Author Topic: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
Jaira 
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Registered: May '05
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Date Posted: 1/30 10:54am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Update 1/28
I think Padme made the right decision.She's very young, and has plenty of time to go back to work later. Not really a 'retirement', just a hiatus. wink

I'm sorry it's taking me a while to reply to your posts, I recently started working again. Tell Padme she may get slower at posting her responses to Fan Fic once she goes back to work. laugh

 

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Kathleen_Solo 
Registered: Dec '06
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Date Posted: 1/31 4:48pm Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Update 1/28
Hey i want on all the future PM lists for sequels and little short story things inbetween!!! Since i am such a freak with this story!! cute chapter!!! this is all that i have time now to write so im a gonna go now later folks!!!

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AvenKiel 
Registered: Oct '03
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Date Posted: 1/31 6:59pm Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Update 1/28
Wooo! Great post, put me on that pm list!!

 

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Diamond_Revelation 
Registered: Feb '03
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Date Posted: 2/2 2:47am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Update 1/28
Great update!! PLease can I go on the PM list for the next story? praying

 

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Jaya Solo 
Registered: Jul '99
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Date Posted: 2/4 11:02am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Update 1/28 - Date Edited: 2/4 5:16pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jaya Solo
Don't forget, I'm taking requests now for a one-time pm for those that would like to be alerted when I start the next story. Progress on the writing has gone well, but I want to get a lot of the kinks worked out before I post it. happy (And more of it written so that during those evil school weeks I have something to post!) I'd guess that there will be at least a month in between now and when I post it. Suggestions for viggies are welcome!

Oh yeah, are there any lurkers that are out there that have been reading for a while but haven't posted yet? I'd love to hear from you now that the story is over. batting




Anakins_Fallen_Angel
“Coming from the man that compared me to sand… he must have been doing a particularly bad job of it,” Padmé teased.
“Hey! I said you weren’t like sand…” Anakin protested.
“It was unique to say the least,” Padmé commented.
I Absolutely Loved That Bit

grin Me too! That was one of my favorite parts of the post. wink He was so silly. “I come from a dry, dusty, dirty place and you remind me of the opposite of it...”

Excellent Update!! And Thanks for the PM!!
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Leia_Sith_Lady
this story is great. i really enjoy reading it and im sorry i havent been posting.
It's okay. happy It's nice to know you're still out there reading, even if you don't reply. happy

please add me to the PM list for the next story! its going to be just as good as this one has been.
I hope so! wink


LilyHobbitJedi
“Coming from the man that compared me to sand… he must have been doing a particularly bad job of it,” Padmé teased.
“Hey! I said you weren’t like sand…” Anakin protested.
“It was unique to say the least,” Padmé commented.
I too loved this reference to AOTC. Padme's right, it WAS unique.

grin Yep. Very unique. :: sigh :: And such a pretty scene...

ANd I think it's good Padme's retiring, she could definitely use a break.
Aye.

Wonderful update, thanks for the pm!
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JediMasterJessica 
Yay for Padme' retiring! It is totally the right decision at this time. Thanks for the PM and yes, please put me on the new PM list
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LadyKethry
I've been lurking on this story, and I would love to get PM's for the next installment.
Heh. So that's where you went! wink Sometimes I wonder if all of the 30+ people on my pm list are actually reading! I'm glad they still are. happy


Jek_Windu 
I can't wait to see the conclusion of this story- more soon!
Thanks!


ZebulaNebula,
So Padme's retiring ... or rather, taking an extended hiatus from politics.
I wafered between a straight retirement or her just saying she'd step down for a while. Part of me didn't want to make her seem too soft. wink I guess I do have a bit of feminism in me. wink

Anakin's got a point ... if Whie trying to flirt makes him look good by comparison, the Jedi have a lot to learn.
Heh... Maybe I'll write a viggie about this... wink I already have one for Whie. It amuses me greatly. batting

Awww ... Bail and Breha have a little princess of their own ... or did they adopt an orphan?
They adopted a Jedi orphan. The one that they'd been talking about throughout the story at small moments. wink

Looks like Anakin's stupid side was largely due to sleep deprivation. Figures ...
Or so he claims. wink

Can't wait to see how this ends ... and see the next story in the series. Oh, and if you spin off any viggies related to this, I'd love it if you'd PM me links for them.
What'll happen is that I'll start the third installment, and then when I feel like it, I'll start posting viggies. Some of them reveal stuff, so I can't post them all at once. wink Must do them in small doses. This will allow me to break tension in another way and do even do a bit of back planning for the big story. I'll probably have a sign-up PM list for both stories, and I'll probably use the big story to remind people when I update the viggie story.


