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Laine_Snowtrekker
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Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens.
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O.K i just this whole thing and all I can say is, I love it!
Can't wait for more~!
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I just read this from the beginning, and I love it. Few Qui/Obi/Ani stories have as strong an Obi-Wan/Anakin bond as yours does, and I think it makes for a unique dynamic. I'm also incredibly intrigued in the way you've had Obi-Wan deviate from the Jedi Code in its strictest form yet still kept him an acting Knight with strong ties to the Temple. Please add me to the PM list, and I look forward to your future updates. :-)
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Ooh, intriguing. Good to have you back. 
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Up!
I've greatly enjoyed this read. I hope to see a new chapter soon. Some mushy Ani/Padme in the near future would be great too 
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Any chance of an update? Pretty please?
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 This story is AMAZING! Wow! Just WOW! I'm speechless.  PM please
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Valairy_Scot Murder, Obi-Wan? Don't descend to his level. There's got to be another way.
Right now that’s the only way Obi-Wan can see to deal with his nemesis. It’s a permanent solution with no back doors. 
They are talking about this, good.
They need to clear the air before confronting Palpatine.
Ah, Plan B is hatched - it's got to be better than murder, right? Though if Palpy should just happen to fall upon a lit lightsaber, I wouldn't complain.
Two heads are better than one. 
Your story is written so well it just draws one on and on - and then suddenly the chapter ends and one can breathe - and start waiting for the next update.
Thank you!  I hope you know the feeling is mutual.
Lincoln_6_Echo WOW! It was such a wonderful surprise to see this lovely story updated! I like it so much!
Thanks! I hope to keep it interesting.
So now Obi-Wan and Anakin are going to confront Palpatine...I can't wait to see it!
Obi-Wan needs to let his shoulder heal first. But then that may become a behind the scenes event. 
The internal battle between his Jedi teachings and those of his former dark mentor raged as he tried to come to some sort of compromise: could the two be blended? Could he fight what might be his final battle and still save himself from turning completely?
These lines are very interesting...could they indicate what "balance to the Force" really means?
I hadn’t thought of it when those lines were written…but possibly.
Please, update soon!
I apologize for the long wait.
Gkilkenny Such a brilliant episode and I look forward to their confrontation
with palpy, but please...please don’t hurt my Obi-Wan too much. Let them beat palpy to a pulp.
We’ll have to see what the muse comes up with.
Great update and thanks for the pm.
Thank you, and you’re very welcome!
jedidas3 I'm still catching up on this incredible story...I am completely blown away by your exquisite writing. Keep it coming!
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
ratna Love the image of 'Grandpa Qui-Gon'!!
He would have made a fantastic grandpa if Jedi had been allowed to marry.
These boys are skating on thin ice, and below that ice is fire!
So true… 
BrightFeather Good update! More, please?
Thank you! Next chapter coming right up.
dianethx It doesn't sound good that Anakin and Obi-Wan are going alone to face Palpatine. I think they do need Qui as backup.
And he may find a way to follow.
For some reason, I found that very funny. They both must know that Qui-Gon is infinitely more stubborn than either one of them.
That and the fact that he can’t fathom being left out of the loop!
Good job. Looking forward to more.
Thanks!
JENNA I know Qui's not exactly Palpy's biggest fan, but like Master Qui said, having an experienced Master couldn't hurt...
In his own way, Obi-Wan is leaving Qui-Gon behind to protect him as Qui-Gon left Obi-Wan behind in the battle with Maul. Both are stubborn to a fault and protective of those closest to them.
True. Qui-Gon's not one to let his padawans get hurt. He's way protective of Obi and Anakin. And considering Palpy's evilness...
And having watched Palpatine manipulate his padawan once, Qui-Gon isn’t anxious to see if the old man has it in him to do it again.
I, for one, am looking forward to the Palpy/Obi/Ani confrontation. I hope they kick some old wrinkly Sith butt! *waves Jedi flag* I hope everything turns out alright... 'Cause I'm getting very worried.
We’ll have to wait and see….
