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Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Qui/Shmi/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/30/08
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Palpy560
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7/16/06 12:23pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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Great update. And Principal Palpy's here! 
By the Force! 
I knew Palpatine was involved with the Gang in some way. That took a rather serious turn there. The Principal supporting the school-wide gang. Asking them for money? In exchange for some kind of substance.  I wonder if Palpy's known by them as Lord Sidious?  I think he hates the school fencing team. 
The bit with Anakin and Obi not wanting to practice was funny. 
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iLoveAnakin7
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7/16/06 3:18pm
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drug dealers lol LMAO I shouldn't be supporting that should I? no LOL
Will Anakin buy drugs? Or maybe he'll frame Obi with them 
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EquestrianJedi07
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7/16/06 4:55pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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Bad Principal Palpy! Bad!  Loved the Obi/Ani moment there... I hope they'll learn to befriend and understand each other 
Thanks for the PM!
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Ludo_Kressh
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7/17/06 4:44am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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Sorry I missed your last update, I had family issues to deal with...
Great tension between Obi-Wan and Ani, and the hint of them maybe being brothers...very interesting.. 
They’re busy, sir. Giving GG an…ah…introduction of sorts.”
Oh, I can just imagine what that involves! 
And Anakin and his friends, talking about typical high school stuff, but I thought he liked Padme...well, I guess we should see how that turns out... 
Hmmm, what is Principal Palps up to? No good, I know that, but I wonder what the white substance is?
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Princess_Elisabeth
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7/17/06 4:51am
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Well well well. Look who's on the role with dark business again. Bad Palpy and his gang hehe White powdery stuff, tut tut tut
“What?” both boys asked in unison. They gave each other brief looks and then started to wave the offer away, interrupting each other as they went.
“Why me coach?”
“There’s really no need. Another day then?”
“You should tutor him, I might be confusing—“
“Yea exactly!”
Qui-Gon put up a hand. “Nonsense. Obi-Wan you are quite capable and Anakin you need to get caught up. Besides this will be good for both of you.” Qui-Gon smiled at them knowingly and then left the training room leaving the two boys with only one thought in mind: This is going to be a long day
Obi-Wan and Anakin are just crazy hehe. I'm sure they'll end up being brothers although they still bicker .
I liked the part where Anakin talked with his friends. Typical Mmm but Darra seems to like Anakin or anyway liked him. I wonder where this will go because I thought Anakin had an eye on Padmé. Oh well, we'll see
Great update and thanks for the pm! 
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Peagis
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7/17/06 5:16am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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great chapter
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Star_Angel
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7/24/06 10:53am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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Amazing update Alley  .
“Ah...well...yea I should probably mention that Kenobi is a pretty good fencer. So yea I guess I learned some stuff. If he wasn’t such a stuck up rich boy maybe we could have bonded for the hour.”
Males  .
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delta-7starfighter
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7/24/06 11:50am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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Yay! The plot is thickening.
Awww, I was hoping Ani and Obi might at least give up being enemies. Maybe not. 
And now we know what Palpy is up to.
Great post! Thanks for the PM!
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Alley_Skywalker
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7/27/06 8:10am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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Kennyboy: Thanks for reading!
G__Anakin: I’ve put you on the list.
princess_of_naboo: Yea Anakin underestimates Obi quite a bit.
anakin_luver: Yup…Palps is up to no good.
Palpy560: Ha yea…Palps doesn’t like the fencing team at all…he also dislikes Qui-Gon.
iLoveAnakin7 : You know you’re giving me plot bunnies. Lol.
EquestrianJedi07: Don’t worry…they’ll like each other…..eventually.
Ludo_Kressh: Oh don’t worry Anakin likes Padme….though Darra likes or liked Anakin.
Princess_Elisabeth: Yea Ani and Obi aren’t being very cooperative. Lol.
Peagis: Thanks!
Star_Angel: Glad you liked the update
Delta: They’ll bond a bit soon enough. You know me I can’t keep them apart for too long…lol.
