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For the Love of the Queen-Story Completed (7/11) Special Note!!! (7/24)
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JediMasterRev
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Date Posted:
7/22/06 5:40pm
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Thanks for all the responses, everyone. I truly appreciate them!
G_Anakin: You're most certainly welcome and thanks for reading!
Rocketscientist:
Dude! You don't skimp on your chapters that's for sure! I feel like the shrimp from "Finding Nemo" "I am ashamed!"
:)) You shouldn't feel ashamed. I am just long winded.
Anyway - I enjoyed the look into the lives of the handmaidens. We don't often see them so intimately. Nor is it easy to handle dialogue with that many speakers - but you pulled it off really well.
Thanks so much. The handmaidens do get left in the background too often and I thought it was important to get an idea how the feel about all the changes that are currently going on around them.
Dahlia is becoming quite the little adept.
And she's only just begun  .
And Master Yaddle died - oh dear, poor Jaden. I wonder what 's going to become of him?
All shall be revealed in time.
And the exile Illianya is TOO COOL! She has a real history doesn't she? - about 4000 years!!!!!
I like it!
<gasp!> I wonder if SHE knows what's in the crypt!!!!!
Methinks you are somewhat interestin in the crypt's contents.
Thanks so much for reading. Glad you are still enjoying!
DancesWithBlasters:
Oh. Wow. Dahlia, she just started training with Palpy, and she's already soaking up the Sith issues. She needs to cool down, and think about it, does she really want people suffer and die horrible deaths by her hand?
In the beginning I seriously doubt it; however, Palpy does have ways of molding people to do his biding, which often involves slaughter.
The Ani/Ami mushy stuff was cuteness beyond perfect, so you know. And so was everything else!
Thank you so much. You are too kind. Thanks so much for reading!
AngelQueen:
The plot thickens at all levels! Awesome job, Rev!
Lots is happening and more on the way.
Loved Mace's frustration! *grins*
He's definitely not having an easy time of things.
Thanks so much for reading!
Mirik:
wondeful update )) as always i'm head over heels with the mushy part!
Thanks so very much. Mush is definitely a good thing and there will be more. I promise. Thanks for reading!
Astarael: Thanks so much for reading!
Sethsky: Happy to know that you are still enjoying. Thanks for reading!
Idrelle_Miocovani:
Awwww, I loved seeing into the lives of the handmaidens.
Glad to hear that. They are alot of fun to write. Each has such different outlooks on things.
EEEEEK! (I seem to be doing that a lot lately...  ) ::shudders:: Creepiness. That is deffinately not good.
Nope. Dahlia does seem to be hanging dangerously over the abyss.
And so the plot thickens.
And much more is on it's way. Thanks so much for reading!
VaderLVR64:
Very worrisome indeed, but a great post!
Thanks so very much. Things are definitely starting to happen!
Darth-Buddy:
I liked all of your sub-plots, thanks for the update.
Thank you. Glad you are enjoying my subtle twists here and there. In time they will all converge in one way or another . Thanks for reading!
Geo3:
I dont envy Padme the political and military choices that are facing her as Queen and protector of Naboo. Im very happy that throughout the story, you have made explicit the conflict between the desire of a peaceful planet to live by its values and the need to preserve that planet and to keep it safe. There are no perfect solutions. Nothing is simple. This struggle between values and political necessity gives real depth to the story and the characters struggles.
This is a major underlying theme that I was hoping would come out in the handmaidens' conversation. While the majority of the Naboo agree wit the Queen's actions, there are still centuries worth of traditions that they will have to reconcile with. Change is rarely an overnight thing and the Naboo will have several growing pains as their military continues to grow.
The scene in which Dahlia receives her first lesson is tragic on so many levels. Poor, poor child. So much has happened to her. I dont blame her for wanting to grasp a way outof the evils that have befallen her through no fault of her own, but the manipulation is evil.
Palpatine has seemingly mastered being able to identify those whose pasts lend to the expression of their darker emotions. Much like he manipulated Anakin in canon, so he is doing the same with young Dahlia as he manipulates her to fulfill his purposes. And by the time they realized that they've crossed a moral line, it is already too late to turn around. Whether this will be the case for poor Dahlia remains to be seen though .
loved the scene with Obi-Wan and Jaden. However AU you've taken the story in making him the secretly married Jedi, your characterization of Obi-Wan, his modesty, and his earnestness, is spot-on!
Glad to know that despite the major differences that the characters still seem like themselves. That made my day  . 
I understand the depth of Jaden's grief very well. But can I just say that the phrase he would not fail her again gives me a very, very bad feeling?
Hang on to that thought .
She never ceases to fascinate me, and her past as a Sith the Mandalorian connection, how did she get from THAT to the Illyania who is now entrusted with Anakin's education, despite Padme's worries about her?
Ilianya has definitely come a long way from that time. We'll see over the next few chapters several more glimpses how she arrived at the point that we all know her to be at now.
What a complex, sweeping story you have here. Bravo!
Thank you so very much. Even though some things appear to be unrelated, I promise in time they will all converge to make sense, I hope . Thanks so much again for all your help and wonderful insight. I truly appreciate it!
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RE: For the Love of the Queen-Sequel to The Naboo Chronicles (A/P, O/S & OCs) Chap 4 Posted (7/18)!!
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I've been reading this story I think it is great.
I had to then read NC I thought it was great to take a step in another direction to see where it led.
I love how you made Obi Wan more human in this story instead of about "The Code". I love the relationship between Obi Wan & Sabe.
I love it that Anakin is not being led by his emotions, he has become a more rounded character.
The friendship & love story between Anakin & Padme is fantastic. It shows so much that the Canons ever did. But you only have 2 hours to put onto the screen.
I love all the sub plots & other characters.
Could please put me on your pm list. Thanks! Keep it up!
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You intoxicate me, I can't breathe.-Anakin to Padme from Attack of the Clones
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RE: For the Love of the Queen-Sequel to The Naboo Chronicles (A/P, O/S & OCs) Chap 4 Posted (7/18)!!