Once again thanks for the PM and this story's moving along wonderfully!
Thank you!
Darth_Drachonus UPDATE please! hehe UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
I know it’s been several months and for that I sincerely apologize. I meant to post sooner but it didn’t work out that way.
silverfighter Oh, this is still so interesting. I'm betting Qui-Gon will follow them in one way or another, though.
You may be right.
Laine_Snowtrekker Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens.
Thanks!
Ganki O.K I just read this whole thing and all I can say is, I love it! Can't wait for more!
I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
Dragonlady I just read this from the beginning, and I love it. Few Qui/Obi/Ani stories have as strong an Obi-Wan/Anakin bond as yours does, and I think it makes for a unique dynamic. I'm also incredibly intrigued in the way you've had Obi-Wan deviate from the Jedi Code in its strictest form yet still kept him an acting Knight with strong ties to the Temple. Please add me to the PM list, and I look forward to your future updates. :-)
Thank you for the kind words. I’m glad your enjoying Life Beyond. It’s been a pleasure to write, to explore what could have been in some areas of the Kenobi/Skywalker team. Thanks for reading!
Jaira Ooh, intriguing. Good to have you back.
Thanks!
Force_Chick Up! I've greatly enjoyed this read. I hope to see a new chapter soon. Some mushy Ani/Padme in the near future would be great too.
Thanks! Anakin and Padme will get their turn. Just not sure which post.
Lincoln_6_Echo Any chance of an update? Pretty please?
I’m so sorry for the delay; the next chapter is coming right up!
charie This story is AMAZING! Wow! Just WOW! I'm speechless. PM please.
Thank you! I’d be happy to add you to the PM list.
Author’s Note: This chapter is much shorter than previous ones, but I thought it best to post it now than to wait. Also, Shmi may (or may not) sound out of character in this post, but keep in mind that she's a mother who has her son's best interest at heart; she means no harm.
Brief Recap of Last Chapter: Obi-Wan and Anakin rescued Shmi from the Tusken Raiders but also had a brush with the darkside in the process. With Qui-Gon and Owen’s help, they returned to the farm with an injured Shmi. Once there, Obi-Wan discovered his daughter had felt the struggle within him at what the Tusken’s had done to Shmi and the ensuing battle to keep Anakin from falling. At Padme’s behest, they boarded a ship for Naboo in order to give Shmi the best possible medical care. Obi-Wan has had enough of Palpatine and his manipulations; he’s decided it has to end once and for all. Despite Qui-Gon’s protest of being left behind, Obi-Wan went to speak with Anakin in regard to his plan.
Chapter 40
"Papaw." A little hand repeatedly tapped the Jedi's arm.
Qui-Gon shifted in his seat, his eyes having closed on their own accord after Obi-Wan left the room. Jamiyan stood on the bed, moving over to look at her surrogate grandfather more closely. His features were lax in sleep, his mouth slightly opened. Raising her small hands she placed one over each of the Jedi's eyebrows and took hold of his eyelids, pulling them open with her thumbs. She giggled when she saw the blue iris's she knew so well.
Eyes stinging, Qui-Gon tried to blink. He slowly came to awareness, his eyes watering while trying to focus on the imp in front of him. He reached up to rub his eyes and clasped his hands over the fingers in his way. Pulling them away from his eyes, he blinked several times before rubbing at them to gain some semblance of focus. When his gaze met hers, Jamiyan clapped her hands.
"You wake!"
A half smile raised the left side of Qui-Gon's lips. "I am now."
"Where daddy?"
"He's talking with uncle Anakin, I think."
She settled herself on her Papaw's lap and snuggled up close to his chest. "Me missed you."
Long arms encircled her, making her feel safe. A chin came to rest on top of her head and she sighed with contentment. "I missed you too, little one."
"Mommy?"
Qui-Gon knew what she was asking. The child had little of her own memories of her mother, but her father had made good on his promise that their daughter would know her mother as if she were still alive. He had told her – many times over – the story of their youth together, how they had married and the day Jamiyan had been born. He told her how much her mother had loved and cherished her. He showed her, through the bond they shared, images and scenes he held close to his heart. And though she knew the story forwards and backwards, there were days when she needed to hear it at least one more time.
