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LordNeo Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 7/22/05 8:36pm Subject: Anakin's Betrayal - Date Edited: 8/21/05 9:08pm (6 edits total) Edited By: LordNeo
	Title: Anakin's Betrayal Rating: PG-13 (It might be a little graphic and dark for some people shrugs) Author: LordNeo Genre: Action/Adventure Time frame: Revenge of the Sith Characters: Anakin Skywalker Im removing my stories, for security reasons, sorry -----signature----- With enough soap you could blow up the whole world. On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone drops to zero. Chuck Palahniuk = Amazing I am writing a novel. It is going to be awesome.
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VadersMistress Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 7/22/05 9:21pm Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Chilling. Great job. The insight to Anakin's character as the events unfold is wonderful. -----signature----- Harry Potter > Twilight Would I rather be feared or loved? Um... Easy, both. I want people to be afraid of how much they love me. Persia pwns your face.
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Ludo_Kressh Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/23/05 4:23am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	This Is good! A bit gruesome...but very good! The insight into Anakin's character after he turned...I always wondered what went through his mind...poor younglings, though. -----signature----- ~hopeless member of the Official General Grievous fanclub~ VP of the Chewie and Han fanclub Be thankful, Viceroy...you have not found yourself in my grip! Everybody quiet! I have a call to make...
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Grievous_FanGirl Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/23/05 5:17am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Aww, thats so sad.....So sad. All those inoccent kids! cries Very good story Neo, I like how you made it in his point of view. Can't wait to see whats comin next....except poor Shaak Ti, she was one of my favorite Jedis. Cries -----signature----- Crazy Member of the Official General Grievous Fanclub Sorry ladies, I was the first fangirl for Grievous here. Fanfic Links in my Bio. http://lady-kopaka.deviantart.com/
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LordNeo Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 7/23/05 5:40am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	thanks everyone, and yes my story does get a little gruesome it is my darkest one yet. more today!!!! -----signature----- With enough soap you could blow up the whole world. On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone drops to zero. Chuck Palahniuk = Amazing I am writing a novel. It is going to be awesome.
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Aya-Na_Bashu Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 7/23/05 7:08am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Waiting patiently for more. -----signature----- My fics are in my bio. Proud member of ISPLN Step away from Qui-Gon and no one will get hurt!
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Clone_Lord1138 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 7/23/05 7:26am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Great job Neo. Very good job capturing all of Anakins anger, just fantastic. I remember that Shaak Ti died at the hands of General Grievous in one script, and then they changed it so Anakin would kill her but cut both of those out. You obviously are going with the second one. Can't wait for your adaptation of Shaak Ti's death Clone_Lord1138 out. -----signature----- 'Vaderesque' Moments in Rots "You underestimate my power!" "You WILL try!" "Don't Make me kill you!" "This is the end for you my master!" "I HATE YOU!" "YOU WILL NOT TAKE HER FROM ME!" "LIAR!" ~Member of the Official GG and Darth Maul clubs~
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LordNeo Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 7/23/05 8:14am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal - Date Edited: 8/21/05 9:08pm (1 edits total) Edited By: LordNeo
	(no message) -----signature----- With enough soap you could blow up the whole world. On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone drops to zero. Chuck Palahniuk = Amazing I am writing a novel. It is going to be awesome.
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Ludo_Kressh Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/23/05 8:28am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	I like this story! The way Master Ti accepted her fate...like a true Jedi. The fight between Ani and Cin...sensational! I liked the line "Good-bye Cin." I'm a little worried, though, to me this doesn't sound like it's going to be a long fic, but I hope you prove me wrong! Please, I can't wait for more! -----signature----- ~hopeless member of the Official General Grievous fanclub~ VP of the Chewie and Han fanclub Be thankful, Viceroy...you have not found yourself in my grip! Everybody quiet! I have a call to make...
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LordNeo Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 7/23/05 8:50am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Thanks!!! its 23 pages long in word its 12 font just about 15,000 words, so in a paperback it'd be about 30-40 pages later I have an 8 page Duel so I cant wait to post that More Soon! -----signature----- With enough soap you could blow up the whole world. On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone drops to zero. Chuck Palahniuk = Amazing I am writing a novel. It is going to be awesome.
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Clone_Lord1138 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 7/23/05 4:32pm Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Great update Neo! I love the battle scenes. Can't wait for the huge battle scene! I'm guessin its the end battle with obi vs. ani rite? Clone_Lord1138 out. -----signature----- 'Vaderesque' Moments in Rots "You underestimate my power!" "You WILL try!" "Don't Make me kill you!" "This is the end for you my master!" "I HATE YOU!" "YOU WILL NOT TAKE HER FROM ME!" "LIAR!" ~Member of the Official GG and Darth Maul clubs~
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Shadowknight1 Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 7/23/05 4:45pm Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Great stuff bro, though you know my opinion already. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/19194561/p16 Star Wars The Twilight Saga Part II: The Infinite Darkness Coming Soon, Part III: A Hope Rises
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Grievous_FanGirl Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/23/05 7:23pm Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Oh wow. So good!!! Poor Shaak Ti, but I agree with Kressh, she died like a TRUE jedi. But I am not say'n the others were true. But you get my meaning. Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!! -----signature----- Crazy Member of the Official General Grievous Fanclub Sorry ladies, I was the first fangirl for Grievous here. Fanfic Links in my Bio. http://lady-kopaka.deviantart.com/
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LordNeo Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 7/24/05 10:24am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	Yes the 8 page duel is between Anakin and Obi-Wan Update today!!! -----signature----- With enough soap you could blow up the whole world. On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone drops to zero. Chuck Palahniuk = Amazing I am writing a novel. It is going to be awesome.
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LordNeo Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 7/24/05 10:27am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal - Date Edited: 8/21/05 9:09pm (1 edits total) Edited By: LordNeo
	(no message) -----signature----- With enough soap you could blow up the whole world. On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone drops to zero. Chuck Palahniuk = Amazing I am writing a novel. It is going to be awesome.
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Clone_Lord1138 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 7/24/05 10:47am Subject: RE: Anakin's Betrayal
	NOOOOOOO!!!! You can't stop there! Great update!!! I love the part where Anakin says 'the message was garbled, he said you would be in pieces,' and the part where Nute soiled himself, classic! Cant wait for the 8 page duel! Clone_Lord1138 out. -----signature----- 'Vaderesque' Moments in Rots "You underestimate my power!" "You WILL try!" "Don't Make me kill you!" "This is the end for you my master!" "I HATE YOU!" "YOU WILL NOT TAKE HER FROM ME!" "LIAR!" ~Member of the Official GG and Darth Maul clubs~
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