Author Topic: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) A/N 2/28
Jedi Trace  9502 posts
Title:
• SouthEast RSA
• FanFiction Manager

Registered: Dec '99
49339_Deliah Blue (912091)
Date Posted: 1/30/05 8:04am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29 - Date Edited: 1/30/05 8:08am (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi Trace
Great post!!


Compared to the Vong, the Separatists and their droid armies were downright friendly.

Isn't that the truth. plain


Holding her lightsaber out in front of her with her right hand, Jaina reached to her left hip and removed the second lightsaber she kept on her belt, igniting it.

"All right," she murmured, bringing her brother's lightsaber up to join her own. "Let's see what you've got."


Woot! Go Jaina!! cool (Can't wait to see what Anakin thinks about his future granddaughter....)


It was one thing to throw her own fate to the wind, but she wouldn't gamble with his.

Mara had known that, of course.


worried *sniff*


Looking forward to more. grin

 

-----signature-----
"Luke Skywalker kicks ass. Next question." - Tom Taylor cool

"Sometimes bad guys are the only good guys you get." - Leverage
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Jedi_of_Imladris  360 posts
Registered: Aug '04
7574_Rabé
Date Posted: 1/30/05 10:12am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
Great chapter--but sad! Poor Ben, worrying that Jaina might not come back! Makes you just want to hug him and give him chocolate. Nice action with Jaina and the droids--it must be a huge relief to be able to feel your enemies. Can't wait for more!

 

-----signature-----
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
DarthJaina  226 posts
Registered: Aug '02
7717_Padme
Date Posted: 1/30/05 11:59am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
Jaina, she told herself. You have got to stop provoking the Force. laugh Great line!

The thing I love most about this story is how every post reveals more of the puzzle. It's addictive, and I'm dying to know everything, lol tongue I can't wait for their arrival on Coruscant, it's really going to shake things up mischief

 

-----signature-----
"Do you want the short answer, or do you need someone to explain it to you with charts and diagrams?" -Jag and Jaina in DJ
"You're a major now?" "I'm better than that, I'm a holovid star. Not to mention a goddess." -Jacen and Jaina in DW
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
FORCEBlLADE  568 posts
Registered: Mar '03
23760_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 1/30/05 1:31pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
Great. Simply great. Can't wait for the next post.

 

-----signature-----
"Once you start down the dark path, forever will itdominate your destiny." :Yoda
"JEDI CONFLICT" http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/17951268/?13
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Jaina-Solo-Fel  176 posts
Registered: Jul '02
18916_Barriss Offee
Date Posted: 1/30/05 7:24pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
Fantastic! grin There is so much to look forward to; Anakin and Jaina's meeting, Jaina finding out about Padme, the Jedi reacting to news of the future... I am so excited, I hope you post again soon.

 

-----signature-----
"Great One, please exercise your godly powers and summon real food. We're orbiting six hundred kilometers above the greenest planet in the New Republic, and the mess can't seem to find any fresh vegetables."
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Sword-of_the-Jedi  156 posts
Registered: Jun '03
23520_Lightsaber
Date Posted: 1/31/05 7:17am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
That ending was so bittersweet- poor Ben, he's so young and Jaina is all he has left sad I'm just glad they're heading to Coruscant and pressumably the Temple, where they'll be safe.

 

-----signature-----
"Always you shall be at the front rank, a burning brand to your enemies, a brilliant fire to your friends."
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Trickster_Goddess  173 posts
Registered: Jun '03
13771_Padme Concept
Date Posted: 1/31/05 11:04am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
It was one thing to throw her own fate to the wind, but she wouldn't gamble with his.

Mara had known that, of course.
*sniffle* sad

Loved this post, it was great! grin I assume that Mara must have entrusted Jaina with Ben before her death, but I could be wrong, lol. I can't wait to find out what did happen in the future!