Sen_Padme_Amidala
“Like make sure all of the padawans in the Temple get proper training on how to talk to the opposite sex? You should have seen Whie talk to Scout today. Someone has got to teach that boy how to flirt.” Anakin shook his head glumly as he thought about how poorly Whie had flirted earlier.
“Coming from the man that compared me to sand… he must have been doing a particularly bad job of it,” Padmé teased.
“Hey! I said you weren’t like sand…” Anakin protested.
“It was unique to say the least,” Padmé commented.
Oh wow. Well at least Padme is right. It was unique.

Hehe. That it was.

I'm glade that Padme is retiring(or taking a very long maturnity leave )right now. Although I do hope that she does come back, but I would understand if she wants to put her family first.
I'm glad you hope that! wink

One more post! I'm guessing it is time for the little Tachi-Kenobi to make her entrance into the galaxy. I can't wait!
What, you don't think I'd leave you with a cliff hanger about little Bitter Warming-Stone Tachi-Kenobi? batting


obsessedwithSW
I just can imagine how bad Whie's advances were!
Hehe.

Padme stepping down is a good decision let see if she can actually do it!
Very good point. wink


FitJedi
Absolutely wonderful and I agree with the above, Anakin can be quite dense at times. Well done, wonderfully written, so much emotion.
He's fun when he's dense. wink


L0B0
“Anakin, I’m going to step down from being the Senator of Naboo,” Padmé said as she tucked Luke in that night.
Wow...I didn't see that one coming - although it does seem like a sensible decision.

I have to go out in a big way, right? wink

“Since when did you get so wise?” Mirth spilled into Padmé's words.
“I don't know. It's probably due to getting too much sleep or something.” For once, he was not out on missions, not running for his life, not sleeping on the ground, not dealing with infants that screamed at all hours of the night and nothing was hindering his sleep like images of people in his life dying. He had actually be able to sleep soundly for a few days.
I don't mean to read to much into this, but in all fairness Anankin & Padme have really had to battle through more challenges than most sentients will ever be able to appreciate. It really is a wonder they made it this far, and if anybody deserves some rest it is those two.

Oh yeah, I know that. It's just a matter of figuring out what they would actually do: if they would stick in it like the stubborn people they are, or would they get out like the sensible people they're trying to be. And of course making sure that it's not too much of me going into my characters rather than the characters themselves actually wanting to do this.

Just imagine the benefit to the galaxy if Anakin is finally able to reach his full potential in the Force - if only he could be granted some peace from the constant pressure & nightmares that he has had to face for so long.
That's a good point.

After seeking the advice of Obi-Wan and brooding over the idea for a week, Padmé finally made the difficult call to the Queen of Naboo.
Good call, I would have done the same thing.
WWOWD = What Would Obi-Wan Do?

Heh.

*count me in for a PM on the next fic, I'd really like to see where you are going with this...
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shookie
This story has been wonderful. I am sad to see it wrap up, but I would love to be on the PM for the next one. Excellent job as always..
I'm relieved to see it go! It's been over a year and a half on this story!


VaderLVR64
“Coming from the man that compared me to sand… he must have been doing a particularly bad job of it,” Padmé teased.
“Hey! I said you weren’t like sand…” Anakin protested.
“It was unique to say the least,” Padmé commented.
Poor Anakin! He'll never live that down!

We'll never let him. wink


The_Slilent_One
cool
Thanks. happy


EGKenobi
Excellent update. Love the story,
When you write the sequel, add me on the PM for that one too

Glad you've enjoyed it!


Veloz
Well i'd LOVE a pm when ur next story is up, u know i'm a fan of urs *runs screaming at Jaya for an autograph*
:: giggles :: Have you ever imagined what you'd do if you met one of your fan fic favorites? I met Aaron Allston and yeah. I think I turned red and giggled a lot. But I got an autograph and picture!

I think padmé made the right call, cause knowing what trouble Skywalker kids r, she's gonna have her hands full for sure
Heh. That's true.

