Author Topic: Reversal of Fate (ANH AU L/W L/H Vader,Obi-wan)
darth-hip-hop 
Registered: Dec '04
23971_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 3/16/05 6:31pm Subject: Reversal of Fate (ANH AU L/W L/H Vader,Obi-wan)
Tital: Reversal of Fate
Author: darth hip-hop
Timeframe:ANH
Genres:Adventure,sci-fi,and action
Summary:What if luke and leia were switched at birth
Luke lives with Bail and Leia with the Lars and ANH goes along and i will later do the rest of the trilogy and some post ep6

Dramtis Personae
Luke Organa;Prince of Alderaan,Leader of Alderaanian Knights(Male Human)
R2-D2;Astromech Droid
C3-P0;Protocol Droid
Winter;Rebel Agent, Bodyguard to Luke(Female Human)
Darth Vader;Sith Lord(Male Human/Cyborg)
Leia Skywalker;Farmgirl(Female Human)
Han Solo;Smuggler(Male Human)
Chewbacca;Smuggler(Wookie Male)
Wilhuff Tarkin;Grand Moff(Male Human)
Obi-Wan Kenobi;Jedi Master(Male Human)
Kina Tan;Member of Alderaanian Knights(Female Human)
Ten Kit ;Member of Alderaanian Knights(Male Nikto)
Biggs Darklighter;Red Squadron(Male Human)
Tycho Celchu:Alderaanian Knight(Male Human)
Cal Omas ;Alderaanian Knight(Male Human)
Mia Halma;Alderaanian Knight(Female Human)


Prologue
Month Prior to Batttle of Yavin

Luke Organa walked into his father's secret office in Undergoround Regions of the Organa's vacation house in the Petrified Mounds of the Kiliks.The Kiliks were a insectoid race that lived on Alderaan thousands of years ago.The room where Luke had walked into was a plan room with very few things in just a secret communication network .Mon Mothma ,the leader of the Rebel Alliance, was currently talking to his father when he walked in.Bail noticed his son was in the room and ended his convsation with Mothma

Bail motioned to his son the stairs.They started walking up the stairs.Luke and Bail walked to the balcony over looking the outside of the Organa Ranch.
Outside of the ranch,The remaining member of the Alderaanian Knights were enjoying themselves in the field behind the house of the Organa's.Luke had started a fighter squadron about two standard years ago to serve in the military .

The real reason was he started the Knights was to prove to those people in the Alderaanian Court that he graduated the Alderaan Flight Acadmey because of his skill and not of his father.
''Mon just called to ask me how you and the Knights were handling the Ralltiir situation,''said his father,''I told her you were all still pretty emotionally distrested about what happened there.''
Luke just nodded and wathced his pilots in the field behind the ranch.
''Son,''said Bail,''I know it must be hard but I have to remind you you are the Alderaanian Senator to the Empire and your a celebrity here your private life is always in the headlines .Many people on Alderaan espically in the Court think we are rebels.If that got out we would be exiled from Alderaan.''

Luke scrowled and said when his father mentioned the court a group of wealthy and greedy imperial supporters.Luke then said to his father''Winter and I will be haeding to Coruscant in two days to see what new law the old nerf dung wants to pass now.''

Bail snickered at his son's nickname for the grizzled old man and turned to his son and said ''Mon,all so ,wanted me to have you temporaily disband the Knights.''

Luke's face dropped when his father said this and replied''Why Father ,we need to get more pilots and get back out there and help fight the empire ,We almost had Ralltiir?''

''I know you think you could have beat the Imperial fleet there but the odds were against you and we wouldn't have held the planet for long,''said his father.

Luke began to walk away from his father when Bail grabbed his arm and stopped his son.
''Your Squadron of X-wings was all over the Holonet,Palpatine issued a 500,00 cred reward for the leader of the squadron,For weeks all the Holonet showed was your X-wing flying into a Star Destroyer and flying out and the thing exploding.''said Bail.

Luke began when he pictured his always worriful father watching him on the Holonet blowing up a Star Destroyer.

''Luke ,I need you and Winter for another mission after you both return from the Capital.''said Bail

Luke's face looked very excited and said''a mission.''
with the smile that many Alderaanian girls loved and fawned over.

''Yes,Palpatine has been poring millions of credits ,people and contractors into a major project he has been keeping secret from the Senate.The rebel agent,Bria Tharen, has gone to Ylesia to find out what the Palpatine is building.When you and Winter come back from the Capital you two will be transporting the information back to me .''said Bail

''What will the rest of my squadron be doing while i am gone?''said Luke

''Your Squadron will be moved to Alliance base on Yavin 4 and be moved into a new Squadron until you are ready for them.''


Luke walked into his room at the Organna ranch.He turned the lights on in his room and saw the beautiful Winter laying on his bed.Winter was still in her swimming clothes fresh out of the pond outside of the house.Luke sat down on the bed and grabbed her hand in his
Luke said''hey beautiful.''
Winter smiled at him and asked''So when are we off to the capital?''
''Tomorrow unfortunatly ,''replied Luke
''Hopefully your father doesn't care about the sleeping arangements like he usually does,''said Winter with a smile.