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Ch. 3
Obi-Wan found his face lost in a mass of curls which belonged to his wife. Unwilling to move, he wrapped his arm around her still form, which stirred ever so slightly before relaxing to his touch.
Hey, I wouldn't want to move either.
Several of Qui-Gon’s old rants about their detached stoicism came back to him as he reflected on the Jedi Order as a whole. To his dismay, the Order was in decline—of that he was quite convinced. The most terrifying reality of that thought was that the Dark Lord of the Sith was more than likely aware of this fact as well.
I am glad he realizes this, as it will help him and others (particularly Anakin) when the time comes to fight.
"Actually, I was thinking about Qui-Gon and Anakin.”
Sabé blinked several times. “Unusual thoughts to have here in bed with your barely dressed wife,” she teased, “when there are so many more interesting things you could be considering.”
Well, who said that's what he's thinking of right now? 
“Kenobi here.”
“Obi-Wan, am I disturbing you?”
YES!! 
Now go away, Mace! Shoo! 
One of the loudest voices of opposition was a Neimoidian aristocrat named Zekt Toncin. By Trade Federation standards, he was an honest man who wanted to erase the debacle of Naboo by calling for the removal of Gunray, as well as reform the organization’s trade practices.
Well, now I can't say (in this universe at least) that I've never met a Neimoidian I liked. He'll surely be a thorn in Palpy's side.
“Gunray’s influence and credits can only carry him so far, Your Excellency.” Toncin retorted. “He is facing the Galactic Tribunal; they cannot be bought or reasoned with.”
True, but now you're interfering with a Sith Lord's plans...Your grand potential for your world is now over.
Toncin suddenly gasped as he clenched at his chest. The Neimoidian then fell to the floor where his body thrashed uncontrollably.
Too bad, For I think he was the last hope for the Neimoidians. 
“Then drink with me, my friend. Let us toast to the return of the Mandalorian people!”
I only have one thing to say:
LOL 
Padmé felt herself shake involuntarily at his words. Over the years, he had stopped addressing her as her highness, opting to call her his Queen instead. At that moment, the words carried something else. Whatever it was, it made her heart race.
All you need to know is that it's a good thing and you should embrace it...and him. 
She and Anakin had a rare friendship. There were things that she could only share with him, and she never once worried that he would think ill of her for saying what she felt. He loved her and…she loved him.
I'm glad she's accepted it...at least to herself. Let us hope she shares this knowledge with Anakin soon.
Then they'll really be making progress.
“We can’t cheat fate, Padmé.”
She grinned as she affectionately squeezed his hand. “No, but we can sure give it our best try.”
Amen!
Ch. 4
“Anakin informed me earlier that Sabé finally convinced her to go to bed.”
“I wonder how she managed that.” Cordé chuckled.
“She probably spiked her tea with one of Yané’s tonics,” Versé joked.
They laugh now, but that's probably what happened...or Ankin gave her a sleep suggestion.
“Sometimes to ensure the peace, one has to be willing to show force.”
“But if we compromise our integrity, then we’re no better than the Trade Federation,” Versé insisted.
Cordé scoffed and shook her head. “There is nothing immoral about defending ourselves. Even the prophets told us that the spirits help those who help themselves.”
How very true.
"...history is laden with stories of armies that were built in the name of freedom, but in time, they were used to quench the greedy desires of their rulers,” Versé pointed out.
Those most likely happened because the people were not the ones who controlled their government.
“I foresee that you will serve me well.”
I guess the best we can hope is that it's not for long.
Dahlia bowed as the Dark Lord turned to leave her room; her heart was still pounding in excitement. For the first time in her life, Dahlia knew what it was like to have and use real power.
She wanted more.
She needed more.
Needless to say, this is not good.
“Investigating a Sith tomb, she and her Padawan were. The site of an ancient battle between Jedi and Sith, believed it to be. Unaware of an old trap, young Jaden was. Saved him, Master Yaddle did, but at the cost of her life.”
How awful. I hate it when one life has to be traded for another.
Kayliana.
It was the name of her true self—a name forsaken when she had given into her anger. How she wished she could go back and correct so many wrongs she had committed over the ages.
One of many the cruel things about time is that you can't change it.
Darth Vengeance didn’t know how to respond. The mighty Revan was offering her the chance to become more powerful than any Jedi or Sith had ever dared to aspire. Together, as mere mortals, they had brought the Mandalorian race to near extinction. As gods, they could rule over the galaxy with an indestructible fist. Bowing her head in acceptance, the Exile extinguished her weapons.
So, she follwed this Revan in search of the secret of immortality...after she destroyed her Jedi and Sith Masters. So I figure that once she learned of the secrets, that she disposed of Revan at some point in time.
Overcome by grief, Jaden buried himself against the renowned Jedi. Words were no longer necessary as he knew that Master Kenobi understood his plight only too well. He only hoped that one day he too would conquer his guilt over Master Yaddle’s death and become the great Jedi Knight she always had proclaimed he would become.
He would not fail her again.
He just might, if he lets this consume him into becoming a perfectionist. But, let us hope it won't come to that.
More troubling was Yoda’s encounter with the supposedly mythical Jedi Exile and her orders.
So, Mace knows of her existence as well.
“Do you think young Jaden will become Obi-Wan’s student?”
“More than a coincidence, this is. The will of the Force at work here, I feel.”
This is odd. Obi-Wan shall take Jaden as his padawan. Thereby leaving Anakin's training up to Illanya.
“From what I know about Master Tro, not only was she a Sith Lord, but she was also on Danthomir for centuries as a member of a coven. How could we ever trust that her intensions are for our benefit?”
“Compliance to the will of the Force, her only salvation is,” Yoda said. “A good heart, always has she had. Misguided many times, she has been. A reluctant ally, she may be. But an ally, nonetheless.”
Isn't there a saying that goes: the road to hell is paved with good intentions. Well, it seems Illanya has gone down that road and come back with redemption. So the Jedi, like Master Yoda, should consider the Exile as an ally and count their blessings.