“I’ve already put aside my duties as senator for the twins… I’m sure I can find something to do instead of politics,” Padmé replied.
“Like make sure all of the padawans in the Temple get proper training on how to talk to the opposite sex? You should have seen Whie talk to Scout today. Someone has got to teach that boy how to flirt.” Anakin shook his head glumly as he thought about how poorly Whie had flirted earlier.
“Coming from the man that compared me to sand… he must have been doing a particularly bad job of it,” Padmé teased.
“Hey! I said you weren’t like sand…” Anakin protested.
“It was unique to say the least,” Padmé commented.
yeah Anakin, that wasnt one of ur best moments for sure

It was one of those moments where you just roll your eyes at the writers of those lines.

Bail smiled. “I don't know, to be honest. Like you, I've never given much thought to what to do without politics. I'll always have things on Alderaan to contend with, and I'm not opposed to serving as a Senator again.” He paused in thought. “I don't know what I'd do in your case,” he admitted.
Padmé mock sighed. “Well, you've been a lot of help.”
“Are you leaning one way?” he asked.
“I think I'm leaning toward stepping down. Do you really think I could reenter politics after a few years?”
“I think everyone would love to have you back.”
Indeed i think that's very good advice for sure

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Loved the update it's gonna be sad to see this story end, cause i've enjoyed it so much but i look forward to see how ur gonna finish it
Yay for it being over finally. wink


Jaira
I think Padme made the right decision.She's very young, and has plenty of time to go back to work later. Not really a 'retirement', just a hiatus.
Yes. happy

I'm sorry it's taking me a while to reply to your posts, I recently started working again. Tell Padme she may get slower at posting her responses to Fan Fic once she goes back to work.
It's totally cool. happy Take your time, and I'm glad you've found time to still read fan fic! happy


Kathleen_Solo
Hey i want on all the future PM lists for sequels and little short story things inbetween!!! Since i am such a freak with this story!! cute chapter!!! this is all that i have time now to write so im a gonna go now later folks!!!
Heh. You'll have to sign up for those PM lists when I get ready to keep track of them. wink I'm glad you enjoyed the post!


AvenKiel
Wooo! Great post, put me on that pm list!!
Thanks! happy


Diamond_Revelation
Great update!! PLease can I go on the PM list for the next story?
I'm glad you enjoyed it!



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Btw, if you're not on the list, and want to be, just let me know. If you asked me to be on the list but somehow I forgot to put you up, it's not because I don't like you, it's because I have a short attention span. wink

 

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Jaya Solo 
Registered: Jul '99
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Date Posted: 2/4 11:09am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
“Are you sure you're not ready yet?” Obi-Wan asked impatiently.

“Yes,” Siri growled for the thousandth time.

“It's just that you're a week past your due date. I... I want to be prepared. I want to be around when you have her.”

It had been an interesting month for the Jedi. Valin Halcyon had moved into the Temple along with his expecting wife so that he could complete his training under Master Yoda. Nyche had made friends with Siri and Padmé, eager to share stories of impending motherhood with the other young women. Valin had progressed quickly in his training, and Master Yoda suspected he would be nearing Knighthood soon.

The most interesting revelation was when Ranik Solusar had introduced his seven year old to the Council and asked them to accept him as a Jedi Initiate. The Council had accepted the young Jedi and placed him with the few other students around his age. Ranik was not punished for fathering a child, but the Council decided to make it clear to the remaining Jedi Knights that any children should be declared and brought before the Council so that proper training could begin. Ranik gladly took on the responsibility of training the young Jedi around his son's age.

“I swear, Kenobi, if you don't cut it out, I... I won't let you be in the delivery room at all!” Siri snarled.

“That's just mean.”

“So is pestering me about when I'm going to give birth! Go pester Anakin! Go teach Whie how to flirt with Scout better! Go meditate! Go eat Master Yoda's food! Just do something!” the exasperated Siri cried out.

Obi-Wan began to exit their apartment but Siri's cry stopped him cold.

“Is it...”

“Don't you dare. Just get me to the healers. And get Padmé. Now.”

“Yes Dear.”

Obi-Wan made a quick call to Padmé before gathering up their belongings and walking carefully behind the proud Siri. There had been something about removing a part if he treated her like she was an invalid again, so he gave her the distance she craved.

A room had been set up in the healers' department specifically set up for birthing. Siri's newly acquired nurse droid was there to aid the healers in the birth.

Padmé burst into the room the moment Siri was settled. She spent a few moments coaching Siri through the task ahead before the process moved up speed. Siri was very glad that although her daughter had overstayed her welcome in her womb that she had decided to enter the world at a rapid pace. In less than an hour, Padmé and Obi-Wan were encouraging her through her last push before a baby's cry greeted them.

