Author Topic: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Author's Note 02/11/07)
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Date Posted: 4/4/05 8:37am Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine)
Those were great!! I love the Hal/Luke interaction. I wonder who the traitor is . . .

 

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padawan lunetta  12397 posts
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Date Posted: 4/5/05 12:02pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine) - Date Edited: 4/5/05 9:00pm (1 edits total) Edited By: padawan lunetta
jade51999:

Loook its
LUKIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*grins* It IS!

sometimes i can't help myself..i've been looking for a good L/M fic to read today and then you posted and there he was

kateydidnt:

[i]I am guessing that Hal doesn't know Yoda is still alive. Will Luke still return to see Yoda?
Yes, Hal has no idea Yoda's still kicking, he thinks Ben did all the training. And of course he'll return to see Yoda. Hal's just kind of helping him out while he's around. happy

AvenKiel:

Could this spy be a certain red headed assassin with an attitude? You'll see. wink

I can't wait to see how this turns out!! Poor Luke, so confused and hurt. Hopefully he'll be able to trust Hal eventually! Definitely poor Lukie sad

Aiel:

I just read all of that in one sitting and can I just say, wow? *flushes* Thanks happy

I hope you post more soon. Me too. wink

RedGold:

Aww...poor Luke... he's having issues... YAY! lol! You like that do you? wink

GreatOne:

Poor Luke. He's pretty down in the dumps. And Han really, really, really needs to get rescued! Poor Lukie indeed...and I can't disagree there, Han DOES need rescued. :-D

Stars_Guitar:

I only had an in on it because people, Cracken could keep quiet, but the Force was another matter entirely.
I dunno, that sentence there is worded a lil bit wierd...
Hmm...

Other then that though, it kicked some serious rear. Hm, I always wondered who would have taught Luke how to build his second saber.... Now we know lol! We do indeed. wink

_JM_:

Agree with Hal that Cracken might have some interesting feelings about the Force. All the trouble you can go to in maintaining security and trying to trick the spy and then all it takes is one Force-Vision and someone else knows. Hehheehe exactly!

Could be interesting finding who the spy is. Lord Vader does have his own agents so the question is whether Luke was evading capture (which would suggest Pappa Skywalker) or death (which would suggest old Wrinkles). Definitely one of those two. wink

Liked Hal’s reaction to Corran getting endangered by the plans against Luke. Thanks :-D He sure doesn't like it.

Also liked how defensive Luke was about his plans and his injuries. I get the feeling Luke wants to trust Hal, but simply can’t after the (perceived) betrayals by Yoda and Obi-Wan. Yes, that's been my angle with him. Poor Lukie. sad Thanks :-D

Good that Hal decided to check if Luke was planning on confronting Vader and that Luk was planning only to defend himself if needed. Ooh glad you caught that. :-D

With the lightsaber training I think Hal might get a surprise at just how good Luke is. He managed to do rather well in Vader’s Quest, and that was before any extra training from Yoda. *grins* I'm sure Lukie'll be able to surprise him in a few other ways too. Definitely in saber combat though. happy

NYCitygurl:

Those were great!! I love the Hal/Luke interaction. I wonder who the traitor is . . . Thanks! You'll see... wink

 

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AvenKiel  1340 posts
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Date Posted: 4/5/05 8:54pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine)
When? When When When When Wehn??!!



Can't wait for more!!

 

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Date Posted: 4/5/05 11:30pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine) - Date Edited: 4/5/05 11:31pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Miana Kenobi
*thinks fondly of Obi-Wan fighting Maulie as well*

Two gorgeous men (well, minus the red and black facepaint)... drooling

*pops image bubble* Huh? Oh yeah, yay Hal and Luke.

*Goes back to dreaming about Ewan and Ray*

 

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Jaya Solo  6465 posts
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Date Posted: 4/6/05 10:13am Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine)
Awesome post! I love poor Lukie!

 

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EmilieDarklighter  4710 posts
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Date Posted: 4/6/05 4:45pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine)
Ah, Lukie. So cute you just want to pet him. Or I do, anyway...

Ahem.

Nice post, Luney. Can't wait to see practice with Corran, Lukie, and Hal.

Corran: *absorbs blaster bolt* *is smug*

Luke: *absorbs three* *is smug-er*

Corran: Daaaaaaad...

 

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padawan lunetta  12397 posts
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Date Posted: 4/8/05 5:41pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine) - Date Edited: 4/8/05 5:42pm (1 edits total) Edited By: padawan lunetta
AvenKielL

When? When When When When Wehn??!! Now. wink

Can't wait for more!! :-D

Miana Kenobi:

*thinks fondly of Obi-Wan fighting Maulie as well* lol!

Two gorgeous men (well, minus the red and black facepaint)... If you say so wink

*pops image bubble* Huh? Oh yeah, yay Hal and Luke.

*Goes back to dreaming about Ewan and Ray*
lol! Thanks

Jaya Solo:

Awesome post! I love poor Lukie! Hehehehe thanks happy

EmilieDarklighter:

Ah, Lukie. So cute you just want to pet him. Or I do, anyway... LOL I do!

Ahem.

Nice post, Luney. Can't wait to see practice with Corran, Lukie, and Hal.
:-D Thanks!

Corran: *absorbs blaster bolt* *is smug*

Luke: *absorbs three* *is smug-er*

Corran: Daaaaaaad...
LOL Scary

 

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padawan lunetta  12397 posts
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Date Posted: 4/8/05 5:43pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine)
Here's more

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I was starting to think I was getting in over my head. It was one thing to start training Corran to be a Jedi Knight, after being two decades out of practice, and another to try tutoring Luke Skywalker. But something about the hurt and lost look in his eyes drew me to him, and it didn't hurt that he was rather close in age to my own son. I didn't, however, know enough of him to know where to begin, and after I'd offered to help him with saber combat, and he responded, silence had fallen over the two of us.

