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DragonLotus  256 posts
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Date Posted: 5/30/06 3:37am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 8, The Changing of the Guard ~ replies 23rd May
leia_naberrie posted:


DragonLotus - The pieces are sloooowly coming together...
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mischief whistling

Enjoy your time off and hope your muse is stocking up on her goodies while you're away.

 

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leia_naberrie  3737 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 1:05am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting - Date Edited: 6/2/06 7:11am (4 edits total) Edited By: leia_naberrie
DragonLotus posted:
Enjoy your time off and hope your muse is stocking up on her goodies while you're away.


Well, the cupboard wasn't as full as I hoped... sad but she did her best. tongue












9, The Haunting


There was no cloud. No spreading pall to cast its shadow over the hearts and souls of the Jedi on Yavin IV or their brethren scattered across the infinite corners of the galaxy - or even their separated brethren, wielding the Force with legal impunity in the highest echelons of the Empire.

The Force had already been clouded for hundreds of years. The hearts and souls of the Jedi had been in mourning for even longer. And as for the Others - the death of a Jedi was too commonplace for it to register as more than a drop in their awareness. Especially when the Jedi in question was one as powerful as the Grandmaster: one who had taken certain steps to ensure that even after death, he still lived.

Yet one Sith Lord had felt the old Jedi die.

A hollowing in his ribs. A sense of loss - not the loss of a possession but of something he never had, never would have. And all the more painful for that.

He was sitting cross-legged in his cell sharpening an extremely powerful weapon - his will - when he had felt it.

First the whisper of sorrow. Then the outcry.

His eyes had flown open and he had stared at the invisible wall of the force-field in shock.

Can it be? Is that -?

And as suddenly as the feeling came, it left him.

Vader opened his eyes to find himself lying on his side on the hard floor, watching the mothballs floating in dawn’s glow.



tbc

 

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Date Posted: 6/2/06 1:43am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 10, The Hunting - Date Edited: 6/2/06 7:15am (4 edits total) Edited By: leia_naberrie
10, The Hunting




Elsewhere in the Empire, the Emperor and Sith Master was looking for his apprentice.

Neither Sith Lords nor Galactic Emperors tended to be the most pleasant of companies when crossed. There was something about the double combination of ultimate political and metaphysical power that intoxicated most sentients – and other sentients extremely wary of the holders.

One very brave psychoanalyst once declared all the Emperors since the time of Bane’s apprentice insane. Brilliant, yes. Charismatic, yes. Incredibly competent in their ability to hold the lives and minds of billions of sentients under the order and will of one individual – yes. And all the more insane for that faculty.

(The psychoanalyst didn’t live very long after that declaration. And neither did the general profession of psychoanalysis in the Empire. But that’s another story.*)

The bottom line of the matter was that a Sith Lord and a Galactic Emperor who had lost his apprentice was a person best approached from a very, very far distance.

It was with this prescience that the Emperor’s Hand gave his report on the latest findings on Vader’s disappearance. The pale blue figure of Ferus Olin seemed to flicker from more than signal interruptions as it knelt above the holoproj disk.

“Lord Vader himself de-activated the cam-droids, my Lord. Imperial detectives have confirmed that the scraps from the explosion on the landing platform indicate two vessels. One was identified as Lord Vader’s, the other as a mercenary called Jango Fett.”

“The Mandalorian bounty hunter?”

“Yes, my Lord. My Lord, there is—” The voice shook a little and Sidious growled. “My Lord… there is further evidence that s-someone was killed in that explosion-”

“I read your heart as clearly as glass,” Sidious hissed and the tiny image of the Hand trembled. “You wish Lord Vader dead. He is not. You will do well to concentrate your efforts in finding him, Olin and not engage in foolish daydreams.”

Olin had gone a very, very pale blue. “Yes, my Lord.”

“Do not dare approach me again until you have news of his whereabouts.”

Olin swallowed painfully. “Yes, my Lord.”

Sidious killed the signal and the weak, ineffective image died with it. He strode to the balcony, overlooking the lake and the island in it. His eyes were not for the things below though. They were high above, glaring balefully at the pale dawn sky.

‘’

Seven days ago, Darth Vader had called into the Force with such agonizing desperation that Sidious had cut himself off from his bond with his apprentice in self-preservation. For precious minutes, he had lost contact with Vader, and when Sidious had reached back into the maelstrom of eternal power for his apprentice’s hand, it was gone.

What remained were tremors in the Force, akin to the reverberations of an earthquake that had occurred almost a century before. These reverberations were so subtle that only an extremely powerful and skilled Force-user – who was desperately searching for the most powerful, if not the most skilled, Force-user – noticed them.

