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Author	Topic: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 72 updated 09/21
Healer_Leona Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 10/17/07 2:39am Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	Ha, can't help but wonder what Palpatine's inner thoughts wre when discovering Padme was still live. Spectacular confrontation of Xanatos and Siri, though I'm ever so relieved to see the others show up. Phew!! -----signature----- Still crazy after all these years.
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tallzman Registered: May '06	Date Posted: 10/17/07 3:12pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	Another great post. Im glad that siri did not die. She and obi-wan are my favorite characters. Cant wait for the next post.
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LadyLunas Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 10/17/07 10:02pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	Brilliant work. I love the confrontation between Siri and Xanatos. And Obi-Wan's concern is touching. The hardest thing to do in that kind of situation is to sit and wait for others to do what can be done. “I have waited for a long time to bring pain into your husband’s life.” Easily one of the creepiest lines in this story, especially considering the circumstances. And I highly doubt that this will be the last we see of him, even with Skywalker chasing him. He has unfinished business with the Jedi. And Anakin . . . is still Anakin. -----signature----- Darth Real Life hates me. Therefore, I battle him constantly. On hiatus from fanfic. See profile for fics. Padawan of SakuraTsukikage.
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Itachi-Uchiha Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 10/18/07 7:39pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	Great fight scene. -----signature----- Headstrong : http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27188681/p1/?5 Xanatos/Quinlan/Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan/Dooku Updated Sept 28th In Memoriam: Itachi Uchiha
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ClaudiaR Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 10/21/07 8:37am Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	wow! thing are starting to happen more and more! I hope everything will turn out okay! I worry for them! -----signature----- LURK&STALK It takes a specialist to do it right " Getting to stalk around importantly was quickly becoming the best part of pretending to be a Sith. " Obi-Wan in Deptions by Amrita_Glittersong
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LordPullus Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 10/22/07 1:32pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	It has taken me four days to cover this griping story. Please continue very soon, and add me to the pm list. I love the way you portray the characters in this fan fic, and I've always wanted to see what Anakin would of turned out to be if Yoda had a more direct hand in his training. It helped Luke greatly in the OT Saga and I'm glad that you've chosen to give Anakin a chance in this story. -----signature----- If it doesn't kill you, It can only make you stronger "The darkside is not a living I would wish upon any especially the one who've you have taken a hold off Dark one",- Jedi Master Rhaz Quinin
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JediMaster_Jen Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 10/28/07 10:13am Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	Looking forward to the next chapter. It's nice to see Anakin being a bit reckless; I recognize that and I'm glad that Siri and her son are safe. Good work. -----signature----- "Qui tacet consentit"~~ (silence implies consent) Red Wings Rock!!!!!!!
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VaderLVR64 Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 10/29/07 1:28pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	Loved it! Your portrayal of Siri is just perfection! “Your thoughts betray,” Xanatos said softly, stepping closer. Gone were the inhuman features, replace by handsome eyes of midnight blue that could almost entrance. A carefully crafted disguise of concern and compassion covered him. “You love deeply. It makes you weak.” Another step closer. “I will not harm him.” “Who?” she said finding her voice. Alarmed at how close the Sith was, Siri took a few steps back, bringing her saber up. “Your son.” A smile slipped across Xanatos’ pale features. “He will have a good life and power beyond his dreams.” Siri felt anger well up inside her at the meaning. Her son trained as a Sith, standing beside the enemy of all she held true. It would never happen. She would die a horrible death before she let him near Bren’an. Fire lit up her eyes. “Ah, the mother kitling has arrived,” the Sith hissed. “This might be more fun than I thought.” Siri allowed the Force to wash over her, drawing on the distant presences in the Temple, of those who had gone before and stood against darkness. She felt comfort as thousands of voices urged her on. She lashed out with her saber, her arms jolting as violet met crimson. -----signature----- If you have to choose between tears and laughter, remember that laughter burns more calories. Proud New Army Mom - off to bootcamp!
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Ocelotl_Nesto Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 10/30/07 1:43pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	I enjoyed the post. I liked that Xanthos got a nasty surprise from Anakin. Hopefully Anakin is not lured into losing a limb.
