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Solo_and_Fel Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 1/13/05 2:29pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Somewhere, systems away, something was shifting. The Force twisted, bent, convulsed around something abnormal, as if trying to expel it. For a long moment, stars stretched beyond their limit, space expanded, and he felt himself being pulled outward and along with the rest of the galaxy as the current changed. And then everything snapped back into place, as if nothing had ever happened in the first place. That had to be really bizarre for Anakin. I like the description though. I can't be really sure yet, but it seems fitting because hopefully everything is about to change although nothing has changed yet. Its probably a big weight for Jaina to know she has to change the future, but having to take care of a five-year old at the same time cannot make it any easier. She couldn't have left Ben behind though. And if anything it looks like he'll be a constant reminder of why this has to be done. Oh, and I agree that there is something missing in the Skywalker genes that makes them forget to watch out for themselves sometimes. This was another great post. I'm looking forward to next time. -----signature----- "Hurling black lightning is one thing, but quoting Kyp Durron puts me lower than I ever expected to get." To Suffer & Be Strong: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28435487&brd=10477 Check profile for more fics.
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Vongchild Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 1/13/05 5:04pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Another great chapter!!!! Brilliant!!!! Me love me love me love more soon??? "Can I fly?" Despite herself, Jaina chuckled. "Maybe next year, Ben," she replied, ruffling his reddish gold hair. "Little boys aren't supposed to pilot starships." "Five's not little," Ben said with a little scowl. I seem to remember something like this in the movie Titan AE "Can I drive?" -Cale "When you're older, kid." -Korso "I'm older than four!" -Cale Yeah! That was the line! -----signature----- "Oh," the other clerk said, as if it was nothing new, "You got one of the kid's drawings." http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/21158399 - Mechanical Dreams Apprentice to Zonoma "I'd take a Yuuzhan Vong Warrior over Jacen Solo any day."
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ViariSkywalker Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 1/13/05 6:16pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Wow. What else can I say? I am hooked. I haven't read any new stories lately, and I've been on the lookout for a good AU. The time travel twist has been used in many a fanfic and might seem cliché, but you employ it with such expertise that I don't think anyone can help being pulled into this story. The passages with Ben and Jaina are bittersweet, painful, and chilling. Most nights, she went into a Jedi trance instead of sleeping, so that the screams would not linger in her ears. That sent shivers up and down my spine. Such a short detail, and yet it revealed so much about Jaina and the circumstances she and Ben are in. She's a hardened young woman, similar to Leia in the OT, but far more battle-weary and bitter. I can't say for sure yet, but I doubt her first meeting with her grandfather will be the most pleasant affair. She's going back in time to save the future and her family, and she means business. As for Anakin and Obi-Wan and all the other characters so far, I must say the characterizations and dialogue are right on. Anakin is my favorite character, and if you've nailed his characterization, then you've won my respect and praise. (Okay, so I'm not always that shallow, but hey, writing Anakin well definately helps. ) Bringing us right into the action in the Clone Wars was perfect. It keeps right with the Star Wars tradition of beginning in the middle of the action. I love it, I love it, I love it! Eagerly awaiting the next post! ~Vi~ -----signature----- Big Sis of Lady_Rae Veil of Shadows (OT AU, L/M) - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/28500417 The Dark Fire Chronicles (OT AU) - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/11960028 ANGST!
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Sword-of_the-Jedi Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 1/14/05 6:58am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Wow, what a post The opening bit with the wars was great, you write Anakin very well, and I snickered at the fact that no Skywalker has self-preservation skills But it was the part w/ Jaina and Ben that really tugged at my heart... they've been through so much, poor things -----signature----- "Always you shall be at the front rank, a burning brand to your enemies, a brilliant fire to your friends."
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Skarlaya Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 1/14/05 9:37am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Obi and Ani, with Kit and Aayla thrown in for good measure Wow, everytime we get a glimpse, no matter how small or vague, of what the future became, it sends chills down my spine. I only hope Jaina's plan, whatever it is, can change things enough to create a better outcome -----signature----- "I love what you are, what you do, how you try. I've seen your kindness and your strength. I've seen the best and the worst of you. And I understand with perfect clarity exactly what you are. You're a hell of a woman, Buffy."
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Jedi_Jaina_Fel Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 1/14/05 6:37pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Great post This story is awesome so far! -----signature----- "Pain drowns most people. I just swim in it."~Tahiri Veila in RS
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SkyBlazer Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 1/15/05 8:36am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Poor Jaina and Ben Their whole family is dead, save for the ones they're soon to meet, and the Jedi are extinct, save for the creepy Old Order they're bound to have a brush with eventually... what a confusing, depressing life those two lead. I love it! -----signature----- "It's all Palpatine's fault!"
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Jadie Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 1/15/05 9:21am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Great story! I love it! -----signature----- Jade Squadron: Jade 32 I Love Tang! Fanfics on profile "She rules, until the end of time, she gives and she takes. She rules, until the end of time, she goes her way" - Mother Earth
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Kazzy Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 1/16/05 4:21am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Well they made it back in time in one piece, which is always a good sign, but unfortunately they landed among a bunch of separatists, which is not such a good thng. Still, they're hidden for now, so hopefully they'll make it out without too much trouble. But like Jaina said opponents who you can feel in the Force are greatly preferable to those who you can't. At the same time, I hope she doesn't underestimate them because of it, however, as they could be bad. I have to admit, I am really curious about what is going to happen. Who are Jaina and Ben going to meet, what are they going to tell them and what will happen. I can't wait to find out. -----signature----- If you could touch the alien sand, and hear the cry of strange birds, and watch them wheel in another sky, would that satisfy you? - First Doctor Looking for me? For my fic? Try my LJ. http://bytheseaside.livejournal.com/profile
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angel_gidget Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 1/16/05 5:49am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Loving this story already. Please hurry up and update! ^_^ -----signature----- Ben: She says you're a killer. Mara: We talked about that, Ben. Sometimes I have to kill. Many Jedi Masters do. Ben: Mom, what's cold blood? "No, I'm not going to eat his remains."--Jacen Solo, The Joiner King Stories and art in Bio
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FORCEBlLADE Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 1/16/05 3:08pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Post again soon, please! -----signature----- "Once you start down the dark path, forever will itdominate your destiny." :Yoda "JEDI CONFLICT" http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/17951268/?13
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Canadian_Maple_Leaf Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 1/16/05 6:11pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	This looks good. I like time travel fics but their arent many good ones. This one looks great
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Zebra3 Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 1/16/05 6:13pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Your story sounds really promising. More please! -----signature----- recipient of the coveted Corellian Ewokstripes with bronze cluster My icon archive -- > http://zebra3icons.bravehost.com/main1.html I'm currently reading Han Solo's Revenge I'm currently playing Tomb Raider Anniversary
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Jedi_of_Imladris Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 1/16/05 10:27pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	This looks like it's shaping up to be a very, very interesting story! Sad that all the other Solos and Skywalkers are dead though...but Ben sounds really cute and I'm glad Jaina is there to take care of him. I hope they succeed in their mission! I look forward to more! -----signature----- God Bless America To Be an Organa: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/22397215/p1/?6
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JediPrincess83 Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 1/17/05 8:33am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/12
	Can't wait for more It's going to be a strange day when the Skywalker family of the PT meets the Skywalker family of the EU -----signature----- "I find your lack of faith disturbing..." Darth Vader in ANH "I'm a person, and my name is Anakin!" Anakin Skywalker in PM "I'm not afraid to die. I've been dying a little bit each day since you came back into my life." Padme Amidala (Skywalker) in AotC
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