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For the Love of the Queen-Story Completed (7/11) Special Note!!! (7/24)
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JediMasterRev
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For the Love of the Queen-Story Completed (7/11) Special Note!!! (7/24)
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The Chronicles of Anakin's life on Naboo continue in this second installment of how his destiny changed when the Jedi refused to train him. My thanks to everyone who has decide to return as we continue on with this journey. As always, thoughts, comments and suggestions are always welcomed!
TITLE: For the Love of the Queen
AUTHOR: JediMasterRev
TIMEFRAME: 2.5 years before AotC
CHARACTERS: Anakin, Padme/Queen Amidala, Obi-Wan, Sabe, Handmaidens, Count Dooku, Palpatine, Siri Tachi,Shmi & Cliegg Lars, the Jedi Exile and OCs.
GENRE: Drama, Action, Romance, Adventure.
SUMMARY: A pre-AotC AU. Sequel to the Naboo Chronicles. As events in the galaxy become more tumultuous, the call for Anakin to fulfill his destiny becomes even greater as he learns more of the mysteries of the Force and of himself.
DISCLAIMER: It all belongs to GL. Just borrowing the car for a little while.
Many thanks to my beta reader Geo3 for all her help and wonderful insight!
Addendum: For those of you who are new to this series, I highly recommend reading The Naboo Chronicles so that you get all the pertinent background. However, if you are anxious to read FLQ, in summary, after the Jedi refused to train Anakin, he was given a great honor by the Naboo which allowed him to live there permanently. He's received a top education and has become close friends with Padme and her handmaidens. Meanwhile, Obi-Wan has gone behind the Council's back by training Anakin in the ways of the Force in secret. Anakin would go on to free his mother by winning another Podrace on Malastare and has foiled two attempts on Padme's life. Also, the Jedi Exile (from the KOTOR series), who was punished with the curse of immortality, was sent to Naboo by the Force to help Anakin and the Naboo as they build a new military to defend their sector of the galaxy.
Prologue:
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...
Unrest is building within the galaxy as the once feeble outcries from the Outer Rim have formed into the growing faction calling for the dissolution of the Republic. Its leader, Count Dooku, has traveled tirelessly from system to system rallying further support. Most of the stalwart institutions of the Core, including the Jedi Order, paid little attention initially, have now become concerned about the growing influence of the Serreno Count; but have done little to squelch it. Several worlds loyal to the Republic such as Naboo, Malastare, Alderaan, Onderon and Kashyyyk have formed a cooperative to discuss how to best deal with the escalating tensions peacefully.
During the past three and a half years, Anakin Skywalker has grown both in body and in strength with the Force. His Master, the Jedi Knight Obi-Wan Kenobi, has continued to secretly train Anakin, but Obi-Wan's other duties, both to the Jedi and to his wife, have made their interactions fewer over time. Meanwhile, Anakin has become a brilliant military tactician and strategist under the tutelage of the Jedi Exile Ilianya Tro. Naboo's military has grown steadily. Ellise Bibble's starship designs were approved by the Royal Court shortly after the attempt on Queen Amidala's life. However, the first prototypes remain in development as numerous problems continue to plague the project.
Tensions have remained high between the Naboo and the Trade Federation, prompting Queen Amidala to initiate negotiations with the Mon Calamari in hope of exchanging technologies for the production of a capital ship fleet. Their dealings have been slow, but promising. And despite her vehement objections, Naboo's Parliament, voted to amend the constitution increasing the length of term in office from four to five years. The law was made retroactive, adding two additional years to Amidala's service.
While the Senate has become increasingly plagued with corruption, Chancellor Palpatine has taken full advantage of their greed and has covertly appropriated more power into his office. Meanwhile, as the Kamino clones near completion, and the work of his apprentice, Darth Tyranus, grows in success, Sidious scours the cosmos for other beings who will serve his bidding without question as he patiently waits to take the Chosen One as his apprentice
The Geonosians have completed several successful tests of the ultimate weapon's superstructure, but the arms dealer, Valkin Ord has had only limited success in constructing the station's main cannon. As a result, Palpatine has dispatched Darth Tyranus to check on Valkin's progress...
A/N: Chapter 1 starts next week!
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"This above all, to thine own self be true." Polonius, Hamlet, Act I, Scene III For the Love of the Queen: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24151408/p1/?0 The Naboo Chronicles: http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/18644312/?162
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ShadowcatX-men
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RE: For the Love of the Queen-Sequel to The Naboo Chronicles (A/P, O/S & OCs) Prologue Up! (6/16)
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Wow can't wait to read the rest. Good job
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Oh, wonderful start and I’m working on trying to read “Naboo Chronicles” and it’s moving forward, slowly (a lot slower then I like) but it’s going.
Anyway, please put me on the pm list for this one, thanks.
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RE: For the Love of the Queen-Sequel to The Naboo Chronicles (A/P, O/S & OCs) Prologue Up! (6/16)
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I read Naboo Chronicles and liked it. If there is a PM list for this I would like to be on it
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Yay it's here. I've been waiting for this sequel to appear, so please pm me with the lastest chapter(s). Thanks so much. Oh and GREAT start.
Mo
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I quiver with anticipation for this next installment. I find it particularly interesting concerning Anakin and Obi-Wan's apparent lack of time together. No doubt this will spell conflict in the future for them.
Absolutly cannot wait to read more. 
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Oh right, you started the next story, fantastic MasterRev.
I can't wait to see what has become of your AU Anakin.
see ya
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Gina
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Yea! You started the sequel!! 
Looks like the storm clouds are gathering on the horizon...
An excellent beginning. 
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Yay! Yay! Yay!
::dances::
It's finally here! Excellent prologue; this is going to be just as exciting as the Naboo Chronicles, if not more! Can't wait for the first chapter!
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WHOOHOO!!
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looks like a good start to me! 
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I just posted a review for this on fanfiction.net, so I'll copy and paste it here with a few alterations.
From what you posted so far, this story is looking to be just as good or better than its predecessor and I'm looking forward to reading it. I see that Naboo is still working to develop a military and the idea that they may be obtaining some Mon Cal cruisers in the future is pretty cool.
Since he hasn't been expelled from the Order, I assume that Obi-Wan has managed to keep his marriage hidden from the Council? Wonder how long that will last? Also, will we be seeing Anakin's vision from the end of 'TNC' begin to come true in this story?
Looking forward to your next update!
~ The Mormon Jedi
P.S - I'd like to be on the P.M list if you make one.
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Whahoo! I am so glad to see the sequel getting started. I can't wait to read your first chapter.
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Yay! The sequel's here!
I can't wait for chapter 1
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*squeaks* The sequel has begun! *cheers*
Awesome teaser, Rev! Sounds like everyone's quite busy! *grins* Mewonders how the Jedi are taking the fact that the one they rejected is now fast becoming a brilliant military figure. If the Clone Wars still occur, then they'll probably wish they had brought him into the Order. 
Great job!
AQ
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Add me to the pm list please!
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