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G__Anakin
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8/1/06 9:46am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 8/1/06
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Cool can you add me to the PM list
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amidalachick
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8/1/06 10:08am
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Finally caught up! You're doing an awesome job with this, Alley!
Shaak nodded with a smirk. “Especially since you always wear your purple Hawaii t-shirt.”
Good old Mace.
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EquestrianJedi07
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8/1/06 10:23am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 8/1/06
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Awww, I felt sorry for poor Obi... first, ditched by his dear ol' dad, and then he walks in on the teachers... And it looks like his life won't get any better... oh dear...
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Ludo_Kressh
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8/2/06 11:50am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 8/1/06
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Oh gods, a short Chinese guy with green dyed hair! I'll never be able to get that image out of my mind!
Man, poor Obi-Wan, the Gang picks on him, his father seems to favor Anakin and he forgot his history book and ran into a Monday afternoon poker game...what's a young rich boy to do?
A/N: NEXT UPDATE! The part we've all been waiting for: Maul stuffs Obi into a locker! Ohhh, so that's what he's going to do! Can't wait!
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delta-7starfighter
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8/2/06 11:58am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 8/1/06
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lol! I loved Yoda's description. Creative...
I'm confused too. Obi is Qui's step-son or what?
Ooo, I can't wait till the next part. I know you'll make it something we never forget.
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anakin_luver
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8/2/06 2:35pm
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Obi is such a little preppy boy... "dad! dad! you said this! dad dad! you said that!" I love it!
Palps is starting his evil plan!
And Mace and Yoda and Shaak Ti! Such honourable teachers!
Oh man, Yoda's human appearance is good stuff!
I can't wait til Obi gets shoved in a locker!
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Princess_Elisabeth
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8/3/06 7:48am
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Aw poor Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon just likes Anakin over his own...not wait, his steph-son.
I loved how you described the teachers, it was just too funny
A/N: NEXT UPDATE! The part we've all been waiting for: Maul stuffs Obi into a locker!
Ooooow ppoor Obi-Wan this is going to be freaking fun and sad for Obi. Can't wait to read it! Great update once again and thanks for the pm!
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Alley_Skywalker
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8/11/06 4:14pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 8/1/06
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Star_Angel: Ha yea I kept thinking of what would be a cute way to portray Yoda in human form.
princess_of_naboo : Thanks!
Palpy560: Yea I just had to put that whole GG/Shaak thing in there…lol. There are quite a few fanfics with that paring floating out there.
iLoveAnakin7: Yea I’m trying to work all the personalities and different movie issues into this fic.
Peagis: Yup! Obi’s out of luck this time.
G__Anakin: I’ll add you to the list
amidalachick: Lol…yea I got to pick on Mace there...heehee.
EquestrianJedi07: Yea Obi’s a little short on luck lately.
Ludo_Kressh: What is a rich boy to do in deed! *smirks*
delta-7starfighter: Yea I hope the next chapter comes out well. It’s one of the big moments
anakin_luver: The dark side is strong with you as always, my friend
Princess_Elisabeth: Ha! Yea I let myself have a few laughs with the teachers.
To clear some things up...yes Obi-Wan is Qui-Gon's step-son. There's a whole thing involving that later in the fic so I won't say too much about it. Originally I had to make Obi-Wan Qui's step-son instead of just his son because I had to have an explanation for the different last names.
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kennyboy
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8/17/06 1:03pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 8/1/06
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Oh no, I missed an update .
Aw, poor Obi-Wan.
Wonderful, as always .
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Alley_Skywalker
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9/23/06 7:51pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 8/1/06
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kennyboy: Thanks for reading!
Wow...it's been far to long since I've last updated this bu here's the new chapter and I hope it doesn't dissapoint!
Chapter 7
“Anakin, I know you would like to put a hundred modifications on that project but I really don’t need that much junk. I don’t have all night man!”
Anakin didn’t even look up from the mass of wires in his hand as he muttered, “You asked me to help, Jason. So I’m helping.” Anakin played around with the wires a little more before closing the plastic framework and handing the mini-robot to the jittery boy looking over his shoulder.
“Thank,” Jason said slowly looking from the robot to Anakin. “So you have something exciting for tomorrow’s presentation?”
“You know I always have something special,” Anakin grinned, swinging his backpack over one shoulder. “I love this class. Engineering and Programming is probably the only class I really honestly like. I mean chem’s bearable and math’s pretty good, at least my teacher this year isn’t retarded and knows what he’s talking about, but nether of them are like this.”
Jason offered a friendly smile in return. “You don’t talk much, Skywalker. Not in school…but you seem like an ok guy.”
Anakin shrugged. “I try to be an ok guy.”
“You still don’t get around much.”
“Social life is overrated.”
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“There he is.”
“Dooku won’t like this.”
“I don’t give a damn. That guy’s on my nerves like hell.”
“Ok when he comes around the corner...grab him.”
“I so wish Assaj or GG were here. They would love this!”