Soon, though, I sensed Corran's presence in the Force grow stronger, and realized he'd almost landed. Luke followed me to the docking bay, wishing to meet with his squadron. The first person, or perhaps thing, to greet us, was Corran's astromech, Whistler, being true to his name, barely giving me time to read his translation box. Luke smirked slightly, as I bent to read his message. "Corran hit his head?"

Whistler crooned, rocking back and forth on his wheels.

I stifled a laugh. "Yes, I agree his casing seems too thick for it to knock him out."

He whistled, starting off low before growing in pitch.

"Sounds like you're just going to have to keep a closer eye on him, Whistler."

Corran, who wasn't far behind, rolled his eyes as Whistler crooned his agreement. "That's cruel, dad."

I grinned, resting my hand on Whistler's dome. "We do it because we care, son."

He shook his head, wincing from the movement, and I got to my feet, coming over to touch the bandage on his head. "Let me see it."

Flushing, Corran batted my hand away. "It's Hobbie we're worried about. He's got electrical burns on his hands."

"Dear Force," I muttered, following as Luke made his way to the team of medics already surrounding Hobbie, Kalandria was supervising, and I noticed Janson sauntering over to her, a pathetic look on his baby face.

"I've got this crick in my neck, Doc," he said, presenting his neck to her. "I think a little rubbing would do just the trick."

Kalandria smiled at him. "I'll put Two-Onebee right on it, Janson."

Janson shook his head, sidling up to her. "I'd rather have your magic fingers," he said conspicuously.

"Bring me a real problem," Kalandria told him sweetly, patting his cheek. "And you may have them," she followed the group of medics as they took Hobbie away.

Antilles rolled his eyes, jabbing his thumb at Janson. "Any time you want command back, Luke..."

Luke laughed. “You're doing great, Wedge." He schooled his features into a stern look. "I will, however, be running sims with them first thing in the morning."

Janson groaned, before raising his eyebrows. "Why's that, Luke? Need the early morning advantage over us?"

Corran snorted. "He just wants to show off."

"I'll bet he's rusty," Janson decided, shoving his hands in his pockets. "And needs all the help he can get."

Luke frowned, folding his arms. "Care to put your skills where your mouth is, Wes?"

Janson grinned. "Anytime...after noon."

I coughed. "If his skills are anything like his father's, Janson, I think you're in trouble no matter what time of the day it is."

Luke stared, startled, while Corran gave me an accusing look. "You never mentioned knowing Luke's father before, dad."

Blast. You'd think after twenty years of watching my mouth, I'd know better. I gave him a level look. "There's a time and place for everything, Corran."

Corran's green eyes glittered, his stance challenging. "It is now."

"I think that would be Luke's choice, Corran," I said, meeting his gaze steadily.

My son hesitated slightly, glancing at Luke. He let out a long breath. "Right," he said softly, nodding to Luke.

Luke pursed his lips, looking first at Corran, then Janson and Antilles. Before he could respond, General Cracken came over, taking everyone but Luke and me away for debriefing. Luke looked around the spaceport, than asked quietly, "Can we talk alone?"

I nodded, and we once again returned to the meeting room, glad to find it empty. As soon as the door closed behind us, Luke took to pacing, and I gave him time to gather his thoughts. Whoever had raised him must not have told him much of his father, and though I could certainly see why, it made my mentioning him rattle Luke. After a moment, he cocked his head, fixing me with his clear blue eyes. "How did you know my father?"

"Anakin and I are close in age, Luke," I answered carefully. "We used to compete in tournaments, and I've seen him fly into battle. I'm afraid I spent most of my time on Corellia, however, so I didn't know him very well."

Luke studied me for a moment, considering this. I noticed the haunted look return to his eyes, and by his next line of questioning, I began to understand what it could be that was bothering him. "Do you know what happened to him?"

 

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JediMaster_Fisto  79 posts
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Date Posted: 4/8/05 5:44pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/03/05, Chapter Nine)
wow, me likes this story, luney.

thanks for giving me the link to it! grin

 

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Arcalian  958 posts
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Date Posted: 4/8/05 7:03pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/08/05, More of Chapter Nine)
You'd best be honest in answering that question, Hal....

 

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Date Posted: 4/8/05 8:34pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/08/05, More of Chapter Nine)
Dun dun dun! Oooh, nice pickle you've gotten yourself into, Hal!


LMAO! Janson is just perfect. tongue

Great job, Luney!

 

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Date Posted: 4/8/05 9:15pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/08/05, More of Chapter Nine)
Can't wait to see how Hal answers this one.

 

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EmilieDarklighter  4710 posts
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Date Posted: 4/8/05 9:34pm Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/08/05, More of Chapter Nine)
You are entirely right, that was cruel. You're actually going to make me wait to hear the rest of that question?

Loved the little way you slipped in a hint about how much Hal knows without actually saying anything.

Anakin and I are, Luney? Methinks I spots a clue...

 

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Arin_Atona  1913 posts
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Date Posted: 4/9/05 1:15am Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/08/05, More of Chapter Nine)
Well, the answer to that question will be quite interesting...

 

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RedGold  4293 posts
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Date Posted: 4/9/05 4:59am Subject: RE: I, Rebel (Hal Horn survives to join the Rebellion, AU, Updated 04/08/05, More of Chapter Nine)
Now that's a loaded question.

Quick, Hal, think fast!

 

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