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Master_Noi Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 11/3/07 2:37pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 64 updated 10/15
	DountCooku - What good is the Chosen One without his impetuousness. Spiritweaver - Here is another action-packed post for you. bek - Knowing Obi-Wan, he will only do something that will have his wife and Garen lecturing him. obsessedwithSW - I think Xanatos understands a little more about Siri now. She is tough. Independence1776 - I think escape is foremost in Xanatos' mind right now. He knows his master wouldn't be too happy if he took on all those Jedi and failed. smoke20ts - Yes, do not threaten Baby Bear when Mama Bear is nearby and armed with a deadly lightsaber. Yoda might end up being a little remorseful for burdening Qui-Gon with his padawan. dianethx - You know how much I love tormenting you by putting Qui-Gon in peril. Unfortunately, if Xanatos manages to get out of this, he has accumulated a lot more knowledge about the Jedi. OBI-LOVE - I think Anakin is going to be humbled a bit in the coming posts, then again, we are talking about Anakin, so maybe not. Jaira - I love writing evil Xanatos. He has quite a little obsession with Siri, something that probably isn't going to go away. Who would have ever thought that throwing one little drink in his face would earn his eternal disdain. Kitara - Yes, Anakin is still Anakin, just a little more grounded and accepted. Captain Observant - It was extremely hard for me to kill Kitab. I really enjoyed developing his character and the senate just isn't the same without him. Byram and Garen are there to keep Obi-Wan's life interesting. It has been a challenge writing such a different AU, but still attempting to keep everything true to canon, and it has been fun. Glad you are enjoying this story and thanks for reading. Gkilkenny - What? Me make Obi suffer? Only if the muse demands it. Kivas - Yes, Anakin's presence and strength will give Xanatos someone besides Siri and Obi-Wan to obsess over. He did take note. Jedi_scribe - Yes, poor Qui-Gon having to run off to chase Anakin. I bet Yoda's going to hear about this. Healer_Leona - Unfortunately, Padme's survival probably confirms her alliance with the Jedi in Palpy's mind. That may come back to haunt her later. I think Siri is relieved to have everyone charge to her rescue. tallzman - Alas, Xanatos is denied satisfaction again. LadyLunas - Xanatos has lots of unfinished business with the Jedi. Unfortunately, he also has a side quest to see Obi-Wan suffer. Itachi_Uchiha - Thanks. ClaudiaR - Yes, this is just the beginning. Events are going to start changing quickly. LordPullus - I think that Anakin has benefitted greatly from being trained directly by Yoda. He has been on Dantooine just focused on training. I mean, in canon, he was being trained but also went on so many missions. All he has done is train to be the Chosen One, to face off against the Sith. Well, he's getting a little real galaxy experience now so we will have to see how that turns out. JediMaster_Jen - Even Master Yoda was unable to train the podracer out of Anakin. VaderLVR - I think Xanatos now understands that threatening Ben'an didn't exactly help him in this duel. Ocelotl_Nesto - Xanatos definitely was not expecting Anakin. -----signature----- For Such a Time as This ( 09/21/08) A Shrouded Path (08/31/08)
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Master_Noi Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 11/3/07 2:47pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 65 updated 11/3 - Date Edited: 11/3/07 2:48pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Master_Noi
	Thanks to Jaira for looking this over and for helping me brainstorm out of some writer's block. Chapter 65 It was the best place to get a view of the sweeping plains of Dantooine, or at least that was what some older boys had told the five-year-old boy. They had promised him a view of large, magnificent thune and long-necked Piket grazing in the distance. Bren’an wasn’t so sure about that now. They hadn’t told him that the blba trees had so many thorns. Half way up the tree and deciding that it wasn’t worth the trouble, Bren’an began to look for a way down. He slipped, but fortunately, his jacket snagged on some spikes. Scrambling to get a foot hold again, the boy was all too aware that the tree hadn’t seemed so tall when he first started climbing it. The telltale sound of fabric ripping had him reaching for the nearest branch in panic, gashing his hands on those blasted thorns as his jacket gave way. He tried to slow his fall with the Force, but everything was happening so fast, so he chose to just close his eyes. Suddenly, two strong arms were beneath him. He peeked, his face breaking into a smile at the sight of two blue-gray eyes looking down at him. “Daddy!” he beamed. “You could have gotten hurt,” his father said calmly. “Trust me. I know what trouble blba trees can cause.” Obi-Wan sat down in the tall grass, still cradling his son. Bren’an worriedly examined his bleeding hands. “Let