“But, Ani,” she responded in frustration. “I am no Jedi.”
“No, you are much greater….”
You are the future wife of the Chosen One...you are the primary pillar in his life. For without you, the greatest Jedi that ever will live...will cease to exist.
 Marvelous posts as always, Master Rev. Terribly sorry for my tardiness. My job (construction) has been weighing down on me. But, it can't keep me from this magnificiant story for long! Can't wait to read more! 
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Across_The_Stars-24:
I've been reading this story I think it is great.
Awww..you are too kind. Thank you so much!
I had to then read NC I thought it was great to take a step in another direction to see where it led.
Glad to hear you took the time to go back to the previous story. Hope it helped explain a lot of what has happened.
I love how you made Obi Wan more human in this story instead of about "The Code". I love the relationship between Obi Wan & Sabe.
It never really set too well with me how different he became between TPM and AOTC. I thought after all his days under Qui-Gon's watchful eye that he would be much more of a maverick. So, part of the 'experiment' of this story was to see how he would react given the change in events. I think as a result of all of this he has open himself to many new possibilities.
I love it that Anakin is not being led by his emotions, he has become a more rounded character.
Well, I wouldn't say that he has reached a completely serene state; however, given that he spent many of his formative years amongst people who cared and loved him, as well as let him be himself without judgement, I think he is helped focus his personality. That said, he still has many challenges ahead that will show how these changes have truly altered his persona.
The friendship & love story between Anakin & Padme is fantastic. It shows so much that the Canons ever did. But you only have 2 hours to put onto the screen.
While the movies were limited in time, I do think there was enough to be able to develop a more 'developed' relationship between them. I'm glad though that you have liked how their friendship has grown and is potentially leading to new levels. I always thought canon made them more infatuated with one another rather than truly be in love. Of course that gives us the opportunity to write different scenarios.
Could please put me on your pm list. Thanks! Keep it up!
Absolutely. You are added. Thanks so much for your response and welcome to the thread. Hope you will continue to enjoy this story!
AP4EVER:
Hey, I wouldn't want to move either.
Neither would I.
I am glad he realizes this, as it will help him and others (particularly Anakin) when the time comes to fight.
Hopefully. We shall see.
Now go away, Mace! Shoo!
Heh. Jedi have impeccable timing.
Too bad, For I think he was the last hope for the Neimoidians.
I seriously doubt there are any respectable ones left, as well shall witness soon .
I'm glad she's accepted it...at least to herself. Let us hope she shares this knowledge with Anakin soon.
Then they'll really be making progress.
Well, you know they can't ever make it that simple. There's always another challenge around the bend.
They laugh now, but that's probably what happened...or Ankin gave her a sleep suggestion.
 Hmmm...now that is an interesting idea.
Those most likely happened because the people were not the ones who controlled their government.
A very good point.
Needless to say, this is not good.
This is, as they say, just the tip of the iceberg.
So, she follwed this Revan in search of the secret of immortality...after she destroyed her Jedi and Sith Masters. So I figure that once she learned of the secrets, that she disposed of Revan at some point in time.
Maybe . All shall be revealed though .
He just might, if he lets this consume him into becoming a perfectionist. But, let us hope it won't come to that.
We shall see what kind of influence Obi-Wan will have on him.
So, Mace knows of her existence as well.
Yes. Recall in NC that both Mace and Yoda had a visit from the personified Force before they 'rejected' Anakin for training. This scene was actually written, but referred to several times.
Isn't there a saying that goes: the road to hell is paved with good intentions. Well, it seems Illanya has gone down that road and come back with redemption. So the Jedi, like Master Yoda, should consider the Exile as an ally and count their blessings.
Exactly. It seems for the moment that Yoda has accepted her help, albeit reluctantly. Their time though is still yet to come.
You are the future wife of the Chosen One...you are the primary pillar in his life. For without you, the greatest Jedi that ever will live...will cease to exist.
And quite possibly, she's even more important than that too .
Marvelous posts as always, Master Rev. Terribly sorry for my tardiness. My job (construction) has been weighing down on me. But, it can't keep me from this magnificiant story for long! Can't wait to read more!
Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. As always, your witty insights always crack me up. No worries about being late. Just glad you are still reading and enjoying. DRL can be a bear at times.
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That was quite a heated discussion between the handmaidens.
Dahlia bowed as the Dark Lord turned to leave her room; her heart was still pounding in excitement. For the first time in her life, Dahlia knew what it was like to have and use real power.
She wanted more.
She needed more
Oh, no. This is not good. 
And poor Jaden. Such a heavy burden to bear. Had to smile a little at his "hero-worship" of Obi-Wan. I can see that the young Padawans would see him in such a light. But, I still have to say that Jaden worries me somewhat.
And LOVED the A/P part. 
Excellent update, as always.
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Gina:
That was quite a heated discussion between the handmaidens.
Not everything is copacetic in Shangri La . As mentioned previously, even though many of the Naboo agree with the Queen's decisions, there is still centuries of traditions and rock steady beliefs to overcome. While Veruna's actions at the end of NC were extreme, there were probably some in the general population that wouldn't have shed a tear had he succeeded.
And poor Jaden. Such a heavy burden to bear. Had to smile a little at his "hero-worship" of Obi-Wan. I can see that the young Padawans would see him in such a light. But, I still have to say that Jaden worries me somewhat.
Hopefully Obi-Wan's new insight gained from training Anakin, as well as his marriage to Sabe will aid him in training Jaden. And hopefully Jaden will be open to listening. Lots to hope on. .
And LOVED the A/P part.
High praise indeed from one of my favorite mush author's. I am humbled .
Thanks so much for reading.
Next update is off to the ever diligent beta. Look for it soon!
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Aaaaah. Fabulous. I love reading your updates, Rev! ...even when they're depressing (and this one wasn't entirely, so thank you!) they always manage to brighten my day. Love where this is going ... although, knowing you, I have no idea where it'll finish up!
