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Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Qui/Shmi/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 7/30/08
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Star_Angel
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Jan '06
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9/24/06 11:49am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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I loved this, Obi-Wan and Anakin always makes a great team, I mean, not necessary in the SW way but they know how to make you laugh.
Amazing update and thank for the pm.
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Master_Starwalker
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9/24/06 2:14pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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I have to say, I like how it's coming along and I loved Obi-Wan's reaction to Anakin having driven his car.
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Alley_Skywalker
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9/25/06 6:34am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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G__Anakin: Thanks for reading
Romola: Thanks for reading The next update should be up faster then this one (hopefully lol).
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Master_Starwalker: I’m glad you like how it’s coming along And yes obi-Wan is quite aghast at the thought of Anakin driving his car.
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delta-7starfighter
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9/25/06 5:57pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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lol! I loved the Obi getting stuffed in a locker. Just what I imagined. Too good!
Great update!
Thanks for the PM!
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iLoveAnakin7
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9/25/06 7:00pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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LOL I can't get over the Prissy-Wan. LOL Poor Obi-Wan getting attacked and then having Maul's nasty funky shorts on his head eww. I hope he doesn't remember that. Please go wash your hair
There was a distinct slamming of locker doors and Obi-Wan soon found himself being pushed back. His head hit the back wall of one of the lockers. He blinked rapidly to get rid of the stars that danced in front of his eyes. Obi-Wan slowly became aware of the fact that he was sitting on something squishy that was most likely a long-forgotten moldy peanut-butter-and-jelly sandwich, He tried to get up and out but Maul sent him flying backwards into the mettle back wall of the locker. Before he blacked out Obi-Wan was vaguely aware of Maul’s smelly gym shorts falling on his head and covering his face.
I loved this paragraph. The whole mugging was hilarious, and yet sad LOL I'm so conflicted.
Great first real talking between the boys
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Princess_Elisabeth
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9/27/06 9:55am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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Obi-Wan is all freaking out because Anakin drove his car
Amazing.
This update was so much fun, I enjoyed it very much! Good to see Anakin helped Obi-Wan, even though they don't not seem to get along pretty well.
I'm looking forward to reading the next update! Thanks for the pm!
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Ludo_Kressh
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9/27/06 11:43am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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Ahh, so we finally get to see Prissy...er, I mean Obi-Wan get shoved into a locker by the Gang...oh and the humiliation of Maul's stinky gym shorts falling on his head!
Anakin helped him out, interesting, not the typical reaction I would have expected since they don't like each other, yet...and I would be worried letting Anakin drive my car! And Anakin building things? Yep, typical Aankin.
Can't wait to see what happens next to the high schoolers...hopefully Grant Grievouse won't be caught smoking in the boys' bathroom!
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Lieutenant_Jaina
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9/27/06 2:17pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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WOW! This is so original! I'd never seen anything like it. So AU. Lovin' it. Please add me to your pm list. Great job!
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timerift22
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9/27/06 5:00pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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pm list please
when do they find out they're like brothers like?
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anakin_luver
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9/27/06 9:34pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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honestly, it doesn't get any better then "Prissy-Wan"
great chapter...oh Anakin saved Obi-Wan! only once so far let's see what he gets up to
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Alley_Skywalker
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9/28/06 7:26am
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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delta-7starfighter: Thanks, Maddie! I’m glad that part worked out!
iLoveAnakin7: Lol! Yea I wouldn’t want Maul’s shorts on my head lol. The mugging was a bit more dramatic and serious at first but I decided to change it to make it a bit more “fun”:
Princess_Elisabeth: Thanks! I’m glad you liked it! And of course Obi was freaking out about Ani driving his car.
Ludo_Kressh: Yea Obi-Wan didn’t expect Anakin, of all ppl, to help him out ether. Lol at GG smoking in the bathrooms. I actually had something like that in mind.
Lieutenant_Jaina: Thank! I’m glad you think it’s original. Using SW characters as teens gives the cliché high school story some umph so to say. Oh and I’ve added you to the PM list
timerift22: I’ve added you to the list
anakin_luver: Of course it doesn’t get any better then Prissy-Wan, Crystal Yup! Anakin “saved” Obi. Lol should I do all the nine/ten times? Hee…plot bunnies going a bit crazy here lol.
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Alley_Skywalker
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10/15/06 2:33pm
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RE: Facades (AU! Ani/Obi/Palps/Padme/Siri/Shmi/Qui/o thers. A/P, Siriwan parings.) Update: 9/23/06
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Chapter 8
Homecoming was approaching fast and Padme Amidala, denying herself the luxury of procrastination, set out to hang up the Homecoming posters. It was her responsibility as student council president after all. The posters were large and meant to be hung high enough so that all could see them from afar. She was petite and the task could get difficult at times. While stapling one of the upper corners of the poster the other side would tip and have the whole thing hanging on one corner. She sighed and started to re-straiten the large sheet of construction paper.
“You want help with that?” She heard someone say behind her.
“Yes, please,” she replied gratefully.
The guy who had spoken came forward and straightening the poster held the other top corner with one hand while taking the stapler she held out to him with the other. He slammed the stapler with the palm of his hand, jamming the staple in deep enough so it wouldn’t fall. He, then, casually handed the devise back to her with a smile and she found herself looking into a pair of blue eyes. “That should do,” he said cheerfully.
“Thank you, Anakin,” she said jumping down from the small latter she was balancing on.
“You’re welcome. You uh…want me to help you with those other ones?”
She gave him one of her best smiles. “Would you?”