me take a look.” Obi-Wan rubbed his thumbs over the boy’s palms, channeling healing energy into the deeper cuts. Though his son was still in need of some bacta, he was satisfied that the bleeding had stopped. “How did you do that?” the boy asked, once again in unceasing awe of the Force. “My mother taught me how when I was younger,” Obi-Wan explained. “Will you teach me?” Bren’an asked. “When you are older.” Obi-Wan tapped his son on the nose with his finger, earning a scowl. Always eager to learn new things, Bren’an didn’t like being reminded that he was still little. “Come, let’s go down by the lake.” Obi-Wan lifted his son up onto his shoulders, holding on tightly to the boys legs as he weaved through the grass. He paused short of the lake, catching sight of three iriaz drinking from the water’s edge. “Look Bren’an,” he whispered. Slowly, he lowered his son down, and father and son crouched low into the grass to watch the gentle, horned creatures. “Grandpa Qui-Gon got one of them to come to us once,” Bren’an whispered. “He said that he used the Force to let them know we weren’t going to hurt it.” “Your grandfather has always been very gifted at that,” Obi-Wan said fondly. “Can you do it?” “I doubt they would believe me. They are very long-lived creatures and some of them probably remember me and Byram.” At the sound of the boy’s laughter, heads shot up in the air. The two Jedi could sense the animals’ panic through the Force. Obi-Wan reached out to the flustered minds, exuding calm. After a moment, the iriaz resumed drinking. “Will I be able to do that some day?” Bren’an asked. “Yes, that and so much more.” Bren’an put one foot in front of the other as he moved toward the warm light he could sense just in the distance. It reminded him of his mom and dad, his grandfathers, and Uncle Anakin. It also reminded him of Dantooine and the training center, of purple grass and white flowers and blba trees. He wished he was there right now with Master Yoda and not in a dark and cold tunnel. He was scared, getting further away from his mother, and he was worried about her. “Hello, Little One. I have been looking for you.” Bren’an took in a deep breath as a tall Twi’lek female with blue skin stepped into his path. His attention was immediately drawn to the twin blasters strapped around her slender hips. Not taking his eyes off of her, he began to back up. “Don’t be afraid. I won’t hurt you,” she said in a gentle voice he didn’t think was usual for her. “You’re worth too much delivered safely.” Closing the distance between them, she grabbed on to his upper arm. “Let go!” Bren’an cried out as she started to pull him along. She ignored him, dragging him even as he allowed his legs to fall out from under him. “You’re not going to make this easy, are you?” she hissed in annoyance. Bren’an concentrated on her mind, reaching out with the Force to touch it. “Let me go,” he said with a quick wave of his free hand. She kept moving. “Let me go,” he tried again with a different intonation, his lip beginning to quiver when nothing happened. Deciding he didn’t know enough about the Force for it to work yet, he gave up and bit her arm. The Twi’lek shrieked and immediately loosened her grip. Using the distraction, he kicked her hard in the knee, eliciting a string of what he figured were very bad words. He couldn’t tell because they were in Huttese, though he thought he had heard Uncle Anakin say them before. Bren’an pulled loose and began to run as fast as he could back toward his mother, but his short strides were no match for the lithe, long-legged Twi’lek. She easily caught up to him and roughly jerked his arm. “Let him go!” The voice came from a side tunnel, speaking with command and authority, and just a bit of anger. “Dad!” Bren’an cried out. The Twi’lek twisted the boy around in front of her and placed the muzzle of one of the blasters to his head. “Don’t come any closer, Senator Kenobi,” she hissed in warning. “Back away,” she snapped at Garen, who was moving in from the side. “You don’t want to harm him,” Obi-Wan suggested in a soft voice. A slight wave of his hand accompanied the words. “I don’t want to harm him,” the Twi’lek repeated. Bren’an could sense strong waves of the Force swirling around the Twi’lek. His attempts had barely even touched her mind, but his father’s influence was strong and demanded compliance. “Put the blaster down.” “Put the blaster down,” she murmured. “Now, let him go.” As she repeated the words, the grip on Bren’an’s arm slipped. The boy knew better than to jerk away. He slipped away, moving quickly but calmly until he knew he was in his father’s reach. Strong arms caught him and held him close. “Are you okay?” Obi-Wan breathed into his hair. “Yes, now that you’re here,” the boy said, wrapping his arms around his father’s neck. “Mom is in trouble.” “I know.” Obi-Wan turned to Garen. “I will let you deal with her.” Obi-Wan darted down the tunnel, still holding on to Bren’an. They soon heard the voices of Corrar and Siri. “It’s me,” Obi-Wan called out, not wanting to meet the end of a protective Jedi master’s saber. Quickly