XOXO
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AussieGrrl:
Aaaaah. Fabulous. I love reading your updates, Rev!...even when they're depressing (and this one wasn't entirely, so thank you!) they always manage to brighten my day.
Glad to hear that . I'm not angsty all the time .
Love where this is going ... although, knowing you, I have no idea where it'll finish up!
Well, I would hate to ever become predictable. Like to keep you all guessing . Thanks so much for reading!!
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Oh my, I loved this update.
The conversation between the three women in the beginning was very interesting and I’m also very curies to see how far Padmé would go to protect Naboo and it’s people.
I feel for Jaden but
For days, he had replayed the events in the tomb over and over in his mind, trying to find something that could have warned him sooner.
I don’t think that is a very good idea but after losing some one that important to you, you do start to think about “what if” and the guilt is worst then anything.
Although, I’m more then sure that Obi-Wan will be able to help him, I mean, after all, he is Obi-Wan.
Ani is still really sweet and now I can’t wait how things will go.
Thanks for the pm and again with the wonderful update.
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great update, tremendous writing!
All the characters are now so well developed each part is as interesting as the next, moving the story alone.
So much is happening yet you handle it so well and don't let it get out of control. I applaud that.
Can I be back on your PM list? thanks
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well, i just found and read The Naboo Chronicles and i reeaally enjoyed it! The sequel looks like it's going to be even better 
The way you've blended the 'real' events of the movies/books into your own story is really well done, you've created a totally believable universe. I especially like how you've mixed in such a variety of minor characters and OC's. Your handmaidens have been developed into really interesting characters, (loving the sabe/obi-wan ), and your jango and dooku are also very well written with a lot more depth than they usually get, especially poor dooku...
I'll be honest and say i don't like siri much.. but i just.. don't like siri in general  still, i like that obi-wan isn't with her... go sabe!
Anway, i'm very curious as to how this I look forward to reading the next chapter...
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Star_Angel:
Oh my, I loved this update.
Thank you so very much. Happy to know you enjoyed it!
The conversation between the three women in the beginning was very interesting and Im also very curies to see how far Padme would go to protect Naboo and its people.
She's already shown that she's willing to put her life on hold for them. We shall see in time whether she will give up more for them.
I dont think that is a very good idea but after losing some one that important to you, you do start to think about 'what ifs' and the guilt is worst then anything.
I agree. We'll have to wait to see how this will affect his growth.
Although, Im more then sure that Obi-Wan will be able to help him, I mean, after all, he is Obi-Wan.
Hopefully the insight Obi-Wan gained from training Anakin secretly will help him with Jaden.
Thanks for the pm and again with the wonderful update.
You're welcome and thank you for reading!!
Darksideeyesplease:
great update, tremendous writing!
Thanks! I appreciate that.
All the characters are now so well developed each part is as interesting as the next, moving the story alone.
So much is happening yet you handle it so well and don't let it get out of control. I applaud that.
I'm thrilled to know that they all seem well thought out. I really work hard to make them as believeable and within character, well as much as possible for an AU. The multiplot writing definitely has it's problems; however, I have most of the whole plot already worked out so that really helps things stay straight in my mind. There are still a few uncertainties, which I have left open so that once I get to those points, they will have the spontaneous feel to them that they should. Thanks though for the vote of uch is happening yet you handle it so well and don't let it get out of control. I applaud that.
Can I be back on your PM list? thanks
My apologies, my friend. I could have sworn you were still on the list. Well, you're back on for sure. Sorry about that. Thanks so much for reading!
Satanat_Solo:
well, i just found and read The Naboo Chronicles and i reeaally enjoyed it! The sequel looks like it's going to be even better
Wow! Thank you so much for talking the time to read NC and welcome to the thread!!
The way you've blended the 'real' events of the movies/books into your own story is really well done, you've created a totally believable universe. I especially like how you've mixed in such a variety of minor characters and OC's.
I'm thrilled to know that you've liked the mix. My original goal when I started NC was to write a series of stories based on the premise of Anakin not being trained by the Jedi and then letting events unfold as they will. At that time I thought that in time the story would simply mold into canon with the obvious differences. However, over time, I began to realize that it took on a life of it's own and a direction that should be unique.
True, certain events have to happen but they will occur in different ways and at different times, giving me a wide range of lattitude to explore.
Your handmaidens have been developed into really interesting characters, (loving the sabe/obi-wan ), and your jango and dooku are also very well written with a lot more depth than they usually get, especially poor dooku...
I appreciate that. I've mentioned in previous posts that I feel that there were so many characters that were underutilized in canon, which was a grave injustice because of how dynamic they potentially could be. I also don't like cardboard villians that are just evil for evil's sake. Rather, I like writing a composite about how they became that way, including what drives them to do what they do. Dooku and Jango are prime examples of this, calling into question how evil they really well written with a lot more depth than they usually get, especially poor
I'll be honest and say i don't like siri much.. but i just.. don't like siri in general still, i like that obi-wan isn't with her... go sabe!
No worries. Not every character is going to be loved. No fault in that. Glad though you are giving the story a chance and are enjoying the Sabewan.
Anway, i'm very curious as to how this I look forward to reading the next chapter...
Thank you so much for reading!
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To Everybody: My apologies for the delay in updating. As always, DRL stuck out its ugly head. Well, without further ado, I'll return us to where our story left off. Enjoy!
Chapter 5: Alterations in Fate
Rage.
The world had turned to red. The fury within had clenched her heart, setting it ablaze while her anger threatened to consume her very being. Padmé stormed out of the courtroom amidst the sound of cheers and hisses. The verdict was in.
Not guilty.
She had failed.
“Honorable judges, my client, Viceroy Gunray, is innocent of the charges levied against him. He was coerced by a Sith Lord to attack the Naboo people. He feared for the safety of all the member worlds that belonged to the Trade Federation. This is why he did what he did.”
“That is only an excuse!” Queen Amidala exclaimed from the witness stand.
