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Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Qui/Shmi/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/30/08
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anakin_luver
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6/27/06 3:01pm
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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Aw, Vinnie. 
To be captain of the fencing team was almost like being captain of the football team.
Oh Obi...so naive!
Great update Alley! Anakin likes fencing! Superb!
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PRINCESSCAMBRIA
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6/27/06 4:51pm
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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This is way good. Awesome job with the characters so far. Ani and Obi are right on.
Looking forward to more.
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EquestrianJedi07
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6/27/06 4:52pm
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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Awesome two updates (that I shamefully missed...  )
Awww, so Anakin's already got a crush on Padme... how cute! And I loved the gang, and how Anakin doesn't want to be a part of them. Ooo, is Qui-Gon going to let Anakin join the fencing team? 
If you have a PM list, could I be on it? This is such a good story, and I don't want to miss any more of it 
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LoveAnakin1
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6/27/06 7:36pm
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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Hey I loved it!!
Could I be on your pm list
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iLoveAnakin7
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6/27/06 9:07pm
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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Maul=VINNIE LOL so shameful for him I'm sure. Annd Anakin knowing his deep dark secret uh-oh 
Qui-Gon is Obi's daddy? That's so sweet and so fitting. He's as humble as ever.
Anakin and the natural talent of course. I see this making him and Obi friends, but also rivals somewhere. 
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Alley_Skywalker
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6/28/06 12:54am
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RE: Facades (Major AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/ lots of others)
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6/28/06 1:01am (2 edits total)
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Star_Angel: Grivouse in make up? Lol! That's just wrong! But strangely hilariouse at the same time.
delta-7starfighter: Oh no Obi has a mom but she's never really around.
Palpy560: Don't worry. You'll see Palps soon enough 
princess_of_naboo: I'm glad you're enjoying the story
anakin_luver: Well we know he likes "agressive negotiations" o I just figured...
PRINCESSCAMBRIA: yay! I'm glad to har that my charactorization isn't all over the place. Thanks! 
EquestrianJedi07: I've put you on the list!
LoveAnakin1: Yup! I've put you on the list!
iLoveAnakin: Oh there will be some competition between Obi and Ani don't worry. Some dislike at firt too
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Princess_Elisabeth
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6/28/06 7:49am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Chap 3 up!
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“Grant Grivouse, or GG as we now call him
 LMAO!!
Way the go Anakin. Don't join the bad gang. They're nothing!
Qui-Gon shook his head to show that he wasn’t going to get him in trouble. “What’s you name?”
“Anakin,” Anakin said suspiciously.
“Where’d you learn to fence?”
Anakin brushed a hand through his sweat soaked hair before replying ruefully. “I taught myself pretty much. By watching and stuff.”
“You’re good for someone who hasn’t had lessons. A talent I think.”
Anakin laughed harshly. “Even if it were so, Mister Jinn. It wouldn’t be like you would ask me to join the team oe whatever.”
Qui-Gon folded his arms across his chest. “Well, Anakin. Maybe if you let me see some of those moves again I could actually give you an answer.
The blonde resisted the urge to roll his eyes and merely bend down to pick up his saber. There was no way he would be actually accepted onto the fencing team. Nevertheless, his “match” had been cut short and he was determined to finish it.
Qui-Gon stood to the side watching the boy. It didn’t take long for him to make up his mind.
Yay!  Anakin is part of the team!! Great News! I can't wait to see more. I hope Obi-Wan will patch himself up and take the job as coach. Hehe I'm sure they'll win the Championship then  .
Amazing update! Thanks for the pm and I hope there's more soon!
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Ludo_Kressh
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6/28/06 8:38am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Chap 3 up!
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Anakin's not a gang person, that's for sure! I died when I saw Vinnie! Maul actually looks like a Vinnie..
Grant Grievouse? Poor GG, he'll never live that name down, it's probably fortunate he joined the Gangm otherwise he would be the one getting picked on...
And Qui-Gon as Obi's dad? Priceless! And I hope Anakin makes the fencing team, I could imagine the tension between him and Obi-Wan...
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amidalachick
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6/28/06 10:20am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Chap 3 up!
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“See,” Anakin said carelessly. “That’s the problem. You guys want something out of me. Get use to the fact that I don’t enjoy people using me.” He shrugged again and walked away without looking back.
You tell him, Anakin!
Maul's mom calls him Vinnie? That's awesome! No wonder he keeps it a secret. I like Grant Grivouse aka GG, too.
So Qui-Gon is Obi's father...cool! And I loved Anakin and his self-taught fencing skills. I hope he makes it to the team!
Another great post, Alley! 
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Alley_Skywalker
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6/28/06 2:43pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Chap 3 up!
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7/4/06 1:06pm (1 edits total)
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Princess_Elisabeth: Obi-an and his problems eh? Well it's not gonna be too easy for jim with Anakin on the team...if he[Anakin] DOES get on the team in the first place....hee!
Ludo_Kressh: never fear! Plenty of tention between Obi and Ani to come!
amidalachick: I'm glad the Vinnie thing was such a hit
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kennyboy
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Date Posted:
6/30/06 2:54pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Chap 3 up!
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Oh wow! The Star Wars charaters in High School WHOO!
I've been hoping that someone would write something like this.
great story, can't wait 4 an upate.
