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_ThatJediScum_ Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 5/9/06 9:12pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 2 05/09
	Uh, I don't like the sound of Anakin's vision. Glad Ben's going to be taken care of. He seems like he needs a nice rest. bran
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Lola64 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 5/10/06 4:59am Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 2 05/09
	Ben absently notes the scared look which passes between Valin’s parents, but most of his attention is focused on Rostek. He looks the man up and down, having seen multiple pictures of him over the years, Ben clearly recognizes him. Yet he is decades younger than he should be, then he has any right to be. Well, he at least kind of knows something is seriously wrong. As he starts to fall, he can feel Valin’s hands reach out and grab him, lowering him gently to the ground. Then unconsciousness claims him. Sounds like he'll be doing that a lot this fic. What it means, he does not know, but he feels a connection to the man, an interlocking of fate, and he wonders when they will meet. The question here is, is Anakin thinking the friend/foe is the man in the black suit? Or does he think he's on the sidelines watching the newcomer face the dark armor? This is a great story. I'm just saying. -----signature----- Kyp/Nurse Lola: the new ship I stalk people. It's a Lola thing. Been gone and is now back. Did you miss me?
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/10/06 7:41am Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 2 05/09
	_ThatJediScum_ Uh, I don't like the sound of Anakin's vision. I wouldn't know why... Glad Ben's going to be taken care of. He seems like he needs a nice rest. Aye, Ben's getting taken care of..... Lola64 Well, he at least kind of knows something is seriously wrong. hehe....aye, something is seriously wrong...... an why do I get the feeling I'll be hearing that statement, or one very similar to it by the time this fic is done??? Sounds like he'll be doing that a lot this fic. Nope....after the inital shock wears off, he gets along with them fairly well... The question here is, is Anakin thinking the friend/foe is the man in the black suit? Or does he think he's on the sidelines watching the newcomer face the dark armor? Good questions, and if this was a fic that was Anakin-centric then we would be very interested in them... This is a great story. I'm just saying. Thanks! gets out sword to fight gigantic ego he now has -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/12/06 2:01pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 3 05/12
	Chapter 3 Ben looks at his new friends and sees the fear in their eyes at the things he had told them. He can see Rostek pacing by the fireplace, and Nejaa just looks grim. He does feel slightly guilty at not telling them everything, at not telling them that he was dating Valin's granddaughter, but Ben figured the story of the Galactic Civil War would be hard enough to swallow. Finally Nejaa speaks. "Why would we believe you?" Ben knew it would come to this sooner or later, and focuses his attention fully on the older man. Ben still has a trump card to play, as Nejaa is not wearing his robes, and was not introduced as a Jedi, but Ben knows who he is. "You are a Jedi, you would know if I'm lying." As he says that, he can feel the hostility in the air. Especially coming off of Scerra. "We don't know what you're talking about." He smiles at her and shakes his head. "That's okayu Scerra, because I do. He is Nejaa Halycon and you are Scerra Halycon, the biological grandparents of one of the Masters of the Jedi Order, Corrran Horn." Then a hypercom unit goes off, and Nejaa walks to the other room to answer it and begins talking in hushed tones. Ben turns his attention back to Scerra. "What would it take to make you believe me?" From the doorway Nejaa speaks up. "I believe you." Everyone turns towards him, but it is Scerra who speaks. "What happened?" "That was the Jedi Temple; the Separatists have declared their intentions to secede from the Republic. Apparently there was a rather large battle between the Jedi and Separatist forces on Geonosis, a lot of the Jedi were killed." Ben frowns. "Was that all?" Nejaa shakes his head. "No, I've been recalled to Coruscant. Rostek, I need you to take care of my family for me." Rostek nods his head. Scerra rushes over to Nejaa, and grasps his tunic. "No! Don't go. You heard Ben; if you leave you don't come back." Nejaa sadly shakes his head. "The future is always in motion, besides if he said I left, then I already have." Ben looks up from where he had been staring at his feet. "It's worse than that." Everyone looks towards him and Rostek speaks. "How is it worse?" "Do any of you know about Chaos Theory?" Syal answers. "Yes, it's a mathematics and physics theory, detailing things like if a flitnat flaps his wings in the northern continent that the resulting wind will turn into a tornado in the southern continent." Ben smiles at her, and sees a blush creep into her face. "Exactly! History must play itself out as if I never appeared or else my grandfather and father may not be exactly who they need to be at the right time to stop the Sith." Ben turns his gaze towards Nejaa. "So what I'm saying is that even if you meet my grandfather out there, then you can't just cut him down. And you have to go out there, because you may meet him." Ben looks from one person to the next in turn. First it is Nyche and Valin, he notices the silent strength they both display, even as she unconsciously clings to him. Then he focuses on Nejaa and Scerra, her death grip on Nejaa's tunic oddly reminiscent of the grip Nyche has on