Author Topic: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) A/N 2/28
Koori  692 posts
Registered: Dec '04
24089_Obi-Wans
Date Posted: 4/21/05 5:49pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
A wonderfully long post of a great scene. Loved the interaction between Yoda and Jaina.

 

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c_owensby  566 posts
Registered: Apr '02
43224_Anakin & Padme
Date Posted: 4/21/05 8:00pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
That was a wonderful post. It was well worth the wait. I really liked the way you handled the interaction between Yoda and Jaina. happy

 

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skywalker64089  798 posts
Registered: Jan '05
6501_Luke and Mara
Date Posted: 4/21/05 8:59pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Yahoo!

Absolutely Awesome!

The fact that she isn't fazed by him at all says something about the severity of the situation that she left.

S.

 

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astarael  652 posts
Registered: Jan '05
23549_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 4/21/05 10:18pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Yay! An update! And a fantastic one at that...

Go Jaina, you tell that troll who's boss grin grin grin

 

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angel_gidget  216 posts
Registered: Apr '04
6527_Tomcat
Date Posted: 4/22/05 10:49am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Yes! Thank you for finally updating! I can't wait to see the interaction between Jaina and Anakin. Though, I think if anthing gives away the "secret connection" between the chosen one and these strangers, it will probably be Ben's cute face! Oh! And don't forget to give some of Padme's perspective on this! ^_^

 

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Labria_uk  516 posts
Registered: Aug '00
14883_Jawa Concept
Date Posted: 4/22/05 11:22am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Cool, very good post enjoyed reading while listening to a new cd happy

 

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jasa  654 posts
Registered: Feb '05
40046_Evil Penguin
Date Posted: 4/22/05 1:00pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
you updated!! and a long one!

this is so great!

please continue whenever you can.

 

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jedi-solo-fel  333 posts
Registered: Jul '02
42775_Leia Organa Solo
Date Posted: 4/22/05 2:07pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
I love how you handled Jaina and Yoda's chat, very insightful, and it showed that while Jaina respects Yoda (probably more than she does any other Jedi she's bound to meet), the war has really hardened her in some ways.

And the end was cute, with Yoda and Ben... heh, Yoda would make a good babysitter, lol wink

 

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Kazzy  1138 posts
Registered: Oct '02
14957_Leia Organa
Date Posted: 4/22/05 3:52pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Wow! Well worth the wait - this is fantastic.

I think Jaina is very brave for telling Yoda what she did. She has to live through her family's mistakes and her own to try and change everything. She has no idea how she will be recieved - that's courageous. Poor Girl she'd had such a painful life, and poor Ben. You've done a wonderful job at characterisation.

Wonderful chap.

 

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JainaSoloSkywalker  302 posts
Registered: Jul '02
24182_Padme Art
Date Posted: 4/22/05 5:44pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Great post! grin Now I can't wait even more for Jaina to meet Anakin- and see his reaction down the road when he finds out this mysterious stranger from the future is actually his only granddaughter! shock

 

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FORCEBlLADE  574 posts
Registered: Mar '03
23760_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 4/22/05 8:31pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Finally, an pudate. Yoda was being a little too hard on Jaina. She knows what's she's doing. I can't wait to see how she and Anakin meet.

 

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JediFalcon  21414 posts
Registered: Feb '02
6407_Vader (1107091)
Date Posted: 4/22/05 9:31pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
yay you updated but Yoda was quite hard on Jaina and I can't wait for more

 

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Skarlaya 
Registered: Nov '04
24173_Padme
Date Posted: 4/24/05 3:06pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Nice chat between Jaina and Yoda, I feel for them both. And that line about Ben being Jaina's something that keeps the dark at bay was beautiful- she loves that boy so much.

 

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skywalker64089  798 posts
Registered: Jan '05
6501_Luke and Mara
Date Posted: 4/26/05 7:21pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
UP.

S.

 

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skywalker64089  798 posts
Registered: Jan '05
6501_Luke and Mara
Date Posted: 4/28/05 8:34pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 4/21
Anybody here?

S.

 

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