correllian_ale posted:

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*performs a diving roll headfirst in to thread, huffing cause he's outta' breath...*

I'm here...C_F...finally made it...

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correllian_ale posted:

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You wouldn't believe some the action I just had to work my way through, wait; yeah you would, you wrote it.

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correllian_ale posted:

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Airborne Troopers, never thought of it, very cool.

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correllian_ale posted:

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You combat scenes were really intense, and the freefall at the begining was nicely done too! You really buried yourself in the combat aspect of it and it came across really well.

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correllian_ale posted:

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Great thought provoking ending too C_F!

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correllian_ale posted:

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P.S. - thanks for the advice on my own GGWW fic BTW, did a few little touch-ups from it, much appreciated.

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