Valin. They are more in control of their emotions than the younger couple; surer of themselves, but Scerra is already grieving for her husband. Next is Rostek, who has once more taken up his pacing. An angry scowl on his face as he works through the implications of everything he has learned this evening. Finally he focuses on Syal. For all the wildness she exhibited when he first met her, the constant questions, the standing in the open-air speeder as they traveled here, it is she that is most scared. And in her fear and worry, she is biting at her bottom lip, making her look just that much more like his Jysella. Her fear, her resemblance to Jysella, all those little things are just breaking his heart all the more. Without thinking, he walks over to her and wraps her in a hug, kissing the top of her head the way he has often done to Jysella in the past. She clings to him, glad for the warmth and security he offers. He whispers down towards her. "It will all be all right in the end." Nejaa's voice intrudes on Ben's thoughts. "You speak of certainties, when there is still much we don't know." Ben looks up from Syal without letting her go, focusing on Nejaa. "The Force is my ally that is all the certainty which I need." A Meditation Room of the Jedi Temple, Coruscant. Yoda is deep in thought and meditation. The Force has been swirling for days. Something has happened, is going to happen, something which the Force tells him is inevitable. Finally coming closer to consciousness he hears the whispered voices of the two other Jedi in this room with him. Then he hears a deep breathing, it sounds mechanical, metronomic, dark, and ominous. Yoda opens his eyes, wondering what it means. Obi-wan Kenobi speaks up as he looks between Mace Windu and Yoda. "I have to admit that without the clones, it would have not been a victory." Yoda scoffs at that. "Victory? Victory you say? Master Obi-Wan, not victory. The shroud of the dark side has fallen. Begun the Clone War has." -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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Lola64 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 5/12/06 2:37pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 3 05/12
	Marvelous Kidan. Ben knew it would come to this sooner or later, and focuses his attention fully on the older man. Ben still has a trump card to play, as Nejaa is not wearing his robes, and was not introduced as a Jedi, but Ben knows who he is. "You are a Jedi, you would know if I'm lying." Yikes. They thought their secret was safe. But Ben can keep this secret. After all, it does have to be kept, doesn't it? It's very frightening having someone come to them from the future, and there is doom in store for them. I wonder exactly how much he will be willing to tell them. And in her fear and worry, she is biting at her bottom lip, making her look just that much more like his Jysella. Her fear, her resemblance to Jysella, all those little things are just breaking his heart all the more. Without thinking, he walks over to her and wraps her in a hug, kissing the top of her head the way he has often done to Jysella in the past. He's such a smoothie I love it. Hopefully in profic he won't be as naive as his father. I like your Ben to be profic. Who do I see about that? Is there a number I can call? -----signature----- Kyp/Nurse Lola: the new ship I stalk people. It's a Lola thing. Been gone and is now back. Did you miss me?
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/12/06 5:53pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 3 05/12
	Lola64 ahhh...my stalker...you know you need to update your wip, plus you're falling behind in your stalking duties over in beyond... Marvelous Kidan. Thanks!! Yikes. They thought their secret was safe. But Ben can keep this secret. After all, it does have to be kept, doesn't it? Aye, Ben wants their trust..... It's very frightening having someone come to them from the future, and there is doom in store for them. I wonder exactly how much he will be willing to tell them. You'll find out, but basically everything... He's such a smoothie I love it. Hopefully in profic he won't be as naive as his father. I like your Ben to be profic. LOL...yes he is a smoothie...but i think its more because he's reacting to Syal as if she was Jys, whom he was seriously dating in the future... Who do I see about that? Is there a number I can call? I'd have to be willing to do profic for that.... though if its offered... -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/13/06 5:05pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 4 05/13
	Chapter 4 It has been two years since Ben first appeared in this time. He has quickly shed his mantle as a Jedi, realizing that he would not fit in with the Jedi of this era. His penchant for attachment would cause him to just be expelled from the Order, if he could even be accepted in the first place. Yet he could not forgo his desire to help others. With the help of Rostek, Ben had managed to have an identity created for him, and joined the Corellian Security Force. Tomorrow he is getting his new partner, a fresh recruit right out of the academy, and someone who happens to be his best friend, Valin, or Hal Horn as he calls himself anymore. Ben thinks back to what has occurred over the two years, the information he has found out about the Clone Wars and Jysella’s family, things that she still did not know, and probably never would. Silently he wonders if he’ll ever be able to tell her, even while knowing the truth is that he probably won’t ever be able to. As much as it pains him to admit it, he’s gotten over Jysella, resided himself to the fact that he will never be able to get home. He is moving on with his life. And he thinks that Syal Senthe is and will