Padme might have been surprised to know that Anakin suddenly found it hard to breathe. “Sure! I don’t have anything el- better to do…at the moment.” He watched the way she laughed a bit. Was she laughing at him? Was he really being such a dork?
“Ok follow me,” she said, handing him a pile of posters.
“So, Padme, you going to Homecoming?” Anakin asked trying not to sound too nervous.
“Maybe,” she said simply.
“Well uh…if you’re not going with anyone I thought maybe you…” he stopped unable to finish the sentence as a lump grew out of nowhere in his throat.
Padme stopped and looked at him curiously, patiently waiting for him to continue.
“I was wondering if you’d…like to go to Homecoming with me?” Anakin shifted from one foot to the other. He hated feeling this awkward but he couldn’t help it.
Padme seemed to consider for a moment before smiling up at him brilliantly. “Yes. I’ll go with you.”
Anakin smiled, suddenly finding that he could breathe again. “Great! I’ll pick you up at seven?”
“That woks.”
‘I love this day,’ Anakin though as he tried to not grin like an idiot. ‘I really love this day.’
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The conversation was going no where. That Obi-Wan could tell from the moment that he had initiated it.
“I don’t see what you’ve got against him, Obi-Wan,” Quin was saying innocently. “He’s good for the team.”
“Possibly,” Obi-Wan said skeptically. “But I still don’t have to like him.”
Siri rolled her eyes. “I think you boys are over exaggerating each other.”
Obi-Wan looked over his shoulder to where Anakin was doing forms with Bariss and Aayla. “Still doesn’t mean I have to like him. He’s a punk after all.”
“Obi-Wan, tell me truthfully, are you just jealous that your dad thinks someone else can fence better then you?” Siri asked, twirling her saber as she smirked at him.
“What? No!” Obi-Wan protested.
“Hey, guys, I think we need a change of subject,” Quin insisted.
“Like?”
“Like…who’s going to Homecoming?”
“Well you can bet that I’m not,” Obi-Wan declared almost proudly.
“Why don’t you ever go to any social functions, Obi-Wan?” Siri asked shaking her head.
”I do…just not this kind.”
“Well I’m going to ask Aayla to go with me.”
“What!” Siri and Obi-Wan chorused.
“I didn’t know you liked Aayla,” Siri said, looking rather surprised.
“Well I do, babe. She’s hot.”
Obi-Wan rolled his eyes at him. “Yea, Quin. Great reason to like a girl.”
“Aw you nerds don’t understand these things. Oh! They’re done doing forms! I’m gonna go ask her!” Quin grinned and then, plastering a more seductive smile on his face, headed to where Aayla was fixing her hair.
“You think she’ll say yes?” Obi-Wan asked Siri.
She shrugged. “I don’t know.”
“So you going to Homecoming with anyone?”
Obi-Wan watched as a dreamy smile spread over Siri’s face. “Yes…Dave Curt asked me this morning.”
“Dave Curt? As in the Varsity basketball captain?”
Siri giggled, which was very unlike her, Obi-Wan noted. “He’s so handsome…” She drew out before half walking, half gliding in a dance step toward the bleachers.
Obi-Wan wasn’t sure what it was but it was a strange feeling. Some sort of knot had tied itself in his stomach and a strange feeling of loss clung to him. It was almost as if, though the idea of it was absolutely ridiculous, he was jealous.
“You like her don’t ya?”
Obi-Wan jumped and spun around. “What?” he asked bewildered.
Anakin Skywalker grinned at him, his blue eyes sparkling with laughter. “You like Siri.”
“I have no idea what you’re talking about.”
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“Anakin! Anakin! Get over here!” Tru shouted across the deserted quad.
“What?” Anakin asked coming up to him and Darra. “Can we walk and talk I need to get home.”
“Darra was just about to say who she’s going to Homecoming with.”
“So? Who’s the guy?”
Darra looked at Tru and then at Anakin. “Ok don’t you two freak out but it’s Ferus.”
“Ferus!” Tru and Anakin shouted simultaneously.
“As in Ferus Olin? Are you serious? But WHY?” Anakin asked incredulously, falling back on a lunch table bench.
“Because he’s cute and nice and-”
“A total looser,” Anakin finished.
“Everyone’s a looser in you opinion, Anakin.”
“Not just a looser,” Anakin continued, “but a stuck up looser.”
“Well I like him. At least I HAVE a date.”
Anakin smirked. “So do I.”
Tru and Darra looked at him expectantly.
“Padme Amidala,” Anakin announced, jumping up from the bench excitedly. “I asked her today and she said yes! She said yes!”
“Oh that’s nice,” Darra said flatly which earned her a strange look from Tru.
Tru shifted a little awkwardly and then said, “Well at least she’s hot…kind of.”
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EquestrianJedi07
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10/15/06 3:40pm
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Anakin and Padme are going to Homecoming together! How completely cute And Obi... he's so got it bad for Siri. I hope things will work out for them eventually
Great update... thanks for the PM!
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10/15/06 3:46pm
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Loved Anakin helping Padme out with the Homecoming posters. I found it kind of funny for some reason.
“I was wondering if you’d…like to go to Homecoming with me?” Anakin shifted from one foot to the other.
Hmm....that's High School for you.
I feel kind of bad for Obi-wan. But he'll turn out OK I think.
Anakin Skywalker grinned at him, his blue eyes sparkling with laughter. “You like Siri.”
“I have no idea what you’re talking about.”
I think I see the brotherhood starting to take shape between these two. Funny how the High School setting really fits with Star Wars.
Great Chapter.
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10/15/06 6:33pm
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oh they're going to homecoming together! brilliant.
and i love "dreamy Siri." she's pretty funny.
i hope Obi finds a date...
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