Closing his eyes to remember the way his apprentice had often told it, Qui-Gon once again told her of a brave young padawan and her rise to Knighthood. Of a beautiful young woman who had fallen in love with a charming young Knight. Parents who adored their baby girl from the moment they learned of her existence to a young woman could be defiant and fiercely protective one moment and in the next show only love and affection for her husband and child. He told her of her parents character traits and how they endeared them to their friends. He told of her of the perils of missions the couple had escaped from with little harm. Of an uncle who had lost count of the times he’d had to rescue his brother and his brother’s wife from certain disaster. He told her of a young man’s courage in putting the past behind him and moving forward to raise his daughter. He told her all of this and more in a fairytale setting that one her age could understand. When he brought the story to a close, he settled the little girl on her feet and stood, just noticing the young man who stood within the doorway.
"Daddy!" Jamiyan ran the short distance to her father's waiting arms. Picking her up, mindful of his shoulder, he looked at his one time mentor with gratitude.
"You told it perfectly."
"You're welcome."
Obi-Wan looked at the squirming little girl in his arms. "Are you ready to see gramma Shmi?"
Jamiyan nodded. "She better?"
"Not yet, but she will be soon."
X
Cliegg sat at Shmi's side quietly conversing with the now awake patient. Her voice was quiet, almost a whisper. Obi-Wan stood just inside the doorframe, waiting for permission to enter the rest of the way into the room. He didn't want to intrude on his mother's time with her husband. He needn't of worried, Cliegg waved them forward and then left to find something to eat in the ship's small galley.
The young Jedi sat down beside the cot and set Jamiyan on the side of the bed. When Shmi held out her arm to the little girl in invitation, the child leaned forward and gave the older woman a hug. "Better?"
"Almost." Shmi looked up at Obi-Wan and saw the carefully hidden distress at seeing her in this condition and knowing how events could have unraveled. She averted her gaze to her granddaughter and said, "Why don't you go find Uncles Anakin and Owen and have them get you something to eat?"
"Daddy?" the little girl sought permission.
Obi-Wan smiled his consent. "Go on. Anakin should be in the cockpit."
When the child ran out the door, they heard her yell "Uncle Ani, Owen". They both chuckled at her enthusiasm but quickly stopped when Shmi started gasping for air.
"Are you all right?" The young man placed a hand on her shoulder, calling on the force to help her body take in the oxygen it needed. When she was able to take a breath without pain, she nodded.
They sat quietly for some time until the older woman was able to speak. "I wanted to speak with you about Khloe."
"Now isn't the time for matchmaking."
Shmi shook her head 'no'. "You waited to late, son, she's engaged."
Obi-Wan showed no reaction. "As it should be; she deserves to be happy."
Shmi patted his hand in sympathy. "It should have been you."
"That time has come and gone."
Releasing a breath of frustration, the elder woman reached up and grabbed hold of the young man's ear, pulling him toward her. When he yelped in protest, she pulled harder, her voice soft yet firm. "She's engaged, Obi-Wan, not married. You still have time."
Disentangling himself from his surrogate mother, the young Jedi stood from his chair and moved back a safe distance. "I would not willingly break up a potential union. And I'm rather surprised that you would suggest such a thing."
Properly chastised, Shmi motioned for him to sit back down. When he shook his head, indicating that he had no inclination to do so, she replied, "I’m sorry, that was uncalled for. I just want you to be happy again."
The indignant look on Obi-Wan's face softened to understanding. "I am happy." He moved over and retook his seat. "I have my family, but most importantly, I have Jamiyan." He took her hand and held it between both of his. "I see Siri in her every time she smiles or laughs. Every time she looks at me with what is meant to be a reprimand." He quieted and then smiled, finishing on a whisper, "She's her mother all over again."