continue to be a part of that moving on. He glances at her sitting beside him in the speeder and gives her a quick smile which she returns. For her part, she loves the speed and recklessness with which Ben drives; the sharp turns, the sudden acceleration and deceleration. It calls to her, to a fundamental part of her which wants to run and fight, to live life fast and hard. The part of her that draws her to Ben. Landing the speeder in front of the restaurant, he quickly jumps out and rushes to open her door, escorting her into where they’re having this their latest date. He smiles at her, as they walk into the restaurant arm-in-arm, making inconsequential small talk. But deep down Ben is still worried; the last time that he was this happy he was thrown back in time to here. In the back of his mind he wonders just what will happen to ruin his happiness this time. After the meal they are served a small desert, and Ben watches Syal over it. Admiring everything about her, for a second a frown flits over his face, as he realizes that he hasn’t compared her to Jysella in months, but that thought is quickly expelled. He realizes and accepts that Jysella is his past, and he returns to watching her with just a ghost of a smile on his lips. She notices his stare. “What?” “Just watching.” A blush starts to color her cheeks, as he continues speaking. “You know, you’ve made me happier than I can ever remember being.” She quirks an eyebrow. “Is this why you brought me here today? To tell me how happy I make you?” She smirks and glances around at the restaurant. “Rather expensive place to do so, something like that could be said sitting in the parlor at home.” Ben looks down at the confection in front of him. He is suddenly self-conscious, unsure if he’s doing the right thing. He remembers the lecture that he gave to them all the night before Nejaa went away, about not allowing his presence to change things. The rule about not doing things differently because of what he told them. It figures that he would be the one unable to listen to that rule. He looks up and sees the slight amusement in her eyes. “No, or at least not just that.” “Oh? And tell me Ben; just what did you bring me here to tell me?” “Did I ever tell you how many parents met and ended up getting married?” Syal leans back in her chair, somewhat startled by his change of topic. “No.” He smiles at her. “Well it’s a really interesting story; remind me to tell you someday.” And then he laughs. She frowns slightly and throws her napkin at him. “You’re teasing me!” “Oh, I’d be much to terrified to tease you, milady.” The look she shoots him is one of pure disbelief, as if she’s stunned he could say such a thing with a straight face. He laughs lightly and then once more takes to studying the confection in front of him. He is startled by her voice as she speaks again. “It tastes better than it looks.” He looks up, and starts to blush. She smiles at him. “Ben, why not just tell me what you brought me here to say?” He sighs, and starts fiddling with the small box in his pocket. Finally he locks gazes with her. “Do you remember when I arrived; I said that you all should behave as if I had never appeared in the timeline?” She silently nods her head. Pulling the box out of his pocket, he sets it on the table next to her desert plate. Her eyes follow his hand, and as he pulls back, they stay locked on the small box. “Well I broke my own rule. I’ve fallen in love with you, and want you to marry me.” Her eyes dart up to him at that, a smile beginning to break out on her face, as he slides from his chair, to kneel beside her. Taking her hand in his, he formalizes his request. “Syal Senthe, will you be my wife?” Unknown to both of these two, across town, a similar event is playing out, as Hal proposes to Nyche. He is hoping to make the day he graduates from CorSec academy the happiest of his life, by asking for her hand. The first news stories about “The Hero Without Fear” and “The Negotiator” begin to circulate, spreading from Coruscant’s media machine, throughout the Core, Colony and Expansion regions. Posters and action figures are adorned with their likeness, and the populations of the Republic have some new heroes to give their love to. News reports from the Office of the Supreme Chancellor tell stories of the exploits of Skywalker and Kenobi, Anakin and Obi-wan. They are hailed as the scourge of the Separatists, and their exploits quickly become playground fodder, and tales told in break areas at jobs and schools. Sympathizers of the Republic look up on the two with awe and love. Separatists look upon the pair with fear and loathing. Only Ben Skywalker and those around him know the truth; that both points of views are correct and wrong, that one should be loved and the other feared. -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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Lola64 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 5/13/06 7:08pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 3 05/12
	Poor Ben. Well not really I guess. I was worried that he had all but given up on going home to Jysella. But the boy seems to have done all right, right where he was. Ben looks down at the confection in front of him. He is suddenly self-conscious, unsure if he’s doing the right thing. He remembers the lecture that he gave to them all the night before Nejaa went away, about not allowing his presence to change things. The rule about not doing things differently because of what he told them. It figures that he would be the one unable to listen to that rule. A Skywalker breaking the rules? Shocking? Well until I remember who is mother is. -----signature----- Kyp/Nurse Lola: the new ship I stalk people. It's a Lola thing. Been gone and is now back. Did you miss me?
