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Indra Registered: Dec '03	Date Posted: 3/26/05 2:06am Subject: RE: Slide (Obi/Siri darkfic, vignette)
	That was beautiful, as all your writing. The tension is palpable throughout the whole story, although you let the reader only gradually become aware of what really happened between the two. I love your attention to detail, like the way Obi-Wan talks to the Rodian or Obi-Wan's thoughts about Anakin as Siri tells him she wants to protect her Padawan from this. It isn't absolutely necessary for the story, but it makes it so much more realistic. Very original and extremely well written. -----signature----- I love deadlines. I love the whooshing noise they make as they go by. - Douglas Adams Picking Every Blade of Truth http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23113954/p1/?1 - collaboration with VaderLVR
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MistiWhitesun Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 3/26/05 5:41am Subject: RE: Slide (Obi/Siri darkfic, vignette)
	[pale] So sad… You did a good job w/ building up reader expectation then surprising them. Keep writing! -----signature----- Fade to Black (Vader finds Scout) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25847641/p1 "I should've known it would come to this."
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 3/27/05 3:44am Subject: RE: Slide (Obi/Siri darkfic, vignette)
	Indra: Yeah. I think that though it's not often written that way, conversations diverge 'off-topic' a lot. I'm glad you liked that aspect. I'm glad you felt the tension as well - I was almost jittery while writing it. Thank you. MistiWhitesun: Thank you. Twists are fun to try (and even better when successful ). -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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SiriKenobi12 Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 3/27/05 5:14pm Subject: RE: Slide (Obi/Siri darkfic, vignette)
	I loved this story the first time I read it and I loved it even more the second time. You have this wonderful way of bringing out the emotions that most other writers don't! This story was so haunting and tragic and my heart just goes out to these two characters. Fantastic job again! -----signature----- I'm fighting a terrible war with writer's block!! Obi-Wan carries Siri's lightsaber in Episode III
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Stargazer-19 Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 3/31/05 2:23pm Subject: RE: Slide (Obi/Siri darkfic, vignette)
	sniffle That was beautiful! I discovered this story a little late but I'm glad I did! Just had to tell you how much I love this story. -----signature----- Magneto: “You wanted us to protect the library. What kind of villain attacks a library? Xavier: You always did stupid things when you were a villain. M: Did I ever attack a library? X: Well, no. M: Exactly. No self respecting villain attacks a library.
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 4/1/05 6:37pm Subject: RE: Slide (Obi/Siri darkfic, vignette)
	SiriKenobi12: Thank you. I'm glad I really made you feel for the characters - that's the most important part of a story, I think. Connecting to the characters. Stargazer-19: Thank you, and that you found it! -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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