"But with her father's eyes and a shadow of his cleft chin." Shmi watched him closely, noticing how he lit up from the inside out every time he thought of, mentioned, or looked at his daughter. "I loved Siri as if she were my own daughter, Obi-Wan. I think she would want you to move on." When he didn't answer, she asked, "You're not ready, are you?"
"Perhaps…I don't know. I haven't met anyone that makes me feel the way she did.”
"Except Khloe, but then you haven’t looked either. You’ve put everything into raising your daughter and the leftovers into being the Jedi you are.” Shmi silently studied her surrogate son and truly saw for the first time how much he had grown since landing on her doorstep with Anakin all those years ago. She loved him as if he were her own flesh and blood, as if she had raised him and cared for him since birth. And being that she wasn’t a Jedi, she wanted for him and Anakin the happiness that she had known as Cliegg’s wife and the blended family that came together because of their union in the form of Owen, Anakin, and Obi-Wan.
"This discussion is over."
Not ready to concede the battle for Obi-Wan's future but ready to let it rest for the time being, Shmi nodded her consent. "Then help me with your brother and Padme. They're too stubborn to admit their feelings for one another."
His eyes briefly sparkled with amusement before he changed the subject. "How are you really feeling?"
"About as well as I look, I imagine."
"That's not a good sign then." The young Jedi placed his hand on his mother's forehead in an attempt to soothe the pain she was trying to hide. When she smiled and took a deep breath that didn't cause her to gasp or cough violently, he felt as if he was finally doing something worthwhile. He lingered a while longer until Shmi finally fell asleep and then gently nudged her into a deeper slumber, hoping she would rest until they reached Naboo.
X
Qui-Gon waited patiently for the Temple operator to page Master Yoda. He was concerned about Obi-Wan's plan to confront the Senator and needed to be assured that if he were to remain on Naboo that his padawan and grandpadawan would have the support they needed.
When the wizened Master greeted his one time apprentice, Qui-Gon went into detail about the reason he was calling.
"Reckless he is," Yoda replied. "Regardless of what he's inherited from you, have backup he will."
Qui-Gon glared at him as if to say that this was a serious matter, but the elder Council member didn't appear to notice. "You weren’t there; they came so close to turning. We almost lost them both."
Unexpected grief of what almost occurred swept through the Jedi. Unbidden images of a time long past rose to mind; he couldn’t go through that again. "I don't understand how they are to be an anchor for one another when they both travel the same path."
"An anchor Obi-Wan became for young Skywalker."
"Because of my intervention, if I hadn't been there…. That is what concerns me most."
"Set up to guide one another they have been. Interchangeable it is for one to be the calm in the storm that will shine when all around them darkens. Trust in the force you must, Qui-Gon."
"Yes, Master."
"Worry not, young one. Be there for them we will." With those last words, the signal was disconnected.
Shutting off the comm. unit, Qui-Gon whispered, “As will I.”
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Update 10/2/08- Chap. 40- Life Beyond the Code (Obi-Wan/Anakin) - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20820324 Update 9/3/08- Chap. 26 - Not Myself - (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Oc's) - Before the Saga Update 9/3/08 - Part 6 - Strength to Begin Anew
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I'm so happy to see this updated. A lovely update - a calm before the storm that is sure to come.
Yoda is always so certain, isn't he?
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Darth_Drachonus UPDATE please! hehe UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
I know it’s been several months and for that I sincerely apologize. I meant to post sooner but it didn’t work out that way.
[mindtrick]-waves hand covertly using mind trick- You have no reason to apologize. You had other things to do. You will make me double fudge and nut brownies, a whole batch, just for me. [/mindtrick]
Excellent update. Looking forward to more. Welcome back!
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YAY!! An update!! I am so happy you did!
Nice chapter and I don't think Shmi was out of character; she looked like as the concerned mother she is.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
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*bounces* UPDATE!!! And a good one too! YAY!
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I liked how Qui-Gon told the girl about her mother. Very sweet.
I worry about Obi-Wan but at least Yoda and Qui will be there for him.
Good job.
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I'm excited to see what happens next. Update soon please. 
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Excellent, so happy that you updated. 
Now some action would be good.
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