The lawyer, a young human from Coruscant, whose hair was slicked back and wore the best robes credits could buy, stalked back in her direction. “Didn’t you report that Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn and then Jedi Padawan Obi-Wan Kenobi had directed your team away from a mysterious warrior who appeared to have Jedi-like training?”
“Yes, but...”
“And isn’t also true, Your Majesty, that this same warrior was later identified as a Sith by the Jedi High Council?”
“That is what Jedi Masters Yoda and Windu informed me of after the battle, yes.” She responded, unsure where his questions were leading.
“According to the Jedi, the Sith exist only as a pair—a master and an apprentice.” The lawyer stated to the panel of judges. “So, if one was killed on Naboo. Another must then still exist.” Turning back towards the Queen, he asked, “Was the identity of the dead Iridonian ever determined?”
“No.”
“There is no way then to be sure if this Sith was in fact Darth Sidious.” the lawyer pointed out.
“Even if it was,” Amidala said coolly. “It doesn’t erase what the Viceroy and his droids did to Naboo and her people.” Padmé felt her heart become more troubled when a wicked smirk eclipsed the young lawyer’s features. She suddenly had the feeling that she was walking into a trap.
“Tell me, Your Highness, throughout your entire education, did you ever receive specialized military training?”
“No, just lessons on self defense, as well as how to safely handle a blaster.”
The lawyer’s sneer grew even larger. “Would say then you are not qualified to lead military personnel into combat?”
Amidala gripped the edges of her chair tightly as she was aware of his inference. “I do possess the ability to read a map, sir,” she snapped.
“Answer the question, Your Majesty.”
Lifting her gaze up into the audience, she shot an apologetic look at her friends and assistants before she responded. “No, I am not.”
The lawyer flashed a quick smile of triumph before pivoting away. “Isn’t it also true that Viceroy Gunray offered you a peace treaty with his people prior to your escape to Coruscant?”
“More like an agreement to hand over our sovereignty,” she said bitterly.
“Still, had you signed it, you could have resolved the situation peacefully instead of causing the deaths of thousands on both sides.”
Amidala sprung up, pointing her index finger at him menacingly. “What Viceroy Gunray did was illegal and I as the ruler of Naboo had an obligation to use whatever means to free my people.”
“You were hardly in the position to lead an offensive,” the attorney barked in response. “Your actions were unwarranted and worst of all, they were irresponsible.”
Stunned by his pronouncement, Amidala fell back down into her chair. “I did what I felt was right,” she mumbled.
“You were reckless!”
Queen Amidala had been so lost in her reflections; she had managed to elude her handmaidens, as well as her security. Even Anakin was nowhere to be seen. Looking about, Padmé realized that she had ventured into the Senate rotunda, but where exactly she was or where she was heading, escaped her. Her anger slowly abating, she aimlessly strolled further down the long hallway. It didn’t surprise her when she spotted Anakin sitting up ahead on one of the benches.
“You move quite fast for someone with short legs,” Anakin quipped as he rose to his feet. Unable to stem the surge of emotions, Padmé rushed to his side, fell into his arms, and began to cry. As he cradled her, he whispered, “I’m sorry, Padmé. He had no right to say such things to you.”
Withdrawing from his embrace, streams of tears falling down her face, Padmé retorted sorrowfully, “But he was right, wasn’t he? My arrogance killed so many.”
“That’s not true,” Anakin said in her defense. “The Viceroy’s lawyer twisted what really happened to save Gunray’s slimy skin.” Straightening to his full height, he continued, “You are an honorable and decent leader, Padmé. You were willing to give up your life for the freedom of people you’ve never even met.” He paused, his features then slightly darkened. “The Viceroy and his cronies only care about themselves and how much they can take.”
“You heard the lawyer, Anakin; I did not possess the knowledge or the experience to lead that fight,” Padmé said, slightly backing away from him. “In fact, you should be angered that I thoughtlessly placed your life in jeopardy.”
“I would follow you into the volcanoes of Sullust if you asked it of me,” Anakin resolutely professed moving his hands onto the sides of her shoulders.
Feeling as if the weight of the entire galaxy had fallen upon her, Padmé’s body sagged. “Why?” she whispered.
“You are one of the few shining lights in this universe of darkness, Padmé.” Anakin said as he reached down to take one of her hands into his own. “You don’t realize how precious and rare you truly are.”
“I am…nobody special.”
“You’re wrong, my Queen” he declared, gently lifting up her chin.
Anakin believed in her. Despite everything, his confidence in her seemed to be immutable. She was inclined to believe it was the faith of a star struck child. But he was no longer a boy - and yet he wasn’t quite yet a man either. Still, the passion of his convictions, especially where she was concerned, was more intense than anything she had ever experienced. He was an enigma, despite their closeness over the past several years. In the end, perhaps that was what she found so attractive about him.
As Anakin drew nearer, Padmé felt her pulse surge and the plaguing guilt instantly dissolved, because of him. She couldn’t help smiling. Once again, Anakin had found a way to make everything better. Perhaps he wasn’t the transparent one. It was almost as if Anakin spoke to her very soul. Glancing up, Padmé could not avert her eyes from his soft looking lips. The curiosity—the need to press them, to feel her lips brush against his was growing well beyond her control.
“Why do you believe in me so blindly?” She softly breathed
“Because,” Anakin whispered, his roguish grin steadily increasing.
“Tell me,” Padmé sweetly prodded, feeling the corners of her mouth curling into a smile.
“Because,” he repeated, shifting his weight. “I’m in….
“Your Highness!” Sabé called out.
Padmé quickly backed away from Anakin as Sabé, the other handmaidens, as well as the rest of her security detail surrounded them. Relying on her regal persona, Amidala addressed them stoically, thankful that her heavy makeup hid her flushed, red cheeks.
“My apologies to you all for departing so quickly,” she offered prior to turning her attention in Anakin’s direction. “I needed some time to myself and Lord Skywalker was available to see to my protection.”