Finally, Sidious had satisfied himself that the bond had not been severed. Indeed, only death could do that. And that made matters worse. What power could hold a Sith apprentice so far away from his Master, that the Master could not sense the other’s location or his state of existence? What else could and was that power doing?

The Jedi. Sidious saw their hand in this as clearly as if they had sent a message and signed it with their stamp. Or more accurately, the stamp of the one that called himself the Grandmaster.

And no doubt with the help of the Jedi-keeper, the one they called the Guardian.

The old Sith had scoffed at the practice, mocked their weak ‘brethren’ for their dependency on a non-sensitive for protection. As Sidious’ old Master Plageuis had always said: If the Force-wielders needed to seek shelter with those who could not touch that power, that alone was reason for their extinction.

Hundreds of generations of one unchallenged Dynasty and the old diseases had crept back into the Sith – over-confidence, and complacency. Over the centuries and under the sleeping eye of the Sith, the Jedi had grown in numbers from a scattered handful of half-trained defectors to a persistent cancer in the Empire – with the help of their Guardian. By mysterious techniques, these Guardians had the ability to hide sensitives from normal Imperial detection – even before they were born. Working hand in hand with the Jedi, the Guardian would then undertake the early training of these sensitives, and eventually lead them to the hidden covens of the Jedi, populating their numbers and swelling their ranks until they had become more than an irritation. They had become a plague.

Yes, indeed. The Guardians had been underestimated and they had grown in power greater than any Sith now could withstand. How else could Darth Vader, the pride and glory of the Sith, even greater that Darth Bane himself, have been captured?

Sidious resolved that this oversight would be corrected as quickly as possible. But first, Vader had to be recovered. The fact that he had not felt a severance of the bond between himself and his apprentice bothered him. Why did the Jedi hold Vader and not destroy him? Did they seek to turn him into one of their own? It had been done before.

“What are you up to, old friend?” The Sith Master whispered dangerously. “What wild, mad scheme are you plotting in that traitorous mind of yours?”

The soft rustling of the curtains in the room behind made him almost imagine that his whisper was echoed back - in the shape of an answer.

Fanciful.

The Sith Master meditated on his missing apprentice. And when that yielded no further revelations, he meditated on the complete annihilation of the Jedi and their devotees.

‘’

Not very far from where the Emperor brooded – (within the same world as a matter of fact although the other players were happily unaware of this fact) – the hunt for Darth Vader moved a little further to its goal as the wife of the new Deputy Governor of Theed opened a door and invited two of the Emperor’s Hands into her home.





tbc


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jedi_princess18  875 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 3:38am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
Well done. If I'm understanding this right, it's the Sith that have ruled for thousands of years and the Jedi have been forced to hide. For some reason, I was thinking it was similar to canon (where the Sith were in hiding and they must have overthrown the Jedi) but I like this twist.

I also thought it was interesting that Vader was able to tell when the old Grandmaster died...

 

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rocketscientist  783 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 6:53am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
grin grin Yea! She's back!

Well all I can say is - This just keeps getting better!

I notice a difference in tone and style here which changes the pace in such a way that I know after the first sentence that I REALLY need to sit up and pay attention(not that one can afford to be careless with any part of this if one wants to understand what is happening). - awful sentence on my part _ oh well, haven't finished my tea yet.... tongue

His eyes had flown open and he had stared at the invisible wall of the force-field in shock.

Can it be? Is that -?


This image is perfect!

In pt 2 Kudos for your fantastc handling of the Emperor! applause I tend to be particular about that...

wink

I love the way we're getting some answers now - your timing is impeccable! The way you reveal the Empire adds to the sense of antiquity that I've always felt reading this, no mean feat, that.


the hunt for Darth Vader moved a little further to its goal as the wife of the new Deputy Governor of Theed opened a door and invited two of the Emperor’s Hands into her home.


I was JUST womdering if anything was going to come of that! shock

Well it's official - in my book you totally ROCK! applause

 

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Star_Angel  4775 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 7:02am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
His eyes had flown open and he had stared at the invisible wall of the force-field in shock.

Can it be? Is that -?

And as suddenly as the feeling came, it left him.


Hmm, did Vader believe that something was wrong with Padmé? Or was it just the hopeless romantic in me that hoped so love .

Seven days ago, Darth Vader had called into the Force with such agonizing desperation that Sidious had cut himself off from his bond with his apprentice in self-preservation. For precious minutes, he had lost contact with Vader, and when Sidious had reached back into the maelstrom of eternal power for his apprentice’s hand, it was gone.

Ha, in your face, Palpy. You do not hurt my Ani and think that you will get away with it.