“Baby girl,” the nurse droid called out before cleaning her and wrapping her up in a soft pink cloth.

“Congratulations!” Padmé said to her friend.

“You did it!” Obi-Wan murmured before kissing her head.

The nurse droid handed the delicate infant to Obi-Wan who stared at her curiously. He approached Siri and let her hold their infant daughter.

“She has red hair. It's so strange,” Obi-Wan commented.

“Obi-Wan, I have something to tell you,” Siri said very seriously. “You're not the father.”

Obi-Wan felt his stomach drop out of his chest. “Who.. what..”

“It's Master Yoda,” Siri replied before she rolled her eyes at him.

“That's not funny! I believed you for a minute there!” Obi-Wan said, trying very hard to keep his voice in check.

“Well, next time, you get to have baby and then you can scare me half to death,” Siri rebuked.

“I don't think it's really possible, Dear, for me to have a baby,” Obi-Wan bickered.

“Well then, I think she'll be our only one,” Siri asserted.

“What's her name?” Padmé asked, breaking the argument apart.

“Mara Jade,” Obi-Wan and Siri replied together.

“Mara Jade Tachi-Kenobi, welcome to the world,” Padmé softly said as she stared into the face of the baby.

“Do you want to hold her?” Siri asked.

Padmé smiled and accepted the baby gingerly. “Little Mara, you'll be able to grow up with my twins and my next child. You'll get to train with all sorts of little ones that have already been born or that will be born soon. By the time you're old enough to be a Jedi, the Order will be very different. Who knows, by then your dad my even let you date.”

Padmé left the Tachi-Kenobis alone with their new little one as they introduced her to their padawans. The future of the Order was being born around them, and one day, their new little one would join the ranks and continue to make the galaxy safe for generations to come.

 

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queenberuthiel 
Registered: Oct '05
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Date Posted: 2/4 11:45am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
Oh my gosh, I loved Obi-Wan and Siri's banter!!!! Can Obi-Wan please have the next baby? That would be so funny!

Ok, I admit it, I've been lurking rather than reviewing. blush Can you forgive me?

May I please be on the PM list for the next story? I promise to review more often. angel

Thank you for allowing me to come along for the ride. I'll see you in the next story. wink

 

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shookie 
Registered: Aug '07
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Date Posted: 2/4 11:51am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
Loved it!!

 

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Registered: Feb '04
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Date Posted: 2/4 11:56am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
“She has red hair. It's so strange,” Obi-Wan commented.

“Obi-Wan, I have something to tell you,” Siri said very seriously. “You're not the father.”

Obi-Wan felt his stomach drop out of his chest. “Who.. what..”

“It's Master Yoda,” Siri replied before she rolled her eyes at him.

“That's not funny! I believed you for a minute there!” Obi-Wan said, trying very hard to keep his voice in check.

“Well, next time, you get to have baby and then you can scare me half to death,” Siri rebuked


Wonderful! love applause

 

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Registered: Jun '07
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Date Posted: 2/4 11:57am Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
YES! Mara Jade is their daughter! I love you! kiss right on your cheek!

“Obi-Wan, I have something to tell you,” Siri said very seriously. “You're not the father.”

Obi-Wan felt his stomach drop out of his chest. “Who.. what..”

“It's Master Yoda,” Siri replied before she rolled her eyes at him.


That made me go like this: shock . Seriously. Then I laughed after Siri said it was Yoda's.

And I love how Obi-Wan was so concerned that it got on Siri's nerves...

“I swear, Kenobi, if you don't cut it out, I... I won't let you be in the delivery room at all!” Siri snarled.

“That's just mean.”

“So is pestering me about when I'm going to give birth! Go pester Anakin! Go teach Whie how to flirt with Scout better! Go meditate! Go eat Master Yoda's food! Just do something!” the exasperated Siri cried out.


grin love *happy sigh* I usually don't like happy endings but in this case I'll make an exception.

I'm sorry I didn't comment on every post but I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Please PM me when you post the next story!

 

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Valairy_Scot 
Registered: Sep '05
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Date Posted: 2/4 12:02pm Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
That's just mean.”

“So is pestering me about when I'm going to give birth! Go pester Anakin! Go teach Whie how to flirt with Scout better! Go meditate! Go eat Master Yoda's food! Just do something!” the exasperated Siri cried out.