Luke smiled and said ''the first time he hasn't tried to put some one with us to keep us from sleeping with each other.''
Luke and Winter both laughed at Luke's worrisome father'
Luke got up off his bed and moved to the door of his room and shut it and said ''my father should worry about sleeping arangements now.''
Luke shut the lights off and Winter started to laugh

 

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darth-hip-hop 
Registered: Dec '04
23971_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 3/17/05 4:45pm Subject: RE: Reversal of Fate (ANH AU L/W L/H Vader,Obi-wan)
Darth Vader wathced the stars moved by as he looked out of the viewport of his star destroyer.His stardestroyer ,The Revenge, was pursueing the Corellian Corvete,Tantive V, which was supposed to be carring the plans for the Imperial Death Star.The Death Star was a planet destroying superweapon developed by his Lord's scientist.The Revenge was closing in on the Rebel cruiser when Vader noticed a presence on the planet below the revenge.

It felt familair.It felt like something he hadn't felt in years.It felt like Padme.Then Vader shook his head and told himself ''No it cant be .''
Padme died years ago,Vader knew it cause he caused it

17yrs prior

Darth Vader ,Fresh of his battle with his former master on Mustafur,walked out of his shuttle motioning his hand to the few remaining clones that he commanded.Vader walked up the stairs of his father-in-laws's house and moved his hand and the force opened the door for him.Anakin had become more in tune to the force after the battle with Kenobi or that was what his savior,Palpatine,said.

Vader kept walking around into his house till he saw his in-laws,the Nabberries.They looked shooked to see the rumors of Anakin,the sweet boy they knew was true.
Vader walked up to them and said,''Where is my wife ,Ruwee?''

Padme's father replied''She's not here Anakin,she hiding from you she is afraid of what you have become.''

At this remark Vader lifted his father- in-law against the wall not relying on the force but his brute force.

''Stop,''said Jobal as she was hanging on Anakin's arm.
''Your wife is in there ,''said Jobal pointing to the room adjacent to the room they were already in .

Vade put his father-in-law down gently looked at him and walked into the room.Vader walked into the room and saw his wife under many blankets and her sister kneeling by Padme's side .
When Vader walked in ,Padme said to her older sister''Let me talk to Annie rightnow.''

''But he isn't the Annie you used to know,''said Sola.

''Leave me Sister,''Padme strained to say.
Sola walked out of her room and gave Vader a dishearting look

''What do you want ?''asked Padme.
''I wanted to come to talk to you about are child,''said the Sith.

''Our child is dead died during birth and complications are causing me to die right before your eyes,''said Padme.
''Your lying ,I would have felt if the child died,''cried Vader.

''You were so swept up with your version of the force ,you couldn't feel any thing the dark side is weak it clouds you or you would have known of my illnees and the death of your child instead your spies had to find it for you,''replied Padme.

Thoughs began swirling through Vader's head he could hear his mother,Master Qui-Gon,Master Windu and many other jedi telling hims things and then Anakin lost control.

Vader grabbed his wife by the throat and lifted her up in the air she attmepted to scream but the air was leaving her throat.

Padme 's body then beagn to shake and her eyes started rolling up to her head ,Vader put her down on her bed and screamed to Jobal,Ruwee,and Sola.

All three came in saw that she was seizuring .Sola began to cry hysterically and left the room.Vader never saw her again.Padme's parents attempted to revive her but there was nothing they could do .

Ruwee turned around to Vader''Look what you did you monster you killed my babyyou monster leave this place now ,''and Ruwee began to cry also .

Vader walked out of the house of the Naberries and walked to his shuttle.The clone trooper,Alpha,broke the silence asking what happend .Vader ignored him and just walked to his private quaters on the ship.


Present Time

Vader waled down into the bay area of the Revenge and gathered the boarding party and told them their assingment
''Lord Vader ,Palpatine has sent me some information that should make this rebel hunt even better,''said the Intellgnece Director on this Star Destroyer,Ysanne Isard.

''What is it Isard,''asked Vader.

''The rebel who got the information on the Death Star has been reported to be the Leader of the Rebel fighters that attempted to Liberate Ralltiir,''said Isard

''Do you know who the Leader is ,''asked Vader?

''Rumors are it is the Young Senator From Alderaan,Luke Organa,''said Isard.

''Organna has been a thorn in the empire side since its begining ,''relied Vader

This will make this mission more pleasing ,I will finally get my revenge on Organa for all he has done to me over the years Though Vader.

''Lord,''said the Trooper,''the tracotr beam has the Rebel Corvette and the boarding party is ready,sIR.''

''Good work ,Trooper,'' said Vader and he walked over to his troops and began to led them throught the air tunnel to the rebels .

Vader then put his Lightsbaer in the door and cut a whole in the door and his troops began firing at rebels

''This will be enertainging,''Thought Vader.


NEXT: Rebel Hunt



 

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Date Posted: 3/17/05 5:57pm Subject: RE: Reversal of Fate (ANH AU L/W L/H Vader,Obi-wan)
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