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Alley_Skywalker
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8/1/06 4:21am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/16/06
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Chapter 6
TWO MONTHS LATER
“Ok take a knee everyone! Take a knee!”
The six members of the fencing team stopped their sparring and went to the sideline to kneel before Qui-Gon who was standing with his legs spread at shoulder width and a pleased look on his face.
“We’re doing good everyone. The competitions will be starting shortly as you all know. We have a strong team this year. We can win.” A strange look passed over Qui-Gon’s face but it was gone.
Seeing that Anakin had caught the look and looked confused Quinlin offered to explain. “Xanatos was our captain. He left the team this year. I heard that Xan was Coach’s protégé so he took it rather badly.”
“Off with you all.” Qui-Gon was saying as he waved the team toward the locker rooms. Anakin, not you. I want to talk to you.”
Anakin nodded and waited a few moments before asking. “What’s up, Coach.”
“I’m taking you to one of the competitions tomorrow. I want you to get a good look at what we face. Meet me here tomorrow at eight pm alright?”
“Sure,” Anakin nodded gladly and strode passed Obi-Wan who had stopped in his tracks and into the locker room.
“Dad!” Obi-Wan started once Anakin was out of ear shot. “You promised to go watch my Super Quiz match tomorrow night!”
Qui-Gon looked away and rubbed his temple. “Yes, I’m sorry, Obi-Wan. But it’s important that I show Anakin what we are up against.”
“There are other matches!”
“Not with out two strangest opponents facing each other. However there will be other competitions. Your coach says you will go a long way this year as well.”
“Our coach? You mean Mr. Yoda? Dad, don’t get me wrong he’s a great councilor but as a coach…” Obi-Wan shook his head from side to side. “Ferus is the captain and he does all the coaching.”
“And he doesn’t think you’ll do well?”
Obi-Wan sighed. “He does. But that’s not the point, Dad.”
“Then what is?”
“You promised.”
“I said I would go if nothing important came up.”
“And Anakin Skywalker is more important?”
“This fencing team is more important, Obi-Wan. I thought you would have realized that. Ananakin is one of our best is you haven’t noticed. I want him as prepared as possible. Now, go and change.”
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It wasn’t that Obi-Wan put up a bad performance the next night at the competition but he wasn’t quite in top shape. He couldn’t get his mind off of the fact that his father had traded him in for a street punk. Of course his dad had a weakness for pathetic cases. But he had thought that his father would have learned his lesson with Xanatos. Xan’s leaving the team had been such a big blow to him. And all because of a disagreement between Qui-Gon and Xanatos’ alcoholic of a father.
What was so special about this Anakin Skywalker? Obi-Wan didn’t want to admit that jealousy had a lot to do with it. He was never quite good enough for his father. That’s why Qui-Gon wasn’t here now but was off somewhere with Skywalker.
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Qui-Gon listened fondly as Anakin babbled away about the fencing matches they had just seen.
He felt truly awful about not bring able to be there at Obi-Wan competition, especially since he had come to love his step-son as he would love a biological son.
“I can’t wait for the competitions to start!” Anakin was saying. “This will be so exciting!”
Yes the boy did have a knack for fencing and an enthusiasm for it as well. Oh if only Obi-Wan wasn’t so much like his mother.
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The Skywalker boy was good. Good in so many ways. Palpatine understood why the providers would want him off of the fencing team. And he understood why the gang wanted him in their midst. Not Tyranus and his son maybe, the fools, but the others.
Yes he could make some good money off of the boy. He would have to consider doing some work on him.
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“Obi-Wan come on hurry up!” Garen called. “We’re gonna be late.”
“We didn’t wait for your practice to end for nothing, Obi!” Bant piped in.
Obi-Wan sighed. He hated Modays. He was always most disorganized during Mondays. Especially since he didn’t get much sleep. Ferus wasn’t quite content with their performance that Friday, Obi-Wan hated to think that it was because his mind was elsewhere, so he had organized several extra study sessions.
