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lindemacil Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 9/9/05 7:54am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight - Mod Dare challenge entry!
	Wow! This was awesome, Jennifer_Lyn! I could hardly believe it when I saw the dare, but you made it work wonderfully. Hard to imagine that there's actually chemistry between Kenobi and Ventress! Excellent job! -----signature----- - Lindy - "What I say is not half as important as what I don't say." A Year and A Day, a Dear Diary Challenge: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/26653402/p1/?2
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VA_Parky Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 9/9/05 10:57am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	That was great!! It had everything - suspense, humor and even angst. I really liked it - the last few lines were especially touching. -----signature----- Currently on hiatus Awash in Broken Promises (RotS AU): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23913704/p1/ Our 1st - Matthew - arrived 1/1/08
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Kynstar Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 9/9/05 11:04am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	Ohhhh that artwork is sweeeeeeeeeeet! Bunnies? More bunnies nibbling at your ankles? -----signature----- Paddy sis to t_s & SarkaVrae/Master to hyperspace_police Member of Rebel Legion and Jedi Assembly (Kynstar Lans) Only thru fear, hatred, and pain will the true power of the Force be revealed. See stories/viggies in bio
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widow_skywalker Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 9/9/05 11:08am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	At first I was a little skeptical of Obi/Asajj...But once I started to read, I was sucked in. The only distraction was I kept thinking of Starbucks and coffee when I saw Venti.... Curious to read the other challenge piece, though. -----signature----- What a trophy is a cup full of tears? Pittsburgh Steelers- SuperBowl XL Champions http://s9.invisionfree.com/Jello_Anarchy
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Jennifer_Lyn Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 9/9/05 11:36am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	Darn this dare and all of you as well! There is a post going up shortly for the first part of an (I cannot believe I'm typing this) Obi-Wan Kenobi/Asajj Ventress post-RotS short story. Thank you all so much for your kind words. I just follow the Obi-shaped muse on my desk and he tells me what to write! -----signature----- Forever in search of the perfect Obi-Wan quote but it remains something... elsewhere. Elusive. OC revolutionaries never die, they just go into hiding. A Stirring in the Bones - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/24526219/p5 - completed ages ago
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JediNemesis Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 9/9/05 12:35pm Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	Beautiful answer to an evil dare. I have to say, if someone had told me Obi/Asajj could be written believably I would've paid their taxi fare to the psychiatrist. But this is fantastic, and I really love how you incorporated the SiriWan at the end. Very nicely written, and I did laugh at the Grey One's passing right next to them and not noticing. Great work! Will check in on the longer fic Nem -----signature----- BeTS Best Author '08 NEW Bad Dreams - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b1/29893091 Eleven Summers - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b1/29657584 Into The Shining Day - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b1/29224914
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BrentusofGath Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 9/9/05 7:23pm Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added! - Date Edited: 9/9/05 7:25pm (1 edits total) Edited By: BrentusofGath
	Very interesting... but very good. I liked the fact they both had the same thoughts about undercover work Liked the idea of the Grey One too, but it seemed like if there was only one, Kenobi and Ventress together could beat him. But all in all, well thought out and put together. EDIT: I liked the art too! -----signature----- In time or so I'm told, I'm just another soul for sale, oh well Feel it in my bones when you break my back, break it just to watch me bend Why'd you have to go and Let it Die? -Foo Fighters http://conscienceoftheking.blogspot.com/
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 9/9/05 8:41pm Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	I liked the artwork! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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aabbccdd Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 9/9/05 9:30pm Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	like everyone else said. wow - you made this really work! i was also skeptical - but it was great!!!
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Lovely-in-Orange Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 9/9/05 11:20pm Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	Great story! I liked the art too. I also thought that she wasn't having to imagine anyone (But she wouldn't admit it). Something about this part especially made me actually really feel for her: Jennifer_Lyn posted: “It is a light in the darkness.” He whispered. She turned, tears in her eyes and a look of confused wonder on her face. -----signature----- Ms. Star Wars 2009 Ties of Loyalty: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23926858/ - Imperials/OCs/Quinlan/Khaleen A Boy and His Droids: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20555406
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Jennifer_Lyn Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 9/10/05 8:24am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	JediNemesis: So glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading! You have the Obi Workshop to thank for the Siriwan stuff! BrentusofGath: Yeah, I realize that they could have figured another way out, but then I wouldn't have had a story would I? Hence the "they'll find us if we kill him" angle. VaderLVR64: Thanks! I couldn't help it. I can't believe I'm actually an Obi/Asajj shipper. aabbccdd: No one was more skeptical than the author! Thanks for reading! Lovely-in-Orange: sigh Yes, Obi-Wan has faith that she could turn toward the Light side if she really wanted to. I felt like this was a way of letting her know that and somewhere inside, she understood she had a choice. -----signature----- Forever in search of the perfect Obi-Wan quote but it remains something... elsewhere. Elusive. OC revolutionaries never die, they just go into hiding. A Stirring in the Bones - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/24526219/p5 - completed ages ago
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rhonderoo Title: Former Head Admin Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 9/15/05 8:23am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	This was lovely1 Bravo for making it so believable! -----signature----- DT421 FYI: You don't deal with me. I deal with you. Damned right the Jedi's fire has gone out of the universe. I was the bad-ass Class C extinguisher who snuffed them. - @darthvader (Darth Vader on Twitter)
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raisedbywolves Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 10/11/05 1:57am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	Oh my! This was unexpectedly great. It reminded me weirdly of some of the plot twists in Shakespeare's people-in-disguise comedies... Ah, what a good read. -----signature----- What She Saw: http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/21886008/?0 Proud (if erstwhile) padawan to Master Darth Pixel. It's not Darth Real Life, actually - I prefer to think of it as my very demanding Jedi Master.
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stormqueen874 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 10/11/05 2:34am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	huffs at self And just where was I when this was first posted!? grumbles Absolutely lovely work, J_L! I think you may have just converted me to the Obi/Asajj pairing; it's certainly different, for one. (Normally I don't like Obi with anyone; he just doesn't strike me as that kind of guy, but you made me believe that it could work! No mean feat, let me tell you!) The night grew long as they sat in the all-night diner drinking caff, eating crumble and weaving tales of their childhood and youth that both knew would fall apart when touched by the approaching dawn. Best line in the whole story, J_L; it gave me chills. I love the idea of their tales being like spiderwebs, shattering in the morning light... such a vivid image! Bravo, ma dear, and lovely artwork to boot! Stormqueen -----signature----- Master to kenobiwanobi Shadows of the Future: TPM timetravel AU, Obi/Ani/Qui bonding http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24413082/p1/?0
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Ladynaye Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 10/11/05 7:43am Subject: RE: Just For Tonight (Obi/Asajj) Dare challenge entry! Artwork added!
	OK, I want more stories with these two in it!! -----signature----- The Sith Code: Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength. Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me. I am a Dark Lady of the Sith
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