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Changing an Order (Siriwan, A/P, RotS AU - Completed: 5/8) Sequel is up!
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Jaya Solo
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12/5/05 12:51pm
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Changing an Order (Siriwan, A/P, RotS AU - Completed: 5/8) Sequel is up!
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5/29/06 4:18pm (50 edits total)
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Jaya Solo
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Title: Changing an Order
Author: Jaya Solo
Timeframe: After Secrets of the Jedi through Revenge of the Sith
Characters: Obi-Wan Kenobi, Siri Tachi, Anakin Skywalker, Padmé Amidala and miscellaneous other Jedi
Genre: Siriwan, AU, one of those all-around fics
Summary: Siri does not die from Magus’ shot, and Obi-Wan and Siri explore a relationship.
Notes: My evil former padawan Jaina_Solo_15 challenged me to write a Siriwan fic… and this is the result. Blame it on her.  Dedicated to my muse.
The sequel, Restoring Order is up! 
New Post Schedule: One post a week on Monday!
Cover Art by Jaina_Solo_15
“We could always leave the Order again,” Obi-Wan mused as he nuzzled his nose into her neck.
“That didn’t work well for us the last time we tried,” Siri responded, a hint of sarcasm in her voice.
“Well then, what are we to do? We cannot continue to ignore our feelings. I think last night made that perfectly clear.” Obi-Wan smiled and lifted his eyebrows slightly, causing Siri to blush at his implication.
She had almost died at the hand of Magus. In fact, the pain from the blaster bolt made her think she was dying as it ripped through her chest. The pain almost made her wish she had. The bright side to that whole ordeal was that Obi-Wan had insisted on taking care of her as she recovered. Many would attribute how the blaster bolt missed her vital organs to luck, but she trusted in the Force for answers. There must be a reason that she was spared from death.
Obi-Wan, once again, was forced to face the death of a loved one when Siri was shot, but this time, thankfully, he did not lose one so close to him. The feelings and memories associated with Qui-Gon Jinn’s death flooded his mind as he saw Siri take a hit. He knew for certain that he had lost another friend, but by some strange trick of the Force, Siri had not died from her wound.
While Obi-Wan sat outside the Healer’s ward, waiting on news of Siri’s condition, his had mind wandered to the past. He had fallen in love with Siri, but they could never be together.
But the Force had given her back to him…
Feelings from the past mixed together with feelings of relief at a life not lost. One thing had led to another… and now Obi-Wan and Siri were forced to deal with the repercussions of their actions.
“Surely we can’t be the first to have done this,” Siri remarked ruefully.
“I’m sure we aren’t, but that doesn’t excuse our actions either.” Obi-Wan sighed. What were they to do? They were in the middle of a war, a war where they were losing members faster than padawans could be trained. The Jedi could not afford to lose any more Jedi, especially them. Obi-Wan hated to think more highly of himself than he ought, but the Jedi could not afford to lose two seasoned Jedi this far into the war. “We could…”
“We could what?” Siri asked, intrigued by the way Obi-Wan trailed off.
“We could force them to deal with this issue.”
Siri was quiet for a moment before she replied, “I’m afraid they will deal with this issue. We will be expelled.”
“I’m afraid they cannot lose more Jedi. We are at war, Siri,” Obi-Wan reminded her.
“That doesn’t mean they will bend the rules for us. They will force us to separate or leave,” Siri replied, logic crowding out any hint of hope from her head.
“I don’t wish to separate nor to leave. I cannot leave the Jedi, nor can I bear to lose you again. They will not take you from me,” Obi-Wan whispered, determination evident in his voice.
“We could hide…” Siri replied in an equally hushed voice.
“We could never hide this from them. Master Yoda knew how I felt for you the last time, and I can never hide this from Anakin. He knows me far too well. We will face this as Jedi and go before the Council,” Obi-Wan declared.
Siri concluded that Obi-Wan’s logic seemed sound, but would the Council agree with them?
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Jaina_Solo_15
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*bows* Thank you for indulging my evil plot bunny, Master.
What a sweet, mushy way to open the fic.  I love how Obi-Wan refuses to let Siri go again, and I really love the whole plot bunny for this fic. Tis awesome.
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DarthMousche
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I'm intrigued. I do like the idea of them facing the Council instead of trying to hide their relationship.
Go, rebel Obi!
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jacen200015
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12/5/05 2:56pm
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Obi brings up some good points 
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They will not take you from me
That was eeriely like Anakin's "You will not take her from me" from ROTS.
I like that Obi-Wan is willing to face the council instead of trying to hide his love for Siri.
Great job!!
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Can hardly wait to see what happens next!
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Hmmmm....interested to see where this one goes...please update soon! And I'm glad she forced you to write a SiriWan, we can never have too many!
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Defiantly looks interesting.
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AP4EVER
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This has caught my eye. I'm anxious to see what happens next. 
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This is great, please write more. I like Siri with Obi the best.
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Jaya Solo
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Wow! I'm absolutely amazed by the number of responses I've received so far! So far the story is 32 pages long... and it's still growing. So don't worry about getting more. You'll get it soon.
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See how happy you've made me Jaya
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Stella_Ripple
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Oooh nice job! I love Siriwans, and haven't read one in ages! So to come across such a nice one was just what I needed
I like how they're going face the issue- I'll be interested to see how Anakin and especially the Council reacts!!
So glad to hear there's more in stock!!!
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Inara
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I wish the Siri/Obi relationship could have worked out. They're such a great couple, and you showed them so well here!
Love that Obi-wan was willing to stand up for their love and not hide it. Can't wait for more!
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Humm. Obi Wan and Siri
Well I don't think she's the right person for him. A bit cold, sarcastic, arrogant. Traits in my mind aren't suiting for a jedi. As far as a story, this is pretty good.
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YES another Siriwan!  Great beginning, I am looking foward to see where this story goes.
Update soon! 
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