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/13/06 10:31pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 4 05/13
	Lola64 Poor Ben. Well not really I guess. yeah, he's kinda moved on... I was worried that he had all but given up on going home to Jysella. But the boy seems to have done all right, right where he was. LOL...yes he has.... A Skywalker breaking the rules? Shocking? Well until I remember who is mother is. HAHAHA -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/14/06 10:50am Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) **Ch 4 05/13
	Chapter 5 Ben sits on the edge of the couch, watching the news reports from Coruscant. Even though the transmission has a decidedly pro-Separatist spin to it, Ben can understand what is happening. The Confederacy has staged an attack against Coruscant, intent on capturing Palpatine. Ben grins, and finds himself hoping ever so slightly that the Separatists will take the time to kill Palpatine here and now. He knows it is not a very Jedi-like thought, but he harbors it anyways, even if he could never bring himself to assassinate Palpatine himself. Hearing laughter, he looks over to see his wife and sister-in-law talking animatedly to one another. He smiles, happy and content in what his life has become. He no longer even harbors any resentment to the Force for allowing him to be dumped here in the past. He wonders to himself, just when that feeling will collapse, when the Force will bring something else to hurt him with. Pushing those dark thoughts away he turns his attention back to the holonet, as reports on Anakin Skywalker entering Coruscanti space have begun trickling through the newsnets. Two weeks later. Hal Horn is watching the news reports, his wife animatedly talking baby things with her sister, as a report concerning the death of General Grevious is aired. Then the broadcast is interrupted by a message from the Chancellor. Hal stares in disgust and fear at the dark cowled thing which speaks from behind the Chancellor’s podium. His heart falling even further as Palpatine begins his speech singaling the end of an era, and the rise of an empire. Three months after the Rise of the Empire Hal grounds his teeth slight, it has been a months since the Clone Wars ended, since the Jedi were labeled traitors. Even though he believed Ben’s story, he still held out hope for the Republic, for the Jedi. He glances towards his wife, his heart heavy and near to breaking. If all of Ben’s prophecies all come true, she will bear him a son, at the cost of his father. When a knock at the door startles him out of his thoughts and fears. He answers it and there before him stands a Camassi. “Valin Horn?” “Yes.” “I am Ylenic It'kla I knew your father. He was a great Jedi, and a wonderful man. It is my great misfortune to tell you that he fell in battle against the forces of darkness. He did so, saving the life of myself and our comrade.” Hal cries out, and collapses against the frame. Ylenic pushes a package towards Hal, and then turns away into the night, his errand over, his intention to get away from the proof that his friend betrayed the code and the Order. One year after the rise of the Empire Ben glances over at his wife and sister-in-law, smiling at the two of them as they discuss their pregnancies. He lets the smile drop from his face, as he considers and wonders just how his presence, how his choices here will affect the future. Then he decides that it does not matter. He made the choice to live a life here in the past, and right or wrong, that is the reality that he has to live with now. He focuses his attention once more on the sisters sitting next to each other on the other couch. He smiles at the thought of the children they both are bearing, and reaches out with the Force to once more probe the child in Syal’s womb. He can feel the feminine presence within her, and it makes him ecstatic. Just the thought of being a father increases the smile on his face to galactic proportions. As the front door to his home opens, he turns that way and watches Hal enter. The younger man sits down beside Ben and sighs wearily, causing Ben to laugh. “What’s the matter Hal?” Hal looks towards Ben, and begins speaking in a low whisper which Ben has to strain to hear. “I don’t get to sleep anymore. Nyche tosses and turns all night long, and she’s up and down to the ‘fresher throughout the night as well.” Ben grins at him, a sparkle of mischief in his eyes. “It’s just practice for after the baby’s born.” Hal’s groan attracts the attention of the women, who come over to them. The roundness of Syal’s stomach as she nears her fortieth week of pregnancy delights Ben, and he spares a glance from her to her sister’s form, who is due a mere month after her. A sharp pain from Syal pulls his attention back to his wife, and he notices the grimace that crosses her face and then disappears. He raises an eyebrow in question, and she shakes her head. Then he once more pays attention to what Nyche came over to request and laughs as he realizes that they are once more going to go out for dinner; that the girls are both craving Chad food this evening. As he stands, Ben glances at the holocom once more, noting the fact that Darth Vader has found and killed yet another of the Jedi. Sighing as he shakes his head, Ben turns off the machine, and goes to take his pregnant wife out to dinner. On their way to the restaurant, Ben feels yet another sharp pain from his wife, and turns towards