Obi-Wan began to exit their apartment but Siri's cry stopped him cold.

“Is it...”

“Don't you dare. Just get me to the healers. And get Padmé. Now.”

“Yes Dear.”

Obi-Wan made a quick call to Padmé before gathering up their belongings and walking carefully behind the proud Siri. There had been something about removing a part if he treated her like she was an invalid again, so he gave her the distance she craved.


Smart, Obi, if you want more kids. Lovely ending...wahoo...parents, banter and all sorts of good stuff.

 

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Registered: Aug '04
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Date Posted: 2/4 12:05pm Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
Awww it's over sad but a lovely (and surprising!) ending grin

“Are you sure you're not ready yet?” Obi-Wan asked impatiently.
“Yes,” Siri growled for the thousandth time.
“It's just that you're a week past your due date. I... I want to be prepared. I want to be around when you have her.”

Maybe u DONT wanna be around Obi Wan, things might get ugly laugh

“I swear, Kenobi, if you don't cut it out, I... I won't let you be in the delivery room at all!” Siri snarled.
“That's just mean.”
“So is pestering me about when I'm going to give birth! Go pester Anakin! Go teach Whie how to flirt with Scout better! Go meditate! Go eat Master Yoda's food! Just do something!” the exasperated Siri cried out.

laugh Siri's temper mixed up with hormones... that's never good doh!

“She has red hair. It's so strange,” Obi-Wan commented.
“Obi-Wan, I have something to tell you,” Siri said very seriously. “You're not the father.”
Obi-Wan felt his stomach drop out of his chest. “Who.. what..”
“It's Master Yoda,” Siri replied before she rolled her eyes at him.
“That's not funny! I believed you for a minute there!” Obi-Wan said, trying very hard to keep his voice in check.

laugh laugh omg that was too funny laugh laugh good one Siri tongue applause

“What's her name?” Padmé asked, breaking the argument apart.
“Mara Jade,” Obi-Wan and Siri replied together

shock woa! i did *not* see that one coming! applause ... yeha, seems she's definetly gonna have Siri's temper laugh

Padmé smiled and accepted the baby gingerly. “Little Mara, you'll be able to grow up with my twins and my next child. You'll get to train with all sorts of little ones that have already been born or that will be born soon. By the time you're old enough to be a Jedi, the Order will be very different. Who knows, by then your dad my even let you date.”
laugh yeah, he's gonna let her date a Skywalker raised_brow laugh

I seriously enjoyed this fic... thanks so much for sticking with it and giving us such a lovely ending...wonderful job! applause

I look forward to ur future stories wink grin

 

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L0B0 
Registered: Jan '08
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Date Posted: 2/4 12:16pm Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4 - Date Edited: 2/4 12:17pm (1 edits total) Edited By: L0B0
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Great work on this story; there was so much to like it's hard to pick out favorite moments- but Siri & Obi-Wan being Mara's parents is right at the top of the list.


Once in a while, a happy ending is just a really nice thing to read.


Thanks for posting such a satisfying conclusion to this fic, it made my day cool

 

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Date Posted: 2/4 12:59pm Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
“I swear, Kenobi, if you don't cut it out, I... I won't let you be in the delivery room at all!” Siri snarled.

“That's just mean.”

“So is pestering me about when I'm going to give birth! Go pester Anakin! Go teach Whie how to flirt with Scout better! Go meditate! Go eat Master Yoda's food! Just do something!” the exasperated Siri cried out.


laugh love I just LOVE all the Obi-Wan and Siri banter! Poor Obi-Wan for irritating Siri right before she went into labor.


“Mara Jade,” Obi-Wan and Siri replied together.

“Mara Jade Tachi-Kenobi, welcome to the world,” Padmé softly said as she stared into the face of the baby.


Aww...cool! So Mara is Obi-Wan and Siri's daughter in this story. I like it.

This was such a pleasure to read, and I enjoyed every moment of it. I can't wait to read the next one! Great job! applause applause

 

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ZebulaNebula 
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Date Posted: 2/4 1:15pm Subject: RE: Restoring Order (Siriwan, A/P, post RotS AU) - Completed 2/4
I knew Mara was a Kenobi. tongue The red hair really shouldn't be that big a surprise - if either of them had any knowledge of genetics. I guess that's one more thing for the temple to teach. Loved Ranik bringing Kam forward ... looks like most of the prominent Jedi of the next generation are accounted for.

 

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