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Will_Kenobi
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1/4/07 2:15pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 1/4/07
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Very nice post 
You do a great job of putting the movie characters in the SW universe into our world, while still making them act like themselves.
Will you add me to the PM list  , and I'm looking forward to more 
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obsessedwithSW
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 1/4/07
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I hate sand,” Anakin remarked contemplatively. “It’s rough, irritating, and it gets everywhere.”
Padme laughed. “It really isn’t that bad, Anakin.”
He smiled at her and reached out to touch her hand. “Possible,” Anakin murmured, not really registering what he was saying. Feeling braver since Padme didn’t push him away, Anakin let go of her hand and touched her open back, flattening his palm against her skin so he could gain as much contact as possible.
Padme looked up at him, Anakin stared deeply into her eyes, praying that she felt even half of what he did. He leaned in slowly, his eyelids fluttering shut as his lips touched hers. The response came immediately, almost as if she had been expecting him to kiss her.
For several moments the world stopped existing. Then there was a rush of cool air and Padme was stepping away from him. “I shouldn’t have done that,” Padme said quietly, refusing to look at him.
“I’m sorry,” Anakin apologized, blushing.
Hey, This sounds vaguely familar. Where have I heard this before?  Good update Alley. I loved Sabe dialog 'Umm.. ok honestly' She's a teenager!
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Valairy_Scot
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1/4/07 8:36pm
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Funny how everyone is recognizable and yet so different. I've been chuckling away. Please add me to the PM list.
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Alley_Skywalker
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Palpy560: There is definitely more going on with the adults at this school then it appears on the outside, especially where Palpatine is concerned.
Will_Kenobi: I’ve added you Thanks for reading!
obsessedwithSW: Lol, yes, draw on AOTC for the A/P scene ideas, I do *smirk*
Valairy_Scot: Hi *waves* Great to see you here, Valairy! Yup everyone is different but still themselves at the core. It’s rather fun to play around w/ everyone and see how they fit into the new environment. Oh and I’ve added you to the Pm list
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Jaded_Rose
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1/5/07 12:07pm
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Oh, this is too funny. Please, add me to the List.
J_Ro
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Star_Angel
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Great way to get the movie lines into the story.
I loved the update and now I can hardly wait until I get to read more.
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Alley_Skywalker
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1/7/07 11:26pm
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Jaded_Rose: I've put you on th list
Star_Angel: Yup, I love making that connection to the canon story.
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Great Post!
Thanks for the PM.
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Alley_Skywalker
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 1/4/07
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Alley_Skywalker
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Chapter 12
“Be careful with those things!” Ventress hissed menacingly at the two boys creeping behind her. “It’s all clear,” she said finally.
“Which car’s are theirs?”
“That’s Nerdy-Wan’s Ford right there,” Bruck sniggered, shaking up the spray paint can in his hand.
“I think Olin’s is that red one.”
“That’s not even his,” Ventress spat. “It’s his daddy’s!”
Maul and Bruck sniggered and moved toward the cars with sloppy smiles of immature excitement on their faces.
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“…and that’s why I am against their activities,” Ferus finished, waving his arms in the air ardently.
Obi-Wan, his arms folded over his chest, simply shrugged. “I think we should be respectful of all people and their activities as long as they are not destructive ones.”
“But it’s not natural!”
“Define natural for me.”
“I’m sorry to interrupt this thrilling conversation boys,” Darra butted in, glancing at Ferus with annoyance. “But are you going to ask me to dance, Ferus, or are we going to stand around talking about **** all night?”
Ferus turned and smiled at her. “Ah, yes of course.” He took Darra by the hand and, excusing himself to the group, led her out to the dance floor.
Obi-Wan, noticing that many eyes were on him, made his excuses quickly and went off the find Quin. Suddenly, Obi-Wan was aware of not being in such a great mood.
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Quinlan Vos was having a great time. Aayla had somehow managed to match the color of her dress to the color of her hair and boy did she look hot. Quinlan simply couldn’t wait to be alone with her.
