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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 11/27/05 12:21pm Subject: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!) - Date Edited: 11/30/05 8:24pm (5 edits total) Edited By: Alley_Skywalker
	Title: Remember... Author: Alley_Skywalker Gener: Angst, songfic Characters: Anakin, Obi-Wan Timeline: End and post ROTS Summary: End and Post ROTS in Obi-Wan's and Anakin's POVs. Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars. The song "Remember When It Rained" belongs to Josh Groban. Notes: This is just a sad little song fic to "Remember When It Rained" in both Ani's and Obi's POVS. Enjoy! Anakin's POV Wash away the thoughts inside That keep my mind away from you. No more love and no more pride And thoughts are all I have to do. It’s really no use denying it anymore. I can blame you all I want but the reality remains. You’re the one I always held to. You’re the one person whom I longed to please…except for her. And I thought that we were inseparable, unbreakable, undefeatable. But now…all this hate. All this fear. Have my sacrifices been for nothing? Why did you leave that day? Why didn’t you stay at the time that I needed you most? And now I’ve lost everything. My whole life has been upside-down. My whole world has been shattered by my own hand. I lost her. My love! My angel! How I wish that she could forgive me. But now she probably hates me. Why? Why did you turn her against me? And I lost you...my mentor...my father figure...my best friend...my brother. Ohhhhhh Remember when it rained. Felt the ground and looked up high And called your name. Ohhhhhh Remember when it rained. In the darkness I remain. And now as I fall so close to the red sea of lethal lave I’m cold inside and it rains inside my heart. You’re yelling something. Something about me being the Chosen One. Something about the Sith and leaving the Force in darkness. Damn it why do you just stand there? So I call you’re name. I call with my mind, pleading with you. Obi-Wan! Please, please help me! But you don’t hear me. Or maybe you just don’t want to hear me. But you pick my lightsaber and start walking away. No! Obi-Wan, please don’t leave me here! You say that I’m like a brother to you. You say you love me. Then why are you walking away, Obi-Wan, why? I’ve always been there for you. Please, please be here for me at least this one time. But you’re already gone and the flames consume me. And I’m alone in the darkness. Obi-Wan's POV Tears of hope run down my skin. Tears for you that will not dry. They magnify the one within And let the outside slowly die. I still think of you. Even though months have passed I still think of you. And when I look up at the starry sky I can’t resist the tears. I hope that one day you will see the light, my friend. I hope that you will turn away from the darkness which has consumed you. I remember the things I wish I could forget because it hurts to remember the days when you were by my side. The days when I could turn to you with any request. The days when you’d help me through anything. And I would do the same. It hurts to remember the way you’d smile and the way your eyes would sparkle because then I am forced to remember just how much I’ve lost. I’m slowly dying without you, Anakin. Oh what in the galaxy possessed you to think that I would ever betray you like you claimed that day when my life went to hell? Ohhhhhh Remember when it rained. I felt the ground and looked up high And called your name. Ohhhhhh Remember when it rained. In the water I remain It rained yesterday. Tatooine hadn’t seen rain for two decades. I remember how fascinated you always were by rain. I went outside and felt the rain fall, soaking my cloths and my hair. I looked up to the grey sky and called your name. Both out loud and with my mind. My only answer was silence and darkness. And then I wondered: how could the Force be so cruel? How could it take away from me the center of my universe. It’s terrible enough to loose the Order, my whole way of life. But to loose you is unbearable. My padawan...my son...my best friend...my brother. -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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light- Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 11/27/05 2:54pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	I looked up to the grey sky and called your name. Both out loud and with my mind. My only answer was silence and darkness. awwww that was greeeat -----signature----- Oh my sweet holy darkside! Who made that man a gunner? - Dark Helmet I did sir. He's my cousin. - Major Ass**** - Spaceballs What a wonderful smell you've discovered! Padawan Learner of Master Dahlia_Santary
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SakuraTsukikage Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 11/27/05 5:32pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	That was awesome, really. I loved the way you paralleled both Anakin and Obi-Wan's thoughts and the love you showed between them. I've always thought about using that song as a songfic for Star Wars, and I think you managed it brilliantly. Great job! -----signature----- Never tell me the odds. Rebellion Rising-- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=26988897&brd=10476
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 11/30/05 4:54pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	light- Thanks! I was hoping that that would come ut touching SakuraTsukikage OMG when I heard that song I was like "I HAVE to do a SW songfic to that!" I always wanted to believe that even after all of that crap that happined that Obi-Wan and Anakin still loved each other..and i do believe it That boys are just so fun to write about! -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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aden Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 11/30/05 7:05pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	It rained yesterday. Tatooine hadn’t seen rain for two decades. I remember how fascinated you always were by rain. I went outside and felt the rain fall, soaking my cloths and my hair. I looked up to the grey sky and called your name. Both out loud and with my mind. My only answer was silence and darkness. That is just about the angstiest paragraph I have read today! I've never heard that song before but you know I really like your fic. It was genious. -----signature----- Padawan to Aya-Na_Bashu http://s9.invisionfree.com/Jello_Anarchy/index.php?showforum=37
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 11/30/05 7:09pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	That was beautiful! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 12/2/05 9:01pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	aden: Well you know angst is my specialty And the song is called "Remember When It Rained" by Josh Groban (I might have already mentioned that...) BUt yea it's a really pretty song VaderLVR64: Thanks I hoped that it'd be touching. -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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oqidaun Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 12/2/05 10:49pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	Nice imagery. Very provocative. -----signature----- . . . . I'm so bad, I banned myself.
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MoeTharen Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 1/14/06 12:40am Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	Beautiful! The song and fic blended quite nicely! I loved the reference to rain. It was great! -Commander Tharen- -----signature----- Jesus Freak
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Ani_Lover Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 4/20/06 10:18pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	Wonderful Alley!!! It really made me sad...... You really did wonderful with Obi and Ani's POV. It was beautiful Alley. One of your best. -----signature----- Are You Still Faint From The Run? Or Was It My Kissing Expertise? - Edward Cullen "I Have Problems With My Tongue, When I Concentrate Really Hard, It Sticks Out." - Hayden Anakin, Can I Touch Your Lightsaber?
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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 4/23/06 10:48pm Subject: RE: Remember... (Songfic to "Remember When It Rained" End and Post ROTS Obi and Ani angst!)
	sniffs I don't usually read songfics so I'm really glad I broke that rule this time. Well not really glad - this was so sad! But you know what I mean... You say you love me. Then why are you walking away, Obi-Wan, why? Good question. -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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