depositing Bren’an into Corrar’s arms, Obi-Wan reached for his wife and wrapped her in his embrace. “You’re injured,” he said softly as he breathed in her scent and reveled in the fact that she was alive, and warm, and that he was holding her. “I think I dislocated my shoulder.” All too aware of her son’s avid and sometimes troublesome curiosity, she whispered, “Xanatos,” into her husband’s ear. “Where is my master?” Obi-Wan asked. “He chased Anakin, who chased …” That was all Obi-Wan needed to hear. “Garen is back that way,” he said. “He’ll take you to safety.” “Where do you think you’re going?” she snapped in irritation. It was too late. He was long gone. *** “The Dark side clouds everything.” Never had those words been more real to Anakin than at the moment. A heavy shroud of darkness rested over Coruscant, and it had seemed to swallow the Sith whole, without a trace. Trudging on ahead was useless and not really wise, he decided. “Deceive you your eyes can, Padawan. Reach out with your senses you must. You must feel the Force around you.” Anakin closed his eyes, letting go of his conscious mind, welcoming the Force. As he tapped into the ancient energy, a smile quirked his lips at the voices of Light in the distance, reminding him he wasn’t alone in the dark. The Force was always with him. It flowed through everything and when he stretched out with his senses, the very walls of the tunnels were his eyes, and he could ‘see’ for miles. Siri holding Bren’an, her father helping the pair toward Garen. Qui-Gon looking for him, Obi-Wan closing in behind. And ahead … a trap. Anakin dropped to his knees just as a crimson blade that would have decapitated him passed overhead. Smiling, he whirled around to meet the Sith’s next strike. “Have to do better than that,” he taunted. “So I see.” The Sith’s eyes took on an eerie glow as he studied his opponent. The Darkness surged, choking the Force around Anakin. He had never sensed it so strong before. It chilled his body and whispered to him. His steps faltered, and the Sith kicked him back against the wall. Anakin countered with a fierce attack of rapid downward slashes that drove his foe down the tunnel. Xanatos feinted then flattened himself against the wall, his blade swiping Anakin’s thigh as the young Jedi charged to meet what he thought was an attack. Anakin dropped to the ground, gritting his teeth as he clutched the wound. He quickly scrambled back to his feet, finding it difficult to put weight on the now-injured leg. “Ready to finish this and die?” Xanatos asked. “Not even close.” It was the Chosen One’s destiny to destroy the Sith, and Anakin was determined to not get killed by the first one he faced. His leg burned, and he was aware that he now lacked the strength for the powerful step-through strikes required of the combination of Shien and Djem So forms he had adopted. He had been trained in Ataru – his aged, hobbling master used it because it compensated for his advanced years. The form had landed Anakin flat on his back in many a spar session. Though, he disliked it and a closed tunnel was hardly the best place to use it, he needed the compromise. Drawing on the Force, he launched himself forward, his injured leg barely skimming the ground as he attacked. The two foes battered each other, Anakin a constant blur of motion, never giving the Sith a moment to recover between attacks. A smile slipped across his lips as he sensed Qui-Gon approach. Obi-Wan wasn’t far behind, and between the three of them, the Sith didn’t stand a chance. But as Qui-Gon came up behind them, Xanatos did something entirely unexpected. Throwing his arm out front, a strong Force push sent Anakin flailing into Qui-Gon, the pair barely having time to disengage their sabers to keep from impaling each other. Anakin struggled to get up, the wind knocked out of him. He began to run until he heard the whine of a speeder back fleeing from the end of the tunnel. The Sith had slipped through his fingers. He slid down the tunnel wall, not caring that he was now sitting in something cold and wet. His body ached all over as fleeting adrenalin left him aware of everywhere the Sith’s boot had made contact. Obi-Wan approached and squatted down in front of him. “He got away,” Anakin forced between clenched teeth. “And I am thankful that my very foolish, very young friend is alive.” Anakin hurt too much to think of a fitting comeback and settled for something that sounded like a growl, but came out as a whimper. “Siri and Bren’an?” “Fine.” “Good,” Anakin said softly. He smiled briefly before biting down on his lip as Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon lifted him to his feet and began to help him back toward a waiting speeder. -----signature----- For Such a Time as This ( 09/21/08) A Shrouded Path (08/31/08)
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smoke20ts Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 11/3/07 3:14pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 65 updated 11/3