Oh, how I hope that you’ll find several lightsaber’s up your a…English Channel and that is soon.


Two wonderful updates and I'm looking forward to read more.

 

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Padlei  1030 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 7:29am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun - Date Edited: 6/2/06 7:30am (1 edits total) Edited By: Padlei
Great updates. grin I love the darkish humor of the narrator. wink And what did Vader sense? Argh. In fact, I only want more... batting

I really look forward to reading what's next. grin And I couldn't help but find Vader hot even during his meditation. tongue

 

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jaina_clan_solo  1209 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 7:39am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
Wonderful updates!

I'm very surprised that Vader felt the Grand Master's death... and that the feeling remained with him for longer than a split second. (long enough to be noticed anyway) I wonder if this means that the Grand Master would have been able to sway Vader's thinking in some way.

worried And now Palpatine is going to try and destroy the Jedi (again?) I think that things are about to get even messier.

Thanks for the PM! I can't wait to see what peice of the puzzle you unveil next.

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Daenarrah  968 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 1:00pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun - Date Edited: 6/2/06 1:02pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Daenarrah
Two updates. Thank you, leia, thank you. hugs

So Vader felt something. The Grandmaster's death. That just makes me believe more that it was Gui-Gon. Is he going to think now that with no Grandmaster (he doesn't know yet it's Obi-Wan) that he can somehow twist this loss to his advantage? Only to then find out there's a new Grandmaster in place? thinking

And Palpatine. What does he expect? He severs his bond with Vader for a short while and now can't find him? not_talking Yeesh. He may be desperate to get him back but how willing will Vader be to come back? He just wants to get Padmé.

 

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Amidala66  1514 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 6:26pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
I really enjoyed these last posts especially the last chapter. I love when Palpatine gets thwarted even for a second. Of course, he usually has a devious plan.

I wonder what the Hands are up to.

BTW, my kids have met Yoda and they think that Anakin is still better Sith or not.

 

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anakin_luver  6631 posts
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Date Posted: 6/2/06 7:55pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
Oh this is fascinating. The tables have turned!

I really don't know how much more I can compliment you. Your writing is just outstanding. You capture the reader's attention so forcefully, it's actually physically impossible for me to stop reading!

Great great GREAT post.

BTW, I know this may be a dumb questin but seeing as I haven't read your other story and I might just be a little clueless, is Vader suited?

 

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DarthNaughtious  281 posts
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Date Posted: 6/3/06 2:41am Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
Hello, leia, I'm back, and yes I did have a good time dancing .

If I may ask, what makes you so sure that Obi-Wan's dead master was Qui-Gon Jinn?

Ah, then thine words doth deceive me idea whistling . A lot of the Grand Master's actions do seem in keeping with Qui-Gon's personality...

His eyes had flown open and he had stared at the invisible wall of the force-field in shock.

Can it be? Is that -?

And as suddenly as the feeling came, it left him.

Vader opened his eyes to find himself lying on his side on the hard floor, watching the mothballs floating in dawn’s glow.


Hmm...Vader seemed to have recognized the Grand Master from something other than the unconcious annals of his Force-memory. I wonder how else he will be affected by his death.

How else could Darth Vader, the pride and glory of the Sith, even greater that Darth Bane himself, have been captured?

Sidious, Sidious, Sidious. As always, your attraction to Vader would be worrysome if you loved physical beauty rather than power.

“What are you up to, old friend?” The Sith Master whispered dangerously. “What wild, mad scheme are you plotting in that traitorous mind of yours?”

The soft rustling of the curtains in the room behind made him almost imagine that his whisper was echoed back - in the shape of an answer.

Fanciful.


Fanciful definately sounds like Qui-Gon. So he was a Sith or a Hand at one point, but was converted into a Jedi?

Wonderful post as usual applause .


 

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leia_naberrie  3737 posts
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Date Posted: 6/4/06 11:04pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 9, The Haunting & 10, The Hunting ~ 2 Jun
jedi_princess18: If I'm understanding this right, it's the Sith that have ruled for thousands of years and the Jedi have been forced to hide. For some reason, I was thinking it was similar to canon (where the Sith were in hiding and they must have overthrown the Jedi) but I like this twist. | It is still similar to canon. A mirrored canon. wink ||| I also thought it was interesting that Vader was able to tell when the old Grandmaster died... Yeah, that was weird, wasn't it? whistling


rocketscientist: oh well, haven't finished my tea yet.... | laugh Yeah, right. tongue ||| In pt 2 Kudos for your fantastc handling of the Emperor! | blush Why, thank you. *curtsies* I am rather fond of him myself. wink ||| I love the way we're getting some answers now - your timing is impeccable! The way you reveal the Empire adds to the sense of antiquity that I've always felt reading this, no mean feat, that. | Sense of antiquity... I love that! grin In all fairness though, I had (indirectly) revealed the Empire since the first story - right from the early chapters... ||| I was JUST womdering if anything was going to come of that! | shame_on_you You should know me better than that. tongue