They seemed to accept her excuse; everyone, that was, except Sabé, whose eyes darted furiously between her and Anakin. Still, Padmé was appreciative that her most trusted assistant knew her place and would not say anything, at least in public, to embarrass her.
Eirtaé then chimed in. “We should return to the ship immediately, Your Highness. There is nothing more to be done here.”
“I agree,” Versé added. “Besides, we do not wish to create an intergalactic incident with representatives on both sides in such close proximity.”
“Very well,” Amidala acquiesced. “The arrangements made for our trip here will also be followed for the journey home. However… Sabé?”
“Yes, Your Majesty?”
“I want you to act as my decoy,” Padmé ordered. “If the Trade Federation has been watching us closely, they will know we are one short if Cordé acts in my stead.”
“Then there’ll be nobody to assist you on the trip back to Naboo,” Saché observed.
Padmé chuckled. “I think I can manage for a few days on my own,” she said with a wink. “Besides, I won’t be Queen forever and I’m sure none of you want to move into my parent’s house to help dress me for the rest of my life.”
The others chuckled as they agreed in unison. Only Sabé gave Padmé a knowing grin. “Very well. Then let’s return to the Senatorial guest residence so we can get underway as soon as possible.”
While the handmaidens led the way, Amidala looked over at the confused expression on Anakin’s face. He seemed hesitant to speak, stopping himself several times and then looking away. Padmé moved next to him and said softly, “I’ll explain later.”
**
Duty and responsibility.
Both were more than just simple words. Obi-Wan had dedicated his life in service to the Jedi Order, even when their commands had contradicted his reason. That was until he had decided to train Anakin. Since then, he had been far from the perfect Jedi, nearly breaking every tenet of the revered Jedi code. There had been many times throughout the past several years that he wanted to march into the Council’s chambers and admit to every single transgression he had committed. Obi-Wan abhorred deceit; however, he kept his marriage, as well as his mentorship of the Chosen One a well guarded secret.
It is the will of the Force.
He tried to convince himself that his actions were noble, righteous. Even Master Qui-Gon had appeared from the ethereal plane to further justify this notion. And still, Obi-Wan had trouble reconciling the guilt that continued to weigh upon his soul. What made it even more difficult was both Masters Yoda and Windu had strongly encouraged him to take young Jaden as his student.
How could he do that?
Anakin needed him.
Sabé needed him more.
And yet Obi-Wan could not ignore the obvious pull that drew him towards the boy. He had spent the last several days getting to know Jaden as he continued to recover in the Telosian medicenter. From their many conversations, Obi-Wan knew that he could teach much to Jaden and that their shared experiences over losing a Master would bind them even more closely than he was bound to Anakin. Balling his hands into fists, he frantically paced about the waiting room. Aside from his obligations to Anakin, most importantly there was Sabé. A padawan would seriously complicate their marriage by making it more difficult for him to go to Naboo.
Strangely, the more Obi-Wan turned over the events of the past few days in his head, the more Master Yoda’s request didn’t seem like a request at all.
He had no choice.
Unbeknownst to the general public, the Jedi were growing increasingly concerned over the strengthening influence of the Separatist movement led by the enigmatic Count Dooku. Many Masters and Knights who had opted for more sedentary duties were being sent on tedious diplomatic missions, often into tense regions of the galaxy. Considering his vast training in diplomacy under Qui-Gon’s expert tutelage, Obi-Wan’s experience had been sought and was badly needed since – inconceivably - the solidarity of the Republic was in danger.
He could not ignore what needed to be done.
“I thought Master Qui-Gon taught you to always be aware of your surroundings.”
Obi-Wan swiveled around to see Siri Tachi’s mischievous grin plastered across her face. Standing slightly behind her was the young Ferus Olin, who peered curiously at the both of them.
“Well, Master Tachi,” Obi-Wan teased. “This is indeed a surprise.”
Siri rolled her eyes as they embraced. “How’ve you been, old man?”
Obi-Wan scoffed with feigned indignation. “As well as can be expected.” Shifting his eyes over to her student, he added, “It’s good to see you as well, young Ferus. I hope this Sith witch hasn’t been working you too hard.”
Ferus’ face contorted briefly, as if he was desperately trying to suppress his laughter. “It is an honor to see you again, Master Kenobi,” he finally answered.
“Please, Ferus,” Obi-Wan waved his hands. “I’m not a holy relic. Master Obi-Wan will suffice.” The young padawan bowed his head in reply. Turning back to Siri, Obi-Wan asked, “What brings you two to this neck of the universe? I thought you were still cleaning up the Kessel Run?”
Siri sighed loudly. “A new mission actually. We’ve been ordered to resume Master Yaddle’s investigation of the Sith tomb.” Obi-Wan dipped his head in silent response. “However, before we headed out, Ferus wanted to check on Jaden.”
“Master?” Ferus asked as he glanced at Jaden’s room.
“You may go,” Siri answered. “Try to keep it short. We’ll be leaving at 0530.”
“Understood, Master.” Ferus replied with a bow. “Master Obi-Wan,” he bowed to before departing.
Obi-Wan chuckled after the boy was beyond earshot. “You have quite the model student there, my old friend.”
“I swear at times it is like having Master Adi and Master Windu following me around.”
“I’m sure the entire Jedi Council sleeps easier at night knowing that you are being well watched over,” Obi-Wan joked.
“If you do recall, Master Kenobi,” Siri responded, raising her brow. “You were once quite the stickler on conforming to the code. How far you’ve come since then.”
He forced a small laugh before turning to stare out the viewport. “Sometimes I wonder why I am even still part of the Order.”
Moving next to him, Siri said, “You are an exceptional Jedi, Obi-Wan. The Order truly needs your talents especially during these trying times.”
“A married Knight who trains students without a mandate from the Council,” Obi-Wan murmured. “And then to top it all off, they want me to take Jaden as my padawan, as well as return to the diplomatic corps.”
“That may not necessarily be a bad thing,” Siri observed.
