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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 11/6/05 6:30pm Subject: Don't Lie (A song from Ani's POV) - Date Edited: 11/7/05 3:49pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Alley_Skywalker
	Title: Don't Lie Author: Alley_Skywalker Gener: Song, Angst Sumary: End of ROTS. Anakin thinks Obi-Wan has been lying to him all along... Notes: This just kinda came together while reading a fic. It's rather short... Don't Lie Don’t you think that I can handle myself Or do you just think me not good enough And you are perfect so I’ve heard And they worship you You know there was a time I did too Stop Don’t lie Just let me say good bye Stop right there No more reasons to pretend you care Oh tell me were you ever on my side Did it matter how I felt or when I cried He told me that you never cared That’s just so not fare Well I’ve been meaning to tell you this Stop Don’t lie Just let me say good bye Stop right there No more reasons to pretend you care -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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oqidaun Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 11/6/05 10:27pm Subject: RE: Don't Lie (A song from Ani's POV)
	This has a nice flow to it. Very rhythmic. Nice structuring. Bravo!! -----signature----- . . . . I'm so bad, I banned myself.
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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 11/14/05 2:06am Subject: RE: Don't Lie (A song from Ani's POV)
	Not bad. -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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obi_webb Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 11/14/05 5:06am Subject: RE: Don't Lie (A song from Ani's POV)
	good idea! certainly something i haven't seen tried around here! well done! -----signature----- Jedi Consular- Acolytes of Revan A Jedi's Sacrifice- my kotor fic http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/22040803/p1/ LOAD THE SPACESHIP WITH THE ROCKET FUEL.. LOAD IT WITH THE WARRIORS!-- Ultimate Warrior
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MoeTharen Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 1/14/06 12:42am Subject: RE: Don't Lie (A song from Ani's POV)
	I'm with obi_webb. I ve never seen that done before! It was very intersting. The words flow good too. -Commander Tharen- -----signature----- Jesus Freak
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 1/14/06 12:54am Subject: RE: Don't Lie (A song from Ani's POV) - Date Edited: 5/13/06 12:27pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Alley_Skywalker
	Thanks. Check out hero of Love. it's actually better then this one.. -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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