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Alley_Skywalker
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7/4/06 12:58pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Chap 3 up!
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kennyboy: Thanks for reading I'm glad you like it!
Chapter 4
Qui-Gon could tell that Anakin wasn’t very comfortable with warming up with his new teammates without actually meeting any of them first, so he decided to do some introduction time after he took attendance. That brought up another thought. What was Anakin’s last name, anyways? “Anakin?”
“Yea?”
“What’s your last name?”
“Skywalker.”
Skywalker? It took all of Qui-Gon’s control to not gape at the boy. Skywalker? It couldn’t be. But then it made perfect sense didn’t it? Tall, blue eyes, fencing talent, it all made too much sense. He would be having a talk with Shmi that night.
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Anakin couldn’t say that he wasn’t happy about being on the team. It was more like it felt too serial for him to really believe in it.
“Hey, you the new kid?”
Anakin turned around to face a pretty blonde girl who was looking curiously at him.
“Yea, I guess.”
“I’m Siri,” she said cheerfully sticking out her hand for a handshake.
“I’m Anakin,” Anakin said, shaking her hand. “You been on the team for long?”
“I got on mid way through my freshman year, so yea you can say that I’ve been here a while.”
“Where’d you train before now?”
“I didn’t. I’m sorta self taught.”
Anakin was startled when another voice spoke up behind him. “I can tell. Your stance is all wrong.”
Anakin whirled to face Obi-Wan Kenobi. His eyes narrowed slightly as he regarded the person who, in his opinion, held the titled of Biggest Stuffed Turkey in the school. “What do you want, Prissy-Wan?”
Obi-Wan tried not to blush. He hated it when people called him Prissy-Wan, or Sulky-Wan, or Bruck’s favorite: Oafy-Wan. “To help?”
“Siri’s already helping me.”
“Fine,” Obi-Wan shrugged. ”Suit yourself.”
Anakin tuned back to Siri with a shrug. “I bet he’s only on this team because his daddy wanted him to be.”
“Don’t be so harsh on him. He’s a very good fencer actually.”
Anakin shrugged. “Doesn’t make him any less of a prep,”
Siri shrugged back. “I think he’s ok. Give him a chance, you might like him.”
Anakin couldn’t help but laugh. “Thanks, Siri. But I doubt that it’s a good idea for me to get involved with him. Guys like him and guys like me just don’t mix.”
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Rain fell in heavy sheets, splattering the muddy ground with clear full drops. The water that the sky was spilling so generously splotched against the sleek infinity that was driving slowly but steadily toward the poor side of town where it had rarely wondered before. Qui-Gon steered into one of the dark streets and squinted through the dim light of the poorly lit street at the houses. Finally spotting the one he had been looking for he drove up to the crumbling sidewalk and parked, the parking break making a of click.
He sighed heavy and climbing out of the car and walked briskly to the front door, grateful for the shelter that the tattered canopy provided. He wiped a wet strand of his long chestnut hair from his face and knocked. Just before he was going to knock again the door opened a crack and then fully.
A woman, younger then him by only a few years, stood in the doorway with her brown hair pulled up in her usual ponytail. “Qui-Gon,” she said finally, stepping aside for him to come in, “I didn’t think I’d ever see you here again, Are you ok?”
He nodded and looked around the small, vaguely familiar, apartment. “I needed to talk to you, Shmi. Is Anakin home?”
She shook her head. “He went out a couple of hours ago. I warned him about the rain but he didn’t listen. Do you want tea?”
“No, thank you. I wanted to talk to you about Anakin.”
Shmi looked up sharply. “He said you’re his coach now. Is that what this is about?”
Qui-Gon sighed looking away from her. “You know what this is about, Shmi. Why didn’t you tell me that Anakin went to the same high school, and probably the same Jr. high as Obi-Wan?”
“I thought it would be best if you didn’t know.”
“I have a RIGHT to know.”
“Qui-Gon, please. I didn’t want Anakin to know. It would all get too complicated.”
“It’s not like I would actually tell him. But I would have liked to watch out for him a bit.”
“Watch out for him or recruit him to the team the way you recruited Obi-Wan?”
“I thought you knew me better, Shmi.”
“Please leave before Anakin gets back. I don’t want him asking questions. Believe me, this is the best for all of us.”
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delta-7starfighter
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Date Posted:
7/4/06 1:18pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Chap 3 up!
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He hated it when people called him Prissy-Wan, or Sulky-Wan, or Bruck’s favorite: Oafy-Wan.
Oh boy! Those are some embarassing nicknames. I'd feel sorry for Obi, if I wasn't laughing so hard. 
“Qui-Gon, please. I didn’t want Anakin to know. It would all get too complicated.”
What's this all about?  I think I know, but.... I'll keep it to myself. 
Cool post, Alley!
Thanks for the PM!
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Master_Starwalker
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7/4/06 2:21pm
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I liked Grant Grievous, Vinnie Maul, and Qui-Gon as Obi-Wan's father.
I also liked how Obi-Wan and Anakin are both on the fencing team and I could definitely see it leading to them rivaling to be captain.
I do have to say that Anakin seemed to be total I'll settle for jerk for the sake of the TOS though in part 4.
I also like how you're doing the relationship between Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Qui-Gon.
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7/4/06 2:32pm
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I'm putting my bet down on Qui-Gon being Anakin's dad.
Loved the update.
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