“What do you mean?” Obi-Wan asked hotly. “It will significantly complicate my marriage.”
Looking straight at him, Siri replied, “I only say it as a friend and also it may help you decide what is most important to you.”
“I don’t need anything to help me figure that out,” he argued. “Sabé is the most important part of my life.”
“Is she?” Siri asked, arching an eyebrow. “If that were true, you wouldn’t be having this crisis of conscience.”
“I love her with all my heart, Siri.”
“Then that should lead you.”
Abruptly turning towards her, Obi-Wan folded his arms snugly against his chest. “But I also love being a Jedi and helping others.”
“I don’t envy you, my friend. I foresee the road ahead to be a difficult one.”
“I know,” Obi-Wan said under his breath. “I must live with my decision…and the consequences as well.”
Placing her hand upon his shoulder, Siri encouraged, “I don’t understand it completely, but somehow I know that Anakin, Sabé and now Jaden, your role in their lives are part of the Force’s plan. One way or another it will work out.”
“I wish I shared your faith,” Obi-Wan said, offering her a quick smile, then shifting his gaze abruptly towards Jaden’s room. “I can only hope that you’re right.”
**
There was little thrill in data slicing. Unlike countless, much more challenging tasks, stealing information was as mundane to Jango as walking in the park was to most other sentients. And yet this task did hold some special meaning. Perhaps at last Lord Ord had come to his senses and was truly prepared to lead the Mandalorian people out from the ashes? Would Jango finally be able to join in a cause that he truly believed in?
He lived and breathed for combat. Jango longed to test his skill and cunning against warriors that were truly his equals – not the pathetic marks who futilely attempted to fight him off. The Jedi would be the ideal adversary. If only…
He couldn’t help but grin at the thought.
Jango was no fool. He knew that Tyranus and his master, the elusive Darth Sidious, were trying to start a war—one that would undoubtingly engulf the entire known galaxy. His clones would be pivotal to this end; and yet the thing that he was most uncertain of was which side he would ultimately support. Ordinarily, his inclination was to ensure his own safety.
These, though, were far from ordinary times.
Jango was a parent, although not by traditional means. His child was his genetic copy, right down to his penchant for finding trouble. At times he wondered why he made the decision that had brought Boba into his life. Maybe it was the loneliness of his chosen profession finally getting the better of him? Or, quite possibly, it might be the fact that he would never love another woman for the remainder of his life. Only she would have been worthy to give birth to his true offspring.
But such thoughts were useless.
The past could not be brought back.
Neither could the dead.
Jango’s hopes now rested on the future. Although he loved his son deeply, he knew that Boba would soon burn with the same desires for glory and battle that he himself harbored. Most other beings desired peace so that their offspring could live in safety. That, though, was not the way of the Mandalorian, for they were only truly alive when engaged in warfare. It was how they defined themselves. Peace was a curse word in his native tongue. It meant decadence and death, which the remaining clans presently faced. Extinction due to war was another thing entirely; the Mandalorian way accepted that as a possibility. In fact, they aspired for such a fate, which meant they had finally met and been bested by a superior foe.
That end was welcomed.
It was even sought.
Jango’s hopes now rested upon the true Mandalore, Valkin Ord. He had been the one to suggest Jango to Tyranus to fulfill his schemes. Except for a few chance encounters, Jango knew little about Valkin other than his rightful place amongst his people. By reputation, the Ord family was amongst the wealthiest and most influential in the Republic. Their weapons were utilized on scores of different worlds, and it was generally known that they had more than a Senator or two in their pockets. The Ords were major players in galactic politics.
The stage was set for change.
But Jango was uneasy. He didn’t know how tightly Valkin was associated with Tyranus. Was Valkin simply using this tie for his own advantage? Was this war the Sith wished to reek upon the universe the opportunity to launch Valkin’s plan for their people? Lord Ord had told him next to nothing, only to be patient and in time he would understand everything. Jango was unaccustomed to such inaction. However, his present task would have to quell his curiosity, at least for the moment.
A soft chime brought Jango back to the present. The mainframe interface was signaling the completion of its task. Withdrawing his datapad from the mining guild’s large computer, Jango afforded a quick glance at the results. There were thousands of member worlds of the guild; yet, only forty worlds possessed the rare kelvacyte. Jango hoped that this information would be useful to Valkin’s cause. When he handed it over, perhaps the leader of their people would finally explain its value.
**
Victory was sweet as nectar.
Nute Gunray could not suppress the satisfied grin that had no doubt been plastered on his face since the reading of the verdict. Even the darkness that hid in the corner of his conscious mind, the black veil that had been erected the day he sold his soul to the man demon Darth Sidious, could not usurp this moment. Although he would never fully recover from the insult Queen Amidala had inflicted during her overthrow of his guardianship over Naboo, in time he would receive all that was due him.
Reluctantly leaving the scores of holonews reporters that were swarming about, Gunray, followed by his most trusted aide, Rune Hakko, headed slowly towards their transport. He wanted to bask in this glorious moment for as long as possible.
“We really must return to the ship,” Rune softly urged. “There are urgent matters that you must see to on the homeworld.”
“What matters?” Nute distractedly asked while waving at the crowd.
Rune leaned closer to him. “The situation concerning the development of our new… tactical advantage.”
Nute stopped in mid step as he felt his forehead furrow. “You mean to tell me that the operation was a success?” Hakko dipped his head in response. “Why wasn’t I told about this?”
“The elders believed it to be too great a risk to inform you in case you were found guilty.”
“So they didn’t believe that I would be exonerated.”
“Toncin did have his supporters amongst them,” Rune responded. “Besides, you had enough on your mind.”
“Perhaps you are right. What is our ‘guest’s’ condition?”
“He has been well cared for,” Hakko dutifully answered. “And I’m happy to say that he has been working almost non-stop on the device.”
“When will be able to test it?” Nute asked with a murderous grin.
“Soon.”
“And here I thought this day couldn’t get any better,” Gunray proclaimed. “Perhaps I will get my revenge much sooner than I hoped possible.”
