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Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Qui/Shmi/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/30/08
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Princess_Elisabeth
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Mar '06
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Date Posted:
6/23/06 8:33am
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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wow! Count me in! I love this!!
I had this idea aswell alittle while ago but I had millions of others aswell and I just had to choose then but as the plotbunny for the other ideas was way bigger I decided not to do anything like this. But wow I'm excited to read this! 
Could you add me to your pm list if you have one, please?
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delta-7starfighter
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6/23/06 8:51am
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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All of them? Obi-Wan looked around the classroom in dismay. How could he be in a class with ALL members of The Gang? He listed them off in his head as they approached in formation.
This should be quite amusing.... oh! yeah, I feel sorry for Obi too.  
“So have you…grown more beautiful I mean.” Crap what was he saying! She was certainly the only girl -- the only person – who could make him stumble all over himself like that.
I wonder what she is thinking. I like how you used some lines from AotC! 
Tru nodded. “I don’t know how you can race motorcycles, Anakin. It’s insane in my opinion.”
Great idea with the motorcycles insted of podracers! Pure Genius! 
Great update!
Thanks for the PM!
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Ludo_Kressh
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6/23/06 8:52am
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All the SW characters in HS, what a great and hilarious concept!  And Palpatine as the principle...pure genius!
It seems the Gang is going to give Obi-Wan a lot of grief in his junior year, I hope he can handle it...and I think Anakin should listen to his friend...it could be his undoing... 
I'll keep my eye on this...maybe pop me a PM when you update would be sweet!
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anakin_luver
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6/23/06 1:14pm
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OH MY GOODNESS. I had no idea who "The Gang" was but then this came along...
How could he be in a class with ALL members of The Gang? He listed them off in his head as they approached in formation.
At the head, Dooku. Probably the smartest out of the lot.
And I realized who they were!!! Oh man, Maul - "the biggest gangster punk" -
“You’re like…calm. Not like nerdy calm…just calm. I personally love the adrenalin rush. Soon I’ll have enough green to buy myself my own motorbike. Then I won’t have to keep looking for charity cases.”
More green? Oh gosh! I can completely imagine Anakin talking like that. Oh god. Too funny.
Loved it Alley.
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Palpy560
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Date Posted:
6/23/06 2:22pm
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At the head, Dooku. Probably the smartest out of the lot.
Behind him Maul and Assaj Ventress. It looked like Assaj had stuck with her hair style, if you could call it that since she had actually shaved off all her hair so that there wasn’t really any hair to style in the first place. Maul was the biggest gangster punk Obi-Wan had ever scene. His red spiked hair and the tattooed black snake on his cheek were well known around Temple High.
LOL! YES! I love this! It's so awesome!
Could you PM me hmmm? 
I had some trouble finding this today. 
That's why I didn't get here earlier.
It's really great.
Oh and I loved Anakin and Padme. 
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Alley_Skywalker
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Date Posted:
6/24/06 1:31am
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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6/24/06 1:32am (1 edits total)
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Peagis: I've put you on the list 
princess_of_naboo: Thanks, and you're on the list too
bmwgurl17: Thanks for reading, Padawan
iLoveAnakin7: I know don't you just LOVE The Gang? Lol. And yea Padme makes Anakin rather nervouse.
Princess_Elisabeth: The trouble with too many plot bunnies...lol. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I've put you on the list.
delta-7starfighter: Hee yea I thought using that line would be cute. As for the motorbikes...heh Anakin has to race SOMETHING! Lol.
Ludo_Kressh: Yup The gang is going to give Obi-Wan quite some trouble. Oh and I've put you on the PM list
anakin_luver: Haha! Yea I can just imgine Anakin talking in slang. I mean in SW he IS from the Outer Rim...lol. I'm glad you like the fic
Palpy560: Thanks, I'm glad you like it And I've put you on the PM list.
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amidalachick
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Date Posted:
6/24/06 6:39am
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“Cool. I’ll see you around too!” he called after her. ‘What the hell was that?’
Poor Anakin, he still has trouble with pick-up lines. He was so cute in that whole exchange.