Star_Angel : Hmm, did Vader believe that something was wrong with Padmé? Or was it just the hopeless romantic in me that hoped so . | We're all hopeless romantics in one form or the other. happy ||| Oh, how I hope that you’ll find several lightsaber’s up your a…English Channel and that is soon. | LOL! I excuse your French. tongue


Padlei : I love the darkish humor of the narrator. | Whatever are you talking about? angel mischief ||| I couldn't help but find Vader hot even during his meditation. | Little spoiler here: But there's about to plenty of hot!Vader in the next couple of chapters... dancing


jaina_clan_solo : I'm very surprised that Vader felt the Grand Master's death... and that the feeling remained with him for longer than a split second. (long enough to be noticed anyway) I wonder if this means that the Grand Master would have been able to sway Vader's thinking in some way. | You're meant to be surprised, if that's any reassurance. wink And don't worry about the Grand Master's influence. In a sense, he died to increase it. devil ||| And now Palpatine is going to try and destroy the Jedi (again?) | More like, once and for all. tongue Clearly the old Sith didn't do a good job and you know how ambitious our dear Palps is...



Daenarrah: So Vader felt something. The Grandmaster's death. That just makes me believe more that it was Gui-Gon. | Well, I'm pretty sure that the GrandMaster (or any character in this story as a matter of fact) will not be Gui-Gon. tongue ||| Is he going to think now that with no Grandmaster (he doesn't know yet it's Obi-Wan) he can somehow twist this to his advantage? | Well, I don't know. The muse hasn't revealed that yet sadly. sad But if I were to hazard a guess, I would think that Vader's in a rather precarious position now, isn't he? He and Obi-Wan aren't exactly the best of friends. worried ||| And Palpatine. What does he expect? He severs his bond with Vader for a short while and now can't find him? Poor Palpatine. Perhaps if he had been more concerned about his apprentice's welfare and less about his own self-preservation, he might not have lost Vader. On the other hand - he may have already lost Vader - in a very real sense, to the Jedi's Guardian....




Amidala66: I love when Palpatine gets thwarted even for a second. | Yeah, it does bring on the warm fuzzies, doesn't it? grin ||| I wonder what the Hands are up to. | I think they're tracking down Vader? Although one Hand in particular won't mind never finding him. grin |||BTW... they think that Anakin is still better Sith or not. | Oh no! shock laugh



anakin_luver: Oh this is fascinating. The tables have turned! | Or the scenario has been reflected. tongue ||| You capture the reader's attention so forcefully, it's actually physically impossible for me to stop reading! | Wow. blush shock Wow. shock Wow. blush Thank you. ||| is Vader suited? | No, it's not a dumb question in the least. He does seem to be perpertually dressed in black. He is quite suited - in appropriate clothes, I should hope. batting But he doesn't wear any form of armour or cybernetic replacements. He's 100% (hot as can be mischief tongue ) flesh and blood. Oh, and he's about 18 if you need an age for that mental picture.



DarthNaughtious: Welcome back! hugs ||| Hmm... Vader seemed to have recognized the Grand Master from something other than the conscious annals of his Force-memory. | shock |||Sidious. Sidious. Sidious. As always, your attraction to Vader would be worrisome if you loved physical beauty other than power. ||| LOL! Tell me about it. It was something I said once to geo3 a long time ago: if Vader hadn't ended up suited, no-one would have believed they weren't involved. sick O gross mental image there. sick ||| He was a Sith or a Hand at one point and converted into a Jedi? | shock Stars, I hate you! laugh

 

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DragonLotus  256 posts
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Date Posted: 6/4/06 11:36pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 10, The Hunting ~ replies 5 Jun - Date Edited: 6/4/06 11:37pm (1 edits total) Edited By: DragonLotus
Guess I'm a little late for the party. Anyway, great job as usual. So who IS the old Grandmaster? You implied that it's not Qui-Gon, and it certainly isn't Yoda. thinking Dooku?? Arrgghh! The suspense is killing me!





 

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anakin_luver  6631 posts
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Date Posted: 6/4/06 11:37pm Subject: RE: Kaleidoscope (Darth Vader Thriller. PT. AU) ~ 10, The Hunting ~ replies 5 Jun
Oh I see...18 year old Anakin? Long hair?

Oh nice mental picture for sure drooling

 

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