 

-----signature-----
"I am a Jedi... like my father before me."
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Solo_and_Fel  827 posts
Registered: Apr '04
49847_H457: Jack Skellington
Date Posted: 2/1/05 4:43pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29 - Date Edited: 2/2/05 1:57pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Solo_and_Fel
Oooh. new post.
fuller reply later.

Later:
Somehow, though, she didn't think blowing up the entire complex was a good idea this time. {face_laugh] Bittersweet Han memory.

She and Ben, on the other hand, were quite attached to that little human quirk. grin These are such good one-liners. The humour probably helps Jaina deal with the pressure of the situation.

All her musings about her family were really nice. Its so strange to think that all of them are gone. But you did a great job of showing how her hope to see them again keeps her going.

For Ben, home began and ended with her. That's a heartbreaking concept.

Great post.

 

-----signature-----
"Hurling black lightning is one thing, but quoting Kyp Durron puts me lower than I ever expected to get." wink
To Suffer & Be Strong: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28435487&brd=10477
Check profile for more fics.
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
VaderLVR64  30945 posts
Title: Manager Emeritus
Registered: Feb '04
49060_Obi-Wan Kenobi (811092)
Date Posted: 2/1/05 4:49pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
What a great story! Not only original, but so well written! I will write more later, but I am supposed to be correcting my daughter's term paper right now! devil I snuck in some computer time! Shhh, don't tell.

 

-----signature-----
R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian flag Never forgotten
Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/
2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
JainaSoloSkywalker  302 posts
Registered: Jul '02
24182_Padme Art
Date Posted: 2/2/05 10:31am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
Great post grin I can't wait to see Anakin's reaction to Jaina and Ben, that's going to be a disturbing meeting, lol tongue wink

 

-----signature-----
"I'm not afraid of dying. I'm afraid of surviving... and getting to the end of the war and discovering that I'm all alone. That everyone I knew and cared for is gone." -Jaina in RD
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
ViariSkywalker  1353 posts
Registered: Aug '02
40102_Anakin
Date Posted: 2/2/05 8:07pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
Another excellent post. I am so anxious to see Anakin meet his grandchildren!

 

-----signature-----
Big Sis of Lady_Rae cool
Veil of Shadows (OT AU, L/M) - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/28500417
The Dark Fire Chronicles (OT AU) - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/11960028
dancing ANGST! dancing
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
pat_skywalker39  296 posts
Registered: Jan '04
17461_Millennium Falcon
Date Posted: 2/16/05 8:41am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
up i want a post

 

-----signature-----
A New Beginning AU Vignette : http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25246024/p1
Dark Betrayal (L/M, Obi-Wan,Vader AU) : http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/26096180/p1
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
FORCEBlLADE  568 posts
Registered: Mar '03
23760_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 2/16/05 3:11pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
Up, please update.

 

-----signature-----
"Once you start down the dark path, forever will itdominate your destiny." :Yoda
"JEDI CONFLICT" http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/17951268/?13
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
astarael  652 posts
Registered: Jan '05
23549_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 2/16/05 11:50pm Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
I agree: We need an update!!!

 

-----signature-----
She doesn't really exist anymore, except every now and then and here and there, in small ways and small things. If we had not come this way, she would not have been, and now that we have passed, she will not be...
She is Astarael The Weeper -Abhosen rose
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History
Vongchild  5097 posts
Registered: Apr '04
6511_Nen Yim
Date Posted: 2/17/05 3:43am Subject: RE: Sanctuary of Time (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Jaina, Ben) Updated 1/29
*bangs on desk* UPDATE! UPDATE! tongue

 

-----signature-----
"Oh," the other clerk said, as if it was nothing new, "You got one of the kid's drawings."
http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/21158399 - Mechanical Dreams
Apprentice to Zonoma
"I'd take a Yuuzhan Vong Warrior over Jacen Solo any day."
Post Reply | Quote Reply | Active Topic Notification | Private Message | Post History