The Gang! Oh my! Maul's spiky hair and tattoo are great!
To answer your question, I do like geeky boys. I'm loving Obi in this!
Great post, Alley!
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Star_Angel
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Date Posted:
6/24/06 7:01am
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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I loved the A/P scene, Anakin was really cute and he did remind me of AOTC Anakin.
And “The Gang” hmm, I bunch of Sith Lords as the bullies, love that idea.
“You really need someone to talk some sense into you.”
True, so very true.
Anyway, wonderful update and thanks for sending me a pm, I’m looking forward to read more from you.
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oqidaun
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Jul '05
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Date Posted:
6/24/06 5:48pm
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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This is a very creative AU, Alley.
Great story.
I was really bowled over and hooked with your opening lines, 'Temple High didn’t vary much from any other typical high school. Square and Wacky teachers, subjects of all sorts, cliques and gangs, and a social system with too many unwritten rules for an outsider to understand.'
That was really well written.
Principal Palpatine. Ha!
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Dark_Disciple
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Date Posted:
6/25/06 3:21am
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I love the bad guys already. I hope there's a future run between Anakin and Asajj...
Good stuff! Even though it makes me feel really old reading about younglings like this in high school, hehe...
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Alley_Skywalker
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Date Posted:
6/27/06 2:17pm
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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6/27/06 2:35pm (1 edits total)
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amidalachick: Yea Padme makes Anakin rather nervouse.
Star_Angel: He's cute when he gets like that isn't he?
oqiduan: I'm glad you like it, Master. I was a little worried 'bout your reaction.
D_D: Oh Anakin will have some run in's with the gang of his own...[Haha!
Chapter 3
Anakin didn’t have to turn around to know that it was Maul who had come up behind him he so he went on with sorting the books in his locker.
“Having a good day, Anakin?” the gang member asked in a low tone which usually meant trouble.
“It’s probably better then yours, Vinnie,” Anakin threw back with a suppressed smirk. Maul\’s first name was Vincent and only his mother called him Vinnie. It was a secret that Maul guarded fiercely and Anakin was only privy to it by sheer accident.
Maul growled. “I’m starting to think that the others were right. I’m starting to doubt Xanatos on his opinion of you having to be the new member of our group. I still can’t believe you turned the honor down last year.”
Anakin shrugged as he shut his locker. “I’m not a gang person, Maul, and I think you know that. Besides from what I hear you have a new member as it is. You seemed to move on pretty fast.”
Maul huffed in dislike. “Grant Grivouse, or GG as we now call him, yes. He’s deserving but we could have a lot more out of you.”
“See,” Anakin said carelessly. “That’s the problem. You guys want something out of me. Get use to the fact that I don’t enjoy people using me.” He shrugged again and walked away without looking back.
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“Alright good practice everyone. Way to go today, Siri.”
“Thanks, Couch Jinn,” the perky blonde called as she headed for the girls locker room with the rest of her fencing team teammates.
“Obi-Wan.”
Obi-Wan stopped half way to the locker room. “Yes, Coach?”
“It’s after practice, Obi-Wan. You don’t have to be so formal anymore.”
Obi-Wan shrugged. “You wanted to tell me something, Dad?”
“I actually wanted to ask if you were feeling alright.”
“I feel fine, why?”
“You were completely out of it today.”
Obi-Wan hung his head, wincing. “I’m sorry, Dad. I really am.”
“Obi-Wan,” Qui-Gon said going to the boy and putting a hand on his shoulder. “You’re a very talented fencer. Since our captain has left the team I’m thinking of making you captain.”
Obi-Wan looked up, his eyes shinning. To be captain of the fencing team was almost like being captain of the football team. “Really?”
“Yes…but you have to work for it, Obi-Wan. You can’t be as sloppy as you were today.”
“I’ll try harder, I really will.”
“I hope so, Obi-Wan. We should be going to the state championship this year. I know we’re good enough.”
“When are the tryouts for the new member going to be?”
“Soon enough, I haven’t set the date yet. Go change, Obi-Wan. And I want you concentrating more on your fencing. You have the talent, now use it.”