Of course, seeing as he was Quinlan, known as one of the biggest womanizers of Temple High, he was finally able to lure Aayla into a small supply room.
His fun was just about to start working on Aayla’s bra slip when the door swung open. “What the hell are you two doing here?” a rather embarrassed and annoyed Obi-Wan asked incredulously from the doorway.
“Hello to you too. Well at least you’re not Mr. Windu.”
“Right…”
“Do you mind Obi-Wan? I’m kinda busy here…” he looked over at Aayla with a promising look that made Obi-Wan utter a gagging noise and turn away, while Aayla seemed rather pleased and was licking her lips as she looked up at Quinlan.
“Believe me, Quin. I’m not interested in your sexual pursuits or activities. Had I known I wouldn’t have gone looking for you.”
“Why were you looking for me? Really, Obi-Wan, you should go get some lovin’ from Sabe and stop being so uptight.”
“I’m not uptight! I don’t even know what that means…” Obi-Wan was starting to feel increasingly uncomfortable in the given situation. Why did he go looking for Quinlan in the first place? “Why’d you give Skywalkerr?” he blurted out suddenly.
Quinlan looked confused. “Well, maybe because I’m going in a limo and he really needed a ride.”
“Nether of his parents have cars?” Obi-Wan asked sarcastically.
“Mom has a Volkswagen. But, damn, Obi-Wan, a car like that would be hugely embarrassing. Why do you even care? If you had wanted my pimp ride you could have asked too you know.”
Obi-Wan sighed. “Never mind, Quin. I don’t want your pimp ride.”
“Now can you please leave and let us finish?”
“Sure…do you know where Siri is?”
“Last I saw her she was headed outside with her date.”
“Alright thanks,” Obi-Wan mumbled, running a nervous hand through his hair and made his way through the crowd toward the parking lot.
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The look with which Bail asked her to dance made Padme rather suspicious and almost uncomfortable. Utilizing her best diplomatic skills she smiled at him sweetly and let him spin her around for a while, waiting for him to speak his mind.
“Are you having fun?” Bail asked finally.
She met his dark eyes and answered truthfully. “Yes, I’m having a good time. You?”
“Lovely.” There was some sarcastic tint in his voice that Padme found disconcerting. “So you fancy Anakin?”
Padme blinked up at him. “Excuse me?”
“Come on, Padme. You know what I mean.”
“Bail, there is nothing between me and Anakin. He’s just a nice boy who wanted to go with me to the dance.”
“And you agreed. Does it follow then that you wanted to go with him?”
“Well I certainly wasn’t against it. Bail, what exactly are you getting at?”
“Padme, I think I’ve been dropping you enough hints. I think it’s time you gave me an answer.”
“An answer? Bail, I think you’re jumping to conclusions here.”
“Well you should really do some considering here, Padme. What lies between us means a lot to me. I thought it meant a lot to you.”
Padme frowned. This conversation was going in a very despicable direction. What was Bail talking about? It was almost like he thought that they were actually… “Bail! What is there between us that I seem to be tarnishing? Do explain because you’re starting to confuse me.”
“What do you mean what is there between us? Are you saying that your feelings for me have changed?”
“My ‘feelings’ for you have not changed. What has is your state of sanity.” Padme pulled out of Bail’s hold and marched determinately away toward Anakin who was leaning casually against one of the walls with a cup in hand and talking to some Chinese guy.
Bail shook his head as he watched her walk away. “Breha was right,” he muttered desolately and stalked away from the dance floor.
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“Dave, why are we out here?” Siri asked as Dave led her out into the chilly bleak parking lot.
“I wanted some alone time with you,” Dave said in a husky voice. “You know you look amazing tonight.” He took her hand and pulled her closer to him.
“Umm, thank you,” Siri said, shifting awkwardly in Dave’s grasp.
He smiled at her sweetly and then dropped his head to kiss her neck. Siri let out a little gasp. Dave was good looking with his brown hair and emerald eyes and that basketball-player height of his. But she barely knew him. For all that they had been dancing all evening they had barely said anything significant to each other.