**
The decks of the Angel Queen were silent.
Anakin hadn’t heard much other than the low hum of the hyperdrive since Padmé and he had departed Coruscant two days prior. Even the normal beeps and whistles uttered by the faithful Astromech Artoo were absent since he was on the Royal Cruiser with the others. They were truly alone, something that was as a rare as finding a Krayt Dragon egg on Naboo. Anakin had hoped that they would resume with what had happened, or more correctly, what had almost happened in the Senate building. Padmé though had locked herself inside the below deck quarters. They only thing she had said to him prior to their departure was to ask him to calculate the longest possible return route to Naboo. Saying that she needed time to think, Padmé had then retreated and he had not seen her since.
Anakin despised seeing her suffer.
In truth, he hated being unable to help her. More troubling was why had she decided to shut him out. Had he done something, said something to drive her away? Anakin had been tempted on several occasions to use the Force to check on her, but respecting her need for privacy, he instead had spent the time recalibrating the lateral sensors, as well as making some minor adjustments to the sublight engines.
At least he was still good at fixing machines.
Releasing a deep breath of frustration, Anakin returned his focus to his work. His ship had held up well over the years it had been in his ownership. Although he never wanted to think about her former possessor, Anakin had to admit that the Sith had been fairly diligent in her upkeep. Even so, as much time he had put into the Angel, she was in need of a major refit. Hopefully, Ellisé would have time to help him, given that it would be an enormous undertaking to do alone.
Extending for a modified hydrospanner that laid slightly out of reach, he suddenly felt it gently placed in his outstretched hand. Perplexed, as Anakin was sure that he hadn’t used the Force to summon it, he looked out from the engine compartment to see Padmé kneeling beside him.
She looked exhausted.
“Thanks,” he said. Padmé nodded, blinking her eyes wearily. “Have you slept?”
She shrugged a single shoulder. “Not a wink.”
“Do you want to talk?” Anakin asked, rising to his feet.
“I’m not sure what there is to talk about,” Padmé responded. “What’s done is done.”
“But you are still fretting.” He observed, lowering his hands to help her up.
After accepting his assistance, Padmé huffed loudly. “Do you always have to be so observant?”
“You wouldn’t have me any other way, my Queen.” He chortled.
Padmé followed him towards the pilots’ chairs. “Perhaps.” Shifting about in his chair until he was comfortable, Anakin watched her. She seemed to be tenuously holding the torrent of emotions swelling within her at bay. Padmé turned away, blankly gazing out the viewscreen. “Have you ever felt like everything you’ve done doesn’t really make a difference?” When she looked back at Anakin, tears were rolling down her cheeks. “Do you sometimes just want to give up?”
“What are you getting at?”
Padmé shrugged weakly. “I believe that I have become irrelevant.”
“You can’t mean that. The trial was a setback, nothing more. The Viceroy still faces several more charges in other courts.”
“This isn’t about Gunray, Anakin. This is something that has been weighing on me for quite some time.”
Anakin was at a loss for words. Never, throughout the tenure of their friendship, had he heard Padmé sound so defeated…so lost. “It’s your exhaustion talking. With some rest...”
“Rest isn’t going to change how I feel, Anakin,” Padmé said with a hint of anger in her voice. “I think though that the time has come for me to step…”
A large explosion erupted from the rear compartment, causing the entire ship to shudder violently. Anakin quickly grabbed the controls as the warning klaxons screeched.
“What was that?” Padmé cried out.
“I don’t know,” Anakin shouted. “But the power systems are failing and I’m losing control fast!”
“What can I do?”
“We’ve fallen out of hyperspace. Scan for someplace, anyplace to land,” Anakin instructed, his arms shaking while fighting the quaking controls.
“The navigational relays are out!” Padmé yelled after futilely tapping on the controls. “All long range sensors are down too!”
“There’s a small planet at the edge of the sector.” Anakin pointed at it with his chin. “I’m going to land us there…I hope.”
Padmé swiveled around in her chair to the com station, hurriedly opening each emergency channel. “To any nearby ships, this the Naboovian light starship Angel Queen. We are losing power and are in immediate need of assistance. Please come…” She screamed as the control panel sparked, and then went dead blank.
“Did it broadcast?” Anakin fought the controls.
“I think so.” Padmé said, her eyes growing wide at the rapidly approaching planet. “What are we going to do?”
“Hang on, Padmé. Things are about to get rough.” The ship was now skipping along the small planet’s outer atmosphere, shaking them violently. The hull then began to creak
“Anakin… I have a really bad feeling about this.”
**
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EEEK! CLIFFHANGER!!
Well, doesn't everyone have their own set of troubles in this chapter? Gunray got off *sulks and whaps him*, Obi-Wan's still caught between his wife and the Order, and now Anakin and Padmé are in deep trouble.
Great chapter Rev! Awesome!
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"Anakin, my allegiance is to the Republic, to democracy!"
"If you're not with me, then you're my enemy."
"Only a Sith deals in absolutes. I will do what I must."
"You will try."
Obi-Wan and Anakin
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astarael
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Date Posted:
8/2/06 11:10pm
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RE: For the Love of the Queen--The Naboo Chronicles Sequel (A/P, O/S & OCs) Chp 5 Updated! (8/2)
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Eep! Not good! Not good!
“Hang on, Padmé. Things are about to get rough.” The ship was now skipping along the small planet’s outer atmosphere, shaking them violently. The hull then began to creak
“Anakin… I have a really bad feeling about this.”
Nothing like throwing in a bit of suspense, is there?
Amidala sprung up, pointing her index finger at him menacingly. “What Viceroy Gunray did was illegal and I as the ruler of Naboo had an obligation to use whatever means to free my people.”
“You were hardly in the position to lead an offensive,” the attorney barked in response. “Your actions were unwarranted and worst of all, they were irresponsible.”
Stunned by his pronouncement, Amidala fell back down into her chair. “I did what I felt was right,” she mumbled.
“You were reckless!”
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