yes. I think your talents will be most helpful.”
Those green eyes looked around, searching for something, perhaps a way out, when Master Yoda
cleared his throat. “Padawan Deirs, what say you? Agree do you?”
“Yes, Master Yoda, I agree,” the woman said, stiffening in resolution.
“Excuse me, Padawan Jade,” Padawan Deirs said from behind him as Ben made his way back to his
quarters. He paused and turned to face her.
“Yes,” he said, turning around to face her.
She paused da space away from him, watching as the rest of the Jedi filed past them. He sent Obi-
Wan ahead with an almost imperceptible jolt of his head. Once they had all left, she seemed to regain
the courage that had caused her to call out his name. “I was wondering why you choose me to be
a member of this mission?”
Well, she certainly doesn’t beat around the berry patch does she?
“I felt you were important to
the cause,” he answered
“But why?” she insisted.
Slightly confused, Ben’s forehead wrinkled in concern. “Do you have a problem of coming along?
Does Skywalker worry you?”
“No, I mean, yes, a little. It’s just my abilities are often found lacking,” she said in a stutter.
Unreasonable anger flared inside Ben. “Then too many have missed your true purpose.”
He had hoped these words would sooth her but she was angered by them. “You are just a Padawan
yourself, what would you know. I can feel your power, it licks out even to me. At least the others
don’t patronize me.”
“Have you ever been in a Kamino rainstorm, Padawan Deirs?” he changed the subject suddenly.
“No,” she admitted, her own confusion mounting.
“Well the Force to me is like that, thousands upon thousands of rain drops slapping into me, roaring
in my ear, and dazzling my senses,” he began to explain. “Now, I can’t sense the individual rain
drop, I can’t hear that one pivotal cry that would save a galaxy. But you can and you will.” He
sighed, feeling the weight of his purpose in the Force. “In many ways, I envy you that.”
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Kynstar
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/23/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
Great job!! Loved the lil spit there with Siri, Bant, and the others! Hehehe loved the bit about stating Siri used to be like that hehehe
Poor Ben
he's right about the girl... and those who aren't strong in the Force. They can at least sense individualistic things.
Definitely gonna be interesting with Anakin going with them... very interesting... meeting with Palps again. Can he resist... can he fight?
Can't wait for more!!!
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RE: Repercussions of Time 01/23/05 Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Ben Skywalker? Epi III AU
Cool!!
Loved the interaction between Ben and Siri - I get the feeling that something could eventually happen there??????
Looking forward to the next update
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This new padawan is an interesting addition to the crew. I love Adi's comments about Siri!
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I loved Ben's description at the end there of the Force, and what it is like for him, and most likely his family compared to what it must be like for others. I'm no expert on the matter - of course
- but I imagine that is a very good one.
So, they are preparing to go to Wayland. Well, I can imagine that is going to be so very interesting. Troubling maybe. Trouble - definitely.
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