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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 2/3/06 10:43pm Subject: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	Title: Mishaps Author: Alley_Skywalker Gener: Light mush, Master/padawan bonding Characters: OCs Summary: A master and her padawan aren't having a very good day... A/N: This is a responce to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge 9also known as the Twich's Twisted 1st sentence challnge). Except this time the sentance was suppose to be the last sentence of your fic. Anyways... Why oh why did this have to happen now? Lexxa Lysk sighed flopping down on the ground next to the jumble of material and collapsible durasteel poles that were suppose be easy to rearrange into a tent that would serve as a shelter for herself and her padawan for the night. But something in the mechanism had broken and the two suddenly found themselves in a less then pleasant situation. Usually Lexxa wouldn’t have minded the open air that much and yet this time was different. The ominous clouds promised rain and she really didn’t feel like getting soaked. Her padawan, Paolo, was sitting a few feet from her under a tree amusing himself with scratching some mosquito bites here and there. His arm looked quite red by now. “Paolo, stop the scratching you’ll only make them worse” she reminded the thirteen-year-old for what seemed like the millionth time that day. ‘I can’t help it” he whined helplessly. “I really can’t!” He tilted his head to the side and looked at her with large, sad, dark eyes and she felt the wave of desperation pass through their bond. All an act. She had seen his “puppy dog act” before. “That’s not going to work on me, Padawan. You know that. Why don’t you go get some firewood instead?” It wasn’t really a question and Paolo knew it but she thought it sounded better then if she was to order him to do it. More amicable at any rate. Paolo nodded, “Yes, Master” and stood up slowly, brushing leaves and soil off of his tunic. His padawan braid had decided to remain stuck against his chin, tickling it, and he swiped at it with annoyance before stocking away into the underbrush. Lexxa dumped out a few ratio bars and protein cubes, along with a few peaces of preserved meat. Deciding on the meat, it tasted like plastoid but was a more suitable dinner then the rest, and scooped the other things into her bag. Then she fidgeted with the lighter for a while, test lighting it, and then dropped it into the pile with the meat on the foil utensils. She slipped into a light state of meditation, allowing herself a few moment of quiet until Paolo returned. “YAAA-HAAAA-WEEEE-AHHH-GGGRRRR!” Lexxa looked up startled. The inhuman shout sounded remarkably, and disturbingly, like that padawan of hers. And sure enough he came barrowing through the underbrush only a few moment later, a pile of sticks under his arm and the largest one in his hand. He was waving the stick much as he would his lightsaber but in a cruder more Indian-like fashion. Lexxa shook her head in defeat. Nothing would make this one calm down when he was having a hyper moment. ‘I really shouldn’t have let him suck that sugar cane on our way here today’ she thought, standing up so that she could confront her wayward, overly excited, apprentice. “And here I thought you were a Jedi” she said sarcastically as Paolo bounded up to her, still waving the stick. Paolo stopped, mid battle cry, and dropped the sticks he was holding into a pile. ‘Sorry, Master. I just got…carried away.” Lexxa rolled her eyes. ‘You always do, Padawan.” She arranged the sticks into a more civilized fashion then the pile that they had landed in, ignoring the fact that her padawan’s cheeks were now tomato red, and flicked the fire igniter several times. She sighed in relief when the flame caught and the sticks started to burn. At least something had gone right. She stabbed the peaces of meat onto a metal “spear” and proceeded to turn them over from side to side on the fire. They ate quietly not talking much. At first Lexxa didn’t realize that anything was wrong. It was quiet and she was enjoying the faint chirping of birds that floated over to the pair from a distance. But when their songs died away as the sky became completely dark the young knight was surprised to realize that Paolo had only eaten half of his peace, though they barely had anything to eat that day, and had been quiet all that time. It was very unusual behavior for her young padawan. “Paolo? Is everything alright, Padawan?” The boy nodded hastily, making a show of shoving the rest of the meat into his mouth. But something was wrong, she could feel it now. Waves of discomfort were radiating from the boy through their bond. His shields were tight and he was too withdrawn for comfort. Lexxa moved closer to him, a worried frown on her face. She reached up and touched his forehead. Paolo jerked away but not before Lexxa felt the heat radiating from him. “You’re burning up. You call that alright?” Silence. Oh why did he have to be so stubborn! What was so wrong about admitting that he was sick? Paolo hated showing weakness but still…it was just wrong! “Padawan, what is it?” “Nothing, Master, I’m fine” he said, trying to sound irritated but failing miserably. “Don’t lie to your master” she chided, already digging around in her bag for some fever suppressors. ‘I knew I shouldn’t have given him that sugar cane. But noooo.’ “It might be those berries…” Lexxa looked up. “What berries?” “When I went to get firewood I saw these berries. Really pretty, bright red, tasted good too. I ate several handfuls of them. At first I was ok but then I started feeling sick…” “Great. Food poisoning” Lexxa muttered under her breath. “You’re suppose to be thirteen you dummy!” She ducked back out from her scavenger hunt through her pack with a couple of fever suppressors and handed them to Paolo with the water flask. He took them silently. Lexxa would have given him a lecture about not eating the first pretty thing that he sees but decided that he was suffering enough. The boy really did look awful, all curled up in a ball with his cloak rapped around him tightly. He was pale except for the unhealthy flush of his cheeks. His usually bright eyes were murky now. “Cold” Paolo muttered softly. Lexxa sighed, for what felt like the hundredth time that day, and pulled her padawan into a small hug. Then she lay him down so that his head was in her lap and pulled herself against a tree, leaning her back against the trunk. She grabbed a blanket and draped it over the boy, stroking his head fondly. “We haven’t had much luck today have we, Master? Starting off lost this morning really didn’t go well.” “You’re right, young one. But it could be worse. It could be raining.” The clouds must have heard her because at that moment the heavens opened up and showered then with cool raindrops by the thousands. “With my luck something like this was ought to happen” Lexxa grumbled as Paolo sniggled closer to her and pulled the blanket over his head. His voice floated up to her, muffled, “It’s not the end of the galaxy. After all, tomorrow is another day." -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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oqidaun Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/4/06 6:34am Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	I liked this! You've come a long way with your character development. BRAVO! These are very sympathetic characters, i.e., they've quite a bit of depth. Great job answering the challenge! -----signature----- . . . . I'm so bad, I banned myself.
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/4/06 7:17am Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	Ah, the poor Jedi. Even they can have a bad day. And poor Paolo! I hope his bout of food posioning doesn't last too long. You did a nice job developing the OC's. Great response to the challenge -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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Lola64 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 2/4/06 3:32pm Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	“You’re right, young one. But it could be worse. It could be raining.” The clouds must have heard her because at that moment the heavens opened up and showered then with cool raindrops by the thousands. Isn't that always how it goes? Great job Alley_Skywalker. I too am enjoying these two characters very much. -----signature----- Kyp/Nurse Lola: the new ship I stalk people. It's a Lola thing. Been gone and is now back. Did you miss me?
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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 4/28/06 6:42am Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	O goodie! Paolo and Lexxa of 'not anymore'? Lexxa would have given him a lecture about not eating the first pretty thing that he sees And not pretty food, my dear. Pretty all-things. Really love this pairing! I'm going to hunt your fics and see if they popped up anywhere else. -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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JadeSolo Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 4/28/06 2:23pm Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	Her padawan, Paolo, was sitting a few feet from her under a tree amusing himself with scratching some mosquito bites here and there. Poor kid! It sucks to be eaten alive by insects. A wonderful pair you have! I especially like how Lexxa gets just as frustrated as a teenager, but the minute Paolo gets into trouble, she switches into Master mode. -----signature----- "If you expect a kick in the balls and you get a slap in the face, it's a victory." "May God bless you and keep you always...I mean that in a civic deist way." -Prof. Siegel "No guaranteed money, but all guaranteed fun!"
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/29/06 12:16pm Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	oqidaun Thanks! My fave OC master/padawan team! I'm glad that they turned out well. KELIA: Thank you! Lola64: Thanks! And yea that is what always happins. Just when you think the situation couldn't get any worse...it does. Lol. leia_naberrie: And not pretty food, my dear. Pretty all-things. Lol! Really love this pairing! I'm going to hunt your fics and see if they popped up anywhere else. And you reallu DID unt them all down. Lol. Leai nothing can stop you when your on a mission girl JadeSolo: Thanks for reading! And yea I hate getting mosquito bites...always happins on summer vacation. And Lexxa? Well she tries to keep Paolo in line when he gets out of hand..it is her duty after all -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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anakin_luver Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 4/29/06 1:21pm Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	I've only read I think, two of your fics featuring these characters and I love them already. This was awesome. I just felt all happy inside! Well done Alley! Way to be.
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/29/06 9:08pm Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	I enjoyed this very much. “Great. Food poisoning” Lexxa muttered under her breath. “You’re suppose to be thirteen you dummy!” -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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MsLanna Title: CR GSFF Central = Offizieller Burger Brater Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 10/28/06 7:06am Subject: RE: Mishaps (Viggie. A master/padawan bad day fic... Response to Twich's Twisted Sister Challenge)
	Nice little stroy. Actually want you to read mor about the two. Loved the hyper-Paola charging in with his stick! And the berries.... Somehow it feels good to see Jedi that are not so different from everybody else. -----signature----- I give up. Fett is great. "What would you have me do?" "Endure." Cuyir adate jate, bal droten ori'dush Proud Master and buir'ika of Commander_Ducky. My New Title: Lords and Ladies of the Empire
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