Author Topic: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) A/N 2/28
Vongchild  5097 posts
Registered: Apr '04
6511_Nen Yim
Date Posted: 1/8/05 4:52am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Time travel is a very difficult plot device, because you can end up with annomalies (as shown in Back To The Future). But this fic shows promise! I look forward to more!

 

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DarthJaina  226 posts
Registered: Aug '02
7717_Padme
Date Posted: 1/8/05 8:22am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Very cool so far grin This should be loads of fun!

 

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Jedi_Jaina_Fel  440 posts
Registered: Jun '02
24096_Padme
Date Posted: 1/8/05 9:38am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Poor Danni, what a way to go out sad

This looks really interesting, I like it. I can't wait to see the flashbacks, I am dying to know what happened in the NJO era.

 

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SkyBlazer  94 posts
Registered: Sep '04
22849_Padmé
Date Posted: 1/8/05 2:27pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
I like this a lot so far happy I'm happy you've got another fic going, Single Thread is one of my all-time favorites grin

 

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Trickster_Goddess  173 posts
Registered: Jun '03
13771_Padme Concept
Date Posted: 1/9/05 8:53am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Very cool beginning grin Wow, I don't know what intrigues me more, the chance of Jaina and Ben changing things, and interacting with members of their family that they never knew, or finding out what the heck happened in the future for everything to get so bad plain I'll be watching for a new update wink

 

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JediPrincess83  167 posts
Registered: Jan '03
17453_Aubrie Wyn
Date Posted: 1/9/05 10:21am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
If the future was always in motion, who was to say that the past wasn't, as well?

He he, I love that line happy This sounds like it's going to be really good, I'm excited for more grin

 

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Vaders_Granddaughter  118 posts
Registered: Jun '03
7449_Bastila
Date Posted: 1/9/05 12:18pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Oh, I will definitely be reading this one happy

What happened, I wonder, with the Vong to lead to the extinction of the Jedi, the destruction of the galaxy, and Jaina and Ben deciding to time-hop as a last restort to save the galaxy?

 

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Jaina-Solo-Fel  176 posts
Registered: Jul '02
18916_Barriss Offee
Date Posted: 1/9/05 2:45pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
I like it so far! happy Send me a PM when you update, Angel wink

 

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Skarlaya 
Registered: Nov '04
24173_Padme
Date Posted: 1/9/05 4:02pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Looks like the Vong won, that's never a good thing worried And now Jaina and Ben, the only survivors, have gone back in time to try and change things so that the galaxy will be better prepared, I assume? Boy, talk about a heavy job sad

 

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Koori  692 posts
Registered: Dec '04
24089_Obi-Wans
Date Posted: 1/9/05 7:12pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Very interesting beginning. You don't see a lot of time travel stories that involve Jaina. The action is a great reader grab. I'll definatly be keeping up with this one. Can't wait to see how Anakin and Obi-Wan react.

 

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Jedi-Jaina-Solo-Fel  201 posts
Registered: Jul '02
41083_Jaina and Jag
Date Posted: 1/10/05 6:43am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Poor Danni and the others sad I hope Jaina and Ben don't wind up smack in the middle of another bad situation when they arrive in the past, yeesh.

 

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Kinwon  93 posts
Registered: Oct '04
14722_Obi-Wan Art
Date Posted: 1/10/05 11:22am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
This looks like it will be just as entertaining as your other fic, Angel. I'll be keeping an eye on it.

 

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Jedi-Princess-Solo  4346 posts
Registered: Apr '02
8173_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 1/10/05 3:12pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
You didn't tell me you'd started posting yet, Rach tongue I love the opener, it sets the mood for how bleak the future is, why it's so important that it be changed. I can't wait for more grin

~JPS~

 

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Goddess_Jaya  1312 posts
Registered: Jun '02
42777_Danni Quee
Date Posted: 1/12/05 5:41am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
This story looks incredible. This is the second piece of work I'm reading now that's set in an era I don't normally follow. Wow.

Great descriptions, and I can't wait to see some of those flashbacks. I'm sure they'll clear up a lot of questions.

 

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Lady_Jade  1171 posts
Registered: May '04
46181_Padme Jedi
Date Posted: 1/12/05 3:29pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben)
Wow, this looks great!

I can't wait to see how a few certain Jedi are going to reacto to this ! happy

 

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