her, her smile is strained and filled with pain. “Syal are you okay?” She meekly nods her head, and then when another sharp pain hits, groans aloud. Ben’s eyes flutter shut as he probes her and the baby with the Force. His eyes pop open, just as her water breaks in the back of Hal’s speeder. Ben looks to Hal, an expression of horror on his face. “Hal, get us to the med center, Syal is in labor.” Hours pass, with the steady rising and falling of Syal’s pain to keep Ben company, as he sits by her side in the delivery room. His attention is focused on her and the pressure she exerts on his hand as she pushes. Finally, the cries of new life drag his attention to the tiny bundle the medic is holding out to Syal. The medic’s eyes go from Syal to Ben then back as he says, “Congratulations. It’s a girl.” Ben is transfixed by the sight, speechless. A nurse walks over, holding a datapad. “What shall her name be?” Ben glances to his wife who nods her head slowly. “Tamar.” The nurse makes an entry and attaches a small anklet and then leaves the room, allowing the new family a moment of privacy. The newborn opens her eyes to stare up at her mother, and Ben is mesmerized by the intense green of her eyes. -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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princess_of_naboo Registered: Nov '00	Date Posted: 5/14/06 2:24pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) *Ch 5 05/14
	Ben isn't his own grandpa, right? Very interesting story you have here. I love that Hal and Nyche are in it. Could you PM me when you update? -----signature----- Reports from the Corellian Conflict - updated 11/22 http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24309725 Princess of Naboo's Drabbles - Wk 7: Han; Wk 8: Tenel Ka http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/244319
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Imperial-Hippy Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 5/14/06 5:30pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) *Ch 5 05/14
	Ah Kidan so you sneeked anouther Ben/almost Jys story on here did you? im glad i found it, its very good, very diffrent to your other storys though i can sense a twist on its way ... i very much like how Ben is potrayed in this story very mature and wise, like the Ben from Scion if he was a jedi, i supose that is what he is really. very well done it reads great, can u add me to the PM list please -----signature----- "The only path to emortality is in the hearts of thoes who you love."
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Lola64 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 5/14/06 7:21pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) *Ch 5 05/14
	Ben is the father of his mother? See what happens when you play with the past. You seem to be strolling along nicely. I wonder if the confrontation between he and Vader is coming up? I'll be back to see. -----signature----- Kyp/Nurse Lola: the new ship I stalk people. It's a Lola thing. Been gone and is now back. Did you miss me?
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/15/06 6:05am Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) *Ch 5 05/14
	princess_of_naboo Ben isn't his own grandpa, right? Man...that's just disturbing... Very interesting story you have here. I love that Hal and Nyche are in it. Thanks! an yeah, Hal an Nyche don't get enough scream time.... Could you PM me when you update? Sure, but there's only two posts left (this is obscenely short sorry) Imperial-Hippy Ah Kidan so you sneeked anouther Ben/almost Jys story on here did you? lol...what can I say, I must infect all the boards with Benella... im glad i found it, its very good, very diffrent to your other storys though i can sense a twist on its way ... me thinks i've become.....predictable...must go write something as a straight-up adventure no twists, no turns... i very much like how Ben is potrayed in this story very mature and wise, like the Ben from Scion if he was a jedi, i supose that is what he is really. I think he's mature, but not necessarily wise... very well done it reads great, can u add me to the PM list please sure but like i told princess_of_naboo there's only two posts left, today an tomorrow... Lola64 Ben is the father of his mother? See what happens when you play with the past. Again...that's just disturbing... You seem to be strolling along nicely. I wonder if the confrontation between he and Vader is coming up? I'll be back to see. Yes, Vader appears today... -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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Imperial-Hippy Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 5/15/06 2:01pm Subject: RE: Pebble in the Sky (Ben/OC, Hal/Nyche, others) May Legacy Child Entry (Time travel) *Ch 5 05/14
	Kidan [i]me thinks i've become.....predictable...must go write something as a straight-up adventure no twists, no turns[/i] then it would be star wars would it? besides, you cant be a good old twist, i dive everyone nuts in drama, i wont do a peice unless it i have come up with a good enough twist init. lol sure but like i told princess_of_naboo there's only two posts left, today an tomorrow... shuckes, i only just found this, ah well i really liked it, and please still PM me when u update it, i dont look on these boards that often -----signature----- "The only path to emortality is in the hearts of thoes who you love."
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