“You guys go one I’ll catch up. I need to go back to my History class I forgot one of my books there. I hope Mr. Windu is still there.” Followed by shouts of disapproval from his friends Obi-Wan jogged to the other side of campus. He heard voices from his history class and wondered what it was all about.
“Loose you do, Mr. Windu.”
“You always cheat, Yoda it’s not fare.”
“Will you boys calm down!”
“Shaak, honey,”
“That’s Ms. Ti to you.”
Obi-Wan stopped dead in his tracks when he stepped into the classroom. There was Mr. Yoda, Mr. Windu, and Ms. Ti, the beautiful art teacher with large eyes over whom Grivouse was known to perve. “Mr. Windu? Mr, Yoda? What’s going on?” Obi-Wan asked, eyeing the playing cards, chip bags, and bear bottles with confused interest.
“Kenobi!” the dark skinned history teacher, Mr. Windu, yelped at hearing Obi-Wan’s voice.
“What do you need, Obi-Wan?” Shaak Ti asked kindly but curtly. I…ah…I was actually hopping to get my history book which I left in here.”
“It’s over there,” Windu pointed.
“Forgetful you usually are not,” Yoda commented in his councilor voice. “Troubling you is something?”
Obi-Wan thought for a moment in order to process Yoda’s words. The short Chinese man, with his green dyed hair, was often hard to understand because of his grammar problems. “No, I’m fine, Mr. Yoda.”
“Sure are you?”
“Yoda let the boy go,” Mace said impatiently and waved away a very confused Obi-Wan. “This is not good,” Mace Windu said once Obi-Wan had left. “We need to relocate. We can’t have the students finding out that respectable people like us do this, especially every Monday afternoon.”
Shaak nodded with a smirk. “Especially since you always wear your purple Hawaii t-shirt.”
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A/N: NEXT UPDATE! The part we've all been waiting for: Maul stuffs Obi into a locker!
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Star_Angel
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Poor Obi.
Obi-Wan thought for a moment in order to process Yoda’s words. The short Chinese man, with his green dyed hair, was often hard to understand because of his grammar problems.
I really like that idea.
Well, this was a great update and thanks for the pm. And I can’t wait for the next update.
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8/1/06 5:25am
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He felt truly awful about not bring able to be there at Obi-Wan competition, especially since he had come to love his step-son as he would love a biological son.
“I can’t wait for the competitions to start!” Anakin was saying. “This will be so exciting!”
Yes the boy did have a knack for fencing and an enthusiasm for it as well. Oh if only Obi-Wan wasn’t so much like his mother.
Whoa.
Great update!
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Wow, very good update!
“Dad!” Obi-Wan started once Anakin was out of ear shot. “You promised to go watch my Super Quiz match tomorrow night!”
Awww! Poor Obi-wan.
The Skywalker boy was good. Good in so many ways. Palpatine understood why the providers would want him off of the fencing team. And he understood why the gang wanted him in their midst. Not Dooku maybe, that fool, but the others.
[Palpatine] Goooooooooooood![/Palpatine]
Ms. Ti, the beautiful art teacher with large eyes over whom Grivouse was known to perve.
Shaak Ti does seem like the art teacher type. 
And GG...that's like the deleted scene when Grievous has Shaak Ti hostage and kinda pets her horns before killing her.  That part always made me think.
Lots of cool stuff going on here.
A/N: NEXT UPDATE! The part we've all been waiting for: Maul stuffs Obi into a locker!
Yes!
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iLoveAnakin7
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Hold on wait a minute...so Obi-Wan is Qui-gon's step-son not REAL son okay I see?...but Anakin might be his REAL son so confused LOL 
This was a great update Alley. I like how you still have the characters acting like they do in the movies, with Qui-Gon taking to Obi-Wan, and feeling left out, and Xanatos from the EU and leaving the fencing team like he left the Order.
Maul stuffs Obi in a locker YES!!!!
What we've been waiting for, why this fic was MADE. Can't wait!!
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8/1/06 9:34am
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Wow Obi gets the short end of the stick huh?
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