Obi-Wan nodded trying to take Qui-Gon\s words to heart, then turned and made his way to the locker room.
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Four thirty in the afternoon. No sooner, no later. That was the time that Anakin Skywalker invaded the sacred training room of the fencing team with the old saber that he had stolen his freshman year from the said team’s supply closet.
He had never taken fencing lesson, that was a luxury he couldn’t afford, so he was mostly self-taught, from a video he had bought a while ago with some saving and by watching the practices of the fencing team.
He made some clumsy warm up moves but then started twirling the saber in a pattern that he had made up himself. He danced across the matt, stabbing again and again at an invisible opponent.
Anakin was so engrossed in his “match” that he hadn’t noticed the door of the training room open.
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Qui-Gon had not been one bit please with himself for leaving his roster and some other training papers back at the training room and had initially not wanted to return for them. Some sort of responsibility, however, drug him back to gym complex to retrieve them.
He was thinking of the open slot that had opened up on the team and the tryouts to come when he entered the training room. All such thoughts were, however, instantly swept away by the sight he encountered.
A blonde boy he hadn’t scene before was gliding with lithe grace around the mat with an old saber in hand. He was performing some complex fencing moves and though his stance was awful and some of his attack combos were very impractical, there was something about the way he moved. Something that made Qui-Gon’s skin pickle. Had he found a member for his team?
“Hey kid!” he called, making the boy jump and release his hold on the saber so that it clattered to the matted floor.
“Oh! Mister Jinn! I’m sorry I was just…” the boy tried to explain his intrusion rapidly.
Qui-Gon shook his head to show that he wasn’t going to get him in trouble. “What’s you name?”
“Anakin,” Anakin said suspiciously.
“Where’d you learn to fence?”
Anakin brushed a hand through his sweat soaked hair before replying ruefully. “I taught myself pretty much. By watching and stuff.”
“You’re good for someone who hasn’t had lessons. A talent I think.”
Anakin laughed harshly. “Even if it were so, Mister Jinn. It wouldn’t be like you would ask me to join the team oe whatever.”
Qui-Gon folded his arms across his chest. “Well, Anakin. Maybe if you let me see some of those moves again I could actually give you an answer.
The blonde resisted the urge to roll his eyes and merely bend down to pick up his saber. There was no way he would be actually accepted onto the fencing team. Nevertheless, his “match” had been cut short and he was determined to finish it.
Qui-Gon stood to the side watching the boy. It didn’t take long for him to make up his mind.
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Star_Angel
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Qui-Gon is Obi-Wan’s dad. I love that idea but I do feel sorry for him as well.
Grant Grivouse, or GG
GG, sounds like a girl. Can you imagine Grievous with ponytails and make up, oh, I crack my self up .
Anyway, back to the story, I loved the update and I'm looking forward to see more.
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6/27/06 2:46pm
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“Well, Anakin. Maybe if you let me see some of those moves again I could actually give you an answer.
So Anakin is on the fencing team? I just love fencing. Is he gonna take team captain from Obi?
“It’s probably better then yours, Vinnie,”
Vinnie? I like the name.
Obi-Wan shrugged. “You wanted to tell me something, Dad?”
I like how Qui os Obi's dad also. Obi won't be having a mother in this right? 
Great Job, Alley!
Thank yousa for the PM!
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Palpy560
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Date Posted:
6/27/06 2:57pm
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“Grant Grivouse, or GG as we now call him, yes. He’s deserving but we could have a lot more out of you.”
Yes, I love GG!
OK, so we know the gang wants Anakin in their group.
I remember when others would come up to my locker like that.
Oh Qui-gon is Obi's Dad?
That's a cool idea.
Hmmm....Anakin self taught eh?
The Chosen One of the fencing team. 
Hmmmm....where is Principal Palpy?
And how does he fit into all this?
I have a guess or an idea how he fits into this but I'll wait and see.
I love this. It takes me back to High School. I've been through this...or....something like this.
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6/27/06 2:57pm
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Fencing team, ha ha, awesome. Love Qui-Gon as the coach and Obi-Wan's dad.
Thanks for the PM!
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