The three gangsters waited with anticipation as Obi-Wan Kenobi approached their ambush spot.
Obi-Wan, dangerously unsuspecting, rounded the corner of one of the schools many look-alike buildings and found himself face to face with three members of The Gang.
“Maul, Xanatos, Bruck,” Obi-Wan said as evenly as he could, “what are you doing here after school hours?”
”Shut up, Rich Boy,” Maul growled, nodding to Xan and Bruck to grab Obi-Wan.
Obi-Wan struggled to fight them off but in a three against one fight he didn’t a chance. Xanatos and Bruck shoved Obi-Wan against the lockers, forcing a muffled “umph” out of him as he felt a brilliant surge of pain in his nose before a sticky wetness stated trickling down over his lips – blood.
“How do you like yourself now, Prissy-Wan?” Maul hissed.
“What do you want?”
“Search him.”
Bruck and Xanatos flipped Obi-Wan around and as Bruck held the baffled teen down Xanatos started the search for Obi-Wan’s wallet.
“Hey look! I found twenty bucks!” Xanatos gloated.
Footsteps wiped the gleeful smiles off of the faces of the three boys. “Put him away,” Maul commanded.
There was a distinct slamming of locker doors and Obi-Wan soon found himself being pushed back. His head hit the back wall of one of the lockers. He blinked rapidly to get rid of the stars that danced in front of his eyes. Obi-Wan slowly became aware of the fact that he was sitting on something squishy that was most likely a long-forgotten moldy peanut-butter-and-jelly sandwich, He tried to get up and out but Maul sent him flying backwards into the mettle back wall of the locker. Before he blacked out Obi-Wan was vaguely aware of Maul’s smelly gym shorts falling on his head and covering his face.
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The world faded slowly into focus as Obi-Wan returned to consciousness. He blinked several times, trying to adjust to the bright light. The ceiling he was staring at seemed familiar. He turned his head to the side slowly, wincing at the pain the movement caused. He finally realized that he was lying on the couch in the family room of his house. How he got there was hard to tell though because the last thing he remembered was being stuffed into a locker by Maul and his posse.
“You’re awake.”
The calm voice coming from his right started Obi-Wan and he made to sit up but stopped half way as his head began to spin.
“Wow, take it easy. They really knocked you around didn’t they?”
Obi-Wan waited for his vision to clear before turning toward the familiar voice. Standing at his side with a hand on his shoulder was, just as he thought, Anakin Skywalker.
“Wha…what are you doing here?” Obi-Wan asked, baffled, as he pushed himself into a sitting position.
“I noticed they were shoving someone around and I decided to end their fun. I don’t like them you know.”
Obi-Wan nodded gratefully as Anakin handed him a glass of water.
“So anyway,” Anakin continued. “I saw it was you and since you were out cold I decided to take you home. Good thing I know where you live.”
“Wait…how?”
Anakin rolled his eyes. “Put you in the back seat of that Ford of yours and we were here in a matter of minutes.”
“Wow…wait…You? Drove MY car?”
Anakin looked confused. “Yea…I have a license if that’s what you’re worried about.”
“Yes but YOU drove MY car.”
“Would you rather I had left you there?” Anakin snapped.
“No…I…I mean thanks. It was nice of you to help. I just…”
“Didn’t expect it?” Anakin challenged.
“Well you don’t like me much you know.”
Anakin stared at him for a while. “Yea well it’s not like you like me ether.”
“Well I wasn’t the one who just helped you out of a sticky situation. See why I’m confused?”
“Yea, I see. Some one like you wouldn’t understand.”
Obi-Wan furrowed his brows in mild confusion. “Understand what?”
“Nothing.” Anakin started backing away from him. “Stay out of trouble, Prissy-Wan.”
Obi-Wan sighed as he heard the front door slam. No he didn’t understand Anakin Skywalker.
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G__Anakin
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9/24/06 6:50am
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Thanks
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Romola
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9/24/06 7:24am
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Can't wait until the next up-date! ;-)
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EquestrianJedi07
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9/24/06 7:58am
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Bravo! I like how Ani saved Obi from being completely beaten up... yay!
“Nothing.” Anakin started backing away from him. “Stay out of trouble, Prissy-Wan.”
Obi-Wan sighed as he heard the front door slam. No he didn’t understand Anakin Skywalker.
That was great... I can so picture that.
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Palpy560
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9/24/06 8:11am
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Aww! Poor Obi! I feel so bad for him.
But it seems Anakin Skywalker came to his rescue. Goody! Maybe they'll end up working things out to become more like their film selves.
“Dooku won’t like this.”
So true. Dooku wouldn't like that.
Anakin didn’t even look up from the mass of wires in his hand as he muttered, “You asked me to help, Jason. So I’m helping.” Anakin played around with the wires a little more before closing the plastic framework and handing the mini-robot to the jittery boy looking over his shoulder.
Very Anakin.
Can't wait for the next update.
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kennyboy
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9/24/06 9:13am
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Brilliant update!
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