	Bren’an concentrated on her mind, reaching out with the Force to touch it. “Let me go,” he said with a quick wave of his free hand. She kept moving. “Let me go,” he tried again with a different intonation, his lip beginning to quiver when nothing happened. Deciding he didn’t know enough about the Force for it to work yet, he gave up and bit her arm. The Twi’lek shrieked and immediately loosened her grip. Using the distraction, he kicked her hard in the knee, eliciting a string of what he figured were very bad words. He couldn’t tell because they were in Huttese, though he thought he had heard Uncle Anakin say them before. I really loved the flashback with Bren'an and Obi-Wan. I also like the way that you have shown a little of both Obi-Wan and Siri's personalities in their son. Quickly depositing Bren’an into Corrar’s arms, Obi-Wan reached for his wife and wrapped her in his embrace. “You’re injured,” he said softly as he breathed in her scent and reveled in the fact that she was alive, and warm, and that he was holding her. Obi-Wan had to have been so relieved to know that both Siri and Bren'an were safe -- for now. Never had those words been more real to Anakin than at the moment. A heavy shroud of darkness rested over Coruscant, and it had seemed to swallow the Sith whole, without a trace. Trudging on ahead was useless and not really wise, he decided. “Deceive you your eyes can, Padawan. Reach out with your senses you must. You must feel the Force around you.” Anakin closed his eyes, letting go of his conscious mind, welcoming the Force. As he tapped into the ancient energy, a smile quirked his lips at the voices of Light in the distance, reminding him he wasn’t alone in the dark. The Force was always with him. It flowed through everything and when he stretched out with his senses, the very walls of the tunnels were his eyes, and he could ‘see’ for miles. Siri holding Bren’an, her father helping the pair toward Garen. Qui-Gon looking for him, Obi-Wan closing in behind. And ahead … a trap. Anakin dropped to his knees just as a crimson blade that would have decapitated him passed overhead. Smiling, he whirled around to meet the Sith’s next strike. Even though he was a little reckless in following Xanatos alone, at least Anakin seemed to remember Yoda's lessons and realize that it was foolish to rush headlong into an unknown situation without using the Force to guide him. The fact that the voices of the Light were there to remind Anakin that he wasn't alone had to be comforting to him. Well done!
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 11/3/07 3:37pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 65 updated 11/3
	At least they didn't die. Xan could have done that with his Twi'lek friend but the Force was with them.... this time. They need to be more careful. Great job with this! As for Bren'an, perhaps they should be teaching him now rather than waiting til he's older. He's their vulnerable point. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 9/22/08 Fragments of Illusion- http://boards.theforce.net/bts/b10475/28456473 updated 8/16/08 Freeze frame - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b10476/27820434 Master to jedidas3 Impeach Bush!
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 11/3/07 5:10pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 65 updated 11/3
	“Let go!” Bren’an cried out as she started to pull him along. She ignored him, dragging him even as he allowed his legs to fall out from under him. “You’re not going to make this easy, are you?” she hissed in annoyance. Bren’an concentrated on her mind, reaching out with the Force to touch it. “Let me go,” he said with a quick wave of his free hand. She kept moving. “Let me go,” he tried again with a different intonation, his lip beginning to quiver when nothing happened. Deciding he didn’t know enough about the Force for it to work yet, he gave up and bit her arm. The Twi’lek shrieked and immediately loosened her grip. Using the distraction, he kicked her hard in the knee, eliciting a string of what he figured were very bad words. He couldn’t tell because they were in Huttese, though he thought he had heard Uncle Anakin say them before. Bren’an pulled loose and began to run as fast as he could back toward his mother, but his short strides were no match for the lithe, long-legged Twi’lek. She easily caught up to him and roughly jerked his arm. Loved that...if one way doesn't work, try another. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. Proud master of several padawans
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Spiritweaver Registered: Oct '07	Date Posted: 11/3/07 5:50pm Subject: RE: For Such a Time as This (Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, others - very AU) - Chapter 65 updated 11/3
	Master_Noi posted: Throwing his arm out front, a strong Force push sent Anakin flailing into Qui-Gon, the pair barely having time to disengage their sabers to keep from impaling each other. Great Chapter! I'm glad the fight worked out OK. Can't wait for more! -----signature----- For me, a page of good prose is where one hears the rain and the noise of battle. ~ John Cheever
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