“Dave, maybe we’re going a little too fast. You know?”
Dave lifted his head up a little to peer into her eyes while his hand toyed with the straps of her dress. “We can go to my car if you’re shy.”
“No this has nothing to do with where we are. It’s just too fast.” She shrugged him off her.
The basketball captain who towered above her didn’t look pleased. “You don’t like guys or something?”
It took Siri a while to understand what he meant. Then her eyes went wide. “Look I like the direction in which you’re going I just don’t like the speed. I barely know you, Dave. And I don’t like shallow relationships. It’s really a waist of time to commit yourself to one of those.”
Dave sighed dramatically. “What would you like to know?”
“I…I don’t know but a lot of things…What do I like to do? What are your goals?”
“Easy. I like hot girls and my priority goal right now is to get through to you.”
A heavy disappointment started to settle over her and she stared at Dave with disbelieving eyes. But she wasn’t giving in without a fight. “What about basketball?”
“Come one everyone knows being a sports star is the best way to get chicks.”
“I can’t believe this…” Siri mutter, shaking her head in disbelief. “I’m leaving,” she declared and spun on her heal with the intention to walk away.
“Oh no you don’t, Pretty!” Dave grabbed her around the waist and spinning her around crushed her lips with his. She struggled against him, feeling disgusting and a little fearful of his intentions.
“Hey, you! Let her go!”
The call rang out across the empty parking lot like an alarm blare. Dave looked up but didn’t let go of Siri. “What do you want, Sissy-Wan?”
Siri looked around to see Obi-Wan standing a few feet away from them. “Your timing is impeccable,” she told him with a week smile.
Obi-Wan gave her a reassuring nod and took a step forward. “I suggest you let her go,” Obi-Wan said, his tone restrained.
“I say you leave before I punch your lights out.” Dave shoved Siri aside and stalked toward Obi-Wan.
“I don’t recall asking for a fight,” Obi-Wan replied calmly, folding his arms across his chest.
“Well you’re gonna get one.” And he sure did.
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Star_Angel
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Ah man, I wonder who will win that fight but I have to admire Obi-Wan, and I’m sure that Siri will as well.
And that part with Padmé and Bale made me curies, well, who cares what Bail wants, I’m sure that Padmé is more interested in Anakin anyway, I mean, who wouldn’t be?
Amazing update Alley, I loved it.
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Will_Kenobi
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Very nice update.
Obi-Wan definitely had good timing there. I wonder what's going to happen next 
And that evil gang. Shame on them 
I am intrigued by this story
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Maul and Bruck sniggered and moved toward the cars with sloppy smiles of immature excitement on their faces.
Oh dear.
“Well you should really do some considering here, Padme. What lies between us means a lot to me. I thought it meant a lot to you.”
Hmmm? I wonder what's going on here?  I wish Padme would just admit that she likes Anakin already.   I mean, everyone knows it.  But I guess she would have to deny it now. It seems like the safe thing to do. But she should at least admit it to herself.  And suppose Anakin hears one of these conversations and thinks she doesn't like him? That would be sad. 
“Hey, you! Let her go!”
Hooray! It's Obi-wan to the rescue! 
I'm sure that Siri was happy to see him. That Dave was just disgusting.  I know it seems impossible, but I hope Obi-wan wins this fight. Maybe Anakin can help him out.  
Great Chapter! 
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Gah, cliffhanger! Really looking forward to the next update!
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Obi-Wan gave her a reassuring nod and took a step forward. “I suggest you let her go,” Obi-Wan said, his tone restrained.
“I say you leave before I punch your lights out.” Dave shoved Siri aside and stalked toward Obi-Wan.
“I don’t recall asking for a fight,” Obi-Wan replied calmly, folding his arms across his chest.
“Well you’re gonna get one.” And he sure did.
Ah, ever the noble young knight - will he win the fair